| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Quinn said evenly [evenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.472 | | leniency | 0.944 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 90.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1541 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "nervously" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1541 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stark" | | 1 | "shattered" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "glint" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "magnetic" | | 14 | "maw" | | 15 | "apprehension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.64% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 79 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1537 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.22% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 993 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.22 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | October | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 22 | | Blitz | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Met | 1 | | Eva | 11 | | Millwall | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Yard | 1 | | London | 1 | | Chalk | 1 | | Farm | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Millwall" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Yard" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.392 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sigils that seemed to subtly shift when the light struck them" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.651 | | wordCount | 1537 | | matches | | 0 | "not with degrees or cardinal points, but with dense, circular sigils" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 41.54 | | std | 25.52 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 93 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 98 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 88 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 68 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 65 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 93 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 59 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 57 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 56 |
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| 76.81% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "been sealed" | | 1 | "been found" | | 2 | "was scorched" | | 3 | "was blown" | | 4 | "was carved" | | 5 | "was unscratched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 19.97% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "It was subtle—most people wouldn't have felt it through their heavy coats—but Quinn's skin prickled with a cold that had nothing to do with autumn subterranean drafts." | | 1 | "And around his throat, the wool collar wasn't torn by hands reaching for a wallet; the fabric was scorched, the fibers brittle and singed into gray ash." | | 2 | "Not human bone—it was carved, etched with minute geometric lines that made Quinn’s eyes water if she tried to follow their intersections." | | 3 | "The needle inside wasn't floating toward magnetic north; it was trembling violently, spun half-turn toward the pitch-black maw of the northbound tunnel, where the rails disappeared into the earth toward Chalk Farm." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1008 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "brutal, stark-white glare" |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.018849206349206348 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013888888888888888 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 16.53 | | std | 11.27 | | cv | 0.682 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 78 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 47 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 64.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.41935483870967744 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "It hung heavy in the" | | 1 | "She checked her left wrist" | | 2 | "She pushed her round glasses" | | 3 | "Her freckled face was pale" | | 4 | "She paused at the perimeter" | | 5 | "His eyes were wide, fixed" | | 6 | "She gave a quick, uneasy" | | 7 | "She crouched on her haunches," | | 8 | "She didn't offer a rebuttal." | | 9 | "It was subtle—most people wouldn't" | | 10 | "It was a dry, ozone-charged" | | 11 | "Her stomach gave a hard," | | 12 | "She had spent thirty-six months" | | 13 | "She rose and walked to" | | 14 | "Her hand went straight to" | | 15 | "She knelt, using the tip" | | 16 | "It was a compass, scarcely" | | 17 | "She stood, towering five inches" | | 18 | "She held the compass between" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 23.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp of the disused" | | 1 | "It hung heavy in the" | | 2 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath" | | 3 | "She checked her left wrist" | | 4 | "The worn leather strap of" | | 5 | "The station had been sealed" | | 6 | "Eva Kowalski said, glancing up" | | 7 | "She pushed her round glasses" | | 8 | "Her freckled face was pale" | | 9 | "A bulky leather satchel, bursting" | | 10 | "Quinn took three measured strides" | | 11 | "She paused at the perimeter" | | 12 | "The victim lay sprawled against" | | 13 | "His eyes were wide, fixed" | | 14 | "Quinn said, her voice flat" | | 15 | "Eva rose, smoothing down the" | | 16 | "She gave a quick, uneasy" | | 17 | "Quinn didn't answer immediately." | | 18 | "She crouched on her haunches," | | 19 | "Eva countered, stepping closer, pointing" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was subtle—most people wouldn't have felt it through their heavy coats—but Quinn's skin prickled with a cold that had nothing to do with autumn subterranean …" | | 1 | "She had spent thirty-six months chasing shadows that refused to cast themselves against London's brickwork, looking for the impossible thing that had hollowed o…" | | 2 | "Not human bone—it was carved, etched with minute geometric lines that made Quinn’s eyes water if she tried to follow their intersections." | | 3 | "The casing was heavy brass, cloaked in a thick, velvety patina of green verdigris that spoke of decades in damp air." | | 4 | "The glass crystal was unscratched, covering a face etched not with degrees or cardinal points, but with dense, circular sigils that seemed to subtly shift when …" | | 5 | "The needle in the brass housing followed her movement, twitching frantically toward the dark." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva said, her voice dropping to a harsh murmur" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Quinn continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.361 | | leniency | 0.722 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |