Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHYF6PY8G0BDJV9TW8NBAQ

Run Details

Duration:
5m 21s
Cost:
$0.007203
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate at Richmond Park had been shut since dark. Aurora Carter went through the deer fence at the east path, where a beech branch held a gap the width of her shoulders. The pendant at her throat struck the silver clasp and hung against her breastbone. It was warm. The warmth had started at six while she wiped counters at Golden Empress. It had followed her through the tube, through the wet pavement back to the flat above Silas' bar, and out again into the October night. She had told herself she would return it. She had told herself she was only checking the route. Those were both lies. The stone at her neck pulled her left toward the park like a child tugging a parent's sleeve. The voicemail had come from a number with no digits. "Bring the Heartstone back, Rory." She had called it back. The line answered without ringing. "Before it finds a mouth." Now, under the first oaks, Aurora opened her phone. The map showed her walking in a circle that had no street names. The park paths smeared into green and grey. Her battery icon sat at 14 percent, then dropped to 11 without any change in the screen. She pressed her thumb to the crescent scar on her left wrist and counted breaths. One, two, three, four. She had learned early that fear made better choices when it had a schedule. Ahead, the ground dipped. Wildflowers broke through the frost. Primroses, clover, campion. The petals stood white and yellow and violet over the ice. Frost lay under them, not on them. The flowers seemed set into glass. The scent reached her before the sound did, sweet, thick, with something beneath it that made her think of a basin emptied and refilled too many times. No insects moved. No branches scraped each other. Her boots struck the path, and the sound stayed around her ankles instead of travelling on. Aurora looked at the phone screen again. 11:24. She had entered the park at 11:24. She had been walking for ten minutes. The reflection in the black glass showed blue eyes and flattened black hair. The pendant glowed faintly at her throat. She opened her voice recorder. "You're alone." She stopped the recording and played it back. Her own voice came first. After it, a small wet click, as if something had lifted itself from the microphone and returned it to the grass. She shut the phone. The path ended at a ring of standing stones. The oldest were oak, grown from the ground like columns set upright by a careless hand. Their bark had swallowed nails, wire, fragments of pottery. Stone circles usually look like stones. These looked like mouths. Between them, the clearing lay hidden from any road she knew. Aurora did not step into it. She stood at the boundary and held out the pendant. The stone pulsed. The first beat was slow. The second came faster. The warmth changed to heat, and the heat pointed down, into the dark hollow where the frost had gone thin. Something opened. The ground did not move. The air moved. It folded once around the nearest stone, then returned, carrying a smell of yew, wet iron, and the cold back of a hospital corridor after midnight. Aurora stepped back. The path behind her had gone. Not darkened. Not hidden by trees. Gone. Oak roots crossed the ground where gravel had been, braided tight as hands. She looked at the phone. 11:24. The battery sat at 11 percent. A message appeared on the lock screen. You are alone. She typed one letter. N. It sent itself. You are alone. Her thumb hovered over the glass. The words had not been typed by anyone she could see. They were there in the white square of the message bubble as if they had always been there. From the middle of the clearing, a cup slid across the frost. It was white, painted blue, and child-sized. It carried steam in air that should not have let steam rise. The steam followed her eyes for a moment, then scattered. Aurora lifted her chin. "Very good." The phrase came out flat, but it belonged to the clearing now. It returned to her in a half-second, changed, softened at the ends, and said by a mouth that had not been her own. "Good." She turned the recorder off and put it in her pocket. Her heartbeat took the pendant's rhythm. She did not look at the trees. She looked at the space between them. Something stood at the edge of the light. It was tall, pale, and wrong. It had the outline of a figure that had learned bodies from a distance and never tried to copy arms, hands, or the small habits of weight. It stood near the lowest stone. When she faced it, the stone was empty. When she looked away, something moved behind the flowers. Aurora started walking backward. The pendant burned against her skin. The silver chain pressed into the hollow of her neck, and the red light beneath it grew strong enough to cast shadows from the blades of grass. The light moved when it should have been steady. It pulsed. A tapping began on her left. On her right. On top of her head. The sound was small, patient, like fingernails testing the grain of a tabletop. She lifted the phone. The light found a woman standing between two oaks. Not a woman. A figure made of standing too still. Its face was smooth and white, without eyes, without a mouth, without any sign that the world had ever touched it. It wore no clothes. It had shoulders. It tilted its head toward her as if listening to a song only it could hear. Aurora ran. She ran toward the biggest stone because the clearing had become a trap with open ground in the middle and no door at the edge. Her feet struck ice that was not ice. It broke under her weight and turned to wet spring grass. Wildflowers rose around her ankles, opening toward her heat. The stone stopped her when her back hit it. It gave. The surface bent like skin. Warm. Damp. Alive. Aurora spun. The clearing was empty. The phone rang. Silas. She answered. "Rory?" She pressed the phone to her ear. "Home." "Which home?" The question had no breath under it. It came clean and bright, as if someone had copied Silas' voice from a recording and cut away the pauses. "Who is this?" "The Heartstone." She looked down. The pendant rested on her chest, glowing through the fabric of her coat. The chain had tightened. The red light had gathered in a small pool beneath it, bright enough to show the dark shape under the frost. It was too wide for a person. It had too many bends. "No." The line went dead. The screen did not go black. It showed red. Aurora shoved it into her pocket and backed away from the stone. The cup was closer. The steam had stopped. Inside the cup sat her mother's ring. That was the first thing that was wrong. Her mother's ring had gone missing in a Cardiff bathroom six years ago. It had never left Jennifer's drawer before that, and it had no business being here. The second wrong thing was the chair behind it. It was child-sized, painted blue. The third was the figure. It stood where the trees had seemed empty, only ten feet away. Its head had moved. Its shoulders had shifted into a posture she knew. Not her father's. Evan's. Not quite. Too long in the fingers. Too loose at the knees. An imitation wearing a memory too loosely over its joints. Aurora's hand went to the pendant. The chain had drawn a line across her throat. "Take it off." The pendant pulsed once, hard, against her skin. Below her feet, the frost cracked. The dark shape beneath it shifted and came up close to the surface, thin as a hand, red as the stone. The wildflowers turned toward her. A voice spoke from the trees. "Laila." Another used Carter. "Carter." Another used Rory. "Rory." They did not call her name. They took it from different places and tried it on, and each version came back wrong in the mouth. Aurora stepped back and found no grass. She looked down. The frost had melted away under her boots. In the black hole, something small moved its fingers. The pendant pulled upward. She grabbed the silver chain. It was no longer hers. The light at her throat answered to the dark under the ground. The faceless figure lifted a hand that had too many joints. The phone in her pocket chimed one last time. Stay. Aurora looked up. The standing stones had moved closer. The clearing had become a room. The trees had faces, and the faces opened one by one. The voice at her ear tried again, patient, warm, certain. Stay.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:18:25.853Z" 9/2/2026, 5:18:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1506
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1506
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences184
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences199
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1506
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1456
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter2
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora13
Cardiff1
Jennifer1
Rory1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
2"Jennifer"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if listening to a song only it could hear"
1"seemed empty only ten feet away"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1506
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences199
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs114
mean13.21
std14.85
cv1.124
sampleLengths
050
178
210
35
410
55
647
733
89
954
1024
1122
1220
135
142
1534
164
179
1835
1911
2016
213
2229
232
2434
253
266
2720
2812
297
303
314
321
333
343
3535
3612
3729
384
392
4035
411
4231
438
4439
458
469
4748
486
493
99.54% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences184
matches
0"been shut"
1"been, braided"
2"been typed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs252
matches
0"was only checking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences199
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount87
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.011494252873563218
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences199
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences199
mean7.57
std5.91
cv0.781
sampleLengths
010
123
214
33
413
525
68
710
84
918
1010
115
125
135
145
159
1613
178
1817
1915
204
2114
224
235
243
2511
267
276
2827
293
305
3116
327
331
347
357
3613
377
385
392
408
415
4221
434
449
4516
469
476
484
4911
30.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats38
diversityRatio0.27411167512690354
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners54
40.40% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences165
matches
0"Too long in the fingers."
1"Too loose at the knees."
ratio0.012
74.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences165
matches
0"It was warm."
1"It had followed her through"
2"She had told herself she"
3"She had told herself she"
4"She had called it back."
5"Her battery icon sat at"
6"She pressed her thumb to"
7"She had learned early that"
8"Her boots struck the path,"
9"She had entered the park"
10"She had been walking for"
11"She opened her voice recorder."
12"She stopped the recording and"
13"Her own voice came first."
14"She shut the phone."
15"Their bark had swallowed nails,"
16"She stood at the boundary"
17"It folded once around the"
18"She looked at the phone."
19"You are alone."
ratio0.364
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount143
totalSentences165
matches
0"The gate at Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter went through the"
2"The pendant at her throat"
3"It was warm."
4"The warmth had started at"
5"It had followed her through"
6"She had told herself she"
7"She had told herself she"
8"Those were both lies."
9"The stone at her neck"
10"The voicemail had come from"
11"She had called it back."
12"The line answered without ringing."
13"The map showed her walking"
14"The park paths smeared into"
15"Her battery icon sat at"
16"She pressed her thumb to"
17"She had learned early that"
18"Wildflowers broke through the frost."
19"The petals stood white and"
ratio0.867
30.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences165
matches
0"Now, under the first oaks,"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The scent reached her before the sound did, sweet, thick, with something beneath it that made her think of a basin emptied and refilled too many times."
1"After it, a small wet click, as if something had lifted itself from the microphone and returned it to the grass."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"It came, as if someone had copied Silas' voice from a recording and cut away the pauses"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.7431%