Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJ394YRF2H9Q6TDKAMV066

Run Details

Duration:
17.4s
Cost:
$0.010872
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back into its brass housing, stiff and cold under Rory’s thumb. She pulled the door open three inches, chain taut, before the silhouette on the landing registered against the yellow stairwell bulb. Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the tailored charcoal wool of his coat dark with rain across the shoulders. Droplets clung to the precise edges of his platinum hair. Under the hallway light, his right eye burned a bright, feline amber; the left swallowed the glare whole, an unbroken pool of pitch. "The chain is new." His voice carried that low, Mediterranean rasp, unhurried, slipping through the gap like smoke. "Or at least new since Tuesday." Rory slammed the door shut, slid the chain free, and yanked it wide. "Eva isn’t here." "I know." Lucien stepped over the threshold before she could brace a shoulder against the frame. He brought the scent of London pavement, crushed cloves, and damp cashmere into the narrow entrance. "She is in Southwark until midnight, arguing with an antiquarian over fourteenth-century parchment." He kicked the door closed behind him with the heel of an oxford, the latch snapping into place with insolent ease. Rory backed up two paces, her bare feet pressing into the rough wool runner. Her pulse hammered against the crescent-shaped scar tucked beneath her left watch strap, an automatic, stupid reflex she despised. "Then you have zero business crossing this sill." "A technicality." Lucien rested both gloved hands on the curved ivory crook of his cane. The demon blood in him hummed beneath his skin, raising the room's ambient heat by two degrees. "We have unfinished bookkeeping, Carter." "We settled our ledger in Whitechapel." "You ran to East London and changed your locks." "Three deadbolts." Rory crossed her arms, fingernails biting through the sleeves of her worn grey sweatshirt. "Evidently one too few." Ptolemy detached himself from a stack of loose folios on the sideboard, slinking between Lucien’s trousers with a low, traitorous purr. Lucien did not look down, but one black-leather finger dropped to stroke behind the tabby’s torn ear. "He recognizes discernment," Lucien murmured. "Even if his mistress’s tenant lacks it." "Get out, Luc." "I brought no guards. No contracts. No collateral." His amber eye narrowed, the pupil thinning to a razor line while the black eye remained wide, depthless, watching her collarbone rise and fall. "Does this look like an extraction to you?" "It looks like an ambush in a hallway smelling of cumin and damp fur." Rory turned her back on him—a deliberate gamble, a display of disregard she didn't actually feel—and walked into the cramped living space. Books stood in unstable towers around the sofa. Bundles of dried sage and salt-stained parchment littered the coffee table alongside half-empty mugs of builder's tea. Below the floorboards, the curry house kitchen clattered into its dinner rush, muffled shouts and sizzling oil bleeding through the plaster. Lucien followed, his cane making no sound on the floorboards. He knew the structural rot of London better than the surveyors; he knew precisely which planks groaned. "You look tired," he remarked, stopping near the edge of the kitchen table. "I work forty hours a week hauling pork buns across Soho on a bicycle, and then I come home to babysit a witch's library." Rory spun on him, catching the way his gaze dragged from her bare ankles to the messy black hair shoved behind her ears. "I don't have the stomach for your riddles tonight. What do you want?" "The seal from the docks." Her throat tightened. "I gave that to the river." "You lie poorly when your hands shake." Rory shoved her fists into the pocket of her sweatshirt. "I don't shake." Lucien set his cane against the sideboard with a sharp tap. He stripped his gloves off, finger by finger, exposing pale hands with black-tipped nails—the subtle, indelible stamp of Avaros. He tossed the damp leather onto a pile of Eva’s translations. "You kept it because you knew what it meant," he said, taking a single, measured stride toward her. "Because for all your Welsh practicality, you cannot bear to destroy leverage. Or souvenirs." "It isn't a souvenir. It was a threat." "It was an invitation." "To what?" Rory stepped into his space instead of away, tipping her chin up to meet his mismatched stare. Her bright blue eyes caught the amber flame in his right iris. "To sit in your basement in Mayfair while you broker deals with creatures that eat marrow? To be another asset in your brass file cabinets?" "You were never an asset." "You put a tracking charm in my jacket, Moreau." The words tasted like iron. Two months of cold silence, and the venom still burned fresh on her tongue. "You had me followed from the moment I set foot out of Cardiff. You let me think I found that room above Silas's bar on my own luck." Lucien’s jaw tightened, the smooth aristocratic veneer cracking just enough to show the bone beneath. "Evan was still searching the rail stations. His cousins were checking the hostels in Camden." "I can kill my own ghosts." "He was not a ghost. He was flesh, Carter, with three warrants and a hunting rifle in the boot of his Vauxhall." Lucien took another step. The distance between them vanished; the heat radiating off his chest washed over her face, thick with the sulfur-and-sugar scent of his father's realm. "You would have let him drag you back before you asked for help." "That was my choice to make." "A remarkably stupid one." "My choice." Her breath hit the lapel of his coat. Lucien looked down at her mouth, his amber eye flaring wide, the slit pupil drowning in gold. The hurt was there between them, sharp and jagged, but underneath it lay the terrible, suffocating gravity that had started the night he pulled her out of the rain behind the Golden Empress, both of them bleeding, both of them too stubborn to fall down first. "You left your silver lighter on my desk," Lucien said, his voice dropping into that quiet, ruinous register that bypassed logic entirely. "Keep it." "It smells of your cheap tobacco. It offends my sensibilities." "Throw it in the Thames, then." "I keep it in my breast pocket." He reached out, his bare hand hesitating an inch from her jawline, heat shimmering off his skin like summer asphalt. "Next to the ledger where you think you don't exist." Rory didn't flinch away. Her heart thumped against her ribs, hard enough to hurt. "You are an arrogant, half-breed bastard." "A matter of public record." "You lied to me." "I withheld coordinates." His thumb grazed the line of her jaw, startlingly warm, slightly calloused at the pad. "There is a distinction." "Not to me." "Then punish me." Lucien leaned down, his mouth inches from hers, close enough that she could feel the impossible furnace of his breath. "Kick me down the stairs. Throw the salt at my feet. Call your witch friend." Rory reached up, her fingers closing hard around the lapel of his tailored coat, bunching the wet wool in her grip. She meant to shove him backward into the hallway. She meant to tell him that East London didn't belong to the brokers of Mayfair, that she had survived worse men than him with nothing more than a kitchen knife and a head start. Instead, her knuckles brushed his chest, feeling the heavy, rapid thud of a heart that wasn't entirely human. "You didn't come for the seal," she whispered against his skin. "No." His hand moved from her jaw to the back of her neck, fingers knotting into her black hair, tilting her face up as his mouth found hers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The words tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.035
92.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"stomach"
2"measured"
3"charm"
4"silence"
5"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1291
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
74.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount858
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Moreau1
Mediterranean1
London3
Ptolemy1
Lucien13
Books1
Avaros1
Eva1
Two1
Golden1
Empress1
East1
Mayfair1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Books"
5"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"East"
globalScore0.742
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1291
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean23.05
std18.98
cv0.823
sampleLengths
015
121
253
324
413
53
645
721
833
98
1037
116
129
1320
1438
1512
163
1740
1836
1946
2027
2113
2260
235
249
257
2613
2741
2832
298
304
3156
325
3356
3430
356
3663
376
384
392
4071
4122
422
4310
446
4537
4620
475
484
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences93
ratio0.054
matches
0"Under the hallway light, his right eye burned a bright, feline amber; the left swallowed the glare whole, an unbroken pool of pitch."
1"\"It looks like an ambush in a hallway smelling of cumin and damp fur.\" Rory turned her back on him—a deliberate gamble, a display of disregard she didn't actually feel—and walked into the cramped living space."
2"He knew the structural rot of London better than the surveyors; he knew precisely which planks groaned."
3"He stripped his gloves off, finger by finger, exposing pale hands with black-tipped nails—the subtle, indelible stamp of Avaros."
4"The distance between them vanished; the heat radiating off his chest washed over her face, thick with the sulfur-and-sugar scent of his father's realm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount869
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.028768699654775604
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006904487917146145
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.88
std9.13
cv0.658
sampleLengths
015
121
220
310
423
518
66
713
83
916
1016
1113
1221
1314
1419
158
1615
1717
185
196
209
2116
224
2321
2417
255
267
273
2832
298
3036
318
3217
3321
3410
3517
3613
3747
3813
395
403
416
427
4310
443
4511
4619
4711
4818
4914
63.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.41935483870967744
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners39
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Instead, her knuckles brushed his"
ratio0.019
64.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences54
matches
0"She pulled the door open"
1"His voice carried that low,"
2"He brought the scent of"
3"He kicked the door closed"
4"Her pulse hammered against the"
5"His amber eye narrowed, the"
6"He knew the structural rot"
7"he remarked, stopping near the"
8"Her throat tightened."
9"He stripped his gloves off,"
10"He tossed the damp leather"
11"he said, taking a single,"
12"Her bright blue eyes caught"
13"Her breath hit the lapel"
14"He reached out, his bare"
15"Her heart thumped against her"
16"His thumb grazed the line"
17"She meant to shove him"
18"She meant to tell him"
19"she whispered against his skin"
ratio0.389
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences54
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back"
1"She pulled the door open"
2"Lucien Moreau leaned on his"
3"Droplets clung to the precise"
4"His voice carried that low,"
5"Rory slammed the door shut,"
6"Lucien stepped over the threshold"
7"He brought the scent of"
8"He kicked the door closed"
9"Rory backed up two paces,"
10"Her pulse hammered against the"
11"Lucien rested both gloved hands"
12"The demon blood in him"
13"Rory crossed her arms, fingernails"
14"Ptolemy detached himself from a"
15"Lucien did not look down,"
16"His amber eye narrowed, the"
17"Rory turned her back on"
18"Books stood in unstable towers"
19"Lucien followed, his cane making"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The hurt was there between them, sharp and jagged, but underneath it lay the terrible, suffocating gravity that had started the night he pulled her out of the r…"
1"Rory reached up, her fingers closing hard around the lapel of his tailored coat, bunching the wet wool in her grip."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.07
leniency0.14
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.07
84.5338%