Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHMPHS6NAWG35TAWBPXSCC

Run Details

Duration:
17.1s
Cost:
$0.013956
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The call decayed into static three steps past the first standing stone. "Silas, repeat the second half. The gate isn't where your contact claimed." Aurora Carter tapped the screen of her phone, but the glass showed only four erratic, pale lines of interference. "The oaks are shifted east. There is no iron gate here, only the stone circle." Her voice dissolved against the heavy bark of the nearest oak. Nothing returned from the speaker. She thumbed the screen off, plunged the phone into her coat pocket, and let the quiet take the clearing. Richmond Park had vanished behind her. The dull hum of the A3, the drone of night planes descending toward Heathrow, the wet hiss of black cabs on damp asphalt—all severed in a single stride over the boundary. In their place sat an immobility so complete it pressed on her eardrums like deep water. Underfoot, the season had lost its bearings. October frost coated the road five hundred yards back, but here, plush moss yielded beneath her boots like soaked wool. Dog-roses and pale blue cranesbill crowded the roots, blossoms fat and fragrant in the dead air. The smell rose sweet, thick, and suffocating, laced with the copper reek of fresh turnings in a graveyard. She touched the front of her collar. Beneath the coarse cotton of her shirt, the Heartstone Pendant hung motionless on its silver links. The thumbnail-sized jewel sat flat against her sternum, cold as a pond pebble. "No ledger," she muttered, scanning the black grass at the base of the nearest megalith. "No envelope. Just weeds and dirt." Speaking helped. Her voice gave the clearing corners, anchored her height to the dirt, pinned her five-foot-six frame against the towering, lichen-crusted timber. She pulled her sleeves down over her knuckles, thumbnail tracing the crescent-shaped scar tucked into the hollow of her left wrist. Old habits died hard; pain from twelve years ago still offered the quickest proof that she was awake. A twig snapped. The sound did not come from behind her, where the path had closed, but from the low crown of an oak forty paces ahead. It was not the dry crack of wood yielding to weight. It carried a wet, tearing resonance, like green tendon pulled apart. Aurora froze. Her bright blue eyes widened, scouring the canopy. The moon gave off a tallow-colored light that pooled on the leaves, turning the upper boughs into slabs of pewter. "Silas?" Silence answered. Not even an owl called. The absence of birds felt calculated, as if the local fauna had cleared the precinct hours ago to make room for an occupant with worse manners. She took one measured pace toward the edge of the circle. Her boot sank two inches into the soil. When she lifted her heel, the earth sucked back with a thick, wet smack. Ten yards to her right, something mirrored the cadence. A single, muffled footfall dropped into the turf. Aurora stopped. She did not breathe. She tilted her chin, watching the perimeter through her peripheral vision. Looking directly at the gaps between the oaks yielded only black trunks and twisted briars, but at the periphery of her sight, the dark had a different density. The shadows between the stones did not taper toward the ground; they pooled at shoulder height, narrow and impossibly long. "If Cheung sent you to check my drop, you're wasting fuel," she pitched her voice clear, hard, stripping every tremor from the syllables. "The food run ended at eight. I don't carry the till on personal hours." The trees offered no rebuttal. Then came the sound. It was faint at first—the dry, papery friction of two wasp nests grinding together inside a hollow wall. It drifted from above, then shifted behind her knees, then slid into the dirt near her left foot. It carried a rhythm. Inhale. Exhale. But the exhalations ran far too long for human lungs, lasting twelve, fifteen, twenty seconds before catching on a wet rattle and restarting. The Heartstone stirred. Against her chest, the crimson facet warmed. The transition struck fast: from stagnant cellar cold to the heat of fresh dishwater, seeping through her undershirt. A dull, blood-colored glow pushed through the weave of her black coat, staining her fingers as she pressed her palm over the stone. "Not now," she whispered to the gemstone, her jaw set. "Not here." The warmth deepened to a scalding prickle. The pendant only reacted to one thing. It recognized the rot of an open tear, the reek of Hel’s rim. The breathing around her stopped. In the sudden vacuum, the clearing warped. The ancient oak stones—slabs of petrified wood older than the city thirty miles east—no longer stood vertical. They leaned inward, their crowns nodding toward the center of the moss where Aurora stood, closing the aperture of the sky like the iris of a dying eye. The stars above them were wrong. They lacked the cold white prick of winter constellations over London; they flickered like yellow grease burning in a dish. She backed up. Her right heel struck the root of an oak behind her. She did not turn around. She kept her eyes on the opposite side of the ring, where the bluebells were flattening. The stems did not bend under a descending foot. They crushed in sequence, pressed flat by an invisible weight that displaced no air, stirred no leaves, threw no shadow across the moss. The track came straight toward her, six feet between depressions. Long strides. Weightless strides. "Show yourself." Aurora slipped her hand inside her coat, fingers locking around the silver chain of the pendant to keep the burning stone from blistering her skin. "I’m leaving the ring." A gust of air struck the back of her neck. It did not smell like the wildflowers. It carried the stink of river silt left to dry in high summer, of stagnant water and animal iron. Aurora whipped around, her spine hard against the oak. Nothing stood on the path. The gap between the two marker stones remained empty, framed by tangled briars. Yet the fog rising from the turf clung to an outline three feet in front of her face. The vapor parted around broad, uneven shoulders, curling over invisible wrists that hung down past where human knees would be. At eye level, the mist swirled into two tiny, hollow vortices. "You're in the wrong ditch," Aurora whispered, her pulse hammering against her teeth. The air between them dropped twenty degrees in a heartbeat. Her breath puffed white, drifting directly into the twin hollows in the mist, where the vapor vanished as if inhaled. Behind her, deep inside the trunk of the oak, something began to rap against the bark from the inside. One. Two. Three. Four knuckles, slow and deliberate, asking to be let out.