Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHJEWM9QS740GKTZ4JXDQ1

Run Details

Duration:
21.3s
Cost:
$0.015774
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain smeared the glass of the front window, turning the green neon sign outside into a fractured emerald streak across the dark cobbles of Soho. Inside, the air tasted of stale stout, damp wool, and the lemon oil Silas rubbed into the oak counter every Tuesday afternoon. Behind the taps, Silas moved with a rhythmic hitch, his left heel dragging a fraction of a second behind the right. The silver signet on his little finger tapped the rim of a tumbler. He set it down, pushed a dish of salted almonds toward Rory, and resumed wiping the beer pull. Rory rested her chin on her palm, her sleeve pulled down far enough to cover the pale crescent carved into the tendon of her left wrist. Her boots were still soaked from four hours hauling paper bags of Golden Empress dumplings up third-floor walk-ups in Fitzrovia. The brass bell over the street door gave a sharp, metallic clink. A blast of cold, petrol-choked air swept through the entryway, lifting the edges of the yellowed shipping maps pinned to the wall. Silas paused, rag suspended. A woman stood on the coir mat, shaking out a dripping black umbrella. She wore a tailored wool trench the colour of wet slate, cut sharp across the shoulders, and pointed leather boots that had never touched Welsh mud. Her dark hair, once a wild tangle that resisted every plastic clip in South Wales, hung in a sleek, ironed sheet past her collarbones. She turned, scanning the low-timbered room with the rapid, cataloguing gaze of someone assessing fire exits and property values. Her eyes hit Rory and snagged. Rory did not move. Her fingers curled into the knit of her jumper, muscles tightening along her jaw. Eva dropped the latch on the umbrella. The mechanism snapped like dry pine. "Rory?" The voice carried the old lilt of Cathays and Roath, but flattened at the edges, filed down by boardrooms or courtrooms until it sounded clean and bloodless. "Eva." Eva crossed the floorboards, her steps deliberate, avoiding the dark whorls where the wood had rotted near the hearth. She stopped two stools away, then seemed to calculate the distance and took the seat immediately beside Rory. A perfume followed her—something dry and architectural, cedar and iris, entirely foreign to the damp chip-shop grease and cheap body spray of their shared youth. "I had a brief in Holborn. Three days of depositions. I walked down Greek Street to kill an hour before the train back to Bristol." Eva laid both hands flat on the scarred mahogany. Her manicured nails were cut short, coated in clear gloss, the skin around the cuticles immaculate. No silver rings from the market stalls. No chewed-up cuticles from cramming tort law notes until dawn. "You're in London." "Four years now." "Four years." Eva’s thumb traced an old cigarette burn in the counter grain. "You told me you were going to Leeds. On the platform at Central, with that blue vinyl holdall and blood on the collar of your coat. You took forty pounds out of my purse and swore on your mother’s chapel you were getting on the Leeds train." "The Leeds train had two transit police standing near the buffet car. Evan's brother worked the line out of Crewe." Silas approached, his boots heavy on the planking. He placed a fresh coaster between them, his hazel gaze lingering on Eva’s tailored lapel before sliding to Rory. "Tonic," Eva said without looking at him. "A slice of lime if you have it." Silas nodded once, his beard catching the green glow from the street, and limped down toward the soda gun. "You look different," Rory murmured. "I passed the bar. Junior tenant at a commercial chamber near Temple Meads." "Commercial. You used to picket the magistrates' court over eviction notices." "Eviction notices don't pay off ten thousand pounds of tuition debt, Rory. Or keep the bailiffs off my sister’s doorstep." Eva peeled off her gloves, revealing bare, pale skin beneath. "We don't all get to vanish into the fog when things get complicated." "Complicated isn't the word I'd use for having your ribs cracked against a radiator." The sentence dropped between them, cold and heavy as a wet rag. Silas returned, setting down the tonic with a soft clinking sound. He withdrew to the far end of the bar, leaning against the shelf of single malts, though his posture remained centered, listening. Eva took a slow swallow of the tonic. The carbonation hissed against the silence. "I looked for you," Eva said. Her voice dropped an octave, scraping against the back of her