Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHWXGFPEES8C4N269KXPXF

Run Details

Duration:
4m 7s
Cost:
$0.010169
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt caught twice before the latch gave. Aurora shoved the door open with her hip and found Lucien Moreau in Eva’s doorway, occupying the place as though he had paid the rent. Rain darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit. The ivory cane under his hand had a new scratch near the ferrule. His platinum hair looked as though the storm had tried to negotiate with it and failed. One eye amber, one black. “Keeping cats that hate men.” Ptolemy sat on the mat behind him, licking his flank with refusal. Aurora gripped the door edge until the paint lifted under her nail. “What are you doing here?” “Eva told me you’d be here.” “Eva tells a lot of things when she’s had too much chai and not enough sleep.” Lucien’s mouth moved, not a smile. “She also told me you hadn’t answered your phone.” “I have one.” He looked past her into the narrow hallway, to the books stacked like little barricades against the wallpaper. Scrolls from Eva’s research spilled across every surface: a map of London ley lines pinned under a tea tin, folders marked in red biro, a pile of takeout menus from the curry house below. Aurora kept herself between his gaze and the work. “You’re in my flat.” “Wrong.” “You moved.” “Eva moved.” “You’re moving, too. The coat is wet on one side.” She glanced down at her black hair, straight and shoulder-length, damp from the ride. The blue coat lay against her left shoulder, dry on the right from the bag. She pulled it tighter. At five-foot-six, she did not need to lift her chin. She lifted it. “Delivery.” “At eleven at night.” “Golden Empress doesn’t close when the last customer decides to argue about the bill.” He stepped one foot inside. She shut the door into his shoe. “Go away.” He did not move his shoe. His boot, polished, expensive, dry on the top. The rain had kept away from it or Lucien had ordered it away. “You look good.” “Don’t.” “I mean it.” “The last time you meant something, I spent a week in a hospital corridor in Cwmbran telling a constable I’d slipped.” The corridor behind them echoed with the curry house below: sizzling oil, clink of spoons, a radio playing something old through a wall. Ptolemy moved inside and climbed the ladder of boxes to sit on the counter as if he were the one holding court. Lucien withdrew his foot. He stood in the doorway, close enough that she could smell bergamot, rain, and the metal trace of Avaros, the place his father came from and that Eva had insisted on putting under glass in a notebook. “I didn’t send those men to Cardiff.” “You didn’t stop them, either.” “I did.” Aurora laughed. The sound came out thin. “You did.” “The file never belonged to Evan. It belonged to a judge.” “It found my flat.” “It found the wrong flat.” “Because you put a name on it.” “Because I had to make people believe I feared something else.” His jaw tightened at the lie he no longer wanted her to see as truth. Aurora felt it anyway. That had always been the trouble with Lucien. He made his masks look like architecture. She pushed the door wider, but only enough to keep him on the mat. “What do you want?” “A document.” “You want it? Ask the police.” “The police would have found it three days ago if it existed in their hands.” His face treated the word police as a personal insult. Aurora leaned back against the door. “I don’t have your document.” “You have everything you find interesting.” “I’m twenty-five, not a cathedral.” “You keep receipts in a drawer.” “You keep knives in a cane.” His fingers touched the ivory handle. “And you keep one small crescent of regret where you once kept courage.” He looked down at her left wrist. The crescent scar was white under the hallway light, thin as a fingernail mark. She twisted her wrist into the cuff. “Don’t do that.” “Do what?” “Look like I owe you a story.” “You do.” “No. I owed you a warning. You refused it.” Aurora’s shoulder blade hit the back door. The flat was too small for anger to move without touching the walls. “Eva told you I was here.” Lucien’s silence answered. “How do you know where I deliver?” “Yu-Fei Cheung pays for discretion. So does Silas.” “You talk to people.” “I listen to people.” “You use people.” “I protect people badly sometimes. It’s the same skill set when you’re tired.” He reached into his coat and withdrew a folded paper, black-edged and damp. He held it out. Aurora did not take it. “What is that?” “An invitation.” “To what?” “Nothing romantic.” “Good.” “To a table at a place called Meridian.” She looked at the paper, then back to his face. “You want me to go to a dinner with you in the supernatural underworld.” “I want you to look at a ledger.” “You want me to wear that dress and smile at a demon with a monocle.” “You would smile at the demon. It would be the most frightening part.” Aurora kept the door edge between them. “I’m not your lawyer.” “I know.” “I’m not your partner.” His thumb moved over the ivory handle. “No.” “The last time I refused Meridian, you went without me and got shot.” “I got stabbed. It was less dramatic.” “You called it dramatic.” “I named the tailor dramatic.” Aurora pressed her teeth together until something behind them hurt. Ptolemy knocked a pen off the counter with one paw. The sound was small and final. “Come in.” He stepped inside without asking, but he stopped after two paces when the flat swallowed him. Books, notes, the cramped kitchen, the kettle, the single lamp. He looked out of place in rooms smaller than his own reputation. “You’re staying with Eva.” “I’m helping Eva.” “With a case?” “With three.” “That’s what I meant.” She moved past him into the kitchen, filling the kettle. The motion gave her something to do, a reason for her hands to be busy. Lucien followed with his gaze, not his body. “You haven’t eaten.” “I’ve eaten.” “You have a chip grease stain on your sleeve.” “That’s from the delivery.” “You delivered curry to Eva and went out again?” “Golden Empress.” “Late run.” “Someone wanted dumplings.” Lucien sat on the edge of Eva’s desk, not touching the stacks of paper. His cane rested across his knees like a sleeping animal. Aurora set the kettle on. “You look thin.” He smiled, the small one, the one that made her forget he had secrets. “You notice food.” “I notice waste.” His smile died. “I came back for the ledger.” “Why can’t you get it yourself?” “Because I need a name in it.” “What name?” “Evan’s.” The kettle clicked off. Aurora waited for the silence after the name to pass through the flat. “You went to Cardiff.” “Without you?” He turned the name over. “You went because of me.” He looked away, toward the window. Rain slid across the glass and the streetlights turned the brick wall opposite into wet copper. “I tried to keep the case away from Evan.” “You made him think I was the leak.” “He was already hunting you. I made sure he looked at a ghost instead.” “Because I was already a ghost to you?” “Yes.” The word landed flat. Aurora remembered the Marseille hotel. Narrow bed, window open to the street below, his hand tracing the crescent on her wrist and calling it a mistake. She remembered how his black eye shone in the bathroom light while his amber eye stayed on the door. She remembered leaving the room with her shoes in her hands. Aurora turned from the kettle. “You could have told me that before I left.” “You wouldn’t have listened.” “You’re good at not letting me listen.” He set the cane aside and stood. The room shrank around him. “Rory.” “Don’t call me that.” “Then what should I call you?” “The one who left.” “The one who ran.” The scar on her wrist itched. She pressed her thumb over it. “I ran because I was scared.” “Good.” “Because I was stupid.” “Excellent.” “Because I loved you and it looked like being used.” The words stood in the narrow kitchen between them, ugly and plain. Lucien’s face changed first: the practiced calm cracked just enough for him to look human, or as close as his kind got to looking human. “I used what I had. Evan’s people were already at the restaurant.” “You didn’t tell me.” “I told you the important things late.” “Those aren’t important if I didn’t know them.” He moved a step closer, then stopped himself. He looked down at her wrist. “Is that new?” “The scar?” “It wasn’t there in Marseille.” “I got it before.” “You showed me the other night at Silas’ and told me it was a childhood accident.” “I did.” “It looks recent.” “It looks like a knife.” His eyes flicked to her cuff. “Who else gave it to you?” “Nobody. I cut myself opening a package from Cardiff.” “You don’t open packages from Cardiff.” “I did.” Lucien’s hands hung at his sides, but his fingers curled like they wanted to be somewhere else. Ptolemy jumped from the desk with a thud and slunk toward the bedroom as if the argument had exceeded his patience. “The ledger.” “It isn’t the only reason.” “Sure.” “It isn’t.” “You came to my flat at eleven at night. You used a name from Evan. You called me Rory. You sat down in Eva’s papers without asking. If you’re going to lie, at least make the lies expensive.” He reached into his inside pocket and withdrew not the paper, but a small key, brass and tarnished. “That’s Golden Empress?” “Back office.” “Why?” “You delivered the last package before I took it. You saw the label.” “I saw nothing.” “You saw enough to ask why a dead man’s handwriting was on the box.” Aurora closed her hand around the kettle handle. The metal was hot, but the heat was useful. “When were you going to tell me?” “I wasn’t.” “Why are you telling me now?” Lucien’s black eye caught the lamp first. The amber followed after. “Because I’d rather you stop me than walk away again.” The flat below rattled with the clatter of plates. The curry house closed early. Eva’s deadbolts had done their work. Aurora looked at the key on his palm, at the straight line of his shoulder, at the way the room had arranged itself around him like a box she had already searched once and still missed. She took the key. His fingers stayed beneath it a second longer than needed. The heat from his knuckles lingered. Aurora closed her hand around nothing. “You’re bad at apologies.” “I’m excellent at them when no one expects sincerity.” Aurora put the key on the counter between the maps and the tea tin. Ptolemy watched from the bedroom doorway, tail wrapped around his feet. “If we do this, you talk before you disappear.” Lucien did not move toward her. He stayed where the narrow floor let him stand. “And if I don’t?” She looked at him long enough for the answer to be boring. “Then I lock the door behind you.” He nodded, but his jaw did not relax. The brass key reflected the lamp. Rain moved down the glass. Aurora took the cup from the sideboard, turned the kettle back on, and let the hot water fill both cups.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:15:49.475Z" 9/2/2026, 5:15:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences147
tagDensity0.007
leniency0.014
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1943
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1943
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silence"
2"tracing"
3"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences252
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1943
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1102
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Lucien12
Moreau1
Eva5
London1
Avaros1
Marseille1
Aurora19
Rain3
Ptolemy5
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
4"Rain"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
globalScore0.638
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.515
wordCount1943
matches
0"not the paper, but a small key, brass"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences252
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs200
mean9.72
std10.88
cv1.12
sampleLengths
034
142
25
312
412
55
66
716
86
99
103
1152
129
134
141
152
162
1710
1846
191
204
2114
2212
232
2427
253
261
273
2821
2945
3041
317
325
332
347
352
3611
374
385
397
4011
4134
4214
434
442
456
4615
4710
486
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs179
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences252
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1106
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.02531645569620253
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0027124773960217
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences252
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences252
mean7.71
std6.12
cv0.793
sampleLengths
09
125
28
313
416
55
65
712
812
95
106
1116
126
139
143
1518
1634
179
184
191
202
212
2210
2314
2415
254
2610
273
281
294
3014
315
327
332
346
358
3613
373
381
393
4021
4123
4222
434
4437
457
465
472
482
495
42.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2222222222222222
totalSentences252
uniqueOpeners56
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences105
matches
0"His platinum hair looked as"
1"He looked past her into"
2"She glanced down at her"
3"She pulled it tighter."
4"She lifted it."
5"He stepped one foot inside."
6"She shut the door into"
7"He did not move his"
8"His boot, polished, expensive, dry"
9"He stood in the doorway,"
10"His jaw tightened at the"
11"He made his masks look"
12"She pushed the door wider,"
13"His face treated the word"
14"His fingers touched the ivory"
15"He looked down at her"
16"She twisted her wrist into"
17"He reached into his coat"
18"He held it out."
19"She looked at the paper,"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences105
matches
0"The third deadbolt caught twice"
1"Aurora shoved the door open"
2"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
3"The ivory cane under his"
4"His platinum hair looked as"
5"Ptolemy sat on the mat"
6"Aurora gripped the door edge"
7"Lucien’s mouth moved, not a"
8"He looked past her into"
9"Scrolls from Eva’s research spilled"
10"Aurora kept herself between his"
11"She glanced down at her"
12"The blue coat lay against"
13"She pulled it tighter."
14"She lifted it."
15"He stepped one foot inside."
16"She shut the door into"
17"He did not move his"
18"His boot, polished, expensive, dry"
19"The rain had kept away"
ratio0.962
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora shoved the door open with her hip and found Lucien Moreau in Eva’s doorway, occupying the place as though he had paid the rent."
1"Narrow bed, window open to the street below, his hand tracing the crescent on her wrist and calling it a mistake."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.6663%