Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HJQ03RD89NF06V3DJW84HK

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Duration:
17.1s
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third heavy brass deadbolt snapped back with a metallic screech. Rory yanked the timber door inward, her right hand cocked behind the jamb with an iron paring knife poised at eye level. "Wrong address," she said. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, completely unbothered by the steel six inches from his throat. Tailored charcoal wool hugged his broad shoulders without a crease, impervious to the grease and grime of the stairwell. Rain glistened on his slicked-back platinum hair. He leaned lightly upon his ivory-handled cane, his gaze fixed on her face. One eye shone pure amber, bright as molten resin, while the other sat wholly black, pupil swallowed by an abyssal void from the pits of Avaros. "Hardly," he said. His French vowels rolled through the cramped space like heavy velvet dragged over gravel. "You always were predictable with your bolt sequences. Top, bottom, middle. Never bottom first." "Get out, Lucien." "And miss the charming ambiance?" His amber eye flicked down to her bare feet on the linoleum, then up to the blade. "Put the cutlery away, *chérie*. You know how easily I disarm you." Rory tightened her grip on the haft until her knuckles turned ivory, the crescent scar on her left wrist pulling taut. "That was before you vanished in Soho with half my blood on your cuffs." "A regrettable necessity." "A coward's exit." "Yet here I am." He stepped across the threshold without an invitation. Rory lunged to block the gap, her shoulder slamming into his chest. It felt like hitting solid granite wrapped in fine Italian cashmere. Lucien caught her wrist in one swift motion, his long fingers cold against her pulse point. With a deft twist of his thumb against her tendon, he forced her fingers open. The paring knife dropped, clattering on the floorboards with a dull ring. "Careless," he murmured, his face inches from hers. The smell of him hit her immediately, cutting through the thick aromas of turmeric, cumin, and fried onions drifting up through the floorboards from the curry house below. He smelled of cedar, vintage cognac, and the faint, unmistakable tang of ozone that always preceded a demonic surge. Heat flared low in Rory's stomach, hot and entirely unwelcome. Ptolemy hissed from the top of an uneven tower of historical folios, his striped back arching like a coiled spring. "Your familiar dislikes me," Lucien remarked smoothly, releasing her wrist only after his thumb traced the blue vein beneath her pale skin. "He is Eva's cat, not a familiar. And he has excellent taste in people." She backed away, rubbing the phantom heat of his touch from her arm. "How did you find this place? Eva warded the ground floor." "Eva used sixteenth-century salt circles," Lucien said, closing the door behind him with the silver tip of his cane. The three deadbolts turned into their housings with a single flick of his leather-gloved hand. "Charming. Thorough. Utterly useless against an Avaros bloodhound." "Then you brought half of hell to my doorstep." "Only myself." He cast a languid glance around the cluttered room. Stacks of parchment leaned against sagging bookshelves, and yellowed legal briefs lay scattered across the faded Turkish rug. "A distinct downgrade from your quarters above the pub, Carter. Dust, cheap tea, and feline dander. Have you truly sunk to hiding like a rat in an attic?" "I was doing fine until you brought your bespoke suits and your black eye into my afternoon." Rory crossed her arms, angling her body toward the kitchen counter where a heavier cleaver sat drying beside the sink. "What do you want? I gave you the translation. We settled the debt on the pier." "We settled nothing." Lucien paced forward, the clack-clack of his cane cadence steady against the pine planks. "You walked away while I was occupied with three hellhounds and a severed artery." "You told me to run." "I told you to clear the blast radius." He halted two paces from her. The height difference forced her chin up, exposing the long, pale line of her throat. His heterochromatic gaze turned razor-sharp. "I did not tell you to change your name, abandon your flat, and vanish into the East End without collecting your fee." "I didn't want your blood money." "It was gold." "Even worse." Lucien smiled, a slow, predatory curving of his lips that showed the slight, unnatural sharpness of his canines. "You lie terribly for someone who studied law." "I quit law." "A tragedy for the bar. A blessing for me." "There is no *me*, Lucien. There is no *us*." The words scraped her throat. Rory held her ground, refusing to yield the space between them even as the room shrank under the sheer weight of his presence. "You used me to crack that Avaros seal. You knew what would crawl through the breach once the lock broke." "I calculated the risk." "You gambled with my life." Lucien stopped. The casual amusement vanished from his face, replaced by a sudden, terrifying stillness. He dropped his cane against the counter with a hollow clatter and closed the remaining distance between them before she could draw breath. His hand cupped the side of her neck, fingers sliding into the straight, shoulder-length black hair at her nape. His touch was cold, but the demon fire beneath his flesh burned through her skin like a brand. "If I had gambled with your life, Rory," he whispered, his thumb resting directly over her racing carotid artery, "you would not be standing in this damp hovel breathing the foul air of Brick Lane. I took seven claw wounds to the ribs ensuring that beast never touched a single hair on your head." Her breath hitched. She looked into his eyes, the gold eye blazing with genuine fury, the black one swallowing the light from the dusty sash window. The raw intensity in his grip made her knees ache with a familiar, dangerous weakness. "You should have let it," she said, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper. "It would have been cleaner." "Liar." He leaned in, his lips hovering a breath above hers. The memory of his mouth on hers on that rain-slicked dock rushed back, fierce, desperate, tasting of copper and salt. She felt the pull of it, the sickening gravity that always dragged her toward men who could destroy her. But she was not in Cardiff anymore, and she was not the frightened girl who let monsters dictate the terms of her survival. She drove her heel straight down onto the polished leather of his shoe. Lucien grunted, his grip loosening just enough for Rory to twist out of his hold. She seized the heavy iron skillet from the drying rack and raised it with both hands. "One more step," she warned, "and I see how much demon blood your expensive tailor can sponge out of that jacket." Lucien stared down at the scuff mark on his bespoke leather shoe, then lifted his eyes to her with a look of dark, unadulterated admiration. "Vicious little thing," he murmured, smoothing his lapels without a hint of shame. "I missed this." "I did not." "Another lie. Your pulse is hammering like a trapped bird." He reached into his inner coat pocket. Rory raised the skillet higher. "Hands where I can see them, Moreau." He withdrew a small rectangular velvet pouch and tossed it onto the kitchen table between two piles of open books. It landed with a dull, heavy clink. "I did not come to reminisce about our poor choices on the river," Lucien said, his tone shifting from intimate threat to icy professionalism. "I came because you are sloppy. You left your university ring on the altar." Rory's stomach dropped. The cold certainty struck her harder than any physical blow. "Evan." "The ring carried your old initials. And a tracking hex strong enough to wake the dead." Lucien retrieved his cane from the counter, his expression darkening into something lethal. "He bought the locator from the Iron Market this morning." The window behind Rory exploded inward in a hail of shattered glass and black feathers. A massive, talon-tipped shadow tore through the curtains, screeching as the protective salt along the sill burst into blinding blue fire.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien remarked smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.039
85.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1372
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"lightly"
2"utterly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1372
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"abyssal"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"predictable"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count2
6
word"familiar"
count3
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"calculated"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"ensuring"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"abyssal"
1"velvet"
2"predictable"
3"flicked"
4"pulse"
5"stomach"
6"familiar"
7"traced"
8"weight"
9"calculated"
10"racing"
11"ensuring"
12"intensity"
13"whisper"
14"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1372
ratio0.002
matches
0"chérie"
1"me"
2"us"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount922
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien11
Moreau1
Avaros1
French1
Rory10
Italian1
Stacks1
Turkish1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
places
0"Avaros"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.903
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like hitting solid granite wrapped"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1372
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean26.9
std21.8
cv0.81
sampleLengths
033
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281
331
43
534
635
73
83
912
1066
118
1257
1320
1422
1538
1642
179
1857
1953
2031
215
2256
236
243
252
2626
273
289
2957
304
315
3275
3354
3441
3519
361
3772
3813
3931
4021
4125
4216
433
4417
4512
4627
4738
4814
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences98
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount930
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"massive, talon-tipped shadow"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.023655913978494623
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008602150537634409
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean14
std8.63
cv0.616
sampleLengths
011
122
24
316
419
57
613
726
83
914
1014
113
1222
1312
1421
1514
163
173
1812
1912
2011
2116
2215
2312
248
2528
2619
2710
2820
2922
3027
3111
3219
3315
348
359
3611
3718
3828
3937
4016
4117
4214
435
4414
4515
465
4722
486
493
67.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4387755102040816
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
54.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences63
matches
0"He leaned lightly upon his"
1"His French vowels rolled through"
2"His amber eye flicked down"
3"He stepped across the threshold"
4"It felt like hitting solid"
5"he murmured, his face inches"
6"He smelled of cedar, vintage"
7"She backed away, rubbing the"
8"He cast a languid glance"
9"He halted two paces from"
10"His heterochromatic gaze turned razor-sharp."
11"He dropped his cane against"
12"His hand cupped the side"
13"His touch was cold, but"
14"he whispered, his thumb resting"
15"Her breath hitched."
16"She looked into his eyes,"
17"she said, her voice dropping"
18"He leaned in, his lips"
19"She felt the pull of"
ratio0.413
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences63
matches
0"The third heavy brass deadbolt"
1"Rory yanked the timber door"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"Rain glistened on his slicked-back"
4"He leaned lightly upon his"
5"His French vowels rolled through"
6"His amber eye flicked down"
7"Rory tightened her grip on"
8"He stepped across the threshold"
9"Rory lunged to block the"
10"It felt like hitting solid"
11"Lucien caught her wrist in"
12"The paring knife dropped, clattering"
13"he murmured, his face inches"
14"The smell of him hit"
15"He smelled of cedar, vintage"
16"Heat flared low in Rory's"
17"Ptolemy hissed from the top"
18"Lucien remarked smoothly, releasing her"
19"She backed away, rubbing the"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien smiled, a slow, predatory curving of his lips that showed the slight, unnatural sharpness of his canines."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he whispered, his thumb resting directly over her racing carotid artery,"
1"she said, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper"
2"Lucien said, his tone shifting from intimate threat to icy professionalism"
3"Lucien retrieved, his expression darkening into something lethal"
71.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"she warned (warn)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.157
80.2789%