Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJAVGJ02ATXCZBH0P5XPHG

Run Details

Duration:
3m 5s
Cost:
$0.005584
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heartstone pendant grew hot against Aurora’s skin. She touched the crimson stone with a thumb. Its pulse matched the crescent scar on her wrist. At the edge of Richmond Park, the old oak standing stones lifted from heather and dark. No frost climbed their bark. No wind moved their leaves. Isolde crossed a line of crushed shells first. Silver hair brushed her heels. Pale lavender eyes fixed on a tear in the air. Her feet passed over shells and left no marks. Behind her, the tear shimmered. A seam of faint distortion ran through the dark like heat rising from a kettle lid, except the waves that touched Aurora’s face smelled of honey, smoke, and overripe pears. Isolde tilted her head. "The Veil opens where someone has already eaten." Aurora kept the Fae-Forged Blade in her hand. Moonsilver glowed in the dark. The blade stayed cold enough to sting her palm. In its light, the tear showed black threads stretched across the opening. Nyx solidified beside her. The Shade wore a humanoid shape like a borrowed coat. Violet eyes burned without lids. "Pendant wants it open. Those threads bite." The voice came through Aurora’s ear, not from Nyx’s mouth. Aurora stepped closer. The pendant’s warmth spread through her chest. Behind them, park sounds disappeared. Only the hum of the Veil remained. She raised the dagger and cut the first black thread. The thread snapped and wept a drop of amber light. The smell of burnt sugar rushed from the wound. Aurora cut again. The shimmer peeled back enough to show a pale stone road under an amber sky. Isolde moved through without hesitation. Nyx folded into shadow, slid between the cut edges of the Veil, and rose on the other side. The Shade’s outline thickened as if the realm had poured darkness into their bones. Aurora entered last. The air on the other side came warm against her face, too close, like standing beside an oven set beyond cooking. She pulled her jacket tighter and stepped onto the pale road. The portal seam closed behind her with a sound like a zipper biting through meat. Dymas opened around them. The sky stretched above without sun or stars. Amber light saturated the clouds and rested on every surface as if the realm had been dipped in varnish. The road ran between vineyards whose leaves were broad and black. The vines carried fruit nobody had grown, nobody had picked. Grapes hung in swollen blue clusters, and when a breeze touched them, the clusters turned their faces. Isolde’s hair lifted without wind. "Excess keeps its own weather." Aurora looked toward the orchards. Pear trees bent over low marble walls. Their fruit glowed from within, green-gold and heavy. A stone basin sat between two trunks, filled with cut figs and honey. The figs trembled, tiny seams opening and closing. Her stomach contracted. She pressed the pendant beneath her collar. "Nyx." The Shade had gone still near a fallen grapevine. Nyx touched a cluster with one black fingertip. The skin burst. The juice did not drip. It crawled up their hand and vanished beneath shadow. Violet eyes flicked to Aurora. "It knows my hunger." Isolde crossed to a gap in the orchard wall. They moved deeper. The pale road curved around a collapsed amphitheater, a ruin that had once held a hundred seats and now held only the smell of roasted fat. Broken columns rose from moss the color of saffron and ash. Silver plates were set along the column bases, each plate empty except for a single carved human face. Aurora stopped at the first one. The face smiled, and the carved mouth was stained black. The tables came next. Long stone tables stretched across the orchard floor as if a banquet had interrupted its own death for a thousand years. Cloches of dull bronze sat in rows. Knives lay beside them, their blades thin and hungry. Napkins stiffened in the warm air, embroidered with symbols Aurora could not read. A roasted boar sat at the center table, flesh glossy with amber glaze. A garland of black grapes had been pushed into its teeth. Steam rose from the boar and curled toward the sky. Aurora’s mouth watered before thought arrived. She shut it. The pendant burned. Isolde touched the rim of a bronze cloche but did not lift it. "Don’t taste what has no owner." Nyx crouched beside a plate of sliced pomegranate. The seeds were red and moving, crawling against one another in the shallow silver dish. "Owner has eaten it. This place ate it first." The boar table shifted. Bronze legs moved across the moss. The entire banquet slid forward half an inch, as if the realm had settled on its haunches. Aurora drew the dagger. The cold of moonsilver bit through her glove. The movement stopped. The steam over the boar straightened. Isolde crossed the tables without touching them. Her hem brushed the moss, still leaving no trace in the saffron ash. She stopped at a gap in the vineyard wall. Beyond the gap stood a garden of inverted trees. Their roots gripped shelves of clay pots filled with dark liquid. Flowers bloomed in the roots, pale and wet, breathing. A stream ran between the pots, carrying melted sugar uphill. The scent rose in layers: bread, rosemary, blood orange, hot copper. Aurora stepped over the threshold into the garden. The pendant’s heat changed. It pulled low toward her stomach, then jerked upward, pointing through the upside-down trees. In that direction, a door waited in a wall of black marble. It was taller than the amphitheater, framed by carved knives and bronze spoons crossed like bones. Nyx slid along the garden edge, body losing solid shape. "The portal door has already set your place." Isolde smiled with no pleasure. "Set place. Filled bowl. Empty stomach." Aurora approached the door. The nearer she came, the more the garden seemed to watch. The flowers closed over her passing. The sugar stream slowed. From behind the clay pots came the soft, wet sound of knives against something that was not wood. She looked toward the sound. A figure stood in the gap between two trees. White coat, flour on its sleeves, back turned. The hands moved, cutting and placing. It carried a platter balanced on one palm. The platter held a row of raw hearts glazed in something golden. The figure did not turn, but the knife paused. Aurora kept her dagger raised. The figure resumed cutting. The garden exhaled. Isolde touched the black marble door. Her fingers passed over the carved knives and did not leave fingerprints. The metal symbols warmed under her skin. She looked back at Aurora, pale lavender eyes wide and reflective. "Gluttony keeps its kitchen locked until the meat rings." Nyx flowed up the marble, a ribbon of living shadow between the carved spoons. Violet eyes blinked from a height that should not have existed. "Pendant is hot enough to answer." Aurora looked down. The heartstone pendant had grown so hot the chain seared her skin. She yanked the chain over her head. The crimson gem floated an inch above her palm, pulsing with an inner glow that matched the amber sky beyond the garden ceiling. The chain did not cool. It vibrated. The pendant tugged toward the door. She lifted it toward the carvings. The knives moved. Bronze spoons turned in their metal sockets. The door exhaled a breath of smoke that tasted of cinnamon and ash. A seam split down its middle, then a second seam crossed the first, carving a square. The square dropped inward, leaving a dark opening. The opening was not empty. It was a hall. Amber chandeliers hung above a floor of polished obsidian. Tables ran in rings around a central pit. The pit was full of silver trays, stacked so high they nearly filled it. Steam rose from the trays and formed the shape of hands, then faces, then hands again. Voices moved in the hall under the sound of clinking china. Not shouting. Not whispering. Waiting. The pendant fell from Aurora’s palm. It stopped before the doorway, glowing at the threshold like a coal dragged from a fire. Isolde stepped over it. Nyx slid through the opening first, a fold of darkness folding itself around the light. Aurora took the blade in her left hand, touched the crescent scar on her wrist, and crossed into the hall.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:23:12.538Z" 9/2/2026, 5:23:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"marble"
count4
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count3
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"shimmered"
2"warmth"
3"marble"
4"trembled"
5"stomach"
6"flicked"
7"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences149
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1406
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1337
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora20
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Shade3
Nyx8
Veil2
Isolde10
Violet3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Blade"
2"Shade"
3"Nyx"
4"Veil"
5"Isolde"
6"Violet"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.752
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1406
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean19.53
std20.64
cv1.057
sampleLengths
025
193
24
38
434
519
67
710
822
910
1037
115
1232
133
1447
154
1665
175
185
1941
203
217
221
2334
245
254
269
2758
2816
294
3050
3134
326
333
343
3513
366
3723
389
3927
404
418
429
4379
448
4546
4610
478
485
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences149
matches
0"been dipped"
1"been pushed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs236
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences160
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1340
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.016417910447761194
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002238805970149254
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean8.79
std4.98
cv0.567
sampleLengths
08
18
29
316
45
55
68
75
810
99
105
1130
124
138
148
155
169
1712
184
1910
205
217
2210
233
247
255
267
2710
2810
299
303
3115
325
3318
3414
353
3621
3711
3815
394
408
4119
4211
4310
4417
455
465
475
487
498
40.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.28125
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners45
22.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"Only the hum of the"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences145
matches
0"She touched the crimson stone"
1"Its pulse matched the crescent"
2"Her feet passed over shells"
3"She raised the dagger and"
4"She pulled her jacket tighter"
5"Their fruit glowed from within,"
6"Her stomach contracted."
7"She pressed the pendant beneath"
8"It crawled up their hand"
9"They moved deeper."
10"She shut it."
11"Her hem brushed the moss,"
12"She stopped at a gap"
13"Their roots gripped shelves of"
14"It pulled low toward her"
15"It was taller than the"
16"She looked toward the sound."
17"It carried a platter balanced"
18"Her fingers passed over the"
19"She looked back at Aurora,"
ratio0.166
22.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount127
totalSentences145
matches
0"The heartstone pendant grew hot"
1"She touched the crimson stone"
2"Its pulse matched the crescent"
3"Isolde crossed a line of"
4"Her feet passed over shells"
5"A seam of faint distortion"
6"Isolde tilted her head."
7"Aurora kept the Fae-Forged Blade"
8"Moonsilver glowed in the dark."
9"The blade stayed cold enough"
10"Nyx solidified beside her."
11"The Shade wore a humanoid"
12"Violet eyes burned without lids."
13"The voice came through Aurora’s"
14"Aurora stepped closer."
15"The pendant’s warmth spread through"
16"She raised the dagger and"
17"The thread snapped and wept"
18"The smell of burnt sugar"
19"Aurora cut again."
ratio0.876
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Shade’s outline thickened as if the realm had poured darkness into their bones."
1"Long stone tables stretched across the orchard floor as if a banquet had interrupted its own death for a thousand years."
2"From behind the clay pots came the soft, wet sound of knives against something that was not wood."
3"The crimson gem floated an inch above her palm, pulsing with an inner glow that matched the amber sky beyond the garden ceiling."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.5985%