| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde brushed aside [aside]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.485 | | leniency | 0.97 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |
| 96.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1300 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1300 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "firmly" | | 3 | "gleaming" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "churned" | | 6 | "marble" | | 7 | "churning" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "intricate" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "glistening" | | 13 | "mechanical" | | 14 | "long shadow" | | 15 | "oppressive" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1299 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 974 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.64 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Shade | 2 | | Aurora | 16 | | Nyx | 5 | | One | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Moonsilver | 1 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Moonsilver" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.679 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like sifted flour" | | 1 | "looked like heat shimmer, a warp in the h" | | 2 | "as if guarding gold" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1299 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 35.11 | | std | 19.62 | | cv | 0.559 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 66 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 68 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 55 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.92% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "Long aqueducts spanned the canyons, but the channels did not carry water; a sluggish, dark red liquid crested their banks, churning thick foam that smelled of fermenting plums and bitter almond." | | 1 | "Carvings ran along the rim—intricate friezes depicting figures with elongated limbs, their faces thrown back toward the amber sky, mouths gaping wide to catch streams of falling liquid." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 985 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "translucent, pale-gold fruit," | | 1 | "ice-cold against her" | | 2 | "massive, dark-barked trees," | | 3 | "shallow, lichen-stained steps." |
| | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.018274111675126905 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006091370558375634 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 14.76 | | std | 7.1 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 79.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.5340909090909091 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 93.90% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, an unbroken vault of" | | 1 | "Then she made out the" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught her balance, her" | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes darted" | | 2 | "Her slippers glided over the" | | 3 | "She tilted her head toward" | | 4 | "They moved down the slope," | | 5 | "Her thumbnail scraped over the" | | 6 | "It was not wind." | | 7 | "It was a rhythmic, low-frequency" | | 8 | "She hovered her fingers an" | | 9 | "They moved with mechanical precision," |
| | ratio | 0.141 | |
| 65.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The tear in the Veil" | | 1 | "Aurora stumbled forward onto dirt" | | 2 | "Heat slammed into her lungs," | | 3 | "She caught her balance, her" | | 4 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed against" | | 5 | "Nyx’s voice slipped across the" | | 6 | "The Shade drifted two paces" | | 7 | "Twin violet lights burned where" | | 8 | "Aurora pulled the collar of" | | 9 | "Her bright blue eyes darted" | | 10 | "Isolde stepped past them, her" | | 11 | "Her slippers glided over the" | | 12 | "She tilted her head toward" | | 13 | "Aurora reached down, rubbing two" | | 14 | "The grit felt greasy, clinging" | | 15 | "Aurora stood, wiping her fingers" | | 16 | "Nyx flowed over an outcropping" | | 17 | "The stone hissed where the" | | 18 | "They moved down the slope," | | 19 | "The wooden stalks rose twelve" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside the taut skins, dark seeds drifted in cloudy liquor, swirling as though churned by an internal current." | | 1 | "Long aqueducts spanned the canyons, but the channels did not carry water; a sluggish, dark red liquid crested their banks, churning thick foam that smelled of f…" | | 2 | "The worker fell to his knees instantly, scooping the fruit with bleeding, raw fingers, shoving the bruised produce against his chest as if guarding gold." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde did, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the path ahead" | | 1 | "Nyx replied, the shadow of their head tilting" | | 2 | "Aurora picked up, her eyes scanning the dense orchards flanking the descent" | | 3 | "Aurora kept, the words barely carrying past the lapel of her jacket" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice cutting through the humid haze" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde did (do)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.242 | | leniency | 0.485 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.303 | |