| 50.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn called upward [upward]" | | 1 | "Quinn interrupted calmly [calmly]" | | 2 | "Quinn asked softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.45 | | leniency | 0.9 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |
| 67.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1555 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "nervously" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "slowly" | | 6 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1555 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "practiced ease" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "magnetic" | | 6 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1550 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1124 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 2.58 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 29 | | Camden | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Maglite | 1 | | Victorian | 2 | | Bovril | 1 | | Blitz | 1 | | Northern | 1 | | Eva | 15 | | Celsius | 1 | | Highgate | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Isle | 1 | | Dogs | 1 | | July | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Maglite" | | 4 | "Bovril" | | 5 | "Blitz" | | 6 | "Eva" | | 7 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.21 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 81.51% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "arcs that seemed to catch the beam of the flashlight and swallow it" | | 1 | "as if trying to shield the bag from Quinn's sight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.645 | | wordCount | 1550 | | matches | | 0 | "not a wallet, nor a phone, but a flat shard of polished cattle bone, notched three times al" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 34.44 | | std | 21.29 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 80 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 80 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 82 | | 36 | 55 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 59 | | 40 | 41 | | 41 | 54 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 26 |
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| 93.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "was modernized" | | 1 | "was dressed" | | 2 | "was frozen" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | |
| 63.49% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the brass plate was intricately carved with miniature geometric sigils—faint, intersecting arcs that seemed to catch the beam of the flashlight and swallow it." | | 1 | "Quinn had seen that look before—the deliberate deflection, the scholarly veneer masking raw terror." | | 2 | "The mortar between the Victorian bricks was dark, crumbling in places, but in the center, the air shimmered with a faint, oily refraction—the kind seen over hot asphalt in July, though the frost on the dead man's face remained frozen solid." |
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| 84.04% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1131 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, trapped beneath Camden" | | 1 | "deliberate, razor-edged cuts" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03183023872679045 | | lyAdverbCount | 28 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02475685234305924 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 14.35 | | std | 8.44 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 54.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.35185185185185186 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the beam of Quinn's" | | 1 | "Aside from them, the expanse" | | 2 | "Instead, the brass plate was" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 85.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots hit the ballast" | | 1 | "She paused at the base" | | 2 | "She immediately retracted it with" | | 3 | "She instinctively tucked a stray" | | 4 | "Her worn leather satchel, stuffed" | | 5 | "It was an auxiliary platform" | | 6 | "He lay sprawled on his" | | 7 | "He was dressed in an" | | 8 | "She walked the perimeter first," | | 9 | "Her sharp jaw tightened as" | | 10 | "She pulled a pair of" | | 11 | "She leaned down, squinting through" | | 12 | "She pointed toward a series" | | 13 | "She shone the light across" | | 14 | "His face was frozen in" | | 15 | "Her own boot prints were" | | 16 | "She reached out, her gloved" | | 17 | "Her eyes widened slightly behind" | | 18 | "Her knees protested, but her" | | 19 | "She examined the underside of" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron rungs of the" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn climbed down" | | 2 | "Her boots hit the ballast" | | 3 | "She paused at the base" | | 4 | "The air down here was" | | 5 | "Quinn called upward, her voice" | | 6 | "A breathless scramble answered her," | | 7 | "Eva Kowalski dropped the last" | | 8 | "She immediately retracted it with" | | 9 | "Eva muttered, pushing her round" | | 10 | "She instinctively tucked a stray" | | 11 | "Her worn leather satchel, stuffed" | | 12 | "Quinn said, adjusting the beam" | | 13 | "Quinn moved forward along the" | | 14 | "The platform emerged from the" | | 15 | "It was an auxiliary platform" | | 16 | "He lay sprawled on his" | | 17 | "He was dressed in an" | | 18 | "Eva stopped short, clutching the" | | 19 | "Quinn didn't answer." |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Her sharp jaw tightened as she registered the inconsistencies, the silent discrepancies that began to pile up like bad debts." | | 1 | "Instead, the brass plate was intricately carved with miniature geometric sigils—faint, intersecting arcs that seemed to catch the beam of the flashlight and swa…" | | 2 | "She shifted her satchel, her posture curling inward as if trying to shield the bag from Quinn's sight." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn called upward, her voice clipping cleanly through the stillness" | | 1 | "Eva said, though her voice lacked conviction" | | 2 | "Eva offered, her fingers nervously twitching toward her left ear again" | | 3 | "Eva said, her voice rising slightly in pitch" | | 4 | "Quinn took, her brown eyes fixing on Eva with military sharpness" |
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| 75.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Quinn interrupted calmly (interrupt)" | | 2 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.35 | | leniency | 0.7 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |