Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHTTN6T6KQ67VTVVYC2W3Y

Run Details

Duration:
19.6s
Cost:
$0.014927
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon glow of the sign over Dean Street bled through the fogged glass, pooling in oily ribbons across the dark timber floorboards. Rain hammered the glass in erratic bursts. Silas shifted his weight behind the bar, his left boot scuffing the floor with a rhythmic drag as he set down a bowl of dried chickpeas. The heavy silver signet ring on his right hand clicked against the polished mahogany. Rory turned the neck of her cider bottle against the grain of the counter, tracing the condensation with her thumb. The damp from her delivery rounds still clung to the collar of her canvas jacket, mingling with the phantom scent of star anise from the kitchen down on Greek Street. Above them, through the floorboards of her flat, the pipes groaned with their usual evening shudder. The front brass latch rattled. Cold Soho air rushed across the nape of Rory's neck, thick with diesel fumes and wet wool. A woman stood in the threshold, shaking out a collapsible umbrella with two sharp, practiced snaps. Rainwater flew off the ribbed silk, speckling the brass kickplate. She wore a tailored camel coat, its lapels crisp despite the downpour, a burgundy leather portfolio tucked beneath her elbow. Rory looked down at her bottle. Her knuckles went pale against the brown glass. The wet boots clicked across the floor, hesitating beneath a framed, yellowing admiralty chart of the Jutland coast. A handbag zipper slid open, then stopped. "Aurora?" The voice had Cardiff carved into the back of every syllable—unhurried, round at the vowels, smelling of wet slate and Sunday dinners in Pontcanna. Rory did not turn around immediately. She took a slow sip, letting the crisp bite of the cider settle before she angled her stool. "Rhian." Rhiannon Vaughan stepped into the amber circle cast by the low-wattage Edison bulb above the bar. She had not changed her hair since second year—the same honeyed waves pinned back with tortoise-shell combs, the same neat line of pearl studs along the curve of her left ear. Her cheeks flushed pink from the cold, though her mouth remained caught in a lopsided, bewildered arch. "My God. It is you." Rhian dropped onto the stool beside Rory, setting her wet umbrella against the brass footrail. Silas drifted down the bar, his hazel eyes cataloging the silk scarf, the neat manicure, the posture that belonged in an appellate court rather than a drinking hole with unvarnished wainscoting. "Whisky," Rhian said without looking up at him, her attention fixed entirely on Rory’s face. "Whatever’s dry. No ice." Silas nodded once and retreated toward the shelf of single malts, dragging his bad knee with measured patience. "You cut your hair," Rhian leaned closer, her eyes sweeping over the black strands resting blunt against Rory’s collarbone. "And you lost weight. Rory, your mother spent six months telling the parish council you were doing humanitarian work in Antwerp." "She would." Rory’s hand drifted to her left cuff, her fingers lightly tapping the crescent scar hidden beneath the sleeve. "It sounds tidier than the truth." "No one had a number for you. Eva swore blind she didn't know where you’d gone, but we all knew she was lying through her teeth." Silas slid a heavy tumbler across the wood. The amber liquid swirled, catching the dim sconce light. He placed a small cocktail napkin beneath it with an economy of motion that left no space for eavesdropping, then limped down toward the till. Rhian picked up the glass and took a sharp swallow, the peat hitting her throat with a slight grimace that she smoothed away with practiced grace. "You missed the graduation ceremony. Your father sat in the third row with his arms crossed like an executioner. He’d already cleared space for your name on the chambers door, you know. Carter, Vaughan & Davies. That was the plan before you took a hammer to it." "That was his plan," Rory said. The cider bottle felt light in her grip, almost hollow. "He wanted a clerk he could yell at on Sunday mornings over the roast lamb." "You were brilliant at torts. Better than me." "I hated torts." "You were top of the tutorial group." Rhian set the glass down with a firm thud, her manicured index finger circling the rim. "We split the textbook costs three ways with Evan, remember? We spent forty-eight hours straight in the law library drinking that awful chicory coffee from the vending machine, laughing until the security guard threatened to call the dean. You didn't hate it then." "I hated Evan." The name dropped between them like an iron ingot on glass. Rhian looked away, her gaze snagging on a framed black-and-white photograph of the docks at Gdynia behind the spirits shelf. The noise of Soho drifted outside—a black cab splashing through a deep gutter pool, a woman laughing sharply in the alleyway. "He went to Bristol," Rhian offered quietly, her voice losing its brassy sheen. "He’s doing commercial contracts. Married a girl whose father owns half the quarries in Powys." "Good for the quarries." "He looked for you, Rory. For months." Rory leaned in, her voice flat, devoid of the melody Rhian had known in university halls. "Did he tell you why I left?" Rhian's jaw tightened. She worked the leather strap of her portfolio between two fingers, worrying the edge. "He said you had an episode. That you broke the mirrors in the hallway and ran out in your socks." "He kept the key to the front deadbolt in his pocket while he slept," Rory said, her bright blue eyes fixing on Rhian until the other woman looked back down into her tumbler. "He broke my collarbone against the radiator two nights before the exams because I left a library book on his desk. My father knew. My father took him for a round of golf at St Mellons the following Saturday and told him young men needed to learn to control their tempers before they took the bar." The silence settled thick, damp as the London fog outside. Behind the bar, Silas pulled a pint of bitter for a solitary man seated in the far booth, the mechanical squeak of the brass handle puncturing the quiet. Rhian took another slow drink. When she spoke again, the collegiate authority had vanished, leaving only a brittle, hollow resonance. "You should have called me." "You were maid of honour at his sister’s wedding six weeks later." Rhian flinched, the camel coat rustling as she shifted against the stool. "I didn't know about the radiator, Rory. Truly." "You saw the sling at the jurisprudence lecture." "You said you slipped on the steps by the library. We all believed you. It was easier to believe you." "I know," Rory said. "That’s why I left." Rhian’s gaze swept over the cramped space—the scuffed floorboards, the delivery waterproofs draped over the brass rail near the door, the small, solitary life carved out beneath the roar of the West End. "And this is what you wanted? Living in a pocket of London nobody cares about, running errands for strangers?" "Nobody asks me about the bar here," Rory turned the bottle again. "Nobody expects me to smile at a dinner party while the man across from me checks his watch to see when he can take me home and throw me down the stairs." "Your father had a stroke last winter." The words hit without the weight they might have carried three years ago. Rory felt only a dull, remote twinge, like an old fracture during a sudden freeze. "Is he still practicing?" "Half days," Rhian took a folded receipt from her pocket and smoothed it across the bar top, flattening the edges. "He sits by the bay window in the study mostly. Reads old law reports. He doesn't mention you. But whenever someone brings up London, his hand starts shaking on his knee." Rory watched the paper receipt absorb a stray drop of condensation from her cider. "Tell him I didn't freeze." "Come back, Rory. Just for a weekend. Stay with me in Whitchurch. We could go to the market, have tea at the old place by the castle. We don't have to tell anyone you’re in town." Rory shook her head once, the dark ends of her hair brushing her jaw. "There's nothing for me in Whitchurch, Rhian. There never was." Rhian stared down at the half-empty tumbler. The street outside hissed under the tyres of a passing bus.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:14:27.373Z" 9/2/2026, 5:14:27 PM
model"google/gemini-3.8-flash-20260902"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1406
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time19531
tokens_prompt1063
tokens_completion2793
native_tokens_prompt1032
native_tokens_completion3774
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning1890
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"STOP"
service_tier"default"
usage0.0149265
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.19.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1788369267-as3gPkgM26yTzs05EUu9"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1788369267-BPFqwF099PMbvv8iLsMO"
upstream_id"c1mYatWCG8XM-sAPp7DN2Qc"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"d376f781-516d-42f9-936d-46f19abca6cc"
id"c1mYatWCG8XM-sAPp7DN2Qc"
is_byokfalse
latency1406
model_permaslug"google/gemini-3.8-flash-20260902"
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
status200
total_cost0.0149265
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rhian offered quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.465
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.047
89.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"sharply"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"silk"
count2
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"solitary"
count2
7
word"mechanical"
count1
8
word"resonance"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"rhythmic"
2"tracing"
3"silk"
4"measured"
5"silence"
6"solitary"
7"mechanical"
8"resonance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1418
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount878
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rhian"
discoveredNames
Dean1
Street2
Greek1
Soho2
Rory16
Jutland1
Cardiff1
Sunday1
Pontcanna1
Vaughan1
Edison1
Silas5
Gdynia1
Rhian15
London1
West1
End1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Vaughan"
2"Edison"
3"Silas"
4"Rhian"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Greek"
3"Soho"
4"Jutland"
5"Cardiff"
6"Pontcanna"
7"Gdynia"
8"London"
9"West"
10"End"
globalScore0.589
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1418
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean24.45
std19.7
cv0.806
sampleLengths
071
166
222
346
414
525
61
724
824
91
1064
115
1246
1319
1418
1540
1626
1726
1842
1926
2047
2131
228
233
2466
253
2611
2741
2828
294
307
3116
327
3317
3420
3589
3638
3720
385
3912
4012
418
428
4320
448
4533
4619
4744
487
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
17.27% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences91
ratio0.044
matches
0"The voice had Cardiff carved into the back of every syllable—unhurried, round at the vowels, smelling of wet slate and Sunday dinners in Pontcanna."
1"She had not changed her hair since second year—the same honeyed waves pinned back with tortoise-shell combs, the same neat line of pearl studs along the curve of her left ear."
2"The noise of Soho drifted outside—a black cab splashing through a deep gutter pool, a woman laughing sharply in the alleyway."
3"Rhian’s gaze swept over the cramped space—the scuffed floorboards, the delivery waterproofs draped over the brass rail near the door, the small, solitary life carved out beneath the roar of the West End."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount887
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02593010146561443
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009019165727170236
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean15.58
std10.53
cv0.676
sampleLengths
024
17
226
314
420
530
616
75
817
916
1010
1120
126
138
1418
157
161
1724
186
1918
201
2116
2231
2317
245
2515
2631
2715
284
2918
3019
3121
3220
336
3426
358
369
3725
3826
3947
406
4110
4215
438
443
4523
4643
473
4811
4920
57.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences56
matches
0"She wore a tailored camel"
1"Her knuckles went pale against"
2"She took a slow sip,"
3"She had not changed her"
4"Her cheeks flushed pink from"
5"He placed a small cocktail"
6"She worked the leather strap"
ratio0.125
4.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences56
matches
0"The green neon glow of"
1"Silas shifted his weight behind"
2"The heavy silver signet ring"
3"Rory turned the neck of"
4"The damp from her delivery"
5"The front brass latch rattled."
6"A woman stood in the"
7"Rainwater flew off the ribbed"
8"She wore a tailored camel"
9"Rory looked down at her"
10"Her knuckles went pale against"
11"The wet boots clicked across"
12"A handbag zipper slid open,"
13"The voice had Cardiff carved"
14"Rory did not turn around"
15"She took a slow sip,"
16"Rhiannon Vaughan stepped into the"
17"She had not changed her"
18"Her cheeks flushed pink from"
19"Rhian dropped onto the stool"
ratio0.911
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas drifted down the bar, his hazel eyes cataloging the silk scarf, the neat manicure, the posture that belonged in an appellate court rather than a drinking …"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rhian offered quietly, her voice losing its brassy sheen"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.186
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.0498%