Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJFB78HZ8SXJ70WJE7DTWE

Run Details

Duration:
18.1s
Cost:
$0.011982
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third heavy brass deadbolt clunked back into its housing. Aurora pulled the timber door inward, chain still taut, until the sight on the other side made her fingers lock around the latch. Lucien Moreau stood beneath the stuttering landing light. Rain glistened on the shoulders of his charcoal three-piece suit, dark droplets caught in the weave of high-grade wool. His slicked-back platinum hair gleamed bone-white against the yellowed floral wallpaper of the stairwell. In his right hand, resting with relaxed precision on the bare floorboards, sat his ivory-handled cane. "You took off the deadbolts quickly. You expected someone far more welcome." Aurora stared into his mismatched eyes—one the warm hue of spiced amber, the other a well of lightless black. The cardamom and fried onion steam rising from the curry house on the ground floor did nothing to cover his scent: cedarwood, ozone, and wet limestone. "Three locks." She slipped the chain free, stepped back, and left the door wide enough for him to enter, her spine stiffening until vertebrae clicked. "I bought them so men like you would stay on the street." Lucien stepped over the sill without invitation, the metal tip of his cane striking the scuffed wood in a measured, rhythmic cadence. He surveyed the narrow hallway. Piles of parchment, yellowed codices, and Eva’s handwritten translation notes choked the shoe racks and leaned against the wainscoting. A striped grey blur detached itself from a mountain of occult folios; Ptolemy slinked forward, sniffed the hem of Lucien’s pressed trousers, and wound between his shins with a rumbling purr. "The beast remembers manners, at least." Lucien extended one gloved finger and scratched behind the cat's notched ear, never lowering his gaze from Aurora. "Leave the coat on. You aren't staying." Aurora folded her arms across her chest, her left thumb grazing the crescent-shaped pale scar on her wrist. The cotton sleeves of her oversized jersey offered pathetic armor against the chill he carried inside. Six months of silence, sixty miles between London and Cardiff, and yet the air between them still ignited with that familiar, stinging static. "You vanish without a forwarding address, Rory. You change numbers twice. Silas tells me nothing except that you deliver pork buns on a bicycle." He stripped his goatskin gloves off, finger by finger, and slid them into his breast pocket. The amber eye narrowed; the demon black absorbed the dim room. "Hardly a fitting ambition for Brendan Carter’s daughter." "Don't bring my father into your mouth." She shut the front door with a sharp slam, re-engaging all three locks with deliberate, hard snaps of her wrist. "You lost the right to comment on my career, my friends, or my address when you walked out of the warehouse in Newport." "I did not walk out. I pulled the hounds of Avaros off your neck." Lucien closed the gap between them by two deliberate paces. He topped her by five inches, enough to cast a sharp shadow across the collar of her shirt. "Or did you forget the taste of brimstone on the tide flats?" "I remember the blood on the gravel. None of it belonged to you." Her chin lifted. The heat in her cheeks was not embarrassment; it was the raw, unpolished fury she had spent half a year bottling beneath shifts at the Golden Empress and sleepless nights on Eva's creaking fold-out sofa. "You used me as bait." "I used you as the only lure they would believe." The ferocity in his voice cracked the slick, cultured facade he spent decades perfecting. His cane clicked once against the skirting board. "You were safe. Every second, my eyes were on you." "Safe?" She took a stride toward him, stepping into the space he commanded, close enough to see the pale, faint veins beneath the alabaster skin at his temples. "Evan spent two years convincing me I was safe while he dismantled my life piece by piece. You knew that. You read every file on me before we even shook hands in Marseille. And then you stood on that pier and let those things circle me." "I am not your pathetic Welsh clerk." The pitch of his accent slipped, the sharp edges of the southern French coast bleeding through the clipped London diction. Lucien tossed the cane onto a tower of legal ledgers; it settled with a muffled thud. His hands came up, hovering inches from her shoulders, held back only by sheer restraint. "I have destroyed kings for less than the marks that coward left on you. Compare me to him again, Aurora. Go on." Her pulse hammered against the base of her throat, visibly jumping beneath the skin. The proximity did what it always did: stripped away the cool logic she prided herself on, reducing her sharp wits to raw nerve endings. She remembered the heat of his palms against her waist in an alcove off the Seine, the cut of his jaw against her cheek before the chaos in Newport destroyed whatever tentative, dangerous thing they had begun to build. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "You left your talisman behind." He reached into the inner lining of his jacket. When his fingers returned, they held a silver pendant on a broken chain, the moonstone set within it milky and dull. "A poor excuse to cross the river." Aurora snatched the silver piece from his palm. Her skin brushed his—a jolt of raw heat, a half-demon's unnatural warmth coursing through her thumb. Neither of them pulled away. The cat leaped onto an adjacent stool, knocking a stack of tax returns to the linoleum with a papery rustle. "You kept it." "A broker of secrets discards nothing of value." His gaze dropped to her mouth, slow and unhurried, before tracking back up to the fierce blue of her eyes. "Especially items stolen by careless Welsh runaways." "I took what was mine." Her breath hitched as his knuckles brushed the hollow beneath her jawline, cool leather replaced by the burning fever of his bare skin. The contrast made her shudder. "You took more than that, and you know it." His thumb traced the line of her throat, feeling the gallop of her blood. "Six months of silence in this squalor. Stacking books for a hedge-witch and peddling noodles while half the covens from here to Bristol search for the girl who outwitted the Avaros court." "I had a quiet life until five minutes ago." "You have never had a quiet life. You merely hid from the one you chose." Aurora knocked his hand aside, though her fingers