Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HHZM9G3A8MEMEFJBPYC7AQ

Run Details

Duration:
13.8s
Cost:
$0.008948
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third brass deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic click that echoed through the narrow stairwell. Aurora pulled the door open an inch, chain taught against the frame, before her fingers froze on the handle. Rain dripped from the brim of an umbrella onto the worn hallway carpet. Lucien Moreau stood framed by the dim yellow bulb of the landing, charcoal wool overcoat damp across the broad slope of his shoulders, water beading on slicked-back platinum hair. He rested both hands over the carved curve of his ivory-handled cane. The scent of him—clove smoke, crushed juniper, and the distinct ozone of brimstone—cut cleanly through the grease and toasted cumin rising from the curry house below. "You changed the locks." His accent lingered low and smooth, dragging slightly on the consonants. Amber caught the hallway light in his left eye; the right remained an abyss of solid black, void of pupil or sclera. Aurora kept her shoulder planted against the wood. "Three weeks late for an apology, Moreau. Or did you come to collect the rest of your tea leaves?" "Ptolemy dislikes cheap kibble. I brought him dried minnows from the market on Commercial Road." Lucien lifted a small brown paper parcel looped with butcher's twine, his knuckles pale and dusted with dark veins beneath the skin. "And you left your leather jacket on the banquette at the Black Dog." "You burnt a bridge and decided to return the ashes in a neat little bag." "You ran before the smoke cleared, Rory." She stared at the sharp angles of his cheekbones, the faint violet shadows bruised beneath his eyes. A pulse fluttered against the scar on her left wrist, an old phantom itch that flared whenever adrenaline surged hot through her chest. She undid the safety chain with a sharp rattle and swung the door wide. "Five minutes. Then I start throwing things down the stairwell." Lucien stepped across the threshold, bringing the wet chill of London with him. His boots barely whispered on the floorboards as he moved into the cramped sitting room. Piles of cracked leather bindings, translated parchment, and charcoal rubbings threatened to spill off every available table, but he navigated the clutter with an infuriating, feline grace. On the radiator, Ptolemy stretched, yellow eyes slitting open. The tabby let out a rusted chirp, jumped down, and wove immediately through Lucien’s trouser legs, rubbing his scent into the pressed wool. "Traitor," Aurora muttered, leaning back against the locked door with her arms crossed over her chest. Lucien set the parcel beside a leaning tower of Mesopotamian glossaries. His cane clicked against the floorboards as he turned to face her, the lean line of his jaw tight. "You look tired." "I work a delivery route from noon until dusk and dodge blood-trackers until dawn. Flattery won't buy you a seat on the sofa." "Sit with me anyway." "I prefer having the exit at my back." Lucien peeled off his black leather gloves finger by finger, dropping them atop the umbrella by the coat rack. Heat seemed to follow his movements, subtle and prickling, a devil's warmth that chased away the damp drafts creeping through Eva's ill-fitted window sashes. "You think I betrayed you to the magistrate." "You gave him the ledger, Lucien. The one with my father's Cardiff addresses in the margins. You handed it over while I was still scrubbing silver nitrate off my fingers in your back room." Her voice didn't crack. It came out clipped, flat, and sharp as broken slate. Lucien’s mismatched eyes locked onto hers, holding her gaze with that predator stillness he used whenever a room turned lethal. "I gave him a ledger. The numbers in the margins belonged to a shipping clerk in Antwerp who owed me eighty thousand francs and three pints of gorgon bile. Your father’s names were burned in my hearth an hour before dawn." Aurora pushed away from the door, steps deliberate as she crossed the threadbare rug. She stopped two paces short of him, close enough to feel the radiant, uncanny heat rolling off his chest. "You didn't say a word. You stood by the window and watched me pack." "Because if I told you the play, your pulse would have betrayed us both. The magistrate's hound can smell a premeditated lie across a crowded street, Aurora. You know this." "Don't patronize me." "I am stating a tactical reality." "You made me believe I meant so little to you that a handful of coin could buy my throat." The words struck flesh. Lucien’s mouth hardened, the amber ring in his left eye flaring with a sudden, molten spark before subsiding. The hand on his cane tightened until the wood groaned under the pressure. "Look at me." "I am looking at you." "Then see the truth of it," he snapped, his voice dropping into that rough, gutter-French cadence he only slipped into when his composure slipped. "I spent four nights under an iron ward in Southwark making sure their scriers followed false blood across the Channel. I let them salt my skin until the marrow ached, all to keep your scent out of their mouths." Aurora took in the hollow hollows under his cheekbones, the faint stiffness in the way he held his left shoulder—away from the light, tucked slightly inward. "You got hurt." "Nothing that won't mend." "Show me." "Aurora—" "Show me, Lucien." He hesitated, the shadow of something raw passing behind his gaze. Slowly, he released the cane, leaning it against Eva’s crowded bookshelf. His fingers went to the horn buttons of his waistcoat, slipping them free one after another. He pulled the crisp white cotton of his shirt from his trousers, peeling the fabric back over his shoulder. A jagged brand ran from his collarbone down toward the center of his chest, surrounded by skin that was still mottled purple and peeling in pale strips. Salt burns. Demonic flesh didn't tolerate blessed salt; it ate through muscle and stayed hungry for weeks. Aurora’s breath caught in her teeth. Her hand moved before she could deliberate, fingers hovering a fraction of an inch above the ruined flesh before coming to rest against his collarbone. His skin scorched hot, burning with that internal inferno, but beneath it, his collarbone felt shockingly human, fragile and finite. Lucien inhaled sharply at the touch of her calloused fingers, his jaw clenching so hard the tendon stood out like wire. "You could have sent word," she murmured, her thumb tracing the clean, unmarred skin just above the burn. "A token. Anything." "And put a courier between you and survival?" Lucien raised his right hand, hovering his fingers over her cheek before letting them settle against her jawline. His thumb brushed over the sharp edge of her cheekbone. "I wanted you angry. Angry people stay vigilant. They run faster. They survive." "I didn't run," she whispered, leaning into the contact despite every instinct warning her to pull back. "I waited three streets over for two days. Wondering if you were dead or if you’d just cashed me in." "I would burn this entire city to ash before I sold you to that court." "Then why are you here now?" "Because the scriers lost the trail in Dover." Lucien stepped closer, his chest brushing her knuckles, closing the small pocket of air between them until she had to tilt her head up to keep his gaze. "And because I cannot sleep in an empty room anymore, Rory. The silence is too loud." Her heart thudded against her ribs, loud and uneven in the cramped quiet of the flat. Rain lashed against the glass behind the heavy curtains, drumming a relentless rhythm over the murmur of East London traffic below. "You don't get to come back into my life without consequences," she said, though her fingers drifted down from his shoulder to curl into the damp fabric of his shirt. "Name them." "You don't lie to me again. Not for my safety. Not for an angle." "A difficult vow for a broker." "Take it or pick up your cane and get out." Lucien’s hand slid from her jaw down to the back of her neck, fingers threading through the short black hair at the base of her skull. He pulled her forward half an inch, until his breath ghosted across her lips—warm, spiced, intoxicating. "I swear it on the salt that tore my hide," he whispered against her mouth.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:17:04.697Z" 9/2/2026, 5:17:04 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"fluttered"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"radiant"
count1
8
word"uncanny"
count1
9
word"calloused fingers"
count1
10
word"clenching"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pulse"
2"fluttered"
3"chill"
4"navigated"
5"warmth"
6"predator"
7"radiant"
8"uncanny"
9"calloused fingers"
10"clenching"
11"tracing"
12"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1406
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount913
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
London2
Ptolemy1
Lucien12
Mesopotamian1
Eva2
Aurora6
East1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Mesopotamian"
2"East"
globalScore0.843
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1406
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean23.43
std18.58
cv0.793
sampleLengths
017
119
280
34
433
58
619
750
815
97
1054
1110
1255
1332
1416
1530
163
1723
184
198
2043
218
2234
2314
2420
2541
2633
2714
2830
293
306
3119
3235
333
345
3563
3626
373
384
392
401
413
4257
4344
4431
4541
4621
4749
4837
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences91
ratio0.055
matches
0"The scent of him—clove smoke, crushed juniper, and the distinct ozone of brimstone—cut cleanly through the grease and toasted cumin rising from the curry house below."
1"Amber caught the hallway light in his left eye; the right remained an abyss of solid black, void of pupil or sclera."
2"Aurora took in the hollow hollows under his cheekbones, the faint stiffness in the way he held his left shoulder—away from the light, tucked slightly inward."
3"Demonic flesh didn't tolerate blessed salt; it ate through muscle and stayed hungry for weeks."
4"He pulled her forward half an inch, until his breath ghosted across her lips—warm, spiced, intoxicating."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount921
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.023887079261672096
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009771986970684038
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean15.45
std9.24
cv0.598
sampleLengths
017
119
213
329
412
526
64
711
822
98
1019
1137
1213
1315
147
1517
1623
1714
1810
1913
2015
2127
229
2323
2416
2511
2619
273
2823
294
308
3119
3224
338
3434
354
3610
3720
3841
3914
4019
4114
4230
433
446
4519
464
4718
4813
493
54.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3626373626373626
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners33
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Slowly, he released the cane,"
ratio0.019
57.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences54
matches
0"He rested both hands over"
1"His accent lingered low and"
2"She stared at the sharp"
3"She undid the safety chain"
4"His boots barely whispered on"
5"His cane clicked against the"
6"Her voice didn't crack."
7"It came out clipped, flat,"
8"She stopped two paces short"
9"he snapped, his voice dropping"
10"He hesitated, the shadow of"
11"His fingers went to the"
12"He pulled the crisp white"
13"Her hand moved before she"
14"His skin scorched hot, burning"
15"she murmured, her thumb tracing"
16"His thumb brushed over the"
17"she whispered, leaning into the"
18"Her heart thudded against her"
19"she said, though her fingers"
ratio0.407
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences54
matches
0"The third brass deadbolt slid"
1"Aurora pulled the door open"
2"Rain dripped from the brim"
3"Lucien Moreau stood framed by"
4"He rested both hands over"
5"The scent of him—clove smoke,"
6"His accent lingered low and"
7"Amber caught the hallway light"
8"Aurora kept her shoulder planted"
9"Lucien lifted a small brown"
10"She stared at the sharp"
11"A pulse fluttered against the"
12"She undid the safety chain"
13"Lucien stepped across the threshold,"
14"His boots barely whispered on"
15"Piles of cracked leather bindings,"
16"The tabby let out a"
17"Aurora muttered, leaning back against"
18"Lucien set the parcel beside"
19"His cane clicked against the"
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The third brass deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic click that echoed through the narrow stairwell."
1"A pulse fluttered against the scar on her left wrist, an old phantom itch that flared whenever adrenaline surged hot through her chest."
2"Heat seemed to follow his movements, subtle and prickling, a devil's warmth that chased away the damp drafts creeping through Eva's ill-fitted window sashes."
3"A jagged brand ran from his collarbone down toward the center of his chest, surrounded by skin that was still mottled purple and peeling in pale strips."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, though her fingers drifted down from his shoulder to curl into the damp fabric of his shirt"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
1"he snapped (snap)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.222
79.0992%