Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGWQH4YAPN03J5AAAXZMGD

Run Details

Duration:
3m 14s
Cost:
$0.007765
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the last flight of stairs with her spine straight and her boots striking the same rhythm. The abandoned tube station opened beneath Camden in a wash of yellow police light. Cracked tiles curved along the platform. A ruined roundel over a sealed lift shaft wore a band of tape. The full moon had pulled the Veil Market from its last anchor hours earlier, but the platform still carried a scent of burned bone and wet chalk. Her worn leather watch, strapped tight to her left wrist, marked two hours past moonrise. Eva Kowalski waited beside the body. Her round glasses caught the lamps, and a satchel full of archive notes pulled one shoulder down. She tucked a red curl behind her left ear and looked from the chalk circle to Quinn. "They've made a Market example of him." Quinn stepped closer. "Who has?" "The gate-keepers." Eva pointed with a pencil. "He came in on a token, broke a rule, and they left him in the circle with his entry snapped." The man lay on his back. His coat had been split at the throat, and the cut ran from ear to collarbone. A brass compass rested on his open right palm. The compass casing wore a green patina, and its face was etched with sigils. His left hand held two halves of a bone token, snapped across the middle. Candles stood at four points outside the circle, their wax dripping toward the body in pale fingers. Quinn crouched. Her knees cracked. "Did Forensics touch him?" "No one crossed the line." "You're sure." Eva's jaw tightened. "I watched them." Quinn studied the chalk first. The line around the man was white and dry, except where it crossed the platform seam. Blood lay beneath the chalk, not on top. The smear from the throat wound had dried black along the tile joints and stopped against the inner edge of the circle. The chalk dust had not been smeared outward. The blood had not smeared the chalk. Someone had drawn the circle after he bled. She moved to the bone token. The Market's tokens were bitten at the rim so the gate could taste the owner's claim. This token's edge was whole. The break through the center was clean, square-edged, and the broken faces carried a dusting of green verdigris. "The token's fake." Eva leaned closer. "The Market issues them in bone." "This one's been sawn." "It's broken." "By a saw." Quinn lifted her torch. "Where's the bite?" "He refused it." "Then he wouldn't be inside the Market." Eva's pencil stopped. Quinn looked at the compass. "Why is it in his hand?" "Maybe he tried to find the nearest rift." "No." She lifted her torch above the brass face. The needle, black as a burnt match, pointed away from the old stairs, away from the Market's gate, straight at the service wall behind the platform. The face's protective sigils glowed faintly under the light, but the verdigris around them was disturbed. A thumbprint sat in the green at the lower edge, fresh and oily. Eva shook her head. "The needle lies." "Shade artisan work doesn't." Quinn kept her eye on the compass. "It points to the nearest supernatural rift or portal. That wall is solid." "It's an old maintenance cupboard. The hoarding's bolted." "Then the compass is telling us the bolt is a lie." Quinn stood and moved around the circle. The tile floor near the service wall had a faint line of scuffs, short and dragged, like a body had been pulled. A smudge of white dust marked one edge, but the dust was chalk, not the silver bone ash left by Market stalls. A single footprint from a shoe with a police issue tread lay half in the scuff and half out of it. The tread had pressed through the chalk line. The person had stepped inside the circle after the blood had dried. She returned to the body and lifted his wrist with a gloved hand. The palm under the compass was pale and clean. The blood had pooled around the rim of the casing, but the skin beneath the brass had no print. He had not held the compass while dying. The object had been placed on him after the blood started to thicken. Quinn set the wrist down and released it. "Eva, the compass face. What do the sigils protect?" "The artisan's mark." Eva's glasses slid down her nose. She pushed them up. "And the bearer's intent. A stolen one burns the thief." "So how does the thief carry it?" Eva did not answer. "The blood on the thumbprint is not his." Eva stared at the oily print. "You can't see that from a print." "I see the green is fresh. The blood on his palm is dry black. The print is wet and red at the edge." The silence filled with water ticking from a burst service pipe. Eva's fingers tightened on her satchel strap. Quinn walked to the service wall. The hoarding was painted the same filthy white as the old station panels, and a steel bolt held it to the tiles. The bolt was clean where the paint flaked around it. A faint frost lined the seams. Her leather watch ticked against her wrist. She pressed her knuckles to the metal. Cold moved through the metal like breath. The compass in the evidence tray behind her gave a soft metallic knock as she touched it. Eva's hand rose. "Do not." "It answered." Quinn looked back. The needle had turned a fraction toward the wall. Not toward the body. Toward the maintenance hoarding. Toward whatever lay behind it. The Market's official gate stood at the far end of the platform, and the Market had already moved on at full moon. A portal should have closed with the market's departure. It had not. Someone had opened a second door. Eva crouched by the body again, careful with her satchel. "The Market punishes stolen artifacts." "The Market punishes theft with public display." Quinn studied the four candles. Their wax fell toward the body, but the drips were too short for how long the Market had been gone. The wicks had been cut. "This is a stage built in the old market's footprint." "Then who built it?" Quinn looked at the fake token, the clean palm, the compass print, and the frost on the hoarding. "Someone with a bone token that did not taste a human mouth. Someone who knew the Market leaves a circle, a token, and a compass for punishment." She stepped closer to the wall. "Someone