Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HH9AANY2XR4FMEZDB5RDN5

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.012283
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside bled emerald across the wet pavement of Greek Street, tinting the rain pools an electric, bruised jade. Inside The Raven's Nest, the smell of damp wool and roasted malt clung to the low timber rafters. Silas moved behind the counter with an uneven, measured hitch in his left leg, his silver signet ring clicking against the lip of an amber bottle as he wiped down the zinc. Rory sat on the far corner stool, right against the partition where the shadows gathered thickest, peeling the sodden thermal cuffs of her jacket away from her wrists. The crescent-shaped welt on her left arm twitched with the sudden warmth of the room. A grease-stained greaseproof paper bag from Golden Empress sat on the wood beside her, radiating the sharp, salty heat of scallions and fried chili. A gust of London sleet shook the leaded glass at the entrance. The brass bell gave a single, muffled clink against the door frame. A woman stepped through, folding a soaked yellow umbrella with sharp, practiced snaps. Water pooled at the heels of her patent leather ankle boots. She wore a slate-grey wool coat tailored within an inch of its life, a silk scarf knotted tight against her throat, and rain-darkened chestnut hair cut into an asymmetrical bob that grazed her jawline. Rory froze, a glass of tap water halfway to her mouth. The woman shook out her collar, turned toward the bar, and stopped dead. Her throat hitched. Her eyes widened, scanning the dim row of stools until the gaze locked onto the corner. Eva looked like the polished junior partner in a firm that billed in six-minute increments, a far cry from the girl who used to split five-pound bags of chips on the curb outside Cardiff Central in torn fishnets. "Rory?" Rory set the tumbler down on the wood. The water sloshed against the rim. "Eva." Eva took three slow strides into the gloom, her heels knocking hard against the parquet floor. She ignored Silas, ignored the old nautical charts pinned to the wainscoting, ignored the sour scent of the ale taps. She stopped two paces away, her knuckles white around the hooked handle of her umbrella. "You're in London." "I am." "You live here." "Upstairs." Rory gestured with her chin toward the warped staircase beside the back bookshelf. Eva dropped her chin, letting out a breath that sounded like a cracked pane of glass. A sharp, bitter amusement tugged the corner of her plum-painted mouth, though her eyes remained entirely dry and furious. "Three years. Three bloody years, Rory." Silas set down his bar cloth. His hazel eyes lingered on Eva’s tailored shoulders, evaluating the tension in her stance with the quiet calculation of a man who measured exits for a living. He reached beneath the counter, brought out a second tumbler, and tipped an inch of single malt into each glass without asking. He pushed one toward Eva, took the other to the far end of the counter, and turned his back to fiddle with the brass dial of a vintage wireless radio. Eva stared at the brown liquor, then pulled out the bar stool beside Rory. The metal legs grated against the stone floor. She did not sit; she rested one manicured palm on the polished rim, the leather of her handbag creaking against her ribs. "You took the train from Queen Street at four in the morning. I bought the ticket on my credit card. You promised you’d text when the wheels touched the platform at Paddington." Rory traced the pale arc of the scar beneath her watch strap. "I threw the phone in a bin outside the station." "I spent six months thinking he’d caught you at Newport. I spent six months waiting for the police to knock on my flat door to tell me they’d fished you out of the Severn." Eva pulled her coat tighter, her fingers sinking into the thick wool. "Your mother came to my office, Rory. Jennifer sat in my waiting room with her hands shaking so violently she couldn’t hold a cup of tea. She thought I knew where you were buried." "If Evan knew where I was, he would have come to you first. He would have torn your flat apart." Rory kept her voice low, level, stripped of whatever warmth used to bind them during late nights studying tort law over lukewarm cider. "He broke my collarbone, Eva. You remember the splint. You helped me shower because I couldn’t lift my arm." "I remember everything." Eva finally sank onto the stool, the stiff lines of her spine refusing to touch the backrest. "I remember lying to your father. Brendan Carter, a bloody Crown barrister, standing on my welcome mat looking like an old dog that had been kicked into the gutter, begging me for an address. You let them grieve you." "They wanted me to stay in the house in Penylan. They wanted me to file an injunction and wait for him to break the kitchen window with a brick." Rory looked up, meeting the fierce, unyielding brown of Eva’s stare. Her bright blue eyes did not waver. "Paper doesn't stop boot leather. You know that. You’re the one who told me to run." Eva reached out, her fingers hovering an inch above Rory’s scarred wrist before she pulled back, curling her hand into a tight fist on the counter. The diamond ring on her middle finger clicked against the zinc. "I told you to run to safety, Rory. I didn't tell you to become a ghost." The radio in the corner hissed softly, a low hum of static drifting beneath the patter of sleet on the glass. Silas adjusted a shelf of dark bottles, his movements fluid and deliberately unhurried, creating a pocket of privacy within the narrow space. Eva picked up the amber glass Silas had poured, turned it once, and set it down without drinking. "I made partner last month. At Hughes & Davies." "Congratulations." "You were ranked higher than me. In every single module." Eva’s voice dropped its razor edge, slipping into an ache that sounded far older than twenty-five. "You had the pupillage lined up with Chambers in Bristol. You had the brain for it. Now you smell like five-spice and cold river rain." "I sleep through the night." Rory leaned forward, resting her forearms on the wood, the edge of her frayed cuff catching the bar's warm yellow lamp. "No one checks the mileage on my scooter. No one reads my notebooks while I’m in the bath. No one screams at me until the spit hits my eyelashes." Eva looked at the greaseproof bag from the Golden Empress, then up at Rory’s straight, shoulder-length black hair. The silence between them stretched, thick with the weight of student flats, rain-soaked libraries, and the sudden violence that had shattered both. "I still have your law textbooks," Eva murmured, her knuckles relaxing on the table. "They're in a box in my spare room. I never had the heart to donate them." "Burn them." Eva flinched, the polish on her composure cracking enough to show the bruised, exhausted friend underneath. "Evan's in Swansea now," Eva said, the name dropping between them like lead. "He married a girl from the council offices. They have a house by the bay." Rory’s breath caught, just for the space of a heartbeat, before her ribs expanded again, smooth and steady. She picked up her glass of water and drank it down to the dregs. "Good for Swansea." Eva studied Rory’s face, searching for a tremor, a break in the armor, an echo of the girl who had cried into her knees on the cold tile of a Cardiff railway bathroom. She found only the flat, clean calm of a woman who had stripped away everything she used to be just to stay whole. "I came down for a tribunal at the Royal Courts," Eva said, pulling a leather wallet from her bag and sliding a pristine cream-colored business card across the wood. It stopped against the salt shaker. "I'm staying at a hotel in Covent Garden until Thursday." Rory looked at the card. The raised black lettering gleamed under the bar light. She didn't touch it. "You look good, Eva. The coat suits you." Eva swallowed, her throat working hard against the knot of her silk scarf. She slid off the stool, her boots finding the floor with a dull, hollow thud. She picked up her umbrella, the yellow canopy dripping a small, clear ring onto the planks. "You always were the clever one, Rory." Eva turned the brass handle of the front door, letting the bitter London air rush across the threshold, slicing through the warmth of the pub. "I just didn't think you'd be clever enough to cut me out too."
created_at"2026-09-02T17:04:53.597Z" 9/2/2026, 5:04:53 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.629
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"measured"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"silk"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"pristine"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"measured"
2"warmth"
3"silk"
4"scanning"
5"gloom"
6"tension"
7"traced"
8"silence"
9"weight"
10"shattered"
11"echo"
12"pristine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1476
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1034
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Greek1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Golden2
Empress2
London2
Cardiff2
Central1
Silas5
Eva20
Rory14
persons
0"Empress"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Raven"
3"Golden"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.533
windowScore0.5
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like the polished junior partner i"
1"sounded like a cracked pane of glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1476
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean31.4
std25.41
cv0.809
sampleLengths
022
1117
224
358
411
532
638
71
814
91
1051
113
122
133
1414
1535
166
1785
1844
1932
2012
2110
2280
2362
2459
2563
2637
2716
2843
2918
309
311
3251
3355
3440
3530
362
3716
3828
3932
403
4156
4245
4318
448
4544
4645
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences86
ratio0.012
matches
0"She did not sit; she rested one manicured palm on the polished rim, the leather of her handbag creaking against her ribs."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1045
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pristine cream-colored business"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.020095693779904306
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004784688995215311
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean17.16
std10.46
cv0.609
sampleLengths
022
118
232
328
415
524
612
712
813
911
1034
1111
1213
133
1416
1538
161
178
186
191
2016
2120
2215
233
242
253
2614
2716
2819
296
306
3127
3222
3330
3414
358
3622
3732
3812
3910
4046
4134
4243
4319
4420
4539
4640
477
4816
4926
38.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.29069767441860467
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences62
matches
0"She wore a slate-grey wool"
1"Her throat hitched."
2"Her eyes widened, scanning the"
3"She ignored Silas, ignored the"
4"She stopped two paces away,"
5"His hazel eyes lingered on"
6"He reached beneath the counter,"
7"He pushed one toward Eva,"
8"She did not sit; she"
9"Her bright blue eyes did"
10"She picked up her glass"
11"She found only the flat,"
12"It stopped against the salt"
13"She didn't touch it."
14"She slid off the stool,"
15"She picked up her umbrella,"
ratio0.258
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences62
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"Silas moved behind the counter"
2"Rory sat on the far"
3"The crescent-shaped welt on her"
4"A grease-stained greaseproof paper bag"
5"A gust of London sleet"
6"The brass bell gave a"
7"A woman stepped through, folding"
8"Water pooled at the heels"
9"She wore a slate-grey wool"
10"Rory froze, a glass of"
11"The woman shook out her"
12"Her throat hitched."
13"Her eyes widened, scanning the"
14"Eva looked like the polished"
15"Rory set the tumbler down"
16"The water sloshed against the"
17"Eva took three slow strides"
18"She ignored Silas, ignored the"
19"She stopped two paces away,"
ratio0.984
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She wore a slate-grey wool coat tailored within an inch of its life, a silk scarf knotted tight against her throat, and rain-darkened chestnut hair cut into an …"
1"Eva looked like the polished junior partner in a firm that billed in six-minute increments, a far cry from the girl who used to split five-pound bags of chips o…"
2"His hazel eyes lingered on Eva’s tailored shoulders, evaluating the tension in her stance with the quiet calculation of a man who measured exits for a living."
3"Eva reached out, her fingers hovering an inch above Rory’s scarred wrist before she pulled back, curling her hand into a tight fist on the counter."
4"The silence between them stretched, thick with the weight of student flats, rain-soaked libraries, and the sudden violence that had shattered both."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva pulled, her fingers sinking into the thick wool"
1"Eva murmured, her knuckles relaxing on the table"
2"Eva said, the name dropping between them like lead"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"her spine refusing (refuse)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.229
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.114
77.7290%