| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The words tasted like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.035 | |
| 92.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1294 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 76.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1294 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "charm" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1291 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.24% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 858 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Moreau | 1 | | Mediterranean | 1 | | London | 3 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Lucien | 13 | | Books | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Two | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | East | 1 | | Mayfair | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Books" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.742 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1291 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 23.05 | | std | 18.98 | | cv | 0.823 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 56 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 56 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 63 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 71 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "Under the hallway light, his right eye burned a bright, feline amber; the left swallowed the glare whole, an unbroken pool of pitch." | | 1 | "\"It looks like an ambush in a hallway smelling of cumin and damp fur.\" Rory turned her back on him—a deliberate gamble, a display of disregard she didn't actually feel—and walked into the cramped living space." | | 2 | "He knew the structural rot of London better than the surveyors; he knew precisely which planks groaned." | | 3 | "He stripped his gloves off, finger by finger, exposing pale hands with black-tipped nails—the subtle, indelible stamp of Avaros." | | 4 | "The distance between them vanished; the heat radiating off his chest washed over her face, thick with the sulfur-and-sugar scent of his father's realm." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 869 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.028768699654775604 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006904487917146145 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 13.88 | | std | 9.13 | | cv | 0.658 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 63.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.41935483870967744 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 61.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, her knuckles brushed his" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 64.44% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the door open" | | 1 | "His voice carried that low," | | 2 | "He brought the scent of" | | 3 | "He kicked the door closed" | | 4 | "Her pulse hammered against the" | | 5 | "His amber eye narrowed, the" | | 6 | "He knew the structural rot" | | 7 | "he remarked, stopping near the" | | 8 | "Her throat tightened." | | 9 | "He stripped his gloves off," | | 10 | "He tossed the damp leather" | | 11 | "he said, taking a single," | | 12 | "Her bright blue eyes caught" | | 13 | "Her breath hit the lapel" | | 14 | "He reached out, his bare" | | 15 | "Her heart thumped against her" | | 16 | "His thumb grazed the line" | | 17 | "She meant to shove him" | | 18 | "She meant to tell him" | | 19 | "she whispered against his skin" |
| | ratio | 0.389 | |
| 6.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked back" | | 1 | "She pulled the door open" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau leaned on his" | | 3 | "Droplets clung to the precise" | | 4 | "His voice carried that low," | | 5 | "Rory slammed the door shut," | | 6 | "Lucien stepped over the threshold" | | 7 | "He brought the scent of" | | 8 | "He kicked the door closed" | | 9 | "Rory backed up two paces," | | 10 | "Her pulse hammered against the" | | 11 | "Lucien rested both gloved hands" | | 12 | "The demon blood in him" | | 13 | "Rory crossed her arms, fingernails" | | 14 | "Ptolemy detached himself from a" | | 15 | "Lucien did not look down," | | 16 | "His amber eye narrowed, the" | | 17 | "Rory turned her back on" | | 18 | "Books stood in unstable towers" | | 19 | "Lucien followed, his cane making" |
| | ratio | 0.907 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.77% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The hurt was there between them, sharp and jagged, but underneath it lay the terrible, suffocating gravity that had started the night he pulled her out of the r…" | | 1 | "Rory reached up, her fingers closing hard around the lapel of his tailored coat, bunching the wet wool in her grip." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.07 | | leniency | 0.14 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.07 | |