Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJCMNZGTS78AB7FV69RCHQ

Run Details

Duration:
3m 45s
Cost:
$0.008630
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The second deadbolt had just cleared the housing when Ptolemy rammed against her ankle with a scream that sounded like a kettle losing its mind. Aurora caught the door with her shoulder, saw the wet line of charcoal suit, the ivory head of a cane hooked over the threshold, and pushed it shut on Lucien Moreau's nose. The cane held the gap. "You can do that with a door you don't own." Aurora looked down. Rain darkened his shoulders. The gold eye and the black one sat on the same sharp face, and that face had ruined two good coats and one clean conscience in her life. "You don't need an invitation to be insufferable." Lucien lifted the cane and stepped into the narrow landing. His shoes squeaked on the painted boards. "Eva isn't here." "Good." "She is away on a case. I am using her couch, her kettle, and every surface her cat has not murdered." "I know the couch. It has a nail." "Then know this: if you touch my notes, I will open you like a parcel." He smiled with the corner of his mouth. That old trick. The trick that used to mean a warning or a lie, and lately, when he did it across a table in Silas' back room, had meant neither. Aurora's hand found the third deadbolt. The metal was cold under the crescent scar on her left wrist. "Why are you here?" "My rooms are not rooms." "Your rooms were rooms in May." "A fire is a fast tenant." The smell of the curry house came up through the floorboards, cumin and scorched oil. Beneath it, rain on wool and something metallic. Aurora did not ask how he had lost the smell. People like Lucien wore other people's bad luck as cologne. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill and stared down into the street. "Your cat has better security sense than you do." "Leave the door closed." "I cannot sleep in the street, Rory." "I can sleep in the street. I have slept in worse." "You delivered soup to Hackney at four in the morning wearing socks with sandals." "That was a crisis." "This is a crisis. The flat above Drury's tailor has three men on the stairs who count coins and break fingers." Aurora looked at the cane. The ivory head had no chips. A good cane did not have chips. A good blade inside might. "Come in." He ducked into the cramped one-bedroom, and Eva's flat seemed to shrink. Scrolls curled from the armchair like dead ferns. Books stacked on the table, on the windowsill, on Eva's sewing basket. A stack of research notes lay open beside a cold cup of tea, all in Aurora's writing because Eva had given her a corner and then abandoned the corner to her like a country. Lucien stood too close to the radiator. Water dropped from his cuff onto the floorboards. "You look smaller." "I ate." "You ate Golden Empress rice for three days and thought that counted." "Four." He took off his coat and hung it on the back of a chair. The suit beneath was fine and ruined at once: wet seams, a split in the sleeve, blood dried into the fibers dark as tea. Aurora locked the deadbolts. One. Two. Three. Ptolemy yowled. "Take your shoes off." "Like a villain in a costume drama?" "Like a man whose shoes have tracked hell into my temporary kitchen." He laughed once, quiet, and pulled off the shoes. His socks had a hole at the left heel. "You need a tailor." "You need a memory." "I need to know how you found me." "Eva found the address for me." Aurora's hand stopped on the chair back. "She did not." "She did. She has kept it since Paris. She gave it to me when I asked for one place I could go and not be sold." "Sold." "Someone listed me." "You." "Me. A temporary problem. Names cost less in rain than in sun." The kitchen light hummed. Eva's tabby jumped from the sill and wound between Lucien's legs, sniffing his wet socks. Ptolemy accepted all disasters for food. Aurora poured water from a jug into a cup. She did not give him tea. "Sit." "You are in your delivery uniform." She looked down. The Golden Empress jacket was black with a red collar, stained at the hip from a scooter's chain. Under it she wore an old jumper from Cardiff. "It pays." "I know." "You know nothing about it." "I know you used to run from doors." "I use them now." "With three locks." "With three locks and no debt." His gaze slid over the flat, the scrolls, the books, the open notes about a case she had not chosen. He stopped at a page with a map of Bermondsey marked in red circles. "Yu-Fei's route?" "The Golden Empress's route." "You deliver for Yu-Fei and investigate for Silas." "I investigate for rent." He sat on the armchair and did not flinch at the nail. "You could have called me." "I had no reason." "I had your number." "I had a name." "Rory." "Aurora." "Rory." She set the cup down harder than the table required. "Why did you sell the file?" He looked at the crescent on her wrist. "Because Evan would have bought it anyway." "You made a deal." "I bought a week. Your ex had a week to leave London and leave your father's office alone." "You didn't ask me." "You would have told me to keep out." "I would have told you to leave it with me." "You would have gone back for the man and broken your own hands on him." The flat took the silence. Downstairs, a pot scraped against a stove. The smell of curry pushed through the floor again, thick as smoke. Ptolemy climbed into Lucien's lap as if the half-demon had come with food. Lucien did not move the cat. "I did not sell the file." "The buyer's name was on it." "The buyer was a man with one shoe and no tongue." "Charming." "He wanted a story. I gave him a story." "You used my story." "I protected your story." "By taking it out of my hands." "By putting it in a room with a blade and making them afraid of it." Aurora crossed her arms. The scar pulled white under the light. "You were supposed to leave after the first week." "I was." "And the second?" "The second had your name on it." His hand rested on the ivory cane. The gold eye stayed open, steady. The black one held too much light from the kitchen lamp. Aurora looked away first. "You could have told me." "You could have stayed." "I was in London." "You were running through London in a coat too thin for the weather, and I watched you from a bridge because if I came down you would see me and run faster." The sentence landed between them like a coin dropped on glass. Her hand shook on the cup. She made it stop. "Why are you here now?" "Because my rooms are not rooms, and the