Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJ7KTRDNFTB018K8FZB500

Run Details

Duration:
5m 5s
Cost:
$0.011435
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door put emerald slashes across the wet pavement. Rory shouldered into The Raven’s Nest with an insulated carrier swinging against her hip. Inside, maps curled at the corners of the walls. Black-and-white photographs hung above the booths: London docks, Prague, faces blurred by rain and age. Silas stood behind the bar, a silver signet ring catching the light on his right hand. He slid a coaster beneath a glass without asking what she wanted. “The Golden Empress called ahead.” Rory set the carrier on the bar. “Noodles, spring rolls, extra chilli. No charge for the chilli if she cries.” Silas’s mouth twitched. He nodded toward the far booth. Rory crossed the floor. In the last booth, beneath a map of the Thames, sat Nia Llewellyn. Her hair, once a red braid that reached the small of her back, was cut short and blackened at the roots. A charcoal jacket sat square on her shoulders. Her hands rested on a file folder, fingers straight, palms down, showing restraint she had not learned in Cardiff. Rory stopped where the neon bled across the floor. Nia looked up. Her gaze moved from the carrier to Rory’s face and then down to the restaurant logo stitched on the bag. The blue in Rory’s eyes caught the light, then dimmed. “Aurora.” “Rory.” “You don’t like your real name.” “Real names get filed under people who left them behind.” Silas came past with two glasses. He set one near Nia, then the other near Rory. His left leg caught on the floorboard. He paused, balanced, then returned behind the bar and wiped the counter with a folded cloth. Rory left the food carrier on the edge of the table. Nia touched the rim of her glass. Her nails were trimmed short, clean. The last time Rory had seen them, they had been chipped blue and bitten into uneven teeth. “How many years?” “Eight.” “Nine.” Nia opened the file. A photograph slipped out, but she did not lift it. “September was nine.” “You keep the calendar.” “I keep what’s useful.” The bar hummed around them. A fridge coughed in the back. The green light outside pulsed through the window and slid over the maps, turning the old streets into rivers. Rory counted the exits. The back door by the toilets, the window above the sink, the seam that ran through the bookshelf. The habit lived in her hands now, not her head. Nia watched. “You do that.” “Count?” “Measure.” “Someone has to.” “You used to map the student bar before stealing crisps.” “You had better uses for your hands.” “You had no idea.” Rory looked at the bookshelf beside the booth. A seam of darkness ran through the wall where there had been none before. “Back room?” “Still for meetings.” “You’re meeting in his back room.” “I’m waiting.” “Who’s coming?” Nia closed the folder. “That’s a question you used to ask when you wanted to change the subject.” Rory pulled off the damp hood of her jacket. Her black hair lay straight and wet against her skull. She pushed it back with her left hand and watched the small crescent scar on her wrist clear the sleeve. “You look at me like I’m undercross.” “You are undercross. You’ve been undercross since you got out of Cardiff.” “Cardiff?” “We all were.” Nia’s chin tilted toward the file. “I came back to the library after you left. Your seat was open. The chair had a dent.” “A chair.” “You remember everything small and nothing large.” “I was good at details.” “You were good at disappearing.” Nia pressed her palm flat against the table. The file buckled. “I brought a van.” “You sent that text.” “At eleven. You left at seven.” “Maybe I wanted to be gone by eleven.” Nia’s breath moved through her nose. She looked at the glass in front of her and not at Rory. “I waited in the car park until two.” “You don’t owe me a car park.” “I owe you more than that.” Nia lifted her eyes. “I didn’t call him.” The room held the name. Silas paused behind the bar, cloth in his hand. After a second, he moved toward the hidden seam in the bookshelf. The shelf swung inward with a soft click. He went inside, and the wall closed. Rory turned back to Nia. The neon sign cast a green stripe over her old friend’s collar. “You didn’t call Evan.” “He was a warning sign.” “So was a fire.” Nia touched the crescent scar on Rory’s wrist with two fingers, not quite. The air between them carried the smell of wet wool and old tea. “You got this falling down the stairs in your mother’s house. You told me it happened because you were chasing your father’s umbrella.” “It happened because I was five.” “You still use the umbrella story.” “The story works.” “You stopped answering my calls.” “Your calls had his name attached.” Nia’s hand fell back to the file. “He called your phone forty-one times the night before you left. Your father’s number, then mine, then the student office. I had a record.” “Why didn’t you send it?” “Because I thought you were already safe.” Nia’s voice tightened. “Because I was in chambers, and I had a client who needed me to stop shaking, and I kept telling myself you had Eva, you had your London people, you had your own stupid courage.” “You didn’t know London.” “You did.” “I learned the wrong parts first.” Rory pulled the chair out and sat. The seat stuck, then gave. She folded her hands on the table to keep them still. “I used to picture your flat.” “Don’t.” “I picture you in the kitchen with one window open and the fire on. You liked things cold.” “I like doors locked.” “You liked books open.” “That’s cheaper.” Rory touched the carrier’s strap. The wet canvas left a dark print on the table. “You still write notes to yourself?” “Old habit.” “You never took notes in seminars.” “You were the one with the highlighter.” “You had memory.” “Memory is a landlord. It raises rent.” Nia smiled. The smile left her face. She reached into the file and took out a sheet, sliding it across without meeting Rory’s eyes. “Legal aid?” “Advice line. Domestic cases.” Nia’s knuckles whitened against the edge of the table. “I stopped taking employment discrimination. I can’t hear about someone’s hours anymore. I can hear about a man learning a woman’s routine. I can sit in a courtroom and keep my face still.” “Can you sleep?” “No.” “Good.” Nia flinched, then nodded. The bar’s door opened. A cold gust pushed the neon light across the floor. No one entered. The sign flickered, then steadied. “You’re changed.” “You’re changed too. Your hair used to be a fire hazard.” “It’s easier to work with.” “Work.” “Barrister. Then law reform. Then this.” Nia touched the file. “Where’s the rest?” “The rest doesn’t fit in a sentence.” “Try a lie.” Nia folded her arms. “The rest is that I came back to London because I heard you were above a pub and delivering for a restaurant in Chinatown, and I thought you’d gone quiet enough to be dangerous.” Rory looked at the photograph that had slipped from the file. It showed three students outside Cardiff’s Law Library. She stood in the middle, hair long then, laughing at something out of frame. Nia and a third girl flanked her. The third girl had a coffee stain on her sleeve. The paper’s corner was bent. “That’s old.” “Everything is.” Nia’s voice dropped. “Except the parts we keep pretending we don’t remember.” Rory lifted the carrier from the table. “You should eat. The chilli will turn the spring rolls to paste.” “You came here for the food?” “Someone has to deliver it.” “I called it in.” “You called for me?” “I called for something that might still be there.” Nia’s hand moved toward the folder and stopped short of it. “I didn’t think you’d bring it yourself.” “You should never assume a woman in uniform.” “You’re not in uniform.” “Apron.” “Apron. That’s worse.” Rory let out a laugh and stopped. She put the carrier back. Nia pulled the file toward her. “Silas knows you live above the bar.” “Silas knows everyone’s name before he learns their faces.” “Nia.” “I know my name.” “I know you do. I’m checking whether you answer when someone else says it.” Rory stood. The table was small enough that her knee brushed Nia’s. The floorboards were warm from the heating below. She looked at the door behind the bookshelf, then at the window, then at Nia’s hands. “I don’t need checking.” “Good.” Nia closed her folder. “But you need tea.” “I need a new friend.” “You had one.” “You had the old one.” “Where is she?” Nia’s voice thinned at the end. The sound made the bar seem larger, as though the maps had stretched to take it in. Rory did not answer. She touched the crescent scar on her left wrist and turned the sleeve down. Nia’s fingers rested on the photograph. “We can’t have the old one.” “No.” “We can have this.” Nia pushed the glass toward Rory. “If you sit. If you let the noodles wait.” Rory looked at the hidden seam in the bookshelf. No sound came from beyond it. The green light outside moved, then stilled on the wet pavement. She sat. Nia took the file and slid it under the booth seat. She unfolded her arms. She picked up the carrier. Her hands shook. Rory watched the tremor and did not take it away. “The food will be cold.” “Good.” “I ordered it hot.” “So did I.”
created_at"2026-09-02T17:21:31.683Z" 9/2/2026, 5:21:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1626
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1626
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences225
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1626
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount913
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity3.4
worstName"Nia"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Nia"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Prague1
Thames1
Nia31
Llewellyn1
Cardiff2
Rory26
Law1
Library1
Silas4
persons
0"Nia"
1"Llewellyn"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Prague"
3"Thames"
4"Cardiff"
5"Law"
6"Library"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1626
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences225
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs168
mean9.68
std11.87
cv1.227
sampleLengths
080
15
27
313
49
565
69
733
81
91
106
1110
1239
1311
1430
153
161
171
1814
193
204
214
2230
2332
242
253
261
271
283
2910
307
314
3222
332
343
356
362
372
384
3914
4039
417
4212
431
443
456
4618
472
487
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"been chipped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences225
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount915
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02185792349726776
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences225
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences225
mean7.23
std5.63
cv0.779
sampleLengths
014
114
29
315
416
512
65
77
813
93
106
114
1213
1321
148
1519
169
173
1820
1910
201
211
226
2310
246
2510
267
2716
2811
297
306
3117
323
331
341
354
3610
373
384
394
405
416
4219
434
4418
4510
462
473
481
491
42.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.24444444444444444
totalSentences225
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences102
matches
0"He slid a coaster beneath"
1"He nodded toward the far"
2"Her hair, once a red"
3"Her hands rested on a"
4"Her gaze moved from the"
5"He set one near Nia,"
6"His left leg caught on"
7"He paused, balanced, then returned"
8"Her nails were trimmed short,"
9"Her black hair lay straight"
10"She pushed it back with"
11"She looked at the glass"
12"He went inside, and the"
13"She folded her hands on"
14"She reached into the file"
15"It showed three students outside"
16"She stood in the middle,"
17"She put the carrier back."
18"She looked at the door"
19"She touched the crescent scar"
ratio0.225
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences102
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rory shouldered into The Raven’s"
2"Silas stood behind the bar,"
3"He slid a coaster beneath"
4"Rory set the carrier on"
5"Silas’s mouth twitched."
6"He nodded toward the far"
7"Rory crossed the floor."
8"Her hair, once a red"
9"A charcoal jacket sat square"
10"Her hands rested on a"
11"Rory stopped where the neon"
12"Nia looked up."
13"Her gaze moved from the"
14"The blue in Rory’s eyes"
15"Silas came past with two"
16"He set one near Nia,"
17"His left leg caught on"
18"He paused, balanced, then returned"
19"Rory left the food carrier"
ratio0.941
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her hair, once a red braid that reached the small of her back, was cut short and blackened at the roots."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5283%