| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1259 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1259 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "glistening" | | 8 | "cacophony" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1253 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1209 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Park | 2 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 11 | | Richmond | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "waves that seemed to drift like weeds in an undertow" | | 1 | "sounded like a sack of wet flour hitting t" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.798 | | wordCount | 1253 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 28.48 | | std | 24.18 | | cv | 0.849 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 79 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 57 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 76 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 63 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 85 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 54 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 64 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 21 |
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| 97.20% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "was tucked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "Inhale—click-click." | | 1 | "Exhale—scrape." | | 2 | "In the unnatural illumination, the bluebells were not blue at all; their petals bore the pallor of boiled meat, their stamen tipped with tiny, glistening black beads that wept clear fluid onto the soil." | | 3 | "It possessed no face Rory could assemble into sanity—only a slick expanse of gray hide drawn taut over protruding vertebrae and three jointed arms that ended in elongated, knuckled twigs." | | 4 | "Evan used to corner her in the hallway of their flat, his chest puffed, blocking the door until she flinched; survival had taught her early that predators fed on reaction." | | 5 | "From the center of its throat came a sound that raised the hair on Rory's arms: the high, tinny vibration of a bicycle bell—the exact chime from her delivery cruiser parked half a mile away on the tarmac path of Richmond Park." | | 6 | "The clearing had stretched; the stone boundaries sat twice as far away now, the wildflowers carpeting the ground in thick, undulating waves that seemed to drift like weeds in an undertow." | | 7 | "A sudden, foul gust struck her face—the smell of wet animal fur and ancient, stagnant earth." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1227 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "pressing hard against her" | | 1 | "pale crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "frantic, right behind her" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.029339853300733496 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013039934800325998 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 13.33 | | std | 9.1 | | cv | 0.682 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 29 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 72.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.44680851063829785 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 84.39% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Then a pause, followed by" | | 1 | "Only the crushed bluebells showed" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "It possessed a physical weight," | | 1 | "She turned her left hand" | | 2 | "It throbbed like a panic" | | 3 | "She reached out, planting her" | | 4 | "She snatched her hand back," | | 5 | "It was the dry, rhythmic" | | 6 | "Her bright blue eyes swept" | | 7 | "Her shoulder-length black hair whipped" | | 8 | "It moved too smoothly, without" | | 9 | "She unzipped her jacket, letting" | | 10 | "Her boots made no sound" | | 11 | "It possessed no face Rory" | | 12 | "Its head was tucked beneath" | | 13 | "Its chest remained completely flat." | | 14 | "She anchored her heels into" | | 15 | "she said, her voice dropping" | | 16 | "She stepped sideways, circling away" | | 17 | "Her hand remained deep in" | | 18 | "She wheeled around, raising her" | | 19 | "They flattened further, one by" |
| | ratio | 0.266 | |
| 80.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The two oak pillars swallowed" | | 1 | "Rory stepped between their moss-crusted" | | 2 | "Richmond Park’s manicured trails dissolved" | | 3 | "A breath escaped her mouth," | | 4 | "The ground smelled wrong." | | 5 | "Rory slipped her right hand" | | 6 | "It possessed a physical weight," | | 7 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 8 | "She turned her left hand" | | 9 | "The scar always ached before" | | 10 | "A faint crimson ember flared" | | 11 | "The silver chain grew warm," | | 12 | "Hel portals ran hot, but" | | 13 | "It throbbed like a panic" | | 14 | "Rory pivoted on her heel" | | 15 | "The pillars were gone." | | 16 | "She reached out, planting her" | | 17 | "The bark gave beneath her" | | 18 | "She snatched her hand back," | | 19 | "A streak of gray residue" |
| | ratio | 0.759 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 35.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped between their moss-crusted flanks, and the low rumble of late-night Heathrow flight paths vanished as if snuffed beneath a heavy wet blanket." | | 1 | "Where the gap should have been, three identical gnarled trunks blocked the path, their bark knotted and spiraled into shapes that mirrored human faces caught in…" | | 2 | "In the unnatural illumination, the bluebells were not blue at all; their petals bore the pallor of boiled meat, their stamen tipped with tiny, glistening black …" | | 3 | "Thick boughs intertwined overhead, forming a dense roof of leaves that blocked whatever sky lay beyond this pocket." | | 4 | "It possessed no face Rory could assemble into sanity—only a slick expanse of gray hide drawn taut over protruding vertebrae and three jointed arms that ended in…" | | 5 | "From the center of its throat came a sound that raised the hair on Rory's arms: the high, tinny vibration of a bicycle bell—the exact chime from her delivery cr…" | | 6 | "The clearing had stretched; the stone boundaries sat twice as far away now, the wildflowers carpeting the ground in thick, undulating waves that seemed to drift…" | | 7 | "They flattened further, one by one, tracing an invisible pair of wide, splayed footprints that marched steadily forward, heading straight for the toes of her bo…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice dropping an octave, flat and steady" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |