Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HH8BXEB37X23CVMNFRRW0D

Run Details

Duration:
2m 41s
Cost:
$0.006077
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate to Richmond Park stood locked, but the bars left a gap the width of a shoulder and a decision. Aurora Carter slipped through. The pendant was cold against her skin when she left the Golden Empress kitchen. It stayed cold until she passed the first row of trees. Then warmth bloomed under the silver chain. She checked the time. The note from the courier envelope had given an address with no number: Richmond grove, after the gate, where the flowers never freeze. Eva’s writing slanted left at the end, the way it did when Eva wanted to look casual about fear. The envelope smelled of star anise and old rain. Someone had left it with a dumpling order, addressed to Aurora Carter, Rory under that, and Laila under that. Aurora had eaten, waited an hour, and put the pendant inside her top pocket. At the edge of the path, the city made its own noise: buses over gravel, distant horns, a dog barking through a garden. She counted those sounds, the way she counted steps when streets confused her. By the time the barking reached a second bar, the park had swallowed them all. The air smelled wet. Leaf mould held a sweetness heavier than late autumn allowed. Wildflowers grew in the grass beside her feet. Pale pink, cream, blue, colours that belonged in a window box or a painting, not a frosty park at half past ten. She stepped around them. The flowers leaned toward the light from her phone, then away. Aurora caught her own reflection in the dark screen. Bright blue eyes, black hair straight at her jaw, a line of damp from the gate still clinging to her collar. At five foot six, she had no reason to look up at a person, yet the trees above her made her neck ache. She looked like someone waiting for a friend who had not arrived. That was the plan. Ask Eva why she had sent the note. Take the pendant out of play. Go back to Silas’ bar and lock the flat door. She moved deeper. An oak trunk had grown around a standing stone, or the stone had grown into the tree. Both looked impossible and old. The bark split the rock with patience. More stones waited ahead, set in a loose circle at the edge of a clearing. Between them, the trees leaned inward. A branch tapped above her. It sounded like knuckles against a door. She looked up. Nothing moved. The branch stayed still while her torch swept across it. Aurora lowered the light. The grass behind her left a trail of wet prints. Her own. The pendant pulsed once, a soft beat against her collarbone. She stopped. The stone had no pulse of its own. Dymas, the note had called it, written in a hand not Eva’s. Unknown. A voice came from the trees. “Rory.” The sound was not loud. It had shape. It had a person in it, a familiar person, with her own name shaped in her own mouth. Aurora did not turn until the sound came a second time. “Rory.” She stepped backward until her heel found the nearest standing stone. The stone was warm. The wind moved through leaves that stayed dry. Her phone screen showed 10:58. She had entered the park at 10:59. The minutes had gone wrong. “Show yourself.” Her voice came out lower than she wanted. She swallowed. The clearing kept the last word and gave it back, slower, wetter. No one answered. She used to know how to read a room. Delivery routes taught her to notice when a customer stood close to the door, when a street held many faces turned the same way. Here, the absence felt planned. The park had removed its sounds and left a shape where they had been. The wildflowers in the clearing stood higher than her knees. Their stems did not bend under the air moving over them. They opened on a schedule no gardener kept. A blue petal unfolded beside her shoe. She stepped away, but another petal touched the toe of her trainer. The pendant pulsed again. Warm, warmer than before. Near a Hel portal, Dymas had said. The word made her think of fire and a door. She had thought she could name it if she met it. The warmth was a key turning without teeth. Between two oaks at the edge of the clearing, a tall shape rose. It wore branches and mist, or mist wore branches. The legs were long beyond the body and joined at the wrong height. It stood where the trees thickened, yet not behind them. Aurora lifted her torch. The light caught a face with no mouth. The shape folded sideways into the trunk. Not behind the trunk. It folded, and the bark took its outline. The light stayed on wood. Aurora moved around the stone, keeping it between her and the oaks. Her thumb rubbed the crescent scar at her left wrist. At twenty-five, she still reached for that childhood habit before London, before Evan, before any strange chain appeared in her life. The scar felt as cold as the rest of her body. The torch flickered once. She hit it against her palm. The bulb steadied. A whisper came from her right. “You brought it.” She turned. Nothing. Another whisper from behind. “You brought it.” Aurora looked at the pendant in her hand. The gemstone was the size of her thumbnail, deep crimson, the silver chain thin against her fingers. The stone glowed from inside. Not a reflection. It glowed like blood remembering heat. Her phone vibrated. No. Not buzz. It showed a message from Eva. The time stamp read tomorrow’s date. “Leave before the flowers remember you.” The words blurred. Aurora rubbed the screen with her thumb, as if the mist from the park had entered the glass. The message stayed. She typed a reply: Where are you? The letters appeared, then sank beneath black. A soft sound moved through the flowers, the sound of paper tearing, many pages at once. Aurora swept the torch around the clearing. Nothing touched the plants. The plants touched each other, stems brushing like fingers testing a lock. The standing stone nearest the entrance hummed. The hum ran through her shoe and into her ankle. The oak wrapped around it shifted. A leaf fell upward, toward the black branches, and landed among the roots with no sound. Aurora stepped backward again. Her shoulder struck a second stone. The stone was not where she remembered the circle. It stood close inside the ring, blocking the gap she had meant to reach. The path between the trees had narrowed. Not much. Enough. “You’re not alone.” The voice came from the clearing behind her, calm and exact. Her voice. She spun. The tall shape waited at the edge of the flowers. It had a face now, a pale oval that copied her own features with wrong spacing. The eyes were bright blue. The hair was straight black. The mouth stayed closed. Aurora lifted the pendant. The stone burned. It pulsed against her palm, a rhythm she could feel in the standing stones, in the soil, in the wrong-shaped figure across the clearing. It did not point. It answered. A tear opened in the air near the figure’s shoulder. The tear had no edge, no light on the other side. It had depth. The flowers leaned toward it. Something behind the tear breathed. Aurora took one step toward the opening. Another. The pendant pulled at the chain. The figure with her face took the same number of steps toward her. She stopped. The figure stopped. A second figure unfolded from the oak behind the first. It wore Evan’s coat. It bent at the shoulders, the arms low, the neck stretched long. The coat rested on a chair at the flat in London, a thing she had not looked at for months. Aurora shut her eyes. When she opened them, the clearing had changed. The standing stones rose taller than the trees. The wildflowers covered her shoes, their petals cool and damp against her skin. Her phone lay face down in the grass. The pendant hung loose, the chain stretched across the gap between her fingers and the opening. Her voice came from the tear, not loud, not mocking. “Rory.” The pendant pulsed.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:04:27.013Z" 9/2/2026, 5:04:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"pulse"
3"familiar"
4"flickered"
5"whisper"
6"vibrated"
7"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences164
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1400
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.38% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1373
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Carter2
Golden1
Empress1
Eva5
Aurora15
Rory1
Laila1
Hel1
Dymas2
London2
Evan2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Rory"
4"Laila"
5"Dymas"
6"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
3"London"
globalScore0.954
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like someone waiting for a friend"
1"sounded like knuckles against a door"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1400
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean22.58
std21.18
cv0.938
sampleLengths
025
132
288
351
459
593
63
750
812
915
1016
1110
1223
136
141
1537
161
1723
1817
192
2022
213
2252
2348
2444
2513
2636
278
2824
2954
3013
316
323
337
343
3539
363
3715
386
3931
407
4139
4239
4333
4410
453
4613
472
4840
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs215
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount348
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.022988505747126436
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean8.14
std5.51
cv0.677
sampleLengths
021
14
214
311
47
54
623
719
89
919
1014
1123
1213
1315
144
1510
168
1722
184
1911
209
2121
2223
2312
244
258
266
2710
283
2917
305
317
3215
336
345
357
363
372
3810
394
4010
412
4210
432
448
4512
461
476
481
495
40.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2441860465116279
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners42
67.57% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences148
matches
0"Then warmth bloomed under the"
1"Pale pink, cream, blue, colours"
2"Bright blue eyes, black hair"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences148
matches
0"It stayed cold until she"
1"She checked the time."
2"She counted those sounds, the"
3"She stepped around them."
4"She looked like someone waiting"
5"She moved deeper."
6"It sounded like knuckles against"
7"She looked up."
8"It had shape."
9"It had a person in"
10"She stepped backward until her"
11"Her phone screen showed 10:58."
12"She had entered the park"
13"Her voice came out lower"
14"She used to know how"
15"Their stems did not bend"
16"They opened on a schedule"
17"She stepped away, but another"
18"She had thought she could"
19"It wore branches and mist,"
ratio0.257
24.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount129
totalSentences148
matches
0"The gate to Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter slipped through."
2"The pendant was cold against"
3"It stayed cold until she"
4"She checked the time."
5"The note from the courier"
6"Eva’s writing slanted left at"
7"The envelope smelled of star"
8"Someone had left it with"
9"Aurora had eaten, waited an"
10"She counted those sounds, the"
11"The air smelled wet."
12"Leaf mould held a sweetness"
13"Wildflowers grew in the grass"
14"She stepped around them."
15"The flowers leaned toward the"
16"Aurora caught her own reflection"
17"She looked like someone waiting"
18"That was the plan."
19"She moved deeper."
ratio0.872
33.78% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"By the time the barking"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Pale pink, cream, blue, colours that belonged in a window box or a painting, not a frosty park at half past ten."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.5062%