Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHNC195J6ZMWYGQ261TM07

Run Details

Duration:
16.7s
Cost:
$0.012433
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Camden Lock churned beneath the downpour, black water frothing against slime-slicked brickwork. Rain hammered the corrugated awnings of the closed market stalls, drumming a deafening, metallic roar into the midnight air. Sheets of freezing water whipped across Detective Harlow Quinn’s face. She ignored the sting, eyes locked on the scuffed leather jacket fifty yards ahead. Her boots struck the sodden pavement with disciplined, rhythmic strikes, every stride calculated from eighteen years on the force. The salt-and-pepper hair plastered against her temples dripped into her brown eyes. She blinked the water away, teeth grinding behind a set jaw. Ahead, Tomás Herrera slipped on a patch of greasy tarmac. His arms flailed, the strap of a heavy canvas medical satchel wrenching hard against his shoulder. A silver Saint Christopher medallion broke free of his collar, bouncing against the damp hollow of his throat. He caught his balance against a graffiti-scarred brick pillar, cast a panicked look over his shoulder, and lunged down an alleyway between two Victorian warehouses. "Police! Herrera, halt!" The command stripped the lining of her throat, lost beneath the roar of the rain and the scream of a passing night bus on Chalk Farm Road. Tomás did not slow. He kicked through a pile of waterlogged wooden pallets, sending splinters and rotten timber skittering across Quinn’s path. Quinn hurdled the debris with a grunt, her shoulder slamming the corner of the brick building as she rounded the turn. The impact jarred her collarbone, but momentum kept her moving. Ahead lay a dead-end service lane choked with commercial bins and industrial skips. Tomás stood at the far end, clawing at a sheet of corrugated zinc bolted across an archway. A fresh gouge in the rusted metal hung open where bolt cutters had done recent work. Blood smeared the sharp edge—fresh, dark, pumped from the jagged scar across his exposed left forearm. "Nowhere left, Tomás. Step away from the gap." Her hand rested on the grip of her service baton, chest rising and falling in deep, measured expansions. Tomás yanked the zinc sheet wide, ignoring the metal biting into his palms. "You don't want to follow me down there, Quinn!" "I want answers about Morris. Step back, hands where I can see them." Tomás grimaced, eyes wide, breath puffing in ragged white clouds against the damp air. "Morris dug into graves he had no business opening. Leave it alone!" He dove headfirst through the jagged tear in the metal. Quinn surged forward. Her knuckles caught the torn zinc, tearing through her glove and slicing the skin below her thumb. She ignored the hot bloom of pain, dropped to her knees, and slid through the aperture onto a bed of crushed gravel and rusted cable ties. The noise of London vanished. The rain cut out entirely, replaced by an oppressive, subterranean hush. Quinn clicked on her tactical torch. The stark white beam cut through suspended dust motes, illuminating a curving concrete tube coated in decades of black brake dust. Rusted tracks stretched into the dark, vanishing down a steep six-degree gradient. Old enamel signage clung to the soot-stained tiles: *Camden Town - North London Railway - Closed 1924.* Her boots crunched on dry, dead ballast. The air tasted stale, thick with sulfur, dead ozone, and something sickly-sweet, like dried lavender crushed into copper shavings. Her worn leather watch read twelve minutes past midnight. The second hand ticked forward, steady and unbothered, while the hair on Quinn's forearms rose beneath her soaked wool coat. A hundred yards down the tunnel, a pale circle of light danced along the curving wall. Tomás was running along the track bed, ducking beneath hanging bundles of dead communications wire. Quinn killed her torch. The dark rushed in, thick and suffocating, but ambient illumination filtered from deep below—a faint, amber phosphorescence that had no business existing in an abandoned railway bore. She drew her baton, letting the steel snap out into its locked position with a sharp, resonant crack. She advanced down the incline, using the wooden sleepers to mask her tread. The tunnel curved sharply to the left. The amber light strengthened, bringing with it a low, droning vibration that resonated in the fillings of her teeth. It wasn't the sound of trains. It was the murmur of hundreds of voices, hushed and bartering, layered beneath the scrape of iron scales and the clatter of wood. The rail bed terminated abruptly at a platform sheared in half by long-abandoned construction work. Beyond the drop lay the cavernous vault of a forgotten interchange station. Quinn flattened her back against the curved tiled wall, easing her head past the edge of the brickwork to survey the cavern below. Silk awnings, dyed deep saffron and bruised violet, stretched between rusted steel girders. Trestle tables crowded the old platform, lit by floating glass globes filled with crawling, bioluminescent moss. Glass jars stacked five high on wooden crates contained coiled, pale specimens that twitched against the glass. Vials of thick, iridescent fluids clinked as hooded figures traded them for bundles of dried roots, polished stone, and heavy lead tokens. No uniforms. No badges. The figures moving among the stalls wore heavy wool, oiled leather, and velvet coats stained with salt. Near the central archway of the lower concourse, Tomás stood with his hands raised in front of two towering sentries clad in patchwork trench coats. The sentries blocked the archway with heavy, iron-tipped staves. Quinn leaned closer, strain tightening the muscles along her jaw. One of the guards shoved Tomás backward. "Toll," the guard rasped, voice grating like river gravel grinding under a keel. Tomás dug into the inner lining of his soaked jacket, fingers trembling. He produced a sliver of polished ivory—a