Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJ3KH98K007DA0R4KMJYYN

Run Details

Duration:
4m 23s
Cost:
$0.009786
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened on Lucien Moreau, his platinum hair flat against one temple, rain drawing dark threads through his charcoal suit. He stood on the landing with his ivory cane laid across his arm as though he were presenting a gift to no one in particular. His amber eye held steady; the black one caught the hallway bulb and went flat as a sealed envelope. Rory kept her hand on the second deadbolt. Three were required to shut Eva's flat against the street, against curiosity, against the people who owed Eva money. Two were undone now, and Ptolemy sat on her foot, tail ticking. "Brick Lane at seven is not a place for a man in that coat." Lucien looked past her to the book towers and paper drifts covering every surface. "It is exactly the place for a man in this coat." "The curry house steams the windows. Good for disappearing." He stepped forward before she could decide whether to let him. She did not close the door. Her fingers whitened on it. Ptolemy slid out from under her boot and trotted toward his ankles with his tabby shoulder pressed against them. "You have five minutes." "Twenty." "Ten." "Fifteen. The kettle looks old enough to betray me before I can." His gaze settled on the stack of scrolls beside the kettle. "Where is Eva?" "Away." "No note?" "No note. No tea. No conversation." She closed the door and turned the first deadbolt. He did not move from the narrow hall. His coat dripped on the linoleum. She could smell rain under cologne and something older, like warm stone in a chapel after midnight. She shut that smell out by reaching for the second bolt. His fingers touched the wood near hers. Not over it, not through it. The space between them grew narrow enough to cut. "Still guarding doors." The smile moved his mouth, but it did not reach his eyes. "Still opening them without asking." He withdrew his hand and unbuttoned his coat. Under it his jacket was damp at the shoulders, tailored so sharply it had no excuse for clinging. He folded the coat over his arm and placed it on a chair piled with library books. He did this with care, as though the chair belonged to a museum and not to a cramped one-bedroom above a curry house. "Sit." "Leave." He set the cane against the wall within reach and lowered himself onto the edge of the sofa. It sagged under him. A paperback of Welsh folklore slid from his thigh to the floor. Ptolemy batted it under the radiator. Rory stayed where she was. Her delivery jacket still had Golden Empress printed across one sleeve in faded gold letters. The zipper stuck halfway down. The scar on her left wrist itched where a cardboard corner had grazed it during the afternoon run. "You look cold." "I look alive." "That is what people say when they mean less." She laughed once and hated the sound of it in the small room. It made Ptolemy's ears flatten. The cat climbed onto his lap, refusing all other claims on his body. He rested a hand under its chin. "You were supposed to be gone." "I was." "I mean gone from the flat. Not gone from the country. There is a difference, and you are still standing in it." "You kept my key." "Only because changing the lock costs money." "You have a restaurant job and a flat above a bar and an office in a bookshop that pays in pastries. You can afford a lock." "I can afford not to speak to you, too." He lifted his eyes. The amber one was steady; the black one watched the movement of her hands. It unsettled him more than a gun. He knew that look, the way he had learned to read her in Marseille during a summer when they had been too stupid and too careful to admit what the room smelled like: orange blossom and petrol. "I need your help." "No." "No is a door. I am asking for the window." "Eva is the window. Eva is a whole building. She is out of town, and you are out of your mind." "The client moved on me." "That is not my field." "It is if the client is the man who broke your bike." Her hand stopped on the second deadbolt. Rory pressed her palm flat against the wood, keeping her voice away from the place in her chest that wanted to answer him differently. "You checked on my bike." "I checked on you." "Don't." "I am not making a case out of it." "You are doing exactly that. You show up wet and polite and say you checked, as if that fixes eight months." "It does not." "Then leave the rest of it at the door." His knuckles tightened on the cane head. Ptolemy jumped down and stalked off with a swish of his striped tail. For a moment Lucien did not speak, and the silence filled the flat to the edges. Eva's books had never left enough empty space for silence. Here it crowded between shelves and curled around the kettle. Rory moved past him to the kitchen area, two paces because the sofa touched the counter. She filled the kettle with cold water, set it on the hob, and kept her back angled so his gaze on her wrist landed on the steam instead. "It is not healed." "No." "When?" "When you had already left." His eyes dropped, not in guilt, but as if he had a ledger open on his knees and did not like the column. "Sit. You are taking up the whole flat when you stand." "I am sitting." "You are occupying the air." He smiled at that. Small. Wrong. The sort of smile she had wanted to kiss and then wanted to break. "I can give you the file." His hand rested on the cane handle, tapping once against the ivory. "The client's account. Every payment, every name. You take it to your chef. You take it to the barman. You take it to the police if you are feeling generous." "Why?" "Because the man who paid him to follow you was not following you." She lifted the kettle before the water boiled. Steam curled at the spout and escaped into the air. Rory set the kettle down without drinking from it. The metal made a short, hard note against the hob. "Explain that without sounding like a sentence in a bad film." "The client wanted to know whether you could be recruited." Rory laughed without humour. Ptolemy looked up from the floor and judged her. "Recruited by what? A demon from your home country? You?" "By an office with better filing." "And what do you call me? A project? A case? A woman who left because you lied about a body count?" "I lied about who ordered it." "That is the same thing if the order mattered." "It mattered to me." "It mattered to the person dead." He put his hands flat on his knees. The gesture looked like restraint. "I came because if I do not, they will find you where I am already looking for you." Rory lifted her chin. The bright blue of her eyes came out under the bare bulb, clear and hard. "You think I need protecting." "I think you need options." "I had options. You were the one who chose a job and let me choose a door." The words went into him visibly. He looked away, toward the steam crawling over the window from the curry house below. The smell of lamb fat and coriander seeped under the door. It had always made his expensive suits smell like a restaurant in Marseille and reminded him of nights when he had eaten standing because no one trusted a man with two eyes. "I did not let you choose." "You made the rest of it look like freedom." "You are very good at taking things personally." "I am very good at reading rooms. You kept yours locked." He reached into his inner pocket. She moved back a step, and he stopped with his hand still there. His face did not change, but his jaw worked under the skin. He withdrew a folded paper, not a blade. The cane against the wall had a thin seam at the ivory handle, but she knew better than to let that be the first thing in her mind now. He held it out. "What is that?" "The next part." "I hate when you say that." "You loved when I said it." "You loved that I said it in French." She took the paper anyway. Her fingers brushed his palm, and he did not pull away, but the motion of his hand changed under hers. She unfolded the page. A name. An address. A date from three days ago. The ink was smeared at one corner. "This is not a file." "It is a place to start." "Where did you get this?" "I traded." "Traded what?" "I do not want your imagination working on that." He rose. The sofa creaked as he left it. The flat shrank around him, his height filling it, his suit making the shelves look smaller. He took the cane from the wall and stood near the door, not blocking it, only making the fact of it impossible to ignore. "Leave then. If this is a start, leave." "You have not asked what it costs." "I know what it costs." "You know the cost of a lie." "I know the cost of a man who calls it a trade when he is the one selling." He came back and set a hand on the counter beside her. Not on her. Not near enough to touch. The warmth from him moved through the gap between them. Ptolemy wound around one of his legs and meowed once, offended by the interruption. Rory did not move. Lucien did not withdraw his hand. "You want me to be clean about this." She turned the paper face down on the counter. "I want you to be honest." "Those two cannot fit in the same room without one of them leaving." Rory pushed her delivery jacket off its hook and let it hang loose. "You are still here." "For now." She looked at his mouth, at the small scar at the corner that had not been there the last time she saw him. Her gaze caught there. He touched it with his thumb, self-conscious for the first time since he had appeared. "It is not pretty." "I was not thinking pretty." "What were you thinking?" She swallowed and let the answer come before her teeth could close. "Hurt." He leaned closer. The smell of rain and wool and the old warm stone came again. She could see his black eye catching the light, the amber one watching her throat move, her hand, the scar. He had not said anything about the scar. She did not know if that made it easier. "You have changed your hair." "It is the same length." "It has stopped moving like someone else's." "That was the point." His hand came up, stopping near her jaw. He turned the touch into a brush over the collar of her jacket, lifting a strand of hair from the zipper. "No. It was never the point." She did not step back. He did not complete the motion. Outside, a van horn sounded in the street below. A curtain of steam rolled across the window. Ptolemy jumped onto the table, scattering Eva's notes. Rory caught a sheaf before it slid into the kettle. He caught the cat by the scruff and lifted him onto the floor with one hand, as though the animal had committed only a mild social error. "You cannot stay here." "Yes." "No." "Yes. For ten minutes." "You have a reputation." "I have a reputation for many things. Being reasonable is not one I advertise." He sat again, this time on the floor with his back against the sofa, legs folded, cane across his knees. The pose looked accidental and impossible at once. Charcoal suit, platinum hair, wet collar, and he sat there as though he were waiting for a carriage and not in a flat above a curry house. Rory boiled the water. She made tea with a bag because Eva's tins were unmarked and one smelled like chalk. She carried the mug to the only clear chair, swept a stack of books off it onto the floor, and sat opposite him. He looked at the pile of fallen books. "Is that a system?" "It is a method." "It is an ambush." "You are here." "I am here, and you made me sit on the floor for it." "You deserve the floor." "For what?" "For coming back." He took the mug when she pushed it toward him. Their hands touched over the handle. His fingers were colder than they had been, but the contact went through the skin like something waking under it. She looked down at the steam rising between them, at his mouth as it brushed the rim, at the way his eyes came up over the top of the cup to her face. "You still drink it too hot." "You still watch me drink it too hot." He set the mug aside and turned his hands over on his knees. The action was open, then he closed them again before she could see anything else. "I did not choose the job over you." "You made sure I couldn't choose myself." "I made sure you could choose the rest." "I chose the flat. I chose the bar. I chose to stop waiting for the rest." The words hung there. Ptolemy climbed onto Rory's foot and started kneading her jacket hem. She watched him work, watching her watch him. His hand moved to his pocket. "Don't." "I have not touched it." "You are reaching like you have." He stayed still, one hand resting on the pocket, his face softening only around one side. The scar pulled with it. "If I leave, they find you tomorrow." "You say that like I am not here." "You are very good at