Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHMRWCCB09YAC1R5P406B5

Run Details

Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.017905
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The access hatch opened behind an artisan bakery off Camden High Street, dropping thirty feet through a rusted iron shaft into the dead belly of London. Harlow Quinn dropped the final six feet onto crushed gravel. Ballast dust puffed against the leather of her combat boots. Her left wrist twisted instinctively, bringing the scratched glass of her watch into the cone of her flashlight. Three minutes past midnight. Eighteen years on the force left a person with knees that clicked in damp weather, and the air down here carried the chill of wet soot and copper slag. Twenty yards down the disused track bed, halogen work lights cast harsh white squares across the Victorian brickwork. Eva Kowalski huddled near the edge of the abandoned platform, dwarfed by an oversized trench coat. Her round spectacles caught the glare, turning her eyes into blank silver disks. Green irises reappeared as she tilted her chin, curly red hair slipping free of her wool cap. Her right hand darted up, tucking a stray copper lock behind her left ear before clutching the strap of her heavy satchel. "You took your time." Eva's voice cut through the hum of the portable generator. "The soot down here belongs to the 1920s. Every breath feels like swallowing coal dust." "Traffic on the bridge." Quinn approached the yellow cordon tape strung between two rusted signal uprights. Her stride held its usual measured tempo, heels striking the gravel without a stumble. "Uniform found him?" "Transit maintenance crew checking structural fissures." Eva stepped back, granting Quinn room along the narrow platform ledge. "They took one look at his chest and ran all the way back to the street hatch." The corpse lay flat on its back across the rails, arms pinned tight to its ribs as though shoved into a narrow chute. Expensive charcoal wool covered the torso, soaked through at the sternum with a blackish, coagulated smear. He was fifty, maybe fifty-five, silver stubble framing a slack, pale mouth. Eva pulled a notebook from her satchel. "His name is Julian Cross. Independent antiquities dealer with an office off Bloomsbury. Missing since Tuesday. The working hypothesis is straightforward." Quinn crouched, her sharp jaw set against the stench. It smelled less of decomposition and more like a blown electrical transformer—ozone, scorched rubber, ozone again. "Go on." "He dealt in high-end stolen estate pieces. Roman coins, early Saxon metalwork, rare books." Eva gestured toward the vaulted ceiling with the tip of her pencil. "The ventilation shaft above connects to the basement of a storage warehouse on Kentish Town Road. He met a buyer down here to avoid street cameras. The transaction went bad. The buyer knifed him, grabbed the merchandise, and climbed back up the service ladder." Quinn leaned in, her brown eyes tracking the edge of the wound. "A knife did this?" "Single puncture to the pericardium. Clean entry through the coat." "Look closer, Kowalski." Quinn flicked her penlight on, narrowing the beam until it pinpointed the torn wool. "A steel blade drags thread into the wound channel. It frays the weave. These fibers are severed clean, melted at the tips. Synthetic blend coat, melted shut like someone took an acetylene torch to the weave." Eva pushed her glasses up the bridge of her freckled nose. "A customized heat blade. Black-market industrial tools aren't unheard of in fencing operations." "And the blood?" Quinn pointed the penlight at the pool beneath the victim's spine. Eva blinked. "What about it?" "The ambient temperature down here is nine degrees Celsius. The ballast stone is dry. At nine degrees, blood pools, spreads into the porous crushed rock, separates into dark clots and yellow serum." Quinn reached out with a gloved finger, tapping the crust beside the dead man's collar. It did not smudge. It cracked like brittle candy. "This is crystallized. The edges have frost rime on them." "Chemical residue." Eva tucked her hair behind her ear again, the motion jerky. "Some kind of propellant from the killer's weapon." "You're forcing the facts to fit the box, Eva. You do that when you want to leave." Quinn rose, towering five inches over the researcher. "Why are you in such a rush to write this off as a botched fence?" Eva's gaze shifted toward the darkness deeper down the tunnel, where the tracks curved toward King's Cross. "I'm not in a rush. I'm providing an institutional assessment based on Cross's known catalog." "Cross didn't fall through that maintenance shaft." Quinn turned her back on the platform, sweeping her light across the ground. "Look at the dust." The disused rails were blanketed in sixty years of undisturbed industrial grime, grey and velvet-thick. "If a man fell twelve feet from that gantry," Quinn pointed the beam up at the rusted catwalk, "he leaves an impact crater in the dirt. Gravel scatters. Dust billows and settles across the ties. There's no scatter here. The dust along his flanks is pristine." Eva tightened her grip on her satchel. "He could have walked to this spot before collapsing." "Show me the footprints." Eva looked down. There were none. Between the maintenance ladder thirty feet back and the platform where Cross lay, the dust on the sleepers lay flat, unbroken, coated in a fine web of undisturbed track mould. The only boot impressions belonged to Quinn and the two rail workers who had bolted. Cross's handmade Italian loafers rested on the steel rail without a speck of soot on their polished leather uppers. "He didn't walk here," Quinn stated, her voice flat, devoid of theatrics. "He wasn't dropped from above. He was placed here. Or he arrived here." "Arrived? Quinn, people don't materialize out of thin air." "DS Morris didn't die of heart failure in that basement three years ago, either," Quinn snapped, her thumb brushing the worn leather of her watch strap. "The official report said cardiac arrest. His ribcage was crushed from the inside out, and the dust in that room had the same smell this tunnel has." Eva looked away, jaw tight. Quinn ignored the silence. She stepped over the rails, balancing on the steel flange with practiced equilibrium. Her beam swept the interior of Cross's jacket. The breast pocket bulged slightly. With two fingers, she eased back the charcoal lapel. Tucked into the inner silk pocket was a flat slip of carved white material—ivory or bone, notched at the corners with three runic grooves. "Token," Quinn murmured. "Old bone. Cow, maybe sheep." "Quinn, don't touch the personal effects until forensics—" Quinn's hand was already moving. Beneath the lapel, nestled in the victim's stiff, crooked fingers, sat a palm-sized object the uniform crew had overlooked in the dark. She lifted it free. It was a small brass compass, heavy for its dimensions, its edges crusted with a thick, sea-green patina of verdigris. The glass face was uncracked, etched with concentric bands of interlocking geometric sigils rather than compass degrees. Inside the chamber, suspended in clear liquid, the needle wasn't painted steel. It was a jagged splinter of black obsidian, trembling with a frantic, rhythmic pulse. "What is that?" Quinn held it level. The needle swung wildly past magnetic north. It pivoted south, jittered, and snapped toward the brick wall directly behind the abandoned platform bench. Eva stepped forward, her freckles stark against her pale skin. "It's an antique navigation prop. An alchemical curiosity. Eighteenth century, probably German." "The needle is pointing at solid brick, Eva." "The iron rebar in the tunnel supports is throwing off the magnetic field." "The rebar is behind us," Quinn countered, taking a single step toward the wall. The obsidian splinter vibrated harder, humming against the brass casing with a faint, insectile drone that set Quinn's teeth on edge. She raised her penlight, shining it dead center on the wall where the compass pointed. The red Victorian bricks appeared ordinary at first glance, coated in tunnel grime and salt blooms. But three feet above the gravel, where the mortar should have crumbled into dust, the lime joints were dark, wet, and sweating a slick, colorless oil. Traced lightly into the soot of four adjoining bricks was the faint outline of an archway, its apex crowned with the exact three-notched pattern carved into the bone token in Cross's coat. Quinn brought the brass compass within six inches of the brickwork. The needle flattened itself against the glass, spinning so violently the casing grew warm against her leather glove. "Julian Cross wasn't selling Roman coins down here," Quinn said, keeping her eyes fixed on the weeping mortar. "He had a key to a door that isn't on any city transit map." She turned back to Eva. The younger woman had both hands clamped around the strap of her satchel, knuckles white, her boots planted firmly outside the cordon line. "Where does this tunnel actually go, Eva?"
