Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJBNVTDESV9JVQA28EFJ6C

Run Details

Duration:
17.0s
Cost:
$0.012445
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The boundary line announced itself through the soles of Rory’s boots. One step landed on London mud—slick with autumn rain and smelling of car exhaust drifted over from Kingston Hill—and the next struck bone-dry earth. The background drone of the city snapped off. No distant sirens, no hum of the South Circular, no jet engines cutting through the cloud bank toward Heathrow. Just a flat, dead suction against the eardrums, the kind that accompanied a sudden plummet in cabin pressure. Rory halted between two massive oak standing stones. The ancient trunks, petrified into iron-hard timber centuries ago, formed an archway into the clearing. Beyond them, Richmond Park dissolved into the Fae Grove. The canopy overhead laced together with surgical neatness, blocking the sodium glow of the London sky and leaving only a stark, silver moonlight that cast razor-edged shadows across the floor. Lilies, bluebells, and white wild garlic thrust through the soil, fully bloomed and motionless. Mid-November frost held the rest of Surrey in a brittle grip, but here the petals stayed plump and waxen. They possessed no scent. Rory drew in a lungful of air, testing it. Nothing. Not soil, not decay, not vegetation. The air tasted sterilized, scrubbed of moisture and heat, like the inside of an industrial freezer before the coolant kicked on. She dug her hands into the pockets of her canvas jacket, fingers brushing the folded parchment Yu-Fei had passed her across the counter at the Golden Empress. The Chinese characters inked across the front were dry and precise, an address that did not exist on any ordinance survey map, followed by a time: midnight sharp. Her phone screen lit up when she tapped the glass. The battery icon spun in a continuous, frantic circle, the time frozen at 12:01. She clicked the power button, shoved the useless slab back down, and touched her left wrist. Her thumb found the small crescent-shaped scar tucked beneath her watch strap, running along the ridge of flesh. The old habit kept the acid burn of adrenaline out of her throat. "I have the slip from the kitchen." Her Cardiff lilt struck the air and dropped straight down. The trees absorbed the words without an echo. The clearing gave nothing back. A dry snap sounded thirty feet to her left. Rory turned on her heel. Her boots crushed a cluster of snowdrops; they made no sound beneath her weight, flattening like spun paper and rising back to shape the moment her heel lifted. The tree line stood motionless. The trunks were silver-grey, tangled in briars that hung in thick, matted drapes. Nothing stirred in the underbrush. Yet the sensation persisted, sharp as a sliver of glass beneath a fingernail: the space five feet behind that dense screen of brambles had changed density. It held a mass that had not been there when she stepped through the stones. "Silas said you'd be punctual." Rory kept her voice low, level, stripped of tremor. "Leave the token by the root. That was the bargain." Silence answered. Not the quiet of an empty park, but the held breath of a room where someone stood just around the doorframe with a raised hammer. A breath of wind stroked the back of her neck. It carried no temperature, neither warm nor cold, but it smelled of old well-water and wet iron. Rory pivoted. The path back to the standing stones remained open, twenty yards away. The twin oak pillars stood sentinel against the faint yellow halo of Earth’s night, visible through the rupture in the trees. But the gap looked narrower. The distance between the monoliths, easily wide enough for a delivery van when she entered, now barely measured the span of two outstretched arms. She took three paces toward the exit. The soil beneath her boots shifted, not with the give of loam, but with a rhythmic, subterranean thrum. Beneath her jacket, against the skin of her collarbone, a needle-point of heat bloomed. Rory reached under her collar. Her fingers closed around the Heartstone Pendant. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem, normally cold as chipped flint, burned with feverish warmth. A dim, rhythmic ruby pulse leaked through the weave of her shirt, synchronizing with the floorboards of the forest. The silver chain bit into her skin. "Not here." Rory stared into the dark among the roots. "You're on the wrong side of the gate." The trees shifted. No leaves rustled. No branches scraped together. The thick oak boles simply leaned, four degrees off-center, tilting toward the center of the path in a clean, mechanical drift. The angle warped her sightline, turning straight avenues of grass into cramped, winding blind corners. In her peripheral vision, just at the fringe of the silver light, something white moved. It traveled low, skimming the moss at knee height, vanishing behind the bole of a split beech tree. It lacked the erratic jerk of a badger or a fox. The motion flowed smoothly, liquid and horizontal, like grease poured along a flat shelf. Rory pulled her hand from her shirt, leaving the pendant out, gleaming blood-dark against her dark jacket. "Step into the light or choke on it." She backed up two paces, keeping her spine away from the trees. A sharp, clicking flutter rattled twenty feet above her head. She looked up into the canopy. The branches formed a ceiling so thick that neither sky nor stars pierced the weave, yet a bird-like shape hung upside down from a low fork. It had no feathers. The moonlight caught pale, hairless limbs tucked tight against a ribcage the size of a dog's, its knees drawn up to its throat. Two large, wet eyes, devoid of whites or irises, mirrored the crimson wink of Rory's pendant. It did not blink. It did not breathe. Its ribcage remained totally motionless. Rory did not look away. When she took another step back toward the standing stones, the thing’s head pivoted one hundred and eighty degrees with a dry, wooden click, tracking her movement without shifting its grip on the bark. Another click sounded behind her. Then three more, deeper in the thicket, answering in an erratic, stuttering rhythm. "Right," Rory muttered under her breath, measuring the distance to the threshold. Fifteen yards. The stones had closed further, the gap down to the width of a single person's shoulders. "Deal's off." She broke into a dead run. The Grove did not lengthen; it thickened. The air resisted her like wading into waist-deep water, heavy and sluggish, pulling at the joints of her knees. Her boots struck the earth with thudding impacts that produced zero noise. The heat against her sternum flared from a simmer to an open flame. The Heartstone pulsed wild, rapid flashes of red that painted the white blooms on the ground the color of fresh arterial blood. The white shape from the moss broke from the briars to her right, running parallel. It wasn't an animal. It was a pair of long, segmented hands, chalk-white, walking on twenty pale fingertips with the frantic scurrying gait of a house spider. They matched her stride, keeping three feet out in the fringe of the shadows, their knuckles rising and falling against the silent dirt. The air around her ear chilled to freezing. A voice, dry as crushed leaves, whispered into the hollow of her jaw: "Bread for the kiln." Rory swung her elbow hard into the space behind her shoulder. Her forearm met empty air, tearing through a pocket of freezing mist that smelled of turned earth and burnt copper. The momentum knocked her off balance. She stumbled, her left boot catching on a exposed taproot. She hit the turf hard on her side, the impact driving the air from her lungs in a short, ragged gasp. Above her, the canopy shuddered. The things in the branches let go. Five distinct plops hit the ground surrounding her, spaced evenly in a circle five feet from where she lay. The pale, skinless limbs uncoiled from their chests with slow, hydraulic tension, their joints cracking like breaking celery. They did not rush her. They formed a ring, their wide, empty eyes drinking in the scarlet light pulsing against her chest. Rory rolled onto her hands and knees, keeping her chin down and her eyes fixed on the narrow slit of the oak stones ten feet ahead. Between the monoliths, the moonlight cut off. A wall of greasy, boiling blackness had begun to pour inward through the gap, thick as tar, swallowing the distant view of Richmond Park. The stone on her neck burned hot enough to scorch her skin.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:23:39.524Z" 9/2/2026, 5:23:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1435
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1435
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"sentinel"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count2
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"mechanical"
count1
11
word"gleaming"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"chilled"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"lilt"
2"echo"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"sentinel"
6"measured"
7"rhythmic"
8"warmth"
9"pulse"
10"mechanical"
11"gleaming"
12"pulsed"
13"chilled"
14"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1433
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.49% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1386
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
London2
Kingston1
Hill1
South1
Circular1
Heathrow1
Richmond2
Park2
Fae1
Grove2
Surrey1
Yu-Fei1
Golden1
Empress1
Chinese1
Cardiff1
Silence1
Earth1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Fifteen1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Silence"
3"Earth"
places
0"London"
1"Kingston"
2"Hill"
3"Heathrow"
4"Richmond"
5"Park"
6"Fae"
7"Grove"
8"Surrey"
9"Golden"
10"Cardiff"
globalScore0.995
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.791
wordCount1433
matches
0"Not the quiet of an empty park, but the held breath of a room"
1"neither warm nor"
2"not with the give of loam, but with a rhythmic, subterranean thrum"
3"neither sky nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean30.49
std21.28
cv0.698
sampleLengths
035
145
262
374
455
571
67
723
89
933
1064
1124
1227
1327
142
1562
1625
1714
1851
1918
203
2143
2215
2343
2417
258
2612
2785
2813
2939
3018
3132
326
3338
3435
3515
3650
378
3813
394
4031
4137
425
4366
4426
4531
4612
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs200
matches(empty)
67.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences113
ratio0.027
matches
0"One step landed on London mud—slick with autumn rain and smelling of car exhaust drifted over from Kingston Hill—and the next struck bone-dry earth."