being here." "Not if I'm gone." "You would not be gone. You would be difficult." He smiled again. This one reached his eye, one eye. Rory looked away, at the steam on the glass, at the books on the floor, at the deadbolt she had left untouched, as if her hands had forgotten the task. Lucien rose, slow enough that she could have stopped him. He took his coat from the chair. She did not move. He stopped beside her, close enough that the sleeve brushed her hair. "Rory." "Lucien." He did not speak for a second. Then he folded his hand over hers, careful, as though the scar would bruise if he did not account for it. He touched the small crescent. "It is not healed." "No." His thumb moved once across the skin, and the motion was not a question. Outside, someone laughed under the window, and the stairwell filled with footsteps that did not stop at Eva's door. Rory's hand did not move from his. The footsteps passed, but Lucien did not step away. He kept her wrist in his palm and waited for her answer to something neither of them had yet named.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:19:55.232Z" 9/2/2026, 5:19:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2579
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2579
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count2
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"silence"
2"warmth"
3"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences148
matches
0"t in guilt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences148
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences277
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2579
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1716
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien6
Moreau1
Eva6
Ptolemy9
Welsh1
Golden1
Empress1
Marseille2
Rory14
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Empress"
5"Rory"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
86.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences118
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like: orange blossom and petrol"
1"went into him visibly"
2"smelled like chalk"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.388
wordCount2579
matches
0"not in guilt, but as if he had a ledger open on his knees"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences277
matches
0"knew that look"
1"let that be"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs183
mean14.09
std16.06
cv1.14
sampleLengths
065
139
214
314
411
59
641
74
81
91
1012
1111
123
131
142
156
1651
1722
183
1912
205
2166
221
231
2440
2543
263
273
289
2938
306
312
3222
334
347
3526
369
3762
384
391
4010
4121
425
435
4412
457
4624
475
484
491
98.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences148
matches
0"were required"
1"were undone"
2"was smeared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs276
matches
0"were presenting"
1"were waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences277
ratio0.007
matches
0"His amber eye held steady; the black one caught the hallway bulb and went flat as a sealed envelope."
1"The amber one was steady; the black one watched the movement of her hands."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1718
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.03259604190919674
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004074505238649592
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences277
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences277
mean9.31
std6.89
cv0.74
sampleLengths
021
125
219
38
419
512
614
714
811
99
1011
116
125
1319
144
151
161
1712
1811
193
201
212
226
239
248
256
2617
2711
287
296
309
313
3212
335
348
3518
3617
3723
381
391
4018
414
4212
436
445
4515
465
4718
483
493
42.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.19855595667870035
totalSentences277
uniqueOpeners55
23.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences143
matches
0"Then he folded his hand"
ratio0.007
1.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount78
totalSentences143
matches
0"He stood on the landing"
1"His amber eye held steady;"
2"He stepped forward before she"
3"She did not close the"
4"Her fingers whitened on it."
5"His gaze settled on the"
6"She closed the door and"
7"He did not move from"
8"His coat dripped on the"
9"She could smell rain under"
10"She shut that smell out"
11"His fingers touched the wood"
12"He withdrew his hand and"
13"He folded the coat over"
14"He did this with care,"
15"He set the cane against"
16"It sagged under him."
17"Her delivery jacket still had"
18"She laughed once and hated"
19"It made Ptolemy's ears flatten."
ratio0.545
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount133
totalSentences143
matches
0"The door opened on Lucien"
1"He stood on the landing"
2"His amber eye held steady;"
3"Rory kept her hand on"
4"Lucien looked past her to"
5"He stepped forward before she"
6"She did not close the"
7"Her fingers whitened on it."
8"Ptolemy slid out from under"
9"His gaze settled on the"
10"She closed the door and"
11"He did not move from"
12"His coat dripped on the"
13"She could smell rain under"
14"She shut that smell out"
15"His fingers touched the wood"
16"The space between them grew"
17"The smile moved his mouth,"
18"He withdrew his hand and"
19"He folded the coat over"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.19% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences75
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He stood on the landing with his ivory cane laid across his arm as though he were presenting a gift to no one in particular."
1"Three were required to shut Eva's flat against the street, against curiosity, against the people who owed Eva money."
2"He did this with care, as though the chair belonged to a museum and not to a cramped one-bedroom above a curry house."
3"The flat shrank around him, his height filling it, his suit making the shelves look smaller."
4"He caught the cat by the scruff and lifted him onto the floor with one hand, as though the animal had committed only a mild social error."
5"He stayed still, one hand resting on the pocket, his face softening only around one side."
6"Outside, someone laughed under the window, and the stairwell filled with footsteps that did not stop at Eva's door."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.6434%