flat, finger-length bone token etched with crimson runes. He thrust it forward. The guard took the bone, brought it to his nose, and inhaled deep. A low grunt rattled in the creature’s chest. He stepped aside, gesturing Tomás through the threshold into the teeming heart of the bazaar. Tomás vanished into the crowd, the red silk curtain of a stall swallowing him whole. Quinn held her breath, the stone wall cold against her spine. Her radio hissed with dead static, cut off by fifty feet of solid London clay and something far denser. No backup would reach this depth. No standard warrant covered whatever lay beneath the soot-choked platform. DS Morris had chased a ghost into the dark three years ago and returned in an airtight bag with water in his lungs and ash under his fingernails. Her thumb rubbed the scarred leather strap of her watch. Below, the market pulsed with alien life, an impossible ecosystem thriving directly beneath the commuter lines of North London. The guard at the gate turned his head, snout twitching beneath the shadow of a low hood, sniffing the dead air of the railway tunnel. Quinn lowered her baton, adjusted the grip on her service weapon, and stepped off the platform ledge into the shadow of the lower tracks.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:11:28.56Z" 9/2/2026, 5:11:28 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"churned"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"silk"
count2
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"standard"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"churned"
1"rhythmic"
2"calculated"
3"measured"
4"oppressive"
5"stark"
6"resonated"
7"silk"
8"velvet"
9"etched"
10"standard"
11"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords9
totalWords1166
ratio0.008
matches
0"Camden Town - North London Railway - Closed 1924."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1120
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Lock1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Tomás11
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Victorian1
Chalk1
Farm1
Road1
London4
Town1
North2
Railway1
Closed1
Morris1
persons
0"Lock"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Victorian"
8"Railway"
9"Morris"
places
0"Detective"
1"Chalk"
2"Farm"
3"Road"
4"London"
5"Town"
6"North"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1166
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean29.9
std21.3
cv0.713
sampleLengths
031
166
269
33
427
522
644
749
88
918
1013
119
1213
1314
1412
1510
1646
175
1811
1956
2055
2131
2249
2368
2427
2523
2689
2734
2810
297
3013
3131
3236
3315
3411
3563
3629
3725
3824
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was running"
5.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences83
ratio0.048
matches
0"Blood smeared the sharp edge—fresh, dark, pumped from the jagged scar across his exposed left forearm."
1"Old enamel signage clung to the soot-stained tiles: *Camden Town - North London Railway - Closed 1924.*"
2"The dark rushed in, thick and suffocating, but ambient illumination filtered from deep below—a faint, amber phosphorescence that had no business existing in an abandoned railway bore."
3"He produced a sliver of polished ivory—a flat, finger-length bone token etched with crimson runes."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1133
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"against slime-slicked brickwork."
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.0088261253309797
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00441306266548985
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean14.05
std6.35
cv0.452
sampleLengths
012
119
210
314
419
512
611
710
816
918
1025
113
1227
134
1418
1521
1610
1713
1817
1916
2016
218
2218
2313
249
2513
2614
2712
2810
293
3017
3126
325
3311
346
3521
3612
3717
387
3919
409
4120
4216
4315
444
4527
4618
4713
487
4919
55.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3855421686746988
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences76
matches
0"She ignored the sting, eyes"
1"Her boots struck the sodden"
2"She blinked the water away,"
3"His arms flailed, the strap"
4"He caught his balance against"
5"He kicked through a pile"
6"Her hand rested on the"
7"He dove headfirst through the"
8"Her knuckles caught the torn"
9"She ignored the hot bloom"
10"Her boots crunched on dry,"
11"Her worn leather watch read"
12"She drew her baton, letting"
13"She advanced down the incline,"
14"It wasn't the sound of"
15"It was the murmur of"
16"He produced a sliver of"
17"He thrust it forward."
18"He stepped aside, gesturing Tomás"
19"Her radio hissed with dead"
ratio0.276
32.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences76
matches
0"Camden Lock churned beneath the"
1"Sheets of freezing water whipped"
2"She ignored the sting, eyes"
3"Her boots struck the sodden"
4"The salt-and-pepper hair plastered against"
5"She blinked the water away,"
6"His arms flailed, the strap"
7"A silver Saint Christopher medallion"
8"He caught his balance against"
9"The command stripped the lining"
10"Tomás did not slow."
11"He kicked through a pile"
12"Quinn hurdled the debris with"
13"The impact jarred her collarbone,"
14"Tomás stood at the far"
15"A fresh gouge in the"
16"Blood smeared the sharp edge—fresh,"
17"Her hand rested on the"
18"Tomás yanked the zinc sheet"
19"Tomás grimaced, eyes wide, breath"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The dark rushed in, thick and suffocating, but ambient illumination filtered from deep below—a faint, amber phosphorescence that had no business existing in an …"
1"The amber light strengthened, bringing with it a low, droning vibration that resonated in the fillings of her teeth."
2"Glass jars stacked five high on wooden crates contained coiled, pale specimens that twitched against the glass."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the guard rasped, voice grating like river gravel grinding under a keel"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.3569%