Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJ68QRYM085VTHM58YED75

Run Details

Duration:
3m 9s
Cost:
$0.007103
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bone token sat in Harlow Quinn’s coat pocket like a stone taken from a riverbed. She stopped at the bottom of the stairs leading into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, where the air smelled of damp paper, metal, and the faint copper tang that forensics called “old pipe” before they knew better. Her worn leather watch on her left wrist read 3:14. No sign marked the entrance from the street. The platform had been sealed for eighty years according to the city maps, yet police tape ran across the turnstile and beyond it, into the dark, stood the remains of a market: folding tables, black cloth, crates stacked like gravestones, and overhead, lanterns without wires. The Veil Market had moved there under the last full moon and, tonight, still breathed. Quinn crossed the tape with a single step. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair had been dampened by the street rain and stood at the nape of her neck. Her brown eyes moved from item to item, counting exits, counting gaps, counting anything a killer might have used twice. A sharp jawline tightened when she saw the body. A man lay on his back inside a chalk circle. A worn coat, no blood on the face, no visible wound. A bone token rested in his right palm. On his chest, a small brass compass waited, its face etched with protective sigils and its casing darkened with a patina of verdigris. The needle pointed straight to the tunnel wall at his feet. DS Callum Rourke crouched beyond the circle. His hands stayed clasped between his knees, a habit from years of being told not to touch anything. “Looks simple,” Rourke said? He did not need to say it. He lifted his torch and let the beam crawl along the body. “He came down here, thought he was tough, and found something he couldn’t handle.” Eva Kowalski appeared from the far side of the stall, her curly red hair escaping the band that held it back. Round glasses slid down her nose. She tucked a strand behind her left ear, then lifted the satchel from her shoulder. The worn leather bag sagged with the weight of books she had not read in the last six minutes. “Not simple,” Eva said. “He knew what he was doing. Someone else ended it.” Rourke looked at her with the patience of a man who had been forced to listen too long. “The Market doesn’t get robbed. No one opens a portal and walks away with a coat. That’s what he is, a mugging. A stupid one.” Quinn checked the man’s shoes. The leather was wet at the toe but dry around the sole edges. She leaned over the chalk line without letting her shadow fall across the body. “Show me where he was robbed,” Quinn said. Eva lifted the torch to the nearest crate. “He wasn’t. Look at the stall. Nothing disturbed.” The stall had been set up neatly. Small objects rested in rows: folded paper charms, vials of black salt, silver coins worn smooth. No cash box, but no torn straps, no scattered goods. A candle stub stood at the western edge of the circle, its flame guttered out. Wax pooled beneath it in a hardened shape like a mouth frozen mid-syllable. Rourke stood and rubbed his hands together. “The body was moved, then.” “Not by him,” Eva said. “He tried to seal the Veil.” The words landed in the quiet between them. Quinn’s eyes narrowed. Eva stepped back to the compass and angled the light so the sigils threw pale lines across the man’s coat. “He laid down a protective circle. He placed his token to hold his claim. Then he set the compass on his chest to track the rift and drive it shut.” Rourke’s torch dipped toward the wall. “The needle’s pointing that way. If it points toward a portal, you have your story.” Quinn did not look at the wall. She looked at the needle. A drop of hardened wax sat beneath the compass pivot, almost invisible unless the light caught it from below. The needle did not drift with the slow tremor of a living instrument. It sat locked in place, a thin strand of wax connecting its underside to the candle’s cooled pool. Someone had poured a drop onto the needle after it had been fixed toward the wall, then drawn the candle back into place with a practiced hand. She straightened and checked the chalk. At the victim’s left heel, the circle’s line ran over a smudge of shoe leather. The chalk had been pressed down into the scuff rather than smeared by it. Another boot mark lay beside the dead man’s right shoulder, its edges lined with white dust. If the man had drawn the circle around himself, no mark would cross it from the inside. If someone had stepped out after, the chalk would have broken. Instead, the line had been redrawn over his own passage, thick in one place, thin in another. Quinn’s gaze moved to the blood. A dark fan spread from the man’s back, but his coat rested lightly on it. The pool had dried at the edges, yet the body beneath it had not soaked the fabric. Someone had placed him in the circle after the blood had already begun to settle. Rourke followed her stare. “That doesn’t prove a ritual. It proves someone played dress-up.” Eva’s cheeks flushed under freckles. “The compass is real. Shade work. Only a Shade artisan can etch those sigils without breaking the ward.” Quinn lifted the evidence brush and touched the compass casing. Verdigris dust came away in a fine green line along the rim. She turned it toward the wall. A faint ring, just the diameter of the compass, sat in the tunnel grime, pale and newly disturbed. The object had been pressed against that spot for some time, leaving behind a ghost of its own age. “Someone used the compass as a stamp,” Quinn said. Rourke shook his head. “For what? A false rift?” Quinn moved closer to the wall. There was no scorch, no warped plaster, no smell of ozone that supernatural entrances left behind. The Market had ways of hiding evidence, but the wall remained a wall. “Someone wanted us to believe the dead man chased a portal into this place.” Eva pointed at the bone token. “He carried a token. You need one to enter the Veil Market. That proves he came here of his own will.” Quinn studied the token in his palm. Its edges had not been softened by months in a pocket. The cord around it showed fresh cut fibers, not a worn break. A bead of dried chalk sat in the groove of his thumb, where a person would rub a token after a long walk. But the chalk had settled only on one side of the groove, as if the hand had lain still for some time before the circle was completed. She took a photograph with the camera on her wrist, then set the evidence bag open on the crate beside her. Rourke watched. “If you found a second token in his other hand, would you still say he came here willingly?” Quinn reached into the dead man’s left coat pocket and drew out nothing but lint. She checked his trouser pocket. Empty. She crouched again and followed the shape of the blood toward the stall behind him. A few small drops had fallen before the larger pool formed, but the trail stopped at the table leg. There was no path to the barrier. Eva knelt beside the stall and pulled a folded receipt from the floor beneath the black cloth. She held it up. The paper was thin and translucent, marked with a faded sigil Quinn had seen on market ledgers. “The Market uses tokens,” Eva said. “That doesn’t mean the dead man had one.” Rourke pointed the torch at the ticket barrier beyond the tape. “We brought one through. That’s why we’re here.” Quinn checked the barrier herself. The turnstile had a lock of bone and brass, set with a slot that accepted nothing ordinary. The token she had used to enter still sat in the slot, warm and damp with the station’s impossible humidity. Someone had left it there rather than reclaim it. Her fingers traced the edge of the slot. A fresh scratch ran across the metal, narrow and straight. She looked back at the bone token in the victim’s hand. Its thickness matched the scratch. Rourke exhaled through his nose. “Someone tried to force the wrong token through.” Quinn moved to the body again. “Or to place the wrong token where it would be found.” Eva lifted her glasses and set them on her nose. “You’re saying the Market didn’t let him in.” “I’m saying he didn’t have a valid token to use.” Rourke’s face changed. He glanced at the tunnel wall, then at the dead man, as if the corpse might have grown a voice and accused them. Eva tucked the book bag strap tighter. “The Market moves every full moon. If the barrier opened tonight, the token should have left a mark of its passage. The token in his hand has no wear. It was staged.” Quinn looked down at the body. The man had died in a place that required belief to enter. The scene had been arranged with objects that demanded a particular story: circle, token, compass, wall, rift. Each piece pointed toward the next, as if a script had been followed in haste. She checked the compass again. The wax beneath the needle had hardened into a bead. A candle could freeze a needle in place if the killer poured it while the object was fixed toward the wall. But that meant the needle had been pointing at the wall before the body was laid down. The killer had arranged the scene around the compass first. The blood pattern argued against the arrangement. The chalk line argued against the circle. The token argued against entry. The wall argued against a rift. Eva’s eyes moved from clue to clue, catching the same threads. She looked up at Rourke. “The man who opened this Market would know about tokens.” Quinn touched the edge of the evidence bag. The worn leather of her