| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "lurch" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "gloom" | | 13 | "dancing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1169 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "The old oak circle. Where the earth forgets the sun." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.26% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1088 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.903 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.855 | | wordCount | 1169 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 21.65 | | std | 15.45 | | cv | 0.714 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 54 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 43 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | |
| 1.41% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "Below her knees, white and violet petals carpeted the earth—anemones, bluebells, and star-of-Bethlehem, blooming out of season beneath a sky that held neither moon nor stars, only a stagnant, bruised purple haze." | | 1 | "The shadow possessed shoulders—narrow, pitched at an unnatural slant." | | 2 | "It was too tall—seven feet at least, thin as a split rail, moving with a jerky, sliding gait that made her stomach lurch." | | 3 | "It did not step out; it poured forward along the moss, a tall, spindly silhouette that possessed too many joints, folding and unfolding in the gloom like an insect testing its wings." | | 4 | "Instead, the clicking multiplied—dozens of sharp, dry snaps dancing along the tree limbs, pacing her stride for stride, closing the gap from above." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1098 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "stagnant, bruised purple haze." |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.028233151183970857 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01092896174863388 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 11.57 | | std | 6.64 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 56.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.37623762376237624 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 76.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, right at the periphery" | | 1 | "Instead, the clicking multiplied—dozens of" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "It was not the muffled" | | 1 | "Her boots sank into springy," | | 2 | "She rolled her left wrist," | | 3 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 4 | "She exhaled through her teeth," | | 5 | "She moved forward another dozen" | | 6 | "Her shadow fell across the" | | 7 | "She froze, staring down at" | | 8 | "She stepped down into the" | | 9 | "She crouched before the box." | | 10 | "It carried the scent of" | | 11 | "It was too tall—seven feet" | | 12 | "Her collarbone flared with heat." | | 13 | "It only woke for Hel" | | 14 | "She backed out of the" | | 15 | "she said, her voice dropping" | | 16 | "It did not step out;" | | 17 | "Her boots pounded the carpet" |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 74.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The perimeter of Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Here, between two moss-choked monoliths" | | 2 | "Rory Carter pressed her thumb" | | 3 | "Static hissed through the speaker," | | 4 | "The phone clicked." | | 5 | "The screen flashed once, gray" | | 6 | "Rory tapped the glass with" | | 7 | "Silence rushed into the vacuum" | | 8 | "It was not the muffled" | | 9 | "The city did not exist" | | 10 | "Rory stepped past the ancient" | | 11 | "Her boots sank into springy," | | 12 | "The temperature rose five degrees" | | 13 | "She rolled her left wrist," | | 14 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 15 | "The sound lacked resonance, swallowed" | | 16 | "Rory followed the faint curve" | | 17 | "Yu-Fei’s delivery route never brought" | | 18 | "*The old oak circle." | | 19 | "A dry, rustling rattle clicked" |
| | ratio | 0.77 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "If the stone stayed cold," | | 1 | "To her left, the shadow" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The perimeter of Richmond Park dissolved thirty yards back, swallowed by a wet London fog that smelled of exhaust and rotting bracken." | | 1 | "Static hissed through the speaker, a jagged rhythmic pulse that sounded less like bad reception and more like someone dragging dry husks over a microphone." | | 2 | "Below her knees, white and violet petals carpeted the earth—anemones, bluebells, and star-of-Bethlehem, blooming out of season beneath a sky that held neither m…" | | 3 | "It was too tall—seven feet at least, thin as a split rail, moving with a jerky, sliding gait that made her stomach lurch." | | 4 | "The Grove was flexing its ribs, altering time, holding her inside." | | 5 | "It did not step out; it poured forward along the moss, a tall, spindly silhouette that possessed too many joints, folding and unfolding in the gloom like an ins…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |