Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHWGKESH7S6PZ4248CY8Q0

Run Details

Duration:
19.3s
Cost:
$0.014420
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside cut through the Soho drizzle, staining the slick pavement in bilious emerald. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air held the weight of damp tweed, stale stout, and the faint, resinous bite of floor wax. Aurora Carter perched on the third stool from the draught taps, thumb working the rim of a cloudy tumbler. Her shift at Golden Empress had ended forty minutes prior, leaving grease and crushed cardamom clinging to the cuffs of her canvas jacket. She pushed her straight black hair behind her ear, exposing the line of her jaw to the dim yellow lamps. Across the mahogany counter, Silas Blackwood shifted his weight, his left knee giving a faint, familiar click beneath his trousers. He set down an amber bottle with a dry snap, his silver signet ring catching the dull glare of the back-bar mirrors. "Quiet night out there," Silas muttered, running a lint-free cloth along the wood. "Streets are half-drowned." "Fewer couriers on scooters trying to run me into the curb," Rory answered. The brass latch rattled. Cold air poured through the gap, carrying the reek of wet bitumen and the sharp hiss of taxi tires on Dean Street. A tall figure stepped into the threshold, folding a black canopy umbrella with a crisp, practiced snap. Rory did not turn immediately—survival in Soho meant cataloguing newcomers by their footfalls before their faces—but the hesitation in the doorway caught her attention. A pair of polished calfskin brogues scraped against the coir mat. The newcomer swept water from the shoulders of a tailored charcoal overcoat, the wool thick enough to shrug off an Atlantic storm. Rory froze, her fingers going slack against the glass. Julian Rhys stood beneath the yellowed nautical charts pinned to the entryway wall. The boy who had spent four Cardiff winters shivering in oversized moth-eaten cardigans and preaching tenancy rights in the damp backrooms of the Student Union now wore a silk-blend tie pinned with a gold bar. His dark curls, once wild and smelling of rolling tobacco, had been shorn down to sharp, clinical lines that framed the hollows of his temples. He lifted his chin, scanning the shadowy corners with the mild, dispassionate curiosity of a man killing time between corporate appointments. Then his gaze dropped to the stool. The umbrella slipped two inches toward the floorboards. "Rory?" The syllable cracked against the low ceiling, brittle as dried cedar. Rory reached instinctively for her left sleeve, tugging the frayed ribbed cuff down over the small crescent scar at her wrist. Her throat seized, then smoothed into the cool, flat line she kept for strangers on midnight deliveries. "Julian." He crossed the narrow room with long, fluid strides, completely devoid of the slouching, apologetic gait she remembered. He halted two feet away, hands hovering near his sides as if calculating the liability of an embrace before jamming them into the deep pockets of his coat. "Jesus Christ. It’s really you." He looked her up and down, taking in the scuffed work boots, the grease-stained canvas, the pale, sharp angles of her face beneath the dark fringe. "You vanished off the face of the earth, Rory. Five years. Not a forwarding address. Not a single reply to Brendan." "My father knows how to reach my solicitor if there is property to divide," Rory said, keeping her tone level, stripped of pulse. "Sit down or close the door. You’re letting the river in." Julian hesitated, then pulled out the stool beside her. The oak creaked under his weight. He did not shed the coat; he simply unbuttoned the top horn toggle, revealing the pristine stiffness of an Egyptian cotton collar. Silas drifted toward them along the duckboards, his hazel eyes narrowing as he measured Julian’s silhouette. He set a clean coaster on the counter without a sound. "Scotch," Julian told him without looking up. "Whatever single malt you keep tucked away from the tourists." Silas didn't blink. He reached beneath the rail, produced a bottle with a scarred paper label, poured two fingers into a heavy-bottomed glass, and limped away toward the far end of the bar, though his broad shoulders remained angled squarely toward their corner. Julian picked up the glass, turned it in the dim light, and set it down without drinking. "You’re living here? In London?" "Upstairs," Rory said. "Sometimes." "In a flat above a pub." He shook his head, a dry, bitter laugh catching in his teeth. "You had the highest first-year marks in Cathays Park. Old man Abernathy was ready to hand you his pupilage on a silver tray. We all thought—God, Rory, we thought Evan had done something worse." Rory’s hand twitched on the scarred counter, but her bright blue eyes never wavered from his profile. "Evan did plenty." Julian flinched, the sharp lines of his face tightening. For an instant, the old Julian showed through—the boy who used to sit on the radiator in the Cathays library, arguing about civil torts until their coffee went stone cold. But the expression vanished, swallowed by the immaculate posture of the man who had replaced him. "We looked for you," Julian said softly. "Eva wouldn't say a word. Just packed her bags three months later and locked her front door. I spent two weeks knocking on your parents' gate in Penarth. Your mother looked like an open grave, Rory. She wouldn't even open the curtains." "My mother survived," Rory said, her voice dropping an octave, clean and venomless. "She had her garden club and my father's pension. They survived my absence far better than they would have survived my funeral." Julian leaned closer, the scent of expensive vetiver and dry-cleaned wool cutting through the taproom's sour musk. "You didn't have to cut everyone out. Me. Dylan. We would have hidden you. We had resources." "You had an overdraft and an idealistic belief in the police," Rory said. She turned fully toward him, the faint neon green catching the sharp bridge of her nose. "Evan had his uncle on the bench and three cousins in the constabulary. You would have filed an injunction, Julian. And I would have ended up in the mud behind the barrage." The words sat between them, heavy and unmoving as wet iron. Julian picked up his glass and swallowed half the scotch in a single burn. He winced, staring at the scarred polyurethane of the bar top. "I’m with Slaughter and May now," he murmured. "Mergers. Infrastructure development. I spent the morning reviewing port concessions in Singapore." "You hated corporate." "I hated being poor." He turned his glass, leaving overlapping wet rings on the coaster. "I hated watching people with bad arguments win because their fathers bought the building the court sat in. You remember that summer after third year? Sitting on the wall by the weir, swearing we’d take the Legal Aid Agency by the throat?" "I remember," Rory said. "You had ink all over your knuckles. You borrowed thirty quid for the train back to Newport and never paid it back." "I have money now," Julian said, his voice flat, devoid of pride. "More than Brendan ever made. I bought a place in Highbury. High ceilings, parquet floors. Not a single damp patch on the plaster. And every morning I sit in a climate-controlled box on London Wall and draft indemnities for petrochemical firms." "Does it pay for the tailor?" Julian glanced down at his sleeves, then up at her worn jacket, his gaze snagging on the crescent scar where her cuff had ridden up. "It pays for the silence," he said. "Nobody screams at me in Highbury. Nobody asks me to bleed for them." "Then don't look so miserable about it." "I saw your name on a firm directory last week," Julian said, leaning in until the low lamplight caught the amber flecks in his eyes. "A clerk with your exact initials, registered to an office in Holborn. For twenty minutes, I sat at my desk thinking you'd finally come to your senses. That you were somewhere across the river, wearing a suit, waiting for the senior partner to retire so you could take what belonged to you." Rory looked down at her fingernails, clean, trimmed blunt, the skin of her knuckles toughened by cardboard boxes, heavy delivery crates, and damp scooter grips. "That girl died in a flat off Albany Road," she said, her voice dropping to a harsh, quiet precision. "Evan buried her, and whatever was left crawled onto a coach at dawn with fifty quid and a change of clothes. You’re looking for a ghost, Julian. And ghosts don't practice law." Julian watched her, the silence stretching until the clink of Silas' ring against a pint glass cut through the draft. He reached into his breast pocket, pulled out a thick, matte-black business card, and laid it beside her half-empty tumbler. "If you ever need an injunction that actually sticks," he said. Rory didn't touch the card. She watched the green neon pulse against the windowpane, throwing long, skeletal shadows across the floorboards. "Drink your whisky, Julian," she said softly. "Before the ice melts."
created_at"2026-09-02T17:15:22.613Z" 9/2/2026, 5:15:22 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Julian said softly [softly]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.091
86.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"completely"
1"really"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"calculating"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"grave"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"silk"
3"scanning"
4"calculating"
5"pulse"
6"pristine"
7"measured"
8"wavered"
9"grave"
10"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1518
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount958
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas4
Blackwood1
Rory12
Dean1
Street1
Atlantic1
Rhys1
Cardiff1
Student1
Union1
Julian14
Egyptian1
Cathays1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Empress"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Rory"
5"Rhys"
6"Julian"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Golden"
3"Dean"
4"Street"
5"Cardiff"
6"Cathays"
globalScore0.769
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if calculating the liability of an embrace before jamming them into the deep pockets of his coat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1518
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean30.36
std22.4
cv0.738
sampleLengths
039
1104
216
313
443
557
69
773
828
98
101
1111
1238
131
1446
1552
1634
1737
1827
1917
2043
2117
225
234
2452
2517
263
2755
2849
2935
3017
3117
3261
3336
3420
353
3657
3726
3853
396
4025
4120
427
4377
4425
4551
4640
4711
4821
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
49.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences92
ratio0.033
matches
0"Rory did not turn immediately—survival in Soho meant cataloguing newcomers by their footfalls before their faces—but the hesitation in the doorway caught her attention."
1"He did not shed the coat; he simply unbuttoned the top horn toggle, revealing the pristine stiffness of an Egyptian cotton collar."
2"For an instant, the old Julian showed through—the boy who used to sit on the radiator in the Cathays library, arguing about civil torts until their coffee went stone cold."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount933
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02572347266881029
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00857449088960343
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean16.5
std10.4
cv0.63
sampleLengths
017
122
219
323
420
520
622
713
83
913
104
1122
1217
1324
1411
1522
169
1713
1835
1925
2021
217
228
231
2411
2521
2617
271
2818
2928
3031
3121
3223
3311
349
356
3622
3716
3811
397
4010
413
4240
4317
445
453
461
4718
4834
4917
69.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.44565217391304346
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners41
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then his gaze dropped to"
ratio0.017
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences60
matches
0"Her shift at Golden Empress"
1"She pushed her straight black"
2"He set down an amber"
3"His dark curls, once wild"
4"He lifted his chin, scanning"
5"Her throat seized, then smoothed"
6"He crossed the narrow room"
7"He halted two feet away,"
8"He looked her up and"
9"He did not shed the"
10"He set a clean coaster"
11"He reached beneath the rail,"
12"He shook his head, a"
13"She turned fully toward him,"
14"He winced, staring at the"
15"He turned his glass, leaving"
16"she said, her voice dropping"
17"He reached into his breast"
18"She watched the green neon"
19"she said softly"
ratio0.333
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences60
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"Aurora Carter perched on the"
2"Her shift at Golden Empress"
3"She pushed her straight black"
4"He set down an amber"
5"Silas muttered, running a lint-free"
6"The brass latch rattled."
7"A tall figure stepped into"
8"Rory did not turn immediately—survival"
9"A pair of polished calfskin"
10"The newcomer swept water from"
11"Rory froze, her fingers going"
12"Julian Rhys stood beneath the"
13"The boy who had spent"
14"His dark curls, once wild"
15"He lifted his chin, scanning"
16"The umbrella slipped two inches"
17"The syllable cracked against the"
18"Rory reached instinctively for her"
19"Her throat seized, then smoothed"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The boy who had spent four Cardiff winters shivering in oversized moth-eaten cardigans and preaching tenancy rights in the damp backrooms of the Student Union n…"
1"His dark curls, once wild and smelling of rolling tobacco, had been shorn down to sharp, clinical lines that framed the hollows of his temples."
2"He halted two feet away, hands hovering near his sides as if calculating the liability of an embrace before jamming them into the deep pockets of his coat."
3"For an instant, the old Julian showed through—the boy who used to sit on the radiator in the Cathays library, arguing about civil torts until their coffee went …"
50.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory said, her voice dropping an octave, clean and venomless"
1"Julian said, his voice flat, devoid of pride"
2"she said, her voice dropping to a harsh, quiet precision"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas muttered (mutter)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.091
82.0141%