men on the stairs will be looking for a man in wet wool, and because I have nowhere to go that you can find." "That is honest." "I am tired." The admission looked like a wound on him. Lucien Moreau did not get tired. He arranged sleep like furniture. Aurora opened the hall cupboard and took out a towel. It had Eva's name embroidered in crooked green thread. "Use this before you ruin the floor." He rose, the cat sliding from his lap with offended dignity. "You are giving me Eva's towel." "Use my name for it." "You live in her flat." "I live above Silas' bar." "Then why are you here?" "Eva's flat has locks. Silas' flat has a door and a man who thinks security means a bottle of gin." Lucien took the towel. His fingers brushed the crescent on her wrist, and neither of them looked at the touch. Aurora crossed the small space between the table and the radiator and kissed him. His mouth had rain in it and the taste of an old lie. His hand found her waist and stayed there, careful as a man touching a locked door. The kiss did not repair anything. It made the room agree that they had both been lying. He pulled back. "Rory." "Aurora." "You kept it." "The umbrella is not a message." "You said it was not a message." "I was wrong." He wiped rain from his hair and platinum strands came loose from the back. For a second he looked younger than his face, not twenty, not thirty, a man in a room who did not know where to put his hands. Her chin lifted toward the street. "The men on the stairs?" "Are watching for a wet coat. If I go out now, they follow the man. If I stay, they follow the note." "A note." "Eva sent one to my hotel before the fire. It came to me when I was gone. Eva left a copy for you." The black van moved off the curb with a slow turn signal. Lucien watched it go, then set two fingers against the window frame as if measuring glass strength. "Your flat above Silas' is closer to the river." "Yes." "If I come with you, I put him in danger." "Silas can handle a broken door." "Can he handle a knife?" Lucien turned. One hand rested on the cane, and for a moment the old certainty returned to his face, the kind that had convinced her to believe him in Paris, in a hotel room with shutters half open and the street full of men who owed him money. "I don't carry a knife where people expect one." The line between the room and the stairwell felt thinner than the note on the table. Aurora picked up her phone, looked at the cracked screen, and set it back down. "You will use the towel." "And the couch." "And the nail." He laughed again, quieter, and stepped away from the window. As he passed the table, his sleeve brushed the folded note she had taken from his jacket, and the ink smeared on the damp edge. Aurora closed her hand over the words before Lucien could stop her.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:24:24.269Z" 9/2/2026, 5:24:24 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences111
tagDensity0.009
leniency0.018
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1735
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
97.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1735
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences202
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1735
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount965
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy5
Lucien12
Moreau2
Aurora15
Eva5
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Bermondsey1
Paris1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Eva"
5"Bermondsey"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Paris"
globalScore0.723
windowScore0.833
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a kettle losing its mind"
1"looked like a wound on him"
2"as if measuring glass strength"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1735
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences202
matches
0"agree that they"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs155
mean11.19
std11.79
cv1.053
sampleLengths
057
15
210
335
48
517
63
71
821
98
1015
1138
1218
134
145
156
166
1743
1811
199
204
217
2211
2314
244
2521
2623
272
2866
2915
303
312
3212
331
3438
359
364
377
3812
399
409
414
424
438
446
457
463
4726
481
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences202
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount823
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.009720534629404616
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001215066828675577
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences202
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences202
mean8.59
std7.2
cv0.839
sampleLengths
025
132
25
310
43
54
628
78
810
97
103
111
1221
138
1415
158
163
1727
186
1912
204
215
226
236
2415
258
2610
2710
2811
299
304
317
3211
3314
344
3521
365
376
387
395
402
4112
428
4312
4434
457
468
473
482
4912
42.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2722772277227723
totalSentences202
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences86
matches
0"His shoes squeaked on the"
1"He smiled with the corner"
2"He ducked into the cramped"
3"He took off his coat"
4"He laughed once, quiet, and"
5"His socks had a hole"
6"She did not give him"
7"She looked down."
8"His gaze slid over the"
9"He stopped at a page"
10"He sat on the armchair"
11"She set the cup down"
12"He looked at the crescent"
13"His hand rested on the"
14"Her hand shook on the"
15"She made it stop."
16"He arranged sleep like furniture."
17"It had Eva's name embroidered"
18"He rose, the cat sliding"
19"His fingers brushed the crescent"
ratio0.314
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences86
matches
0"The second deadbolt had just"
1"Aurora caught the door with"
2"The cane held the gap."
3"Aurora looked down."
4"Rain darkened his shoulders."
5"The gold eye and the"
6"Lucien lifted the cane and"
7"His shoes squeaked on the"
8"He smiled with the corner"
9"That old trick."
10"The trick that used to"
11"Aurora's hand found the third"
12"The metal was cold under"
13"The smell of the curry"
14"Aurora did not ask how"
15"People like Lucien wore other"
16"Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill"
17"Aurora looked at the cane."
18"The ivory head had no"
19"A good cane did not"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"One hand rested on the cane, and for a moment the old certainty returned to his face, the kind that had convinced her to believe him in Paris, in a hotel room w…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9584%