| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.56 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 92.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1292 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1292 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "surreal" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "radiant" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "lilt" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "marble" | | 10 | "comforting" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "profound" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "glistening" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1289 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1042 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Aurora | 7 | | Richmond | 1 | | London | 1 | | Indian | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Wales | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Wales" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a vibration in the teeth rath" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.776 | | wordCount | 1289 | | matches | | 0 | "not black dirt, but fine, garnet-colored silt, warm as an animal’s flank" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 44.45 | | std | 23.48 | | cv | 0.528 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 83 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 108 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 72 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 79 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 64 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 61 | | 25 | 58 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.39% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "was like inhaling" | | 1 | "was stifling" | | 2 | "was pulling" | | 3 | "wasn't warning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "One breath tasted of damp Richmond turf and London diesel; the next filled her lungs with air so thick and sweet it was like inhaling warm syrup." | | 1 | "As the Shade drew themselves up to their full, towering height, violet light flickered where eyes ought to be—two embers smoldering in a human-shaped outline of living dusk." | | 2 | "Her hand went instinctively to her left wrist, her thumb tracing the familiar white crescent of her childhood scar—a mortal anchor against the surreal vertigo of the horizon." | | 3 | "Her silver hair, falling clean to her waist, did not drift in the nonexistent breeze; it hung like spun metal." | | 4 | "It didn't merely warm; it throbbed, beating in a low, heavy syncopation that matched the rhythm of her blood." | | 5 | "There was only a profound, vibrating hum—a frequency so low it felt like a vibration in the teeth rather than a sound in the ear." | | 6 | "The pulp inside did not rot; it glistened like wet rubies, oozing a liquor that smelled so intoxicatingly of almond, burnt caramel, and orange blossom that Rory felt her mouth water instantly, a sharp ache hitting the back of her jaw." | | 7 | "It wasn't warning her away; it was pulling her down into the basin, toward the smoke, toward the feast." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1052 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "fine, garnet-colored silt," |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03231939163498099 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013307984790874524 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 17.19 | | std | 8.39 | | cv | 0.488 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 79.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.49333333333333335 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught herself on her" | | 1 | "It didn't come from behind" | | 2 | "Her hand went instinctively to" | | 3 | "It cast no sharp shadows," | | 4 | "Her silver hair, falling clean" | | 5 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 6 | "It didn't merely warm; it" | | 7 | "Her Cardiff lilt sounded sharp" | | 8 | "She did not look back," | | 9 | "they hissed, the sound like" | | 10 | "They moved down the winding" | | 11 | "Her stomach gave an audible," | | 12 | "She wiped the sweat from" | | 13 | "She paused beside an ancient" | | 14 | "She reached out, her pale" | | 15 | "She looked past the terrace." | | 16 | "It wasn't warning her away;" |
| | ratio | 0.283 | |
| 68.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The tear in the Veil" | | 1 | "The sudden change of pressure" | | 2 | "She caught herself on her" | | 3 | "The soil beneath her fingers" | | 4 | "a voice whispered" | | 5 | "It didn't come from behind" | | 6 | "Nyx pooled outward, their silhouette" | | 7 | "Aurora pushed herself upright, brushing" | | 8 | "Her hand went instinctively to" | | 9 | "The sky was an unbroken" | | 10 | "It cast no sharp shadows," | | 11 | "The Half-Fae stepped past them." | | 12 | "Her silver hair, falling clean" | | 13 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 14 | "Isolde said softly, her voice" | | 15 | "Aurora squinted into the distance." | | 16 | "The trees were massive, with" | | 17 | "It didn't merely warm; it" | | 18 | "The crimson stone sat against" | | 19 | "Rory said, keeping her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.783 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The sudden change of pressure made her ears pop, and she stumbled forward onto knees that hit soft, unresisting ground." | | 1 | "From the lowest branches, weeping tendrils of silver vine hung down, dripping a thick, pale resin that sizzled faintly where it touched the stones below." | | 2 | "It didn't merely warm; it throbbed, beating in a low, heavy syncopation that matched the rhythm of her blood." | | 3 | "Nyx drifted alongside her, their form shifting between solid edges and curling vapor." | | 4 | "The stones were cracked, veined with creeping moss that was the vivid green of crushed emeralds." | | 5 | "Rory stepped carefully, stepping over a burst pomegranate-like gourd that had fallen across the flagstones." | | 6 | "The pulp inside did not rot; it glistened like wet rubies, oozing a liquor that smelled so intoxicatingly of almond, burnt caramel, and orange blossom that Rory…" | | 7 | "She reached out, her pale hand hovering millimeters above a cluster of glass-clear grapes that hung from the stonework." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said softly, her voice melodic and distant" | | 1 | "they hissed, the sound like dry autumn leaves scraping over slate" | | 2 | "Rory asked, her fingers tightening on the hilt of her blade" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "they hissed (hiss)" | | 4 | "Rory retorted (retort)" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.52 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.462 | | effectiveRatio | 0.462 | |