Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HH4FGTFXPG2N7RM16P4P7C

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Duration:
2m 51s
Cost:
$0.006977
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Lucien moved before I did. He crossed the narrow kitchen with one sweep of his cane and took the creature's smile across the teeth. Black fluid sprayed the wall and the creature laughed through my father's mouth. "Rory," it said, and Brendan's accent curled the word until the r was a soft growl. "Your Frenchman is late to the family." I grabbed the boiling water jug. The towel was already scalding through, but I hurled the water at the creature's eyes. It shrieked. Lucien caught the creature's wrist and drove the thin blade through the hand. The creature's fingers kept the grip on the door, and the wood splintered further. "Lucien, the ward," I said. He had one eye on me. The black eye was swallowing the amber. "Say it again. Finish it." "I cannot finish a sentence that begins with refusal." The creature kicked Lucien in the knee, but Lucien held him and laughed, low and awful. "I remember your father," he said. "I had him on the phone in Cardiff for forty minutes. He swore at me in three languages." "Two," I said, because my father had never managed German. "He was bad at German." The creature's head snapped to me. "Jennifer teaches you languages, but she taught you courage?" Something cold slid down my back. My mother. Jennifer Carter. I had not called her. I had not been able to call her. The thing smiled with her mouth beneath my father's voice. I stepped forward. "No. She taught me to lock the door." I pulled my phone from my pocket, not to call anyone, but to throw it. It struck the creature's forehead and burst into a shower of sparks because it had no right to wear my mother's face. Lucien seized the opening. He hooked the creature's neck with his cane and wrenched it back into the hall. The old plaster walls shook. I heard the first deadbolt give with a crack like a bone. "Stay," Lucien said. "Inside the room." "Your flat, my rules." The creature's arm tore free. It reached across the kitchen counter and grabbed my delivery bag. The Golden Empress orders spilled, soy packets, napkins, a bamboo steamer with one untouched har gow. It bit into the dumpling as if it could taste fear. "You are the courier," it said, chewing. "Yu-Fei's little mule. I should have eaten you in the alley behind the Chinese restaurant." "You had your chance." "You were boring then. Still are." I grabbed the cleaver from the counter. "Not anymore." The thing released a sound that was not Welsh, not Irish, not human. It moved through the steam from the broken window and was suddenly close enough that I could see the black thread of my mother's wedding ring under its fingernail. I remembered that ring. I had hidden it in a biscuit tin in Eva's flat after the funeral, and Ptolemy had batted it under the bed for three weeks. The creature smiled. "You miss him." "I miss him more than you can understand." "No." The ring burned my hand as it touched me. "He understands. He signed you off the family when he sold Evan." Lucien's blade came through the creature's shoulder. He was behind it now, his coat gone, his shirt soaked, his hair falling like a white flame. "You signed nothing. He did. That is your problem. Demons are bad at paperwork." The creature laughed, but the laugh cracked and changed shape. A second voice answered from the hall, a boy's voice, wet and angry. "Aurora. Let me in." I knew it. I knew the words before they reached my ears, and the old scar on my wrist flared so bright I could smell my own skin. The first time I had cut myself on a tin roof in Cardiff, Evan had pushed me from a tree and laughed. The name was not Evan. It was a memory. The creature had dragged it up through the floorboards. "Do not answer it," Lucien said. "It isn't Evan." "It is worse." I kicked the steamer basket into the creature's knee and ran to the window. The alley below was empty except for the pub's neon reflection bleeding red over the bins. The sound came again, my own voice, younger, begging. I put my hand over my mouth and bit down until I tasted blood. The thing wearing my father's face turned, and I could see where Lucien's blade had hit, a wound that did not bleed. It had a black mark stamped on its chest, the Golden Empress seal, a dragon wrapped around a coin. It was carrying something out of Yu-Fei's place, not food. A delivery tag. My name was on it in Yu-Fei's brush. "Rory," Lucien said, softly. "What did you carry last night?" "Three baskets. Nothing." "The restaurant had a side door." "I took it because it was faster." "It was faster," he said, "and it is why they are here." I looked at him, this elegant, wounded, infuriating man who had left a note shorter than a threat. "Are you accusing me?" "I am mourning my reputation." "Then mourn later." I pointed at the thing in the doorway. "Kill it." "I am working on it." The thing spoke with my mother's voice now, gentle and tired. "Jennifer taught me to make bread. She taught me to say please. Please, Aurora. Come to me." The scar burned. The walls seemed to lean in. I felt the pull of it, the awful comfort of being called home by a voice that had not died. I took one step, then another. Lucien's hand closed on my throat, not to hurt, but to stop. He pulled me into him, and for a moment the flat smelled of blood, rain, wool, and French soap. "Aurora," he said. "Look at me." I did. His mismatched eyes were not cruel in that moment. They were afraid. Lucien Moreau did not do afraid often, and I had never seen it directed at me. "You are not a door," he said. "You are not a home. You are my witness." "I am not yours." "No." His thumb touched the scar on my wrist, then my pulse. "You are my ruin. That is better." The creature lunged. Lucien shoved me aside, took the blow across his ribs, and drove his cane up through the thing's chin. It staggered. I saw my mother's face flicker, a tired Welsh schoolteacher with flour on her hands and a cardigan with a missing button. Then the black eyes slid into place, and the thing smiled with my father's mouth. I grabbed the kettle, which had not boiled, but still steamed, and poured it over the creature's head. It screamed. Lucien kicked it backward through the broken doorway into the hall. The third deadbolt snapped off its screws. I went after them, cleaver in hand, bare feet slipping on wet glass. Silas had not paid for the stair carpet properly. I hated him in that second. I loved him for it, because the loose runner tripped the creature as it fell against the banister. It hit Lucien's cane and the blade snapped off at the hilt. The ivory handle skittered down the stairs. I caught it. "Rory," Lucien gasped, "leave it." I looked at the thing in my father's face. It reached for the rail. I smashed the handle against its fingers. The wood exploded into splinters and a smell like burnt paper filled the landing. The creature howled, and for the first time, not a voice I knew answered. Lucien dragged it by the collar, not with my father's face now, but with a hole in the air, a shape like a coat left hanging in firelight. I struck the cane against the doorframe to wake myself. The blade was gone. The handle was hot. I put my palm around it, and a line of gold climbed my wrist and bit into the crescent scar. "Say the words," Lucien said. "Finish the contract. They will follow the witness." "They will follow me?" "They already know your scent." He held the thing open with one boot, his black eye shining, his amber eye dimming. "Aurora. Say yes to me." The flat below opened on a burst of jazz and drunk singing. The creature's mouth formed words I could not hear. My mother's wedding ring burned against my skin. I thought of Evan in the canal, of the note on the platform, of Lucien's hands on my neck, and of Yu-Fei saying, in the back kitchen, that courage was just manners with knives. "I am here," I said. The gold line snapped. The thing in the air collapsed into ash and wet wool. Lucien caught me as my knees gave. He kissed my forehead with lips stained black. "You are alive," he said, with a surprise that made my chest hurt. "Do not get used to it." The stairwell door exploded inward. Three figures stepped through, human-shaped but wrong in their shoes, their faces covered in my mother's handwriting. They held the broken doorframe like a wedding arch. The one in the middle spoke with my father's voice and Yu-Fei's brush stroke. "Rory," it said. "You have signed for your parcel." I lifted the cane handle. "Send it back." Lucien rose, bleeding, smiling, holding his ribs. "I think," he said, "we shall have to deliver it together."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1570
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1570
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1570
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1251
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brendan1
Lucien21
German1
Carter1
Golden2
Empress2
Welsh2
Irish1
Eva1
Ptolemy1
Cardiff1
Evan3
Yu-Fei4
French1
Moreau1
persons
0"Brendan"
1"Lucien"
2"Carter"
3"Empress"
4"Eva"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Evan"
7"Moreau"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Yu-Fei"
globalScore0.661
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.548
wordCount1570
matches
0"not to call anyone, but to throw it"
1"not to hurt, but to stop"
2"not boiled, but still steamed"
3"not with my father's face now, but with a hole in the air, a shape like a coat left hanging in"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences166
matches
0"remembered that ring"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean24.15
std21.32
cv0.883
sampleLengths
037
123
250
35
418
59
640
715
815
933
1011
1173
126
134
1443
1522
164
176
189
1971
206
218
2222
2339
2427
2568
266
273
283
2953
3062
3110
323
336
347
3512
3622
375
3813
395
4028
4166
426
4330
4416
454
4619
4761
4851
4955
99.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"being called"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was already scalding"
1"was swallowing"
2"was carrying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences166
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1256
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.016719745222929936
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0023885350318471337
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean9.46
std6.24
cv0.66
sampleLengths
05
119
213
316
47
56
615
72
813
914
105
116
127
135
149
1516
166
1718
1810
195
206
219
226
232
242
255
268
2710
283
298
3015
3122
324
3315
345
3512
363
373
384
395
4011
4116
4211
437
4415
454
466
477
482
4913
38.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.19879518072289157
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners33
30.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Then the black eyes slid"
ratio0.009
18.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences109
matches
0"He crossed the narrow kitchen"
1"it said, and Brendan's accent"
2"I grabbed the boiling water"
3"He had one eye on"
4"I said, because my father"
5"I had not called her."
6"I had not been able"
7"I stepped forward."
8"I pulled my phone from"
9"It struck the creature's forehead"
10"He hooked the creature's neck"
11"I heard the first deadbolt"
12"It reached across the kitchen"
13"It bit into the dumpling"
14"it said, chewing"
15"I grabbed the cleaver from"
16"It moved through the steam"
17"I remembered that ring."
18"I had hidden it in"
19"He was behind it now,"
ratio0.505
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences109
matches
0"Lucien moved before I did."
1"He crossed the narrow kitchen"
2"it said, and Brendan's accent"
3"I grabbed the boiling water"
4"The towel was already scalding"
5"Lucien caught the creature's wrist"
6"The creature's fingers kept the"
7"He had one eye on"
8"The black eye was swallowing"
9"The creature kicked Lucien in"
10"I said, because my father"
11"The creature's head snapped to"
12"Something cold slid down my"
13"I had not called her."
14"I had not been able"
15"The thing smiled with her"
16"I stepped forward."
17"I pulled my phone from"
18"It struck the creature's forehead"
19"Lucien seized the opening."
ratio0.972
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"I looked at him, this elegant, wounded, infuriating man who had left a note shorter than a threat."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien said, softly"
1"He held, his black eye shining, his amber eye dimming"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.567
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.033
80.5916%