Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HK1AHTWQWWD8HC4F7SZ4ST

Run Details

Duration:
4m 35s
Cost:
$0.008721
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had laid the green sign flat against the wet street, a minty stripe leaking into Soho pavement. Inside The Raven's Nest, old maps pinned beneath glass turned dead harbours into brown continents. Black-and-white photographs watched the bar: men in caps, women in coats, streets paved with faces that had lost their names. Aurora Carter came through the side door with the Golden Empress satchel across her back. She set it by the radiator, peeled her collar from her throat, and checked the time on her wrist before catching the crescent there. Small. Old. It had not healed into anything better. Her straight black hair lay damp against her shoulders. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar with one glass in his hand and his other hand braced on the taps. His signet ring flashed silver as he slid the cloth from a tumbler. Grey streaks caught the low light in his beard. One leg took the weight a half-second early. "You're off tonight, Rory." Aurora nodded. Her shoulders still held the shape of a handle. One strap had twisted across her collarbone. Silas took the satchel, lifted it by the handle, and gave her a look that meant the restaurant had emptied her faster than the evening. Someone waited in the last booth. The booth sat under a bookshelf that looked only like a bookshelf until one hand found the hidden iron latch. A woman had her back to the maps. Aurora stopped with her hand still on her collar. The woman's hair used to fall in a long rope across one eye. Now it was cut at the jaw, black and blunt. A charcoal coat lay over the seat beside her, its cuff cut clean by expensive tailoring, not poverty. "Eva." The name came out lower than Aurora had meant it. Eva turned her head. Her eyes still met first, before her mouth thought up a greeting. Then the greeting arrived, short and metallic. "You look like someone who took an umbrella to a funeral." Aurora pulled off her satchel and dropped it to the floor. "You look like someone who took a lawyer's salary to a charity shop." "You still make people like you by insulting their shoes." "I still tell the truth when the shoes are bad." Aurora sat across from her. The vinyl groaned under her. "You're in London." Eva slid her glass forward and back on the table. "For ten hours. I have a return by nine." "You've been in London before." "I've been in London at parties. This is different." "The suit says so." "The suit says I have a chair." Aurora looked at the chair. It was a good chair, tall-backed, with Eva's spine against it like a rule. "Silas." Eva glanced toward the bar. "How does he know?" "He owns the building." "I mean how does he know I'd wait here." "He knows everyone who can sit in this room and not drink for forty minutes." Eva's mouth moved toward a smile, then forgot the idea. Silas brought two glasses and set them down. He left one near Eva, one near Aurora. His boot scraped the floor on the return to the bar. The limp stayed the same; the sound had grown longer. Aurora did not drink. "How did you know I'd be here?" Eva touched a napkin, slid it into a corner of the table, then pulled it back. "Silas keeps a list." "You didn't ask me if you could be here." "I'm not here to ask." Aurora looked at her friend. The bright blue of her own eyes caught in the glass, but Eva had always preferred to watch reflections instead of faces. "You changed." Eva's fingers tightened on the glass. "You noticed." "The hair." "I cut it. It was easier than arguing with every man who asked to touch it." "The suit." "I wear it because it gets me seats where people stop talking over me." Aurora's scar pulled. "The old jacket." Eva did not look at the coat. "I sold it." Aurora reached for the glass and set it down without drinking. "You don't sell things. You store them in cupboards and call it saving." "I was twenty." "You were twenty when you handed me your father's old briefcase and said lawyers were prisons with ties." Eva's knuckles went pale. "You were twenty when you left Cardiff because I said London had rooms with locks that worked from the inside." The room took the line. A table near the door laughed. A chair dragged. The neon outside shivered once and returned to a flat green line. Aurora's hand moved to the crescent on her wrist without permission. "I left because I had nowhere else to go." "You had a sister. You had a job. You had me." "You had a life that required a train ticket and a silence." Eva looked away, toward the old maps. Her eye caught a red line drawn across a sea that no longer matched the current. "You came back." "I never went away." "You sent me to Soho with a key and a promise that you were busy, then you stopped sending postcards." Eva's voice dropped. "I sent one." "You sent a bill." "It was paid." "It was rent." "Rent is what keeps people from freezing." Aurora made a short sound. It had once been a laugh. "It is what keeps people from asking why they froze." Silas wiped a spill with a cloth. He did not look at them. His signet ring clicked twice on the wood. Eva's nails were pale and cut short. Once Eva had bitten them to the quick under a coat of green polish. Aurora remembered the sound of them tapping her desk during exam season, a beetle knocking on glass. "You work for the law now." "I work inside it." "Inside it." Aurora tasted the phrase. "Did you find it roomy?" "It has windows." "Did you bring a bag?" "It has files." Eva's mouth moved again. Aurora leaned forward. "Tell me the part where you're here because you missed me." Eva set her glass down. The liquid did not move. "I came because a man in this city needs a witness, and you were the last person who knew him before he made himself useful." The words did not land as confession. They landed as business, and the business had a shape too familiar for accident. "You need something." "I need you not to run." "I don't run." "You ran through a window in Cardiff when you were nineteen and told me you were climbing." Aurora's jaw tightened. "It was Evan's window." "It was your exit." "I had no money." "You had me." "You had your own exit." Eva's cheek moved under the streetlight. For one second, the polished face came off and the old girl stood there with a bruise on her pride instead of a name badge. "Silas says you deliver food." "Silas says a lot of things." "Silas says you have a key to the flat above him." "And you have Silas." "And you have not told him why you are not in a law library at midnight." "Because the library closed and no one came to let me out." Eva touched the napkin again. Her fingertip left a damp line. "You're angry at the world for a reason." "I'm angry at the world for many reasons." "One of them is me." "Most of them are." Eva folded her hands. The right sleeve drew back a fraction too far. Under the cuff, a thin bracelet moved, metal catching the bar's light. Aurora recognized it. A cheap silver band from a Cardiff market, bought after Eva's mother died, two drinks and a stolen umbrella. Aurora had watched it dull. Eva had watched it polish. "You kept it." "I found it in a box." "You had it on the train when you said I should go." "The box was in the flat after you went." Aurora stared at Eva's face. The old shape remained: the bridge of the nose, the scar at the mouth from a childhood fall, the way her brow pulled before she chose the true word. "You came because you felt guilty." "I came because I was late." "Late for what?" "For knowing what I was." Aurora's chest made room. She looked at the glass, then away. "You are still a barrister's wife dressed in a barrister's clothes." Eva's hands did not move. "I am a barrister." "That is not what I said." "That is what you heard." Silas came with a pot of tea and placed it on the table. The porcelain chipped at the spout. He poured without asking. The liquid struck the cups and steamed. "You both want the same thing. You don't want to want it." Eva turned. "You always did like being right from behind glass." Aurora took the cup. The heat entered her wrist. "He isn't wrong." Eva's mouth tightened around the cup. She did not drink. "I can help with your record." Aurora stopped. "My record?" "Evan's charges. The ones that were dropped." "They were dropped because they were stupid." "They were dropped because no one pressed them." Aurora set the cup down. A ring of tea spread across the napkin. "You've read the file." "I have the power to." "And the will." "I have the job." The job sat between them. A clean word for the thing that had eaten their twenties. Aurora looked at Eva's throat, where a small pulse moved fast under the collar. "You could have called." "I wrote." "You wrote to my mother." "You said to write to your mother." "I said to write if you had a plan. You had a letter." "A letter was all I had." "A letter was not enough." Eva's voice thinned. "You thought a letter meant a person could be carried without being asked." "You thought a ticket meant a person could be sent away without being followed." The table held the silence better than the room. The bookshelf by the booth stood still and ordinary. Behind it, the hidden door kept its secret. Aurora pulled off her coat and draped it over the chair. The delivery strap had left a red line across her collarbone. Eva saw it and looked at her own hands. "You still wear the same shoes." "The boots were free." "Because they were ugly." "Because they were mine." Aurora's blue eyes lifted. "You changed." "No one survives by staying the same size." "You could have stayed the same shape." "That would have required a person who never asked me to." Aurora laughed, but it came out as breath. "You asked me to leave Cardiff." "I asked you to live." "You asked me to vanish." "You didn't vanish. You took a room with a landlord who watches doors." Aurora turned to the bar. Silas had already turned to the till. His silver ring caught the light as he opened a drawer, then closed it. He did not listen, and that was worse than listening. "Seven years." "Five." "Since the flat." "Since the train." "Since the note." "Since the box." Eva reached across the table. Her fingers stopped short of Aurora's wrist. The space between the two hands filled with the old sound of rain on glass. "I should have come sooner." "You should have come." "You shouldn't have had to wait." Aurora moved her wrist under the line. The crescent disappeared into the sleeve. "You came here to ask for a witness." "No." Eva's hand returned to the table. She picked up the napkin, unfolded it, and placed it back folded, as if the square of paper could hold the sentence she had not said. "I came here because I heard you still sit in the corner of the Nest, and I thought if I waited long enough, you might turn around." Aurora's face stayed as it was. "Turned around." "And stayed still long enough for me to say it without the room moving." The tea steamed between them. Eva's reflection in the cup looked smaller than Eva. Aurora's reflection kept looking at the wrist. "Say it." Eva's mouth opened. No sound came out for a full beat, which had been Eva's way since a boy stole her first bicycle and she had cried before the word could form. Silas left a glass on the bar. His signet ring tapped twice. Eva spoke to the table. "I'm sorry." Aurora did not answer. The words lay between them like a key left on a counter, bright and impossible to pocket.
created_at"2026-09-02T17:35:28.834Z" 9/2/2026, 5:35:28 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences134
tagDensity0.015
leniency0.03
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2100
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2100
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"familiar"
3"porcelain"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences135
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences267
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2100
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions86
wordCount1201
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Aurora35
Eva36
Cardiff1
Silas7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.001
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2100
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences267
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs198
mean10.61
std10.13
cv0.955
sampleLengths
054
157
250
34
418
525
634
79
841
91
1010
1123
1211
1311
1413
1510
1610
1710
183
1910
209
215
229
234
247
2519
2610
274
289
2915
3010
3137
324
337
3416
354
369
375
3827
392
406
412
422
4316
442
4514
463
473
487
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs203
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences267
ratio0.004
matches
0"The limp stayed the same; the sound had grown longer."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1205
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay damp against her"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.025726141078838173
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016597510373443983
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences267
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences267
mean7.87
std5.45
cv0.693
sampleLengths
019
115
220
315
424
51
61
77
89
920
1013
119
128
134
142
159
167
1725
186
1920
208
219
2213
2310
2418
251
2610
274
2812
297
3011
3111
3213
3310
3410
355
365
373
3810
399
405
419
424
437
445
4514
466
474
484
499
41.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.16104868913857678
totalSentences267
uniqueOpeners43
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences130
matches
0"Then the greeting arrived, short"
1"Once Eva had bitten them"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences130
matches
0"She set it by the"
1"It had not healed into"
2"Her straight black hair lay"
3"His signet ring flashed silver"
4"Her shoulders still held the