Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHC2GDNPK46CGGQG11VHXZ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.002375
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate had no name. Richmond Park had gates with iron teeth and signs warning dogs to keep to the path, but this one stood under a broken rail where the pavement ended and the trees swallowed the road. Rory propped her bicycle against the gate and left the headlamp burning. The beam shook across the leaves. Her phone showed 11:47 p.m. She stared at the time as if it might blink and give something back to her. It did not. The Heartstone pendant pressed warm against her chest, the small crimson gem ticking against her skin as if it had learned her heartbeat and found it boring. She pushed through the gate. The path ran downhill between hawthorns. No litter. No footprints. The night smelled of wet bark and something faintly green, the sort of green that had no business living after frost. Rory adjusted the delivery backpack on one shoulder. Yu-Fei’s late invoice still sat in a plastic wallet inside it. That was the only reason she had come to this corner of the park after shift. Silas had told her a man wanted a package left at the Grove. Silas had not told her a man’s name, only where to go. The grove opened after fifty metres of trees. Standing stones rose from the grass, oak-dark and taller than Rory remembered from any photograph she had never seen. Their tops were cut square. They formed a rough circle, or a mouth. Wildflowers grew between them in thick pale clumps, cow parsley and clover, all facing the centre as if a crowd watched something small and dying there. Rory stepped inside. The circle had no wind, yet the flowers lifted and leaned away from her left shoulder. She looked behind her. Nothing stood there. Only the path, and the gate, and the hawthorns bending under their own weight. She took the package from the backpack and held it out to the empty circle. “Delivery for the Grove,” she said. Her voice hit the stones and fell flat, without echo. A sound came from the far side, soft as a finger drawn over cloth. Rory turned with the torch. The beam swept past the flowers and caught the edge of one standing stone. On the other side of it, pale skin moved. It vanished before she could be certain what it had been. She walked toward the stone, package still in hand. Her shoes sank into the grass. Each step pulled her ankle with wet resistance, although the ground looked dry. Nothing waited behind the stone. A single clover stem lay bent where it had been. Rory’s phone vibrated in her pocket. She almost dropped the package. The screen lit with Eva’s name. “I know where the stones are,” Eva said before Rory could speak. “Did you bring the Heartstone?” Rory glanced at the circle of wildflowers. The pendant pulsed once, warm enough to sting. “I’m holding a package.” “No.” “I don’t have it.” “Yes, you do.” Eva’s voice thinned, catching on a noise at the far end of the line. It sounded like many small stones rolling in a glass jar. Rory pressed the phone to her ear and stepped back. “What are you talking about?” “The stone wants to be given back.” “Who wants it given back?” Eva stopped breathing. The line kept the connection anyway, a low hum filling the gap between them. Rory stared at the screen. No call timer. No signal bars. The time on the phone stayed at 11:47 p.m. A twig snapped inside the circle. Rory turned. The standing stones had not moved, but the flowers had. The pale heads all turned toward her now, opening and closing, opening and closing, as if each plant had a mouth. “Hello?” she called. The word went out and did not return. She should leave. The instruction formed clean in her mind, and beneath it rose another thought: she had not come far enough to find the portal. The pendant had drawn her here by the throat, and it still burned against her chest. She lifted the chain and watched the crimson gem glow in the torchlight. The light did not spill from it. It gathered at the centre, a drop of blood trapped in glass. Rory followed the warmth. It led her to the north side of the circle, where one standing stone leaned outward over a patch of black grass. Air above it felt wrong, too thick for night, like the breath before a storm breaks inland. The pendant pulled against her collarbone. She touched the small crescent scar on her left wrist where the chain swung near and the metal left a cold line across old healed skin. A figure stood beyond the stone. Rory’s hand went to the package. The figure did not step into the light. It stood as still as the oak stone beside it, tall and narrow, its outline blurred at the edges. It wore the dark shape of a coat, or maybe its shoulders were simply too high. The torch caught the lower part of its face and found only white space where a mouth should be. Rory moved backward. Her heel struck a stone root under the grass. She stumbled and caught herself on the edge of the standing stone. Bark flakes came away beneath her palm. The stone was warm. Not the warmth of the pendant, but the slow living warmth of an animal asleep. The figure spoke. “Rory.” She stopped breathing. “Carter.” The voice had no distance in it. It sounded inside the back of her teeth. Rory’s blue eyes burned from the torch glare. She aimed the beam at the figure and the light poured through it. No coat. No body. Only grass behind it, flattened in a line that did not match any human shape. The phone at her ear gave a wet click. “Rory, stop.” Eva’s voice returned. Rory gripped the phone with her free hand. “I saw something,” she said. “Look at the flowers.” She lowered the torch. Wildflowers crowded around her shoes, stems thick and fresh, petals white as paper. She stepped over them toward the circle’s centre. The grass bent away from her feet, and when she lifted her shoes, the blades stood upright again, slow, as if watching her go. The package hung heavy in her hand. “Where is the portal?” Rory asked. Silence came from the line, but it was not empty. Something moved in it, a sound too close to be on a phone, too far to be inside the grove. “Don’t give it to the stones,” Eva said. Rory looked up. The standing stones had become too many. She counted seven before. Now the circle held twelve, all leaning inward, their dark faces carved with shallow lines that might have been roots or might have been ribs. She spun once, then again, searching for the gate. The path had vanished. Hawthorns rose around the grass wall where none had been. The flowers no longer faced the centre. They faced the stones. Her watch showed 11:47 p.m. The phone showed 11:47 p.m. The pendant beat once hard against her ribs. Rory moved toward the largest stone. The package swung from her wrist. She could not say why she went. The pull in the Heartstone had turned sharp, a hook behind the gem, dragging the chain toward a cleft in the oak bark. The cleft ran at chest height, dark and narrow, breathing a cold breath that smelled of wet iron and old rain. “Rory.” Eva’s voice came from inside the cleft. Rory froze with the package touching the stone’s edge. The wildflowers around her shoes trembled, though the air did not move. She pressed closer. Something touched the back of her neck. It was not hand-shaped. It had too many points, each one tapping once, lightly, like the feet of insects finding a path across skin. Rory turned, torch in both hands. The beam caught a face. Pale, smooth, eyeless, the mouth a vertical seam that had never learned how to open. It wore Eva’s coat, too big for its body, sleeves hanging past the ends of thin fingers. The coat moved as it breathed. The face tilted. “Rory,” it said with Eva’s voice. She swung the torch. The figure folded behind the standing stone and left no footprints on the grass. Rory ran. Her backpack slapped against her spine. The package tore at her wrist. Flowers ripped at her ankles, stems snapping with the sound of tiny bones. The circle of stones spun faster than legs could carry her around, and each stone bore a mark where she passed it: a handprint, low in the bark, palm too wide, fingers too short. The handprints appeared as her breath moved across the stone. She stopped at one, chest heaving, and watched a new print rise from the oak like a bruise. The pendant glowed bright enough to cast her shadow across the grass. Behind her, a second shadow lengthened from the wrong direction. Rory turned away from it. The gate’s hawthorns appeared at the edge of the clearing, but the gap was narrower than before, the railings closed like jaws. She ran toward it anyway. The grass flattened in rows ahead of her feet, as if the earth wanted to help, and the smell of wet iron grew stronger. The standing stones began to hum, a sound low under the trees, a sound like many throats trying to form one name. “Laila,” the hum said. Rory’s feet slowed. “Malphora,” the stones answered. The names slid into her mouth and vanished. She forced herself forward. The hawthorns leaned over the path. Her bicycle still stood where she had left it, headlamp burning, the light now weak and yellow, swallowed by dark between the branches. She reached the gate and pushed through. A branch caught her sleeve and tore it from shoulder to wrist. She did not look back. Rory grabbed the handlebars and kicked the bicycle upright. The chain caught and the wheel jerked under her. She pulled harder. The rear wheel came free, spinning. A flower stem wrapped around the brake cable, white petals opening over the metal. Her phone rang. The screen filled with Eva’s name. Rory stared at it. The bicycle leaned against the hawthorn. The gate behind her groaned shut without wind. The pendant pulsed, once, twice, then went cold. She answered and put the phone to her ear. “Did you leave the grove?” Eva asked. Rory looked at the gap where the gate had been. Trees stood in a straight line, trunks touching, branches woven from the ground to the top of the hawthorns. No path. No opening. The flowers had gone with it. “I’m here,” Rory said. The figure with Eva’s voice answered from the dark between the trees.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:06:30.503Z" 9/2/2026, 5:06:30 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1809
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1809
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count3
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"echo"
2"vibrated"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"silence"
6"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences184
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences197
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1809
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1732
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Heartstone2
Grove1
Rory28
Eva12
Silence1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silence"
places
0"Park"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.692
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences124
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like many small stones rolling in"
1"as if watching her go"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.553
wordCount1809
matches
0"Not the warmth of the pendant, but the slow living warmth of an animal asleep"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences197
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean19.88
std23.08
cv1.161
sampleLengths
057
151
25
391
466
53
637
715
86
910
1053
1128
125
1310
1417
1517
1615
174
181
194
203
2125
2215
237
245
2537
266
272
2831
293
308
3174
324
3371
346
3568
363
3747
383
391
403
411
4215
4340
449
452
4611
475
484
4949
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs291
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences197
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1735
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03112391930835735
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.004610951008645533
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences197
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences197
mean9.18
std6.51
cv0.709
sampleLengths
05
134
212
36
45
516
63
727
85
96
102
112
1221
138
1411
1516
1613
1712
188
1919
205
218
2226
233
2416
254
263
2714
2815
296
3010
3114
325
3314
349
3511
369
376
3813
395
4010
416
425
436
4412
455
467
478
484
491
41.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2233502538071066
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners44
59.17% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences169
matches
0"Only the path, and the"
1"Only grass behind it, flattened"
2"Pale, smooth, eyeless, the mouth"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences169
matches
0"Her phone showed 11:47 p.m."
1"She stared at the time"
2"It did not."
3"She pushed through the gate."
4"Their tops were cut square."
5"They formed a rough circle,"
6"She looked behind her."
7"She took the package from"
8"Her voice hit the stones"
9"It vanished before she could"
10"She walked toward the stone,"
11"Her shoes sank into the"
12"She almost dropped the package."
13"It sounded like many small"
14"She should leave."
15"She lifted the chain and"
16"It gathered at the centre,"
17"It led her to the"
18"She touched the small crescent"
19"It stood as still as"
ratio0.29
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount157
totalSentences169
matches
0"The gate had no name."
1"Richmond Park had gates with"
2"Rory propped her bicycle against"
3"The beam shook across the"
4"Her phone showed 11:47 p.m."
5"She stared at the time"
6"It did not."
7"The Heartstone pendant pressed warm"
8"She pushed through the gate."
9"The path ran downhill between"
10"The night smelled of wet"
11"Rory adjusted the delivery backpack"
12"Yu-Fei’s late invoice still sat"
13"That was the only reason"
14"Silas had told her a"
15"Silas had not told her"
16"The grove opened after fifty"
17"Their tops were cut square."
18"They formed a rough circle,"
19"Wildflowers grew between them in"
ratio0.929
29.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences169
matches
0"Now the circle held twelve,"
ratio0.006
90.34% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant pressed warm against her chest, the small crimson gem ticking against her skin as if it had learned her heartbeat and found it boring."
1"Wildflowers grew between them in thick pale clumps, cow parsley and clover, all facing the centre as if a crowd watched something small and dying there."
2"The pale heads all turned toward her now, opening and closing, opening and closing, as if each plant had a mouth."
3"The cleft ran at chest height, dark and narrow, breathing a cold breath that smelled of wet iron and old rain."
4"The grass flattened in rows ahead of her feet, as if the earth wanted to help, and the smell of wet iron grew stronger."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.0020%