throat. "Three months. I checked every hostel between Newport and Holyhead. I went to your father’s chambers in Cardiff. Brendan looked me dead in the eye and said he didn't have a daughter anymore." "He was always fond of clean dockets." "He thought you were dead. For six weeks, until Evan turned up drunk at the Blackweir with his knuckles split, we all thought he’d put you in the Taff." "I sent a postcard. Six words. No postmark." "A picture of the Clifton suspension bridge. No signature." Eva turned her head, the overhead lamp casting sharp hollows beneath her cheekbones. "You let me think you’d jumped off it." Rory’s hand twitched toward the glass in front of her. She caught the motion, pressed her palm flat against the rim instead. "If I told you where I was, you’d have answered the phone when he cornered you outside the library. You never could lie to people who raised their voices, Eva. You always started blinking." "I don't blink anymore." The woman sitting there proved it. The slight, nervous girl who used to spill coffee over mock-trial briefs had been starved out, replaced by this lean, severe creature who looked at a scarred bar top with clinical indifference. "No," Rory acknowledged. "I can see that." "And you?" Eva swept a glance down Rory’s faded black denim, the scuffed cuffs, the faint yellow curry stain near the pocket of her canvas jacket. "The top third of the cohort. Professor Davies wanted to put you up for the Inns of Court scholarship before you started missing tutorials. You were the only one who could recite the entirety of Donoghue versus Stevenson without checking the binder." "The snail in the ginger beer." "The snail in the bottle. Exactly." "It turns out life doesn't run on precedent," Rory said. "It runs on cash in an envelope at eleven o’clock on a Sunday night." "You deliver food." "I deliver whatever fits in the crate on the back of a Honda fifty." Eva stared at the green reflection dancing across the bottom of her glass. A small muscle ticked beneath the corner of her left eye, the only remnant of the girl who had once shared a single mattress on Flora Street while rain dripped through the plaster ceiling. "He died, you know." Rory kept her eyes locked on the amber liquid in front of her. "Evan?" "Two years ago last November. Spun his Peugeot into a tractor trailer outside Pontypridd. Alcohol in the blood, three times the limit." Eva took a breath that whistled faintly through her nose. "The funeral was small. His brother, his aunt from Swansea, two boys from the rugby club. I went because I thought you might be there, standing by the lychgate in a headscarf like something out of a cheap paperback." "I was here." "I know." "He didn't take up room in my head anymore," Rory lied, her throat tightening until the words sounded dry. "Not by then." Eva looked sideways, her bright blue eyes searching Rory's face, digging beneath the sharp line of her shoulder-length hair to the raw bone beneath. "You used to tell me everything. Every stupid thought. Every time your father snapped his briefcase shut, you came down the lane to my kitchen." "We were eighteen." "We were twenty-one when you ran." "That's half a lifetime ago, Ev." "Don't call me that." Eva set her glass down with enough force to ring the heavy base against the wood. "Nobody calls me that now." Silas shifted his weight, the floorboard giving a low, groaning creak behind the register. Eva’s gaze flicked toward him, noting the stance, the balanced shoulders, the ring resting against his belt. She looked back at Rory, her lips pressing into a thin, bloodless seam. "You traded one cage for another," Eva whispered. "I have a key to this one." "That doesn't make it a home." Eva reached into her trench coat, pulled out a black leather cardholder, and slid a heavy cream business card across the timber. The embossed lettering caught the light: *Vaughan & Sterling, Commercial Litigation, Bristol.* Rory didn't touch it. "I’m leaving on the nine-twenty from Paddington," Eva said. She picked up her wet umbrella, the ferrule scraping the brass footrail as she stood. "I have a junior associate who needs her motions redrafted before eight tomorrow morning. I have a mortgage on an apartment overlooking the docks." She paused, looking down at Rory's hunched shoulders, the black hair veiling her profile. "I spent three years wishing you’d walk back through the door of the flat on Crwys Road," Eva said, her tone steadying, shedding its lingering Welsh rhythm for the crisp, cold cadence of the English courts. "Now I think it's better that you didn't." Eva turned toward the street entrance, her heels clicking rhythmically over the old timber toward the door, where the rain lashed against the emerald glass.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:09:53.184Z" 9/2/2026, 5:09:53 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.268