who wanted the nearest rift to point at the body instead of the gate." Eva's hair curled loose over her forehead. "That doesn't explain the throat wound." "It explains why they left him exactly there." Quinn pointed to the scuff mark and the police-sized tread in the chalk. "The blood trail leads to the trackside edge, but the body doesn't. He was dragged from the tunnel, not the market floor. His coat caught the platform seam and scraped the soot onto his cuffs." Eva leaned over the body's sleeve. A dark line of ordinary station soot stained the cuff, and a tiny fragment of blue evidence chalk clung to the fabric. The Market's chalk was white and bone-dust silver. Quinn returned to the compass tray and put on a fresh glove. She did not lift it. She angled her torch through the sigils and watched the verdigris around the rim. The patina had been scraped away in one place, a narrow crescent where the casing had been pressed against something hard and sharp. The same crescent matched the broken edge of the token. "His token was made with the compass's edge." Eva straightened. "Made?" "The token was cut from the same tool. Whoever staged this used the compass to mark it." "Why?" Quinn's gaze moved from the clean biteless token to the frost on the maintenance wall. A token had to be bitten, tasted, claimed at a gate. A fake token would fail unless the gate had been opened by something else. The Veil Compass pointed to the nearest rift. The rift was behind the wall. The compass had been used to cut a bone token, and someone had put that token in a dead man's hand to suggest the Market had let him in. He had not entered through the Market gate. He had come through a hidden portal, or someone had brought his body there. Eva followed her line and said nothing. Quinn lifted her torch. The beam caught a hairline in the hoarding paint. It ran in a curve, like a door that had once been opened and then sealed with ordinary tiles. The frost had formed into a thin pattern around the curve, and the pattern matched the sigils on the compass face. "The hoarding isn't hiding a cupboard." "It's hiding a seam." "A door." She reached for the bolt. Eva's hand moved toward her satchel, then stopped. Quinn's watch ticked. Her hand stayed level as the bolt came loose. The steel scraped against the tile. Behind the hoarding, the station wall ended in a narrow passage of blackened brick. The air from it carried no damp, no rat, no rot. It carried the scent of old paper and iron filings. The compass in the tray struck a sharp note, and its needle swung into the opening. Quinn looked back at the body. The fake token lay in his hand, and the clean circle no longer looked like a Market verdict. It looked like a message. Eva stepped forward. "Whoever killed him used a door the Market didn't leave." Quinn watched the needle hold its direction inside the passage. It pointed to the nearest rift, and that rift was not the Market's old gate. It was a new one.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:58:05.905Z" 9/2/2026, 4:58:05 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.28
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1647
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1647
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
96.40% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1647
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1280
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn21
Camden1
Veil2
Market12
Kowalski1
Eva18
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0.68
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a Market verdict"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1647
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean23.2
std24.6
cv1.06
sampleLengths
095
140
27
35
427
576
69
75
82
96
1066
118
1245
133
149
154
162
1710
183
197
203
2111
228
231
2463
257
2624
278
2811
2992
3062
318
329
3323
347
354
368
3713
3823
3918
4065
4117
425
432
4425
4534
466
4715
4847
494
76.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount10
totalSentences123
matches
0"was etched"
1"been smeared"
2"were bitten"
3"been pulled"
4"been placed"
5"was painted"
6"been gone"
7"been scraped"
8"been pressed"
9"been opened"
10"been opened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences166
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1283
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.01636788776305534
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002338269680436477
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean9.92
std6.74
cv0.68
sampleLengths
020
114
26
313
427
515
66
717
817
97
103
112
127
1320
146
1516
169
1714
1814
1917
202
213
224
235
242
253
263
275
2816
298
3022
318
327
338
346
3516
365
3718
383
393
406
414
422
437
443
453
467
473
485
496
37.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2289156626506024
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences121
matches
0"Her worn leather watch, strapped"
1"Her round glasses caught the"
2"She tucked a red curl"
3"His coat had been split"
4"His left hand held two"
5"Her knees cracked."
6"She moved to the bone"
7"She lifted her torch above"
8"She returned to the body"
9"He had not held the"
10"She pushed them up."
11"Her leather watch ticked against"
12"She pressed her knuckles to"
13"It had not."
14"Their wax fell toward the"
15"She stepped closer to the"
16"She did not lift it."
17"She angled her torch through"
18"He had not entered through"
19"He had come through a"
ratio0.223
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences121
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"The abandoned tube station opened"
2"A ruined roundel over a"
3"The full moon had pulled"
4"Her worn leather watch, strapped"
5"Eva Kowalski waited beside the"
6"Her round glasses caught the"
7"She tucked a red curl"
8"Quinn stepped closer."
9"Eva pointed with a pencil"
10"The man lay on his"
11"His coat had been split"
12"A brass compass rested on"
13"The compass casing wore a"
14"His left hand held two"
15"Candles stood at four points"
16"Her knees cracked."
17"Eva's jaw tightened."
18"Quinn studied the chalk first."
19"The line around the man"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.7228%