Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHS2YAP4SETZM0TR1CG9C4

Run Details

Duration:
19.5s
Cost:
$0.013425
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked free, and the wood slammed inward against Rory's shoulder before she could pull her hand back. "You took three minutes too long." Lucien Moreau stood on the draughty landing, smelling of rain, cold iron, and bitter orange. Damp darkened the shoulders of his charcoal wool overcoat. His ivory-handled cane rested against the brass threshold, the metal tip pinning the door open before she could shove it shut. "Eva isn't here," she said. "I am aware. She is currently deciphering seventeenth-century parish records in Southwark." His heterochromatic gaze pinned her, the left iris bright amber, the right a fathomless pool of obsidian. "Step aside, Rory." "Step into traffic, Lucien." He stepped past her anyway. The movement held the effortless, predatory grace she despised, leaving her with the draft from the stairwell and the greasy smell of fryers from the curry house below. Ptolemy hissed from the top of an unstable tower of leather-bound folios, fur bristling along his striped spine. Lucien did not flinch. He walked into the cramped room as though he held the deed to the building, his cane tapping once against the bare pine floorboards. "Charming sanctuary," he murmured. "The smell of cumin does wonders for the wards." "It keeps bloodhounds like you from tracking human scent." Rory slammed the door, throwing all three bolts with sharp, deliberate cracks. Her left wrist twitched, the crescent-shaped scar pulling tight against her skin. "How did you find this place?" "A gentleman never discloses his ledger." "You aren't a gentleman. You're a broker with half an infernal pedigree and a tailor you clearly overpay." Lucien turned, his slicked-back platinum hair catching the yellowish glow of the low-wattage floor lamp. He peeled off his leather gloves, finger by finger, dropping them onto Eva's cluttered drop-leaf table atop an open translation of ancient Sumerian liturgy. "You left Whitechapel without your coat," he said. "I left Whitechapel because you lied to me." "I omitted a superfluous detail." "You let an Avaros butcher track me to the docks." "I arrived before he touched you." "By two seconds, Lucien. Two." The silence between them stretched, thick and toxic. Rory crossed her arms, anchoring her feet to the threadbare rug. She knew the danger of giving ground in a room this small. Six paces separated the kitchenette from Eva's reading armchair, and Lucien consumed half the space simply by breathing. His demon heritage bled into the room, dropping the temperature until her breath plumed white in the musty air. "You look thin," he said. "Deliveries keep me active." "Carrying bags of dumplings across Hackney on a rusted bicycle hardly suits your talents." "It keeps me out of cellars. It keeps me away from you." "Yet here we are." Lucien set his cane against the edge of the bookcase. He unbuttoned his overcoat, revealing the immaculate line of his charcoal waistcoat, the silver chain hooked through his third buttonhole, the stark white collar framing his pale throat. Every inch of him remained precise, deliberate, and entirely untouched by the chaos he created. Rory felt the familiar, treacherous heat flare low in her gut, followed instantly by the sour taste of self-reproach. She hated how easily he unsettled her composure. She had run from Wales to escape one man who made her feel small, only to collide in London with a creature who made the world feel violent and electric. "Why are you here?" she asked. "Evan approached the cambion circle in Soho yesterday." Her breath hitched. She locked her jaw, refusing to let the tremor reach her hands. "Evan doesn't know about the circles. He's an accountant from Newport." "He was an accountant from Newport," Lucien corrected. "Now he is a desperate man with thirty thousand pounds of debt to men who do not accept sterling. He offered them information." "About what?" "About a Welsh girl who vanished from Cardiff with a family signet ring." "I pawned that ring two years ago." "Evan told them you still had it. Along with the Carter bloodline secrets your father hid in his desk before his stroke." Lucien took two slow steps forward. He did not rush. He moved like a shadow stretching across stone. Rory held her ground until his chest nearly brushed her shoulder. The chill coming off him raised goosebumps along her arms, fighting the heavy warmth of his skin. "Look at me, Aurora." "Don't call me that." "Look at me." She tilted her head back, meeting his split gaze. The amber eye held fire; the black eye held nothing at all. Up close, tiny flecks of gold circled his demon pupil, a cruel reminder of the realm his father had crawled out of. "You think I came here to hurt you," he whispered. "I think you come wherever someone bleeds, Lucien. You collect the droplets and sell them back to the highest bidder." "If I wanted your blood, I would have taken it in the warehouse." "You almost did." His throat moved as he swallowed. A flicker of something raw and unscripted fractured the smooth mask of his face. His gloveless hand lifted, hovering an inch from her jaw, close enough that she felt the peculiar electrostatic charge of his skin. "You ran," he said softly. "You kissed me against an iron pillar while three corpses cooled on the floorboards, and then you told me my father deserved his stroke." Her voice remained flat, every word a deliberate strike. "What did you expect me to do? Offer you tea?" "Your father was a coward who traded his daughter's safety to keep his practice intact." Rory slapped his hand away. "Keep his name out of your mouth." Lucien caught her wrist. His fingers locked around her pulse point, directly over the crescent scar. He did not squeeze hard enough to bruise, but the grip was absolute, an iron band forged in colder fires than London could produce. "I spent three weeks scouring the borough for you," he growled, the accent of his Marseille childhood bleeding through his clipped English vowels. "Three weeks listening to dockside filth boast about a black-haired courier who knew how to slip through hexes. You think you hid from me? I allowed you the illusion of space because I thought you needed time to recover your senses." "I recovered them the second I walked out of your townhouse." "Liar." "Let go of me." "Call me a broker again," he murmured, his thumb brushing the rapid flutter of her vein. "Tell me I feel nothing." "You feel hunger, Lucien. That isn't the same thing." His mouth parted, a retort sharp on his tongue, but the floor beneath them shuddered. Ptolemy shrieked, bolting behind the sofa in a blur of grey fur. The single window facing Brick Lane blew inward with the force of a battering ram, showering the worn rug with diamond shards of shattered glass and blackened soot. A heavy iron grappling claw thudded into the floorboards between their feet, its thick chain rattling violently as the winch below began to pull.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:13:30.326Z" 9/2/2026, 5:13:30 PM
model"google/gemini-3.8-flash-20260902"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency6606
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time19472
tokens_prompt4383
tokens_completion2273
native_tokens_prompt4440
native_tokens_completion2692
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning1114
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"STOP"
service_tier"default"
usage0.013425
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.19.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1788369210-OggM3Vaj93gdg8kKukZA"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1788369210-fZo2uCwqWbw8RMv2zi6V"
upstream_id"OlmYaouhH5-U_uMP9JzBgQ8"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"d376f781-516d-42f9-936d-46f19abca6cc"
id"OlmYaouhH5-U_uMP9JzBgQ8"
is_byokfalse
latency6605
model_permaslug"google/gemini-3.8-flash-20260902"
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
status200
total_cost0.013425
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.255
leniency0.51
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.039
95.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1172
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1172
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"effortless"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"treacherous"
count1
6
word"unsettled"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"fractured"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count1
15
word"grappling"
count1
highlights
0"effortless"
1"sanctuary"
2"silence"
3"stark"
4"familiar"
5"treacherous"
6"unsettled"
7"electric"
8"chill"
9"warmth"
10"reminder"
11"flicker"
12"fractured"
13"pulse"
14"shattered"
15"grappling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences57
filterMatches
0"feel feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount723
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Moreau1
Eva2
Sumerian1
Lucien8
Wales1
London2
Marseille1
English1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Wales"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
globalScore0.947
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.853
wordCount1172
matches
0"not squeeze hard enough to bruise, but the grip was absolute, an iron band forged in colder fires t"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean19.21
std16.46
cv0.857
sampleLengths
020
16
245
35
432
54
633
746
813
939
106
1118
1239
138
148
155
1610
176
185
1949
2019
215
224
2314
2412
254
2653
2757
286
298
3026
3131
322
3313
347
3522
3646
374
384
393
4043
4110
4220
4313
443
4542
465
4743
4815
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs121
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences95
ratio0.011
matches
0"The amber eye held fire; the black eye held nothing at all."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount730
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.024657534246575342
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012328767123287671
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.34
std8.21
cv0.666
sampleLengths
020
16
215
39
421
55
629
73
84
95
1028
1118
124
1324
144
159
1621
1712
186
196
2018
2115
2224
238
248
255
2610
276
285
298
3011
3112
3218
3319
345
354
3614
3712
384
3910
4028
4115
4219
438
4430
456
468
473
4812
4911
62.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4105263157894737
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences50
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
1"His heterochromatic gaze pinned her,"
2"He stepped past her anyway."
3"He walked into the cramped"
4"Her left wrist twitched, the"
5"He peeled off his leather"
6"She knew the danger of"
7"His demon heritage bled into"
8"He unbuttoned his overcoat, revealing"
9"She hated how easily he"
10"She had run from Wales"
11"Her breath hitched."
12"She locked her jaw, refusing"
13"He did not rush."
14"He moved like a shadow"
15"She tilted her head back,"
16"His throat moved as he"
17"His gloveless hand lifted, hovering"
18"he said softly"
19"Her voice remained flat, every"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences50
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked free,"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
3"His heterochromatic gaze pinned her,"
4"He stepped past her anyway."
5"The movement held the effortless,"
6"Ptolemy hissed from the top"
7"Lucien did not flinch."
8"He walked into the cramped"
9"Rory slammed the door, throwing"
10"Her left wrist twitched, the"
11"Lucien turned, his slicked-back platinum"
12"He peeled off his leather"
13"The silence between them stretched,"
14"Rory crossed her arms, anchoring"
15"She knew the danger of"
16"His demon heritage bled into"
17"Lucien set his cane against"
18"He unbuttoned his overcoat, revealing"
19"Every inch of him remained"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He walked into the cramped room as though he held the deed to the building, his cane tapping once against the bare pine floorboards."
1"He unbuttoned his overcoat, revealing the immaculate line of his charcoal waistcoat, the silver chain hooked through his third buttonhole, the stark white colla…"
2"The chill coming off him raised goosebumps along her arms, fighting the heavy warmth of his skin."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he murmured, his thumb brushing the rapid flutter of her vein"
51.96% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien corrected (correct)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
3"he growled (growl)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.392
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.196
79.4719%