leniency0.536
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1590
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1590
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"calculate"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"rhythmic"
2"scanning"
3"lilt"
4"calculate"
5"traced"
6"silence"
7"dancing"
8"weight"
9"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1589
ratio0.004
matches
0"Vaughan & Sterling, Commercial Litigation, Bristol."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount961
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2.19
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Silas7
Tuesday1
Rory17
Golden1
Empress1
Fitzrovia1
Welsh2
South1
Wales1
Cathays1
Roath1
Eva21
Flora1
Street1
Sterling1
Commercial1
Litigation1
English1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"English"
places
0"Soho"
1"Fitzrovia"
2"South"
3"Wales"
4"Flora"
5"Street"
globalScore0.407
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1589
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean23.03
std19.64
cv0.853
sampleLengths
047
152
246
312
426
582
66
718
813
91
1027
111
1262
1325
1442
153
163
1760
1820
1927
2015
2119
225
2313
2411
2543
2614
2745
2814
2951
307
3129
328
3330
3422
3534
364
3738
387
3968
406
416
4224
433
4414
4547
464
4713
481
4971
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"been starved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences109
ratio0.009
matches
0"A perfume followed her—something dry and architectural, cedar and iris, entirely foreign to the damp chip-shop grease and cheap body spray of their shared youth."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount970
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"stale stout, damp wool,"
1"cold, petrol-choked air"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01752577319587629
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005154639175257732
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean14.58
std10.01
cv0.687
sampleLengths
025
122
221
313
418
526
620
712
822
94
1013
1126
1224
1319
146
154
1614
177
186
191
2027
211
2219
2318
2425
2525
269
2716
287
2910
303
313
3213
3347
3420
358
3619
377
388
3919
405
4113
4211
4330
4413
4514
4612
4711
4822
498
40.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.28440366972477066
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences62
matches
0"He set it down, pushed"
1"Her boots were still soaked"
2"She wore a tailored wool"
3"Her dark hair, once a"
4"She turned, scanning the low-timbered"
5"Her eyes hit Rory and"
6"Her fingers curled into the"
7"She stopped two stools away,"
8"Her manicured nails were cut"
9"He placed a fresh coaster"
10"He withdrew to the far"
11"Her voice dropped an octave,"
12"She caught the motion, pressed"
13"She looked back at Rory,"
14"She picked up her wet"
15"She paused, looking down at"
ratio0.258
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences62
matches
0"Rain smeared the glass of"
1"The silver signet on his"
2"He set it down, pushed"
3"Rory rested her chin on"
4"Her boots were still soaked"
5"The brass bell over the"
6"A blast of cold, petrol-choked"
7"Silas paused, rag suspended."
8"A woman stood on the"
9"She wore a tailored wool"
10"Her dark hair, once a"
11"She turned, scanning the low-timbered"
12"Her eyes hit Rory and"
13"Rory did not move."
14"Her fingers curled into the"
15"Eva dropped the latch on"
16"The mechanism snapped like dry"
17"The voice carried the old"
18"Eva crossed the floorboards, her"
19"She stopped two stools away,"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her dark hair, once a wild tangle that resisted every plastic clip in South Wales, hung in a sleek, ironed sheet past her collarbones."
1"The slight, nervous girl who used to spill coffee over mock-trial briefs had been starved out, replaced by this lean, severe creature who looked at a scarred ba…"
2"Eva looked sideways, her bright blue eyes searching Rory's face, digging beneath the sharp line of her shoulder-length hair to the raw bone beneath."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory lied, her throat tightening until the words sounded dry"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory acknowledged (acknowledge)"
2"Rory lied (lie)"
3"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.321
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.143
82.4959%