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:11:06.563Z" 9/2/2026, 5:11:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"resonance"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"calculated"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"footfall"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"tracing"
2"weight"
3"resonance"
4"silence"
5"calculated"
6"measured"
7"footfall"
8"warmth"
9"flickered"
10"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1137
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1061
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Park1
Heathrow1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Speaking1
Hel1
Aurora7
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Speaking"
4"Hel"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Park"
1"Heathrow"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1137
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean27.73
std20.42
cv0.737
sampleLengths
012
112
219
315
435
553
661
736
821
962
103
1146
1230
131
1433
1533
169
178
1865
1937
205
214
2265
233
2448
2512
2627
275
2878
2914
3021
3146
3231
3310
3426
359
3656
3711
3813
3930
4032
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs160
matches
0"were flattening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences97
ratio0.062
matches
0"The dull hum of the A3, the drone of night planes descending toward Heathrow, the wet hiss of black cabs on damp asphalt—all severed in a single stride over the boundary."
1"Old habits died hard; pain from twelve years ago still offered the quickest proof that she was awake."
2"The shadows between the stones did not taper toward the ground; they pooled at shoulder height, narrow and impossibly long."
3"It was faint at first—the dry, papery friction of two wasp nests grinding together inside a hollow wall."
4"The ancient oak stones—slabs of petrified wood older than the city thirty miles east—no longer stood vertical."
5"They lacked the cold white prick of winter constellations over London; they flickered like yellow grease burning in a dish."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1073
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"dull, blood-colored glow"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02516309412861137
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005591798695246971
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11.72
std7.6
cv0.648
sampleLengths
012
112
219
315
411
55
619
76
831
916
107
1120
1216
1318
147
1516
1613
1715
186
192
2021
2121
2218
233
2424
2511
2611
272
288
2920
301
312
325
3326
3411
358
3614
379
388
392
404
4111
4228
4320
4423
4514
465
474
4818
4918
60.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.422680412371134
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners41
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then came the sound."
ratio0.013
73.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences79
matches
0"Her voice dissolved against the"
1"She thumbed the screen off,"
2"She touched the front of"
3"she muttered, scanning the black"
4"Her voice gave the clearing"
5"She pulled her sleeves down"
6"It was not the dry"
7"It carried a wet, tearing"
8"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
9"She took one measured pace"
10"Her boot sank two inches"
11"She did not breathe."
12"She tilted her chin, watching"
13"she pitched her voice clear,"
14"It was faint at first—the"
15"It drifted from above, then"
16"It carried a rhythm."
17"she whispered to the gemstone,"
18"It recognized the rot of"
19"They leaned inward, their crowns"
ratio0.367
54.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences79
matches
0"The call decayed into static"
1"Aurora Carter tapped the screen"
2"Her voice dissolved against the"
3"Nothing returned from the speaker."
4"She thumbed the screen off,"
5"Richmond Park had vanished behind"
6"The dull hum of the"
7"Underfoot, the season had lost"
8"October frost coated the road"
9"Dog-roses and pale blue cranesbill"
10"The smell rose sweet, thick,"
11"She touched the front of"
12"The thumbnail-sized jewel sat flat"
13"she muttered, scanning the black"
14"Her voice gave the clearing"
15"She pulled her sleeves down"
16"A twig snapped."
17"The sound did not come"
18"It was not the dry"
19"It carried a wet, tearing"
ratio0.81
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The moon gave off a tallow-colored light that pooled on the leaves, turning the upper boughs into slabs of pewter."
1"The absence of birds felt calculated, as if the local fauna had cleared the precinct hours ago to make room for an occupant with worse manners."
2"They leaned inward, their crowns nodding toward the center of the moss where Aurora stood, closing the aperture of the sky like the iris of a dying eye."
3"They crushed in sequence, pressed flat by an invisible weight that displaced no air, stirred no leaves, threw no shadow across the moss."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora whispered, her pulse hammering against her teeth"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
79.2971%