Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJPJ74N3MMJW2WM71FSDKK

Run Details

Duration:
17.9s
Cost:
$0.012781
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a brassy, familiar scrape, and when Aurora pulled the door open, her hand froze on the knob. Lucien Moreau stood on the narrow, linoleum-tiled landing, a draught of wet London air and cold wool clinging to him like a second coat. The landing bulb flickered overhead, buzzing with dying filament, casting yellow light across the sharp architecture of his cheekbones and the platinum blond hair he kept slicked back with ruthless precision. His charcoal overcoat was damp along the shoulders from the East End drizzle. In his right hand, the silver ferrule of his ivory-handled cane rested squarely on Eva’s fraying welcome mat. Aurora did not drop her gaze, though her heart slammed against her ribs with enough violence to make her collarbones ache. "You have thirty seconds," she said, her voice flat and Cardiff-cool, "to tell me how you found this address before I put all three bolts back in place." Lucien did not flinch. He never flinched. The demon in him lived in his left eye—a well of absolute, starless black where the sclera and iris bled together into obsidian—while his right remained human, a pale, startling amber that caught the cheap hallway light. "Eva’s wards are clever, Rory," he said, the low, velvet drawl of Marseille softening the edges of his English. "Her scrying defenses, less so. May I come in? The stairwell smells rather aggressively of star anise, and I am fairly certain the tenant on the second floor is preparing to butcher an eel." "It is a curry house downstairs, Lucien. It always smells like star anise. And no, you may not." She began to close the door, putting her shoulder into the warped timber. The flat tip of the ivory cane shot forward, catching the frame with a dry crack that jarred up her arm. Lucien did not shove. He simply held the cane braced, perfectly balanced, his amber eye narrowing just a fraction. "Five minutes," he murmured. "Then you may set fire to me, if it pleases you." Aurora stared at his gloved hand on the cane. The leather was soft lambskin, immaculate. Behind her, deep in the crowded belly of the flat, Ptolemy gave a discontented yowl from atop a leaning tower of grimoires, sensing the shift in the room's temperature. With Lucien nearby, the ambient heat always spiked by a degree or two, an infernal trace he could never entirely scrub from his blood. She exhaled through her nose, stepped backward, and let the door swing wide. "Wipe your feet." He stepped over the threshold with the fluid, predatory grace that always set her teeth on edge. The flat was tiny—cramped enough that when Lucien entered, the walls seemed to draw in around them. Stacks of parchment, unbound folios, and open lexicons covered Eva’s low coffee table, the kitchen counter, and half the floral-print sofa. Lucien took off his leather gloves, sliding them into his pocket, and leaned his cane against the coat rack. When he turned back to her, Aurora had already retreated behind the small breakfast bar, crossing her arms over the front of her oversized wool jumper. She instinctively reached with her right hand to cover the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, her fingers pressing into the old, pale ridge of tissue. "You look well," he said quietly. "Do not do that." "Do not do what?" "Do not pretend this is a social call. You disappeared from the warehouse on the Isle of Dogs three weeks ago. You left two dead cultists on the concrete, blood on my coat, and three lines of untranslated Aramaic on my kitchen counter. Then you stopped answering your phone." She tilted her chin, her bright blue eyes fixing him with a glare meant to cut down barristers. "I spent four days wondering if the Black Guild had dumped you in the Thames, and the rest of the month wishing they had." Lucien looked down at his shoes, a faint, rueful twitch disturbing the corner of his mouth. "The Black Guild lacks the imagination to drown me, Rory." "I do not care about their imagination. I cared about your silence." The words slipped out before her mind could catch them, raw and far too honest. She felt the heat rise into her throat and cursed herself for it. Evan had taught her the cost of giving away leverage; four years under a man who used every dropped guard as a weapon ought to have cured her of sentimentality. But Lucien was not Evan. Evan had been clumsy, cruel, and desperate for control. Lucien was a storm wrapped in Italian tailoring, dangerous precisely because he never had to raise his voice to break someone. Lucien moved, cutting the distance between them by half. His boots made no sound on the thin rug. "I had to cleanse the trail," he said, his voice dropping an octave, losing its performative polish. "The things that followed us out of that cellar were not human, Aurora. They carry a scent. If I had stayed near your flat above Silas’ bar, they would have smelled the ash on you. They would have picked your bones clean while you slept." "I am not made of glass, Lucien." "No," he agreed, stepping closer still, until he was on the other side of the low counter, close enough that she could see the faint flecks of gold orbiting his dark demon pupil. "You are made of iron and bad decisions. Which makes you remarkably fragile when dealing with things that feed on stubbornness." "You made a promise," she said, her voice dropping, taut as a wire. "The night before the docks. You sat on the fire escape outside my kitchen window, drank my awful tea, and told me we were partners in this. You said you would not vanish." Lucien’s expression tightened. The polished mask cracked, revealing the hollow beneath his eyes, the faint tension along his jaw that told her he had not slept in days. His mother had given him his fine, high nose and the shape of his mouth, but the underworld of Avaros lived in the unnatural stillness of his posture. "I lied," he whispered. "Clearly." "I lied because staying near you was the first thing in ten years that made me careless." He reached out, his bare hand hesitating in the air above the counter before his knuckles brushed the wood, millimeters from where her sleeve ended. "You think I wanted to leave you there, scrubbing sulfur out of the floorboards? You think I enjoyed being fifty miles north, listening to dead men scream in an abandoned foundry, wondering if someone had figured out where you lived?" The pulse in Aurora’s throat beat so hard she felt it in her jaw. "You don't get to romanticize abandoning me, Lucien. You don't get to turn cowardice into chivalry. I left Wales to get away from men who decided what was best for me." "Do not compare me to that pathetic boy," Lucien snapped, a sudden, sulfurous hiss threading through his voice. For a second, the black of his left eye seemed to bleed over the white entirely, swallowing the landing light in pure void. Aurora did not step back. She leaned forward, planting her palms on the laminate counter. "Then stop acting like him. Talk to me. Don't manage me." They stood there, breaths mingling across eighteen inches of cheap counter space, surrounded by the smell of boiling cumin, dust, and old books. Ptolemy jumped down from a chair with a soft thud, circled Lucien’s trousers once, sniffed his hem, and then, with feline indifference, rubbed his gray cheek against the knee of Lucien’s bespoke trousers, leaving a trail of tabby hair. The absurdity of it punctured the room. Lucien glanced down at the cat, then back up at Aurora. A breath leaked out of him, carrying the sharp, cold tension out of his shoulders. "The seal is broken," he said softly, looking directly into her eyes. "The translation you found... it was an invitation. I have to go into the lower vaults beneath Whitechapel before the new moon. Alone, I will likely die there." Aurora swallowed. The anger was still there, a hot ember beneath her ribs, but beneath it lay the terrifying, undeniable pull that had terrified her from the moment she first walked into his office three months ago. "And you came here to ask for my help?" she asked. "No," Lucien said. He raised his hand, and this time he did not stop short. His fingers, unusually warm from the demon fire running in his veins, brushed the curve of her jaw, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone with an agonizing, reverent lightness. "I came to ask you to forgive me. And then, if you have any mercy left in that brilliant, impossible heart of yours... I came to ask you to come with me." Aurora looked at him, feeling the heat of his skin through the chill in the air, and knew with sudden, dizzying clarity that the lock on the door had never really kept him out at all.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:29:36.238Z" 9/2/2026, 5:29:36 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.848
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.121
86.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"precisely"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"tension"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flickered"
2"velvet"
3"silence"
4"tension"
5"pulse"
6"tracing"
7"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
75.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1527
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1026
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora9
Moreau1
London1
East1
End1
Eva2
Cardiff-cool1
Lucien16
Marseille1
English1
Ptolemy2
Evan3
Italian1
Avaros1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Evan"
6"Avaros"
places
0"London"
1"East"
2"End"
3"Marseille"
globalScore0.72
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1527
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean39.15
std26.84
cv0.686
sampleLengths
023
186
249
344
453
518
653
715
868
916
1055
1172
126
134
144
1591
1626
1712
1893
1918
2062
217
2254
2346
2456
254
261
2782
2845
2941
3026
3162
327
3326
3440
3537
3611
3778
3836
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
39.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences83
ratio0.036
matches
0"The demon in him lived in his left eye—a well of absolute, starless black where the sclera and iris bled together into obsidian—while his right remained human, a pale, startling amber that caught the cheap hallway light."
1"The flat was tiny—cramped enough that when Lucien entered, the walls seemed to draw in around them."
2"Evan had taught her the cost of giving away leverage; four years under a man who used every dropped guard as a weapon ought to have cured her of sentimentality."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1034
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02804642166344294
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.012572533849129593
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean18.4
std12.23
cv0.665
sampleLengths
023
124
231
313
418
521
628
74
83
937
1019
1134
1218
1313
1421
154
1615
174
1811
199
206
2129
2224
2313
243
2517
2617
2721
2819
2926
3027
316
324
334
3467
3524
3616
3710
3812
3915
4013
4130
425
439
4421
459
469
4717
4845
497
52.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3493975903614458
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences59
matches
0"His charcoal overcoat was damp"
1"she said, her voice flat"
2"He never flinched."
3"he said, the low, velvet"
4"She began to close the"
5"He simply held the cane"
6"She exhaled through her nose,"
7"He stepped over the threshold"
8"She instinctively reached with her"
9"he said quietly"
10"She tilted her chin, her"
11"She felt the heat rise"
12"His boots made no sound"
13"he said, his voice dropping"
14"he agreed, stepping closer still,"
15"she said, her voice dropping,"
16"His mother had given him"
17"He reached out, his bare"
18"She leaned forward, planting her"
19"They stood there, breaths mingling"
ratio0.39
10.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences59
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"The landing bulb flickered overhead,"
3"His charcoal overcoat was damp"
4"Aurora did not drop her"
5"she said, her voice flat"
6"Lucien did not flinch."
7"He never flinched."
8"The demon in him lived"
9"he said, the low, velvet"
10"She began to close the"
11"The flat tip of the"
12"Lucien did not shove."
13"He simply held the cane"
14"Aurora stared at his gloved"
15"The leather was soft lambskin,"
16"She exhaled through her nose,"
17"He stepped over the threshold"
18"The flat was tiny—cramped enough"
19"Stacks of parchment, unbound folios,"
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The demon in him lived in his left eye—a well of absolute, starless black where the sclera and iris bled together into obsidian—while his right remained human, …"
1"The polished mask cracked, revealing the hollow beneath his eyes, the faint tension along his jaw that told her he had not slept in days."
2"The anger was still there, a hot ember beneath her ribs, but beneath it lay the terrifying, undeniable pull that had terrified her from the moment she first wal…"
3"His fingers, unusually warm from the demon fire running in his veins, brushed the curve of her jaw, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone with an agonizin…"
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice flat and Cardiff-cool,"
1"he said, his voice dropping an octave, losing its performative polish"
2"she said, her voice dropping, taut as a wire"
28.79% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
3"Lucien snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.242
75.2406%