lingered on the crisp fabric of his cuffs, gripping the charcoal wool instead of shoving him back. "I didn't choose this. I didn't choose you." "A lie. You walked into my office unescorted. You bargained with me in high court dialect, and you kissed me like a woman facing a firing squad." His other hand found her waist, pulling her flush against the structured front of his waistcoat. The smell of rain on wool hit her senses with devastating clarity. "Deny it, Rory. Tell me you fled to this miserable lane because you hated me, not because you feared how easy it was to let me burn down the world for you." "You overestimate yourself, Moreau." Her voice shook, betraying the ice she attempted to cast over it. Her palms flattened against the solid plane of his chest, feeling the steady, heavy beat of his heart through the silk lining. "I ran because every time you touch me, someone bleeds." "Then let them bleed." Lucien tangled his long fingers into the black hair at the nape of her neck, tilting her head back until their foreheads almost met. "Let every monster between here and the Marches come for us. They will find me waiting at the threshold." "That isn't comfort. That's a death sentence." "Then negotiate better terms." Aurora stared at the curve of his lips, parted and inches from her own, the dark eye drinking her whole while the amber burned with unmistakable hunger. The anger between them had not dissolved; it had simply curdled into fuel, hot and suffocating in the narrow, paper-strewn hallway. "No terms," she said, her grip tightening on his lapels until the seams groaned. "No contracts. No broker." "Then what remains?" Aurora pulled him down the remaining inch, answering with her mouth against his.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:25:39.694Z" 9/2/2026, 5:25:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1397
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1397
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"facade"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"rhythmic"
2"chill"
3"silence"
4"familiar"
5"facade"
6"pulse"
7"warmth"
8"traced"
9"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1395
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount925
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva2
Ptolemy1
Lucien7
Aurora8
London2
Cardiff1
Golden1
Empress1
French1
Seine1
Newport1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Golden"
3"French"
4"Seine"
5"Newport"
globalScore1
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"of her throat, visibly jumping beneath the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1395
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean20.51
std17.17
cv0.837
sampleLengths
010
123
257
312
445
52
623
712
877
96
1018
117
1257
1324
1427
158
167
1720
1823
1914
2028
2112
2213
2338
245
2510
2622
2710
281
2927
3046
317
3251
3322
3477
355
365
3730
387
3949
403
418
4220
437
445
4528
469
4714
4832
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences94
ratio0.074
matches
0"Aurora stared into his mismatched eyes—one the warm hue of spiced amber, the other a well of lightless black."
1"A striped grey blur detached itself from a mountain of occult folios; Ptolemy slinked forward, sniffed the hem of Lucien’s pressed trousers, and wound between his shins with a rumbling purr."
2"The amber eye narrowed; the demon black absorbed the dim room."
3"The heat in her cheeks was not embarrassment; it was the raw, unpolished fury she had spent half a year bottling beneath shifts at the Golden Empress and sleepless nights on Eva's creaking fold-out sofa."
4"Lucien tossed the cane onto a tower of legal ledgers; it settled with a muffled thud."
5"Her skin brushed his—a jolt of raw heat, a half-demon's unnatural warmth coursing through her thumb."
6"The anger between them had not dissolved; it had simply curdled into fuel, hot and suffocating in the narrow, paper-strewn hallway."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount936
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"narrow, paper-strewn hallway."
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.021367521367521368
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003205128205128205
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean14.84
std8.9
cv0.6
sampleLengths
010
123
28
319
414
516
612
719
826
92
1023
1112
1222
135
1419
1531
166
1718
187
1918
2016
2123
2224
2316
2411
258
267
2720
2823
2914
3010
3118
3212
3313
343
3535
365
3710
3814
398
4010
411
4227
4346
447
4520
4616
4715
4822
4914
51.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3191489361702128
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences53
matches
0"His slicked-back platinum hair gleamed"
1"She slipped the chain free,"
2"He surveyed the narrow hallway."
3"He stripped his goatskin gloves"
4"She shut the front door"
5"He topped her by five"
6"Her chin lifted."
7"His cane clicked once against"
8"She took a stride toward"
9"His hands came up, hovering"
10"Her pulse hammered against the"
11"She remembered the heat of"
12"He reached into the inner"
13"Her skin brushed his—a jolt"
14"His gaze dropped to her"
15"Her breath hitched as his"
16"His thumb traced the line"
17"His other hand found her"
18"Her voice shook, betraying the"
19"Her palms flattened against the"
ratio0.396
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences53
matches
0"The third heavy brass deadbolt"
1"Aurora pulled the timber door"
2"Lucien Moreau stood beneath the"
3"Rain glistened on the shoulders"
4"His slicked-back platinum hair gleamed"
5"Aurora stared into his mismatched"
6"The cardamom and fried onion"
7"She slipped the chain free,"
8"Lucien stepped over the sill"
9"He surveyed the narrow hallway."
10"Piles of parchment, yellowed codices,"
11"A striped grey blur detached"
12"Lucien extended one gloved finger"
13"Aurora folded her arms across"
14"The cotton sleeves of her"
15"He stripped his goatskin gloves"
16"The amber eye narrowed; the"
17"She shut the front door"
18"Lucien closed the gap between"
19"He topped her by five"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora knocked his hand aside, though her fingers lingered on the crisp fabric of his cuffs, gripping the charcoal wool instead of shoving him back."
1"Her palms flattened against the solid plane of his chest, feeling the steady, heavy beat of his heart through the silk lining."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her grip tightening on his lapels until the seams groaned"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.7535%