Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJGTT4BFE3MVJBN8TPNM9T

Run Details

Duration:
17.7s
Cost:
$0.013059
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Camden’s rain tasted of soot and diesel, sheeting off the Victorian awnings in heavy, frigid ropes. Harlow Quinn vaulted an overturned wooden crate in the alley behind the high street, the heels of her standard-issue boots striking the slick cobblestones without a misstep. Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to her temples like wire. Water streamed down her sharp jaw, but her brown eyes remained fixed on the green canvas coat thirty paces ahead. Tomás Herrera ran like a hunted animal, erratic and light on his feet, skidding around an iron skip before cutting left toward the canal basin. A canvas medic bag slung diagonally across his chest slammed against his ribs with every stride. "Herrera!" Quinn lunged through a spray of gutter wash, her overcoat snapping against her knees. "Halt Met Police!" Tomás did not glance back. His boot soles shrieked against wet iron as he scrambled over a low security fence. He caught his sleeve on the jagged diamond mesh, ripped free with a grunt, and dropped into the weed-choked yard of an abandoned railway substation. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck swung wide, glinting silver beneath the amber glare of a distant sodium streetlamp. Quinn did not bother with the climb. She hit the gate with her left shoulder, driving her weight through the latch. The corroded chain snapped with a brittle crack. "Drop the bag, Tomás!" "You have no jurisdiction here, Detective!" Tomás rounded a blind corner of rotting brickwork. "Turn around and go back to Soho!" "Not without answers about Morris!" The name hung in the damp air like a fired round. Ahead, the paramedic stumbled, his left hand bracing against a graffiti-scrawled doorframe. The jagged white scar along his forearm caught the street glare—a brutal souvenir carved deep into flesh. For a fraction of a second, his pace faltered. "Morris didn't listen either!" Tomás kicked open a plywood barrier covering a subterranean stairwell and vanished into the earth. Quinn closed the gap in three lunging strides. The opening yawned at the foundation of an old brick electrical house, plunging straight down into total blackness. A blast of air surged up from the depths, but it carried no chill from the autumn storm. It blew warm, thick, and smelling of dried blood, crushed sage, and ozone. Quinn unclipped the tactical torch from her tactical vest with her left hand, the worn leather of her wristwatch scraping the nylon webbing. She drew her baton with her right, flicked her wrist to extend the steel shaft, and descended. The concrete stairs ended after twenty feet, giving way to curved, white-tiled walls encrusted with seventy years of brake dust and river mold. An abandoned Tube station, buried beneath Camden’s modern transit arteries. The rumble of the active Northern line vibrated through the floor plates, a low, metallic growl that set her molars on edge. Footsteps echoed ahead, splashing through shallow run-off along the tracks. Quinn kept her beam low, sweeping the ballast and rotten cross-ties. "End of the line, Herrera. There are no exits through the deep-level tunnels. Met transit teams have the surface cordoned." A sharp laugh drifted back through the dark, stripped of humor. "Your transit teams won't follow me down here, Quinn. They know better." She rounded a curve where the tunnel widened into an arched platform stripped of its rails. The darkness peeled back to reveal Tomás standing fifty yards out, bathed in an amber glow that had no business existing underground. He stood before an iron gate set directly into the curved brick of the tunnel wall. The iron was wrought into the likeness of bare, twisted birch branches. Flanking the barrier stood two figures wrapped in heavy oiled duster coats, their faces obscured by the brim of broad hats and dense woolen scarves despite the subterranean heat. Tomás reached inside his shirt, past the medallion, and pulled out a slender sliver of polished ivory—a bone token no larger than a domino. He presented it with a flat palm. One of the gatekeepers touched the bone with a gloved finger. The iron branches retracted into the masonry with a wet, grinding sigh, sliding open just enough for a single man to slip through. "Step away from the gate!" Quinn closed the distance, her boots crunching on dry grit. "Hands where I can see them!" Tomás looked back over his shoulder. The warm brown of his eyes reflected the strange light spilling from the breach. He gripped the strap of his medical kit. "Morris died because he kicked open doors he didn't have the stomach to understand, Quinn. Go home to your desk. Forget the dead." "Morris was my partner." "Then honor him by staying in the light." Tomás stepped sideways through the gap. The iron branches shuddered, preparing to spring back into place. Quinn sprinted. She cleared thirty feet of track ballast in seconds, thrusting the hardened steel tip of her expandable baton between the interlocking iron tendrils just as they snapped shut. Metal groaned against metal. The mechanism jammed, sparks showering the damp stone as the branches strained against the tempered alloy of her weapon. The gatekeeper on the left turned toward her. Beneath the shadow of his brim, there were no human features, only the faint, phosphorescent glimmer of compound eyes shifting behind a layer of black gauze. The creature extended a gloved hand, palm up, demanding the bone token. Quinn stepped past the creature’s reaching grasp, wedging her shoulder into the gap forced by her baton. Beyond the threshold lay no derelict subway platform. The floor dropped into a cavernous, vaulted hall carved from living bedrock and ancient Roman brick. Tiered stalls stretched into a cavern so vast the ceiling was lost in a haze of purple smoke and drifting embers. Lanterns fashioned from green glass and brass cages swung from high iron chains, illuminating rows of trestle tables heaped with things that defied cataloging: dried organs sealed in hand-blown glass, jars of luminescent bile, bundles of herbs that writhed faintly against their twine bindings, and stacked crates of unrefined