1"Her boots crushed a cluster of snowdrops; they made no sound beneath her weight, flattening like spun paper and rising back to shape the moment her heel lifted."
2"The Grove did not lengthen; it thickened."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1402
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.024251069900142655
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006419400855920114
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean12.68
std7.46
cv0.589
sampleLengths
011
124
28
319
418
58
615
79
830
914
1019
114
129
131
146
1521
1627
1728
1810
1914
2016
2118
2213
237
2410
258
265
279
285
2928
305
3113
325
3326
3415
3514
3610
372
3825
3910
4017
412
4212
4321
445
4524
467
4718
4814
495
43.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3274336283185841
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners37
64.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"Just a flat, dead suction"
1"Then three more, deeper in"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences103
matches
0"They possessed no scent."
1"She dug her hands into"
2"Her phone screen lit up"
3"She clicked the power button,"
4"Her thumb found the small"
5"Her Cardiff lilt struck the"
6"Her boots crushed a cluster"
7"It held a mass that"
8"It carried no temperature, neither"
9"She took three paces toward"
10"Her fingers closed around the"
11"It traveled low, skimming the"
12"It lacked the erratic jerk"
13"She backed up two paces,"
14"She looked up into the"
15"It had no feathers."
16"It did not blink."
17"It did not breathe."
18"Its ribcage remained totally motionless."
19"She broke into a dead"
ratio0.282
52.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences103
matches
0"The boundary line announced itself"
1"The background drone of the"
2"Rory halted between two massive"
3"The ancient trunks, petrified into"
4"The canopy overhead laced together"
5"Lilies, bluebells, and white wild"
6"They possessed no scent."
7"Rory drew in a lungful"
8"The air tasted sterilized, scrubbed"
9"She dug her hands into"
10"The Chinese characters inked across"
11"Her phone screen lit up"
12"The battery icon spun in"
13"She clicked the power button,"
14"Her thumb found the small"
15"The old habit kept the"
16"Her Cardiff lilt struck the"
17"The trees absorbed the words"
18"The clearing gave nothing back."
19"A dry snap sounded thirty"
ratio0.816
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Just a flat, dead suction against the eardrums, the kind that accompanied a sudden plummet in cabin pressure."
1"The Chinese characters inked across the front were dry and precise, an address that did not exist on any ordinance survey map, followed by a time: midnight shar…"
2"Her boots crushed a cluster of snowdrops; they made no sound beneath her weight, flattening like spun paper and rising back to shape the moment her heel lifted."
3"The angle warped her sightline, turning straight avenues of grass into cramped, winding blind corners."
4"Rory pulled her hand from her shirt, leaving the pendant out, gleaming blood-dark against her dark jacket."
5"They matched her stride, keeping three feet out in the fringe of the shadows, their knuckles rising and falling against the silent dirt."
6"Her forearm met empty air, tearing through a pocket of freezing mist that smelled of turned earth and burnt copper."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.222
82.2799%