created_at"2026-09-02T17:11:08.949Z" 9/2/2026, 5:11:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.711
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.044
93.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1471
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1471
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"synthetic"
count1
4
word"crystallized"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count2
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"traced"
count1
16
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"measured"
2"flicked"
3"synthetic"
4"crystallized"
5"velvet"
6"pristine"
7"silence"
8"silk"
9"etched"
10"rhythmic"
11"pulse"
12"magnetic"
13"stark"
14"vibrated"
15"traced"
16"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1469
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount956
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.3
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
London1
Quinn22
Victorian2
Kowalski1
Eva14
King1
Cross5
Italian1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Kowalski"
2"Eva"
3"King"
4"Cross"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"London"
4"Victorian"
globalScore0.349
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared ordinary at first glance, coated in tunnel grime and salt blooms"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1469
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean28.8
std20.22
cv0.702
sampleLengths
026
171
218
368
429
533
634
751
828
927
1070
1116
1210
1353
1424
1514
165
1766
1821
1940
2032
2124
2215
2346
2416
254
263
2767
2825
299
3053
315
3230
3333
348
358
3627
374
3863
397
4023
4122
428
4313
4414
4536
4674
4729
4832
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"were blanketed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was already moving"
86.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences102
ratio0.02
matches
0"It smelled less of decomposition and more like a blown electrical transformer—ozone, scorched rubber, ozone again."
1"Tucked into the inner silk pocket was a flat slip of carved white material—ivory or bone, notched at the corners with three runic grooves."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount963
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"thick, sea-green patina"
1"exact three-notched pattern"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.024922118380062305
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010384215991692628
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean14.4
std9.17
cv0.637
sampleLengths
026
110
210
318
44
529
618
716
813
917
1022
1114
1215
1316
1414
153
1617
1717
1823
1916
2012
217
2221
239
2416
252
2626
2744
2812
294
3010
3117
3236
3311
3413
3514
362
373
3847
394
405
4110
4213
438
4425
4515
4617
4715
4820
494
72.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.47058823529411764
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences72
matches
0"Her left wrist twisted instinctively,"
1"Her round spectacles caught the"
2"Her right hand darted up,"
3"Her stride held its usual"
4"He was fifty, maybe fifty-five,"
5"It smelled less of decomposition"
6"It did not smudge."
7"It cracked like brittle candy."
8"She stepped over the rails,"
9"Her beam swept the interior"
10"She lifted it free."
11"It was a small brass"
12"It was a jagged splinter"
13"It pivoted south, jittered, and"
14"She raised her penlight, shining"
15"She turned back to Eva."
ratio0.222
50.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences72
matches
0"The access hatch opened behind"
1"Harlow Quinn dropped the final"
2"Ballast dust puffed against the"
3"Her left wrist twisted instinctively,"
4"Eva Kowalski huddled near the"
5"Her round spectacles caught the"
6"Her right hand darted up,"
7"Eva's voice cut through the"
8"Quinn approached the yellow cordon"
9"Her stride held its usual"
10"Eva stepped back, granting Quinn"
11"The corpse lay flat on"
12"He was fifty, maybe fifty-five,"
13"Eva pulled a notebook from"
14"Quinn crouched, her sharp jaw"
15"It smelled less of decomposition"
16"Eva gestured toward the vaulted"
17"Quinn leaned in, her brown"
18"Quinn flicked her penlight on,"
19"Eva pushed her glasses up"
ratio0.819
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The corpse lay flat on its back across the rails, arms pinned tight to its ribs as though shoved into a narrow chute."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn stated, her voice flat, devoid of theatrics"
1"Quinn snapped, her thumb brushing the worn leather of her watch strap"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn stated (state)"
1"Quinn snapped (snap)"
2"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.089
leniency0.178
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.133
83.6282%