| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.356 | | leniency | 0.711 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.044 | |
| 93.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1471 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1471 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "synthetic" | | 4 | "crystallized" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "pristine" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "magnetic" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "traced" | | 16 | "firmly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1469 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 956 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.3 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | London | 1 | | Quinn | 22 | | Victorian | 2 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 14 | | King | 1 | | Cross | 5 | | Italian | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Kowalski" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "King" | | 4 | "Cross" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "High" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Victorian" |
| | globalScore | 0.349 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared ordinary at first glance, coated in tunnel grime and salt blooms" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1469 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 28.8 | | std | 20.22 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 70 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 67 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 63 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 36 | | 46 | 74 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | |
| 86.83% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled less of decomposition and more like a blown electrical transformer—ozone, scorched rubber, ozone again." | | 1 | "Tucked into the inner silk pocket was a flat slip of carved white material—ivory or bone, notched at the corners with three runic grooves." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 963 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, sea-green patina" | | 1 | "exact three-notched pattern" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.024922118380062305 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010384215991692628 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 14.4 | | std | 9.17 | | cv | 0.637 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 47 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 72.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.47058823529411764 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Her left wrist twisted instinctively," | | 1 | "Her round spectacles caught the" | | 2 | "Her right hand darted up," | | 3 | "Her stride held its usual" | | 4 | "He was fifty, maybe fifty-five," | | 5 | "It smelled less of decomposition" | | 6 | "It did not smudge." | | 7 | "It cracked like brittle candy." | | 8 | "She stepped over the rails," | | 9 | "Her beam swept the interior" | | 10 | "She lifted it free." | | 11 | "It was a small brass" | | 12 | "It was a jagged splinter" | | 13 | "It pivoted south, jittered, and" | | 14 | "She raised her penlight, shining" | | 15 | "She turned back to Eva." |
| | ratio | 0.222 | |
| 50.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The access hatch opened behind" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn dropped the final" | | 2 | "Ballast dust puffed against the" | | 3 | "Her left wrist twisted instinctively," | | 4 | "Eva Kowalski huddled near the" | | 5 | "Her round spectacles caught the" | | 6 | "Her right hand darted up," | | 7 | "Eva's voice cut through the" | | 8 | "Quinn approached the yellow cordon" | | 9 | "Her stride held its usual" | | 10 | "Eva stepped back, granting Quinn" | | 11 | "The corpse lay flat on" | | 12 | "He was fifty, maybe fifty-five," | | 13 | "Eva pulled a notebook from" | | 14 | "Quinn crouched, her sharp jaw" | | 15 | "It smelled less of decomposition" | | 16 | "Eva gestured toward the vaulted" | | 17 | "Quinn leaned in, her brown" | | 18 | "Quinn flicked her penlight on," | | 19 | "Eva pushed her glasses up" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The corpse lay flat on its back across the rails, arms pinned tight to its ribs as though shoved into a narrow chute." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn stated, her voice flat, devoid of theatrics" | | 1 | "Quinn snapped, her thumb brushing the worn leather of her watch strap" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn stated (state)" | | 1 | "Quinn snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.089 | | leniency | 0.178 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |