Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHYPBWJ341BTZCHSEYB2V8

Run Details

Duration:
18.8s
Cost:
$0.013328
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third brass deadbolt gave a greasy click, and the heavy pine panel swung inward. Cardamom and charred coriander drifted up from the kitchen downstairs, thick enough to taste, but the corridor air smelled purely of wet wool and ozone. Lucien Moreau filled the doorframe. Rain clung to the shoulders of his charcoal topcoat, gleaming under the weak bulb dangling from the ceiling. His ivory cane rested between his polished oxfords, both hands gloved in black kidskin layered over the carved handle. "You missed a lock." Aurora kept her palm flat against the door edge, knuckles whitening against the chipped white paint. Her pulse hammered against her ribs, hard and jagged, but her chin stayed level. Straight black hair slipped over her collarbone, damp at the ends from a kettle she had left whistling on the gas ring five minutes prior. "Eva keeps four. I only threw three." "Careless." "I knew who was dragging their boots up the stairs, Moreau. The limp gives you away before the cologne does." Lucien’s mouth tipped at one corner, just enough to show the crease beside his lip. His mismatched eyes caught the hallway glare—the left a hard, clear amber, the right an inkwell with no bottom. "May I come off the landing? The proprietor below threatened me with a cleaver when I bypassed the dining room." "Yu-Fei would have used a wok. You're losing your edge if you can't tell the difference between cumin and five-spice." She moved back two paces. It was not an invitation, simply an acknowledgment of space, but he took it immediately. He crossed the threshold with the fluid, deliberate stride that always made her think of oil poured across slate. The tip of his cane clicked against the scuffed floorboards, rhythm precise. Ptolemy launched himself off a stack of leather-bound folios beside the coat rack. The orange tabby hit the rug, rubbed his flank aggressively against Lucien’s sodden trouser cuff, and gave a raspy chirp. "Traitor," Aurora muttered. Lucien stripped his gloves finger by finger, tucking them into an interior pocket before extending a pale hand toward the beast. The beast arched into the knuckles. "Animals possess an innate recognition of quality, Carter. You never quite managed the trait." "I managed well enough to lock the shop door behind you three months ago." The remark stripped the mockery from the small room. Lucien stopped unbuttoning his overcoat. His fingers, long and immaculate, went rigid against the dark horn buttons. In the cramped parlor, surrounded by yellowing parchment, sagging bookshelves, and the faint, steady rattle of traffic along Brick Lane, his presence was an obstruction. He took up too much light. The heat radiating off him carried the phantom trace of brimstone, faint as a spent match, a quiet reminder of the blood running under his Marseille cadence. "You changed the locks in Whitechapel." "I burned the building down, Lucien. Metaphorically. Then Silas took me in, and now I'm here feeding a friend's familiar while she hides out in Sussex. I had no interest in leaving breadcrumbs." "You left plenty." He slipped the heavy coat free, draping it over the back of an armless chair already sagging under bound tax records from the fourteenth century. Beneath the wool, his waistcoat hugged a lean torso, dark silk patterned with subtle diamond weaves. "I was not looking for you until tonight." "And yet you walked up three flights of stairs without knocking." "Three taps on the panel. You opened on the second." Aurora crossed her arms, thumb finding the crescent scar on her left wrist. The skin there was pale, raised, a relic of an iron gate in Cardiff she had climbed over in a blind panic years before she ever learned demons had names and London had veins beneath the tarmac. She rubbed the ridge of tissue through her knitted sleeve. "State the business, Lucien. Golden Empress opens for dinner runs in six hours. I need sleep, not riddles." "I did not come on behalf of the syndicate." "Then you shouldn't be here at all." "Carter." Her surname sounded softer in his throat, rounding on the vowel with that heavy French cadence he usually smothered under boardroom polish. He closed the remaining yard between them. His cane remained propped against Eva’s tea table, leaving his hands free. "You left a cut on my ledger." "You lied about the shipment from Dover." "I omitted the passenger manifest. There is a distinction." "You let me drive a flatbed containing three bound ghouls and a crates of consecrated salt through a police checkpoint on the A2, Lucien!" Her voice cracked the stale air of the flat. Ptolemy darted under an armchair, tail flicking once before vanishing. "You knew the risk when you took the wheel." "I knew the price. I didn't know you planned to let Scotland Yard take me if the wards broke." Lucien didn't blink. The black pupil of his right eye widened slightly, bleeding outward until the sclera showed gray around the rim. "I was four cars behind you. The entire stretch." "You weren't at the warehouse when I unloaded." "I was dismantling the two hunters who followed you from the toll bridge." Aurora stared up at him. The amber eye held her, bright and pitiless as an oil lamp, completely devoid of remorse. He stepped closer, his chest nearly brushing her shoulder. The heat coming off him was real now, raising the fine hairs along her forearms. He smelled of rain-chilled cedar, old books, and the sharp copper snap of an open current. "You never told me." "You never asked. You dumped the keys on the desk, emptied the safe of your share, and vanished into the fog before the dawn bells finished ringing." "Because you looked at me like I was collateral." "I looked at you like a fool looks at fire." The admission hung between them, thick and sharp as broken glass. Aurora took a half-step back, but the corner of Eva’s desk caught her hip. A pile of loose-leaf glossaries slid, scattering across the rug. Neither of them looked down. Her hand braced against the edge of the desk, fingers curling into the warped oak. "Don't do that. Don't play the romantic rogue now. Not after ninety days of silence." "I needed ninety days to convince myself London was tolerable without you standing in my kitchen drinking bitter tea." "Your kitchen was an armory." "You never complained when you were cleaning the silver." His hand came up, hovering an inch from her jawline. The air between his skin and hers hummed with low, static heat. He didn't close the gap; he waited, an agonizing, disciplined hesitation that made her throat tighten until swallowing felt like dragging grit. "You could have reached out through Silas." "Silas would have shot me on the stoop. Quite rightly." A breath hitched in her chest. She hated how familiar the tilt of his shoulders felt, how easily her body remembered the cadence of his breath when they stood this close in narrow spaces. During the weeks in Whitechapel, before the Dover job, there had been two nights on the floor in front of his hearth where the business fell away entirely, leaving only teeth, bruised skin, and promises neither of them had the courage to sign in blood. "Why tonight?" "The Dover crew resurfaced. They are asking questions along the docks." "I'm not afraid of dockhands." "They aren't dockhands, Aurora. They are things that don't bleed when you stick an iron file into their ribs." His fingers finally brushed her skin. The touch was warm, burning straight through the chill that had settled into her cheeks from the damp flat. His thumb grazed the line of her jaw, lingering on the pulse leaping beneath the hollow of her ear. "You should have left England." "Cardiff was boring. London has you." She gave a small, humorless breath that fluttered against his collar. "That isn't a recommendation, Lucien." "It is a warning." His palm flattened against the side of her neck, tilting her head back just an inch. The black eye seemed to swallow the dim light from the kitchen behind her, while the amber burned like struck flint. "I am not leaving you in this garret." "You don't own the lease." "I bought the building twenty minutes ago."
created_at"2026-09-02T17:16:34.051Z" 9/2/2026, 5:16:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.041
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1387
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1387
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"chilled"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"pulse"
2"reminder"
3"familiar"
4"silk"
5"chilled"
6"silence"
7"chill"
8"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1386
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount882
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Lucien6
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
Cardiff1
London1
French1
Eva2
Whitechapel1
Dover1
Aurora5
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
5"Whitechapel"
6"Dover"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like dragging grit"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.722
wordCount1386
matches
0"not an invitation, simply an acknowledgment of space, but he took it immediately"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean19.8
std19.16
cv0.967
sampleLengths
015
167
24
355
47
51
620
734
820
920
1051
1133
123
1327
1414
1514
1684
176
1833
193
2041
218
2211
2310
2460
2518
269
277
281
2941
307
317
329
3324
3419
359
3619
3722
389
398
4013
4161
424
4327
449
4510
4611
4744
4815
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
89.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences107
ratio0.019
matches
0"His mismatched eyes caught the hallway glare—the left a hard, clear amber, the right an inkwell with no bottom."
1"He didn't close the gap; he waited, an agonizing, disciplined hesitation that made her throat tighten until swallowing felt like dragging grit."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount887
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.029312288613303268
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.013528748590755355
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.95
std7.91
cv0.61
sampleLengths
015
125
25
318
419
54
616
714
825
97
101
1120
1215
1319
1420
1520
165
1715
1819
1912
2013
2120
223
2321
246
2514
2614
279
285
2912
3025
316
3227
336
3433
353
3625
3716
388
3911
4010
4113
4237
4310
4418
459
467
471
4822
497
57.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.35514018691588783
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
54.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences58
matches
0"His ivory cane rested between"
1"Her pulse hammered against her"
2"His mismatched eyes caught the"
3"She moved back two paces."
4"It was not an invitation,"
5"He crossed the threshold with"
6"His fingers, long and immaculate,"
7"He took up too much"
8"He slipped the heavy coat"
9"She rubbed the ridge of"
10"Her surname sounded softer in"
11"He closed the remaining yard"
12"His cane remained propped against"
13"Her voice cracked the stale"
14"He stepped closer, his chest"
15"He smelled of rain-chilled cedar,"
16"Her hand braced against the"
17"His hand came up, hovering"
18"He didn't close the gap;"
19"She hated how familiar the"
ratio0.414
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences58
matches
0"The third brass deadbolt gave"
1"Cardamom and charred coriander drifted"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the doorframe."
3"Rain clung to the shoulders"
4"His ivory cane rested between"
5"Aurora kept her palm flat"
6"Her pulse hammered against her"
7"Lucien’s mouth tipped at one"
8"His mismatched eyes caught the"
9"She moved back two paces."
10"It was not an invitation,"
11"He crossed the threshold with"
12"The tip of his cane"
13"Ptolemy launched himself off a"
14"The orange tabby hit the"
15"Lucien stripped his gloves finger"
16"The beast arched into the"
17"The remark stripped the mockery"
18"Lucien stopped unbuttoning his overcoat."
19"His fingers, long and immaculate,"
ratio0.931
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He didn't close the gap; he waited, an agonizing, disciplined hesitation that made her throat tighten until swallowing felt like dragging grit."
1"The touch was warm, burning straight through the chill that had settled into her cheeks from the damp flat."
2"His thumb grazed the line of her jaw, lingering on the pulse leaping beneath the hollow of her ear."
3"She gave a small, humorless breath that fluttered against his collar."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.041
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.041
84.2249%