black ore that hummed at a pitch that set her teeth aching. Hundreds of figures moved between the stalls. Some wore modern trench coats and bespoke suits; others draped themselves in silks, furs, and garments woven from unidentifiable hides. A low murmur rose from the expanse, a polyglot hum of dead languages, modern street slang, and gutter clicks. Twenty yards down a set of crude stone steps, Tomás was already melting into the throng, his canvas bag clutched tight to his chest as he headed toward a stall beneath a tattered crimson awning. Quinn pulled her service radio from her shoulder. She keyed the mic. Static roared in her ear, dense and screeching, completely severed from Scotland Yard's dispatch channels. She unclipped her phone; the screen flickered erratically before dying entirely, the battery icon draining to zero in three sharp pulses. She looked down at her left wrist. The second hand of her leather-strapped watch spun counterclockwise, shuddering violently. Her baton was still wedged in the gate behind her, the metal bending under the pressure of the subterranean mechanism. If she pulled it free, the door would seal. If she left it, she walked in without a weapon, completely blind, into an armed underground network operating beyond any law she had sworn to uphold. Quinn reached down. Her fingers wrapped around the rubberized grip of her baton. With a sharp wrench, she jerked the steel rod free. The iron branches slammed shut behind her, the locks biting home with the finality of a dropped portcullis. Quinn gripped the baton, stepped off the final riser, and descended into the crowd.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:26:28.428Z" 9/2/2026, 5:26:28 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count2
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"standard"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"depths"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"glinting"
2"weight"
3"depths"
4"chill"
5"flicked"
6"vibrated"
7"footsteps"
8"echoed"
9"stomach"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1278
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.72% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1170
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Victorian1
Quinn12
Herrera1
Tomás9
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Camden2
Northern1
Roman1
Scotland1
Yard1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Tomás"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Camden"
6"Roman"
7"Yard"
places
0"Scotland"
globalScore0.987
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1278
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.05
std21.85
cv0.752
sampleLengths
072
141
215
33
465
529
64
76
88
97
105
1149
124
1315
1457
1540
1655
1721
1820
1911
2012
2138
2257
2331
2434
2515
266
2728
2823
294
308
3116
3253
3346
3417
358
3698
3746
3835
3948
4018
4155
4223
4332
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was already melting"
14.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences89
ratio0.045
matches
0"The jagged white scar along his forearm caught the street glare—a brutal souvenir carved deep into flesh."
1"Tomás reached inside his shirt, past the medallion, and pulled out a slender sliver of polished ivory—a bone token no larger than a domino."
2"Some wore modern trench coats and bespoke suits; others draped themselves in silks, furs, and garments woven from unidentifiable hides."
3"She unclipped her phone; the screen flickered erratically before dying entirely, the battery icon draining to zero in three sharp pulses."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1182
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.016074450084602367
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007614213197969543
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean14.36
std8.74
cv0.608
sampleLengths
016
127
29
320
425
516
615
73
85
915
1025
1120
127
1314
148
154
166
178
187
195
2011
2112
2217
239
244
2515
268
2718
2818
2913
3023
3117
3223
3310
3422
3510
3611
3720
3811
3912
4016
4122
4216
4312
4429
4524
467
4711
4823
4915
72.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4606741573033708
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences76
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to"
1"His boot soles shrieked against"
2"He caught his sleeve on"
3"She hit the gate with"
4"It blew warm, thick, and"
5"She drew her baton with"
6"She rounded a curve where"
7"He stood before an iron"
8"He presented it with a"
9"He gripped the strap of"
10"She cleared thirty feet of"
11"She keyed the mic."
12"She unclipped her phone; the"
13"She looked down at her"
14"Her baton was still wedged"
15"Her fingers wrapped around the"
ratio0.211
32.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences76
matches
0"Camden’s rain tasted of soot"
1"Harlow Quinn vaulted an overturned"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to"
3"Water streamed down her sharp"
4"Tomás Herrera ran like a"
5"A canvas medic bag slung"
6"Quinn lunged through a spray"
7"Tomás did not glance back."
8"His boot soles shrieked against"
9"He caught his sleeve on"
10"The Saint Christopher medallion around"
11"Quinn did not bother with"
12"She hit the gate with"
13"The corroded chain snapped with"
14"Tomás rounded a blind corner"
15"The name hung in the"
16"The jagged white scar along"
17"Tomás kicked open a plywood"
18"Quinn closed the gap in"
19"The opening yawned at the"
ratio0.855
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"If she pulled it free,"
1"If she left it, she"
ratio0.026
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Tomás Herrera ran like a hunted animal, erratic and light on his feet, skidding around an iron skip before cutting left toward the canal basin."
1"Quinn unclipped the tactical torch from her tactical vest with her left hand, the worn leather of her wristwatch scraping the nylon webbing."
2"Lanterns fashioned from green glass and brass cages swung from high iron chains, illuminating rows of trestle tables heaped with things that defied cataloging: …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn lunged, her overcoat snapping against her knees"
1"Quinn closed, her boots crunching on dry grit"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.5679%