watch creaked as she closed her hand. “Open it, then,” she said. Rourke lifted his torch and moved away from the body, leaving the circle untouched. The dead man lay as Quinn had seen him when she arrived: a figure posed inside a story, props arranged to make the audience believe. Eva leaned close enough to read the markings on the compass. “The sigils are protective,” she said, her voice low. “But that doesn’t mean he used them to stop a rift.” Quinn looked at the wall again, then at the token, then at the fresh scratches on the barrier lock. The evidence did not add up because it had never been meant to describe a real portal opening. Someone had murdered him and dressed the corpse in the language of the Veil Market.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:20:42.245Z" 9/2/2026, 5:20:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.281
leniency0.563
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1861
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1861
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"etch"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"weight"
2"etch"
3"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences129
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1861
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1523
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn19
Tube1
Camden1
Veil2
Market3
Callum1
Rourke13
Kowalski1
Eva13
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Rourke"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.876
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1861
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean31.54
std21.91
cv0.695
sampleLengths
064
168
257
363
425
537
661
714
843
932
108
1116
1261
1312
1411
1511
1650
1721
1812
1977
206
2190
2253
2314
2423
2565
269
279
2835
2914
3027
3180
3221
3320
3455
357
3638
3714
3819
3951
4034
4113
4217
4318
4410
4526
4639
4750
4863
4925
67.18% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount14
totalSentences129
matches
0"been sealed"
1"been dampened"
2"being told"
3"been forced"
4"been fixed"
5"been pressed"
6"been redrawn"
7"been pressed"
8"been softened"
9"was completed"
10"been arranged"
11"been followed"
12"was laid"
13"been meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs242
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences152
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1526
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.020314547837483616
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.003931847968545216
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean12.24
std7.01
cv0.573
sampleLengths
016
138
210
38
445
515
68
720
820
99
1010
1111
128
1323
1411
157
1618
174
187
1912
2014
2121
226
2315
2419
254
2610
2718
2825
295
3013
3114
328
338
348
357
3616
3710
3815
3913
407
415
425
436
448
453
4620
4730
486
4915
40.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.24342105263157895
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners37
27.78% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"Instead, the line had been"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences120
matches
0"She stopped at the bottom"
1"Her worn leather watch on"
2"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
3"Her brown eyes moved from"
4"His hands stayed clasped between"
5"He did not need to"
6"He lifted his torch and"
7"She tucked a strand behind"
8"She leaned over the chalk"
9"She looked at the needle."
10"It sat locked in place,"
11"She straightened and checked the"
12"She turned it toward the"
13"Its edges had not been"
14"She took a photograph with"
15"She checked his trouser pocket."
16"She crouched again and followed"
17"She held it up."
18"Her fingers traced the edge"
19"She looked back at the"
ratio0.208
18.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences120
matches
0"The bone token sat in"
1"She stopped at the bottom"
2"Her worn leather watch on"
3"The platform had been sealed"
4"The Veil Market had moved"
5"Quinn crossed the tape with"
6"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
7"Her brown eyes moved from"
8"A sharp jawline tightened when"
9"A man lay on his"
10"A worn coat, no blood"
11"A bone token rested in"
12"The needle pointed straight to"
13"DS Callum Rourke crouched beyond"
14"His hands stayed clasped between"
15"He did not need to"
16"He lifted his torch and"
17"Eva Kowalski appeared from the"
18"She tucked a strand behind"
19"The worn leather bag sagged"
ratio0.883
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"If the man had drawn"
1"If someone had stepped out"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Eva Kowalski appeared from the far side of the stall, her curly red hair escaping the band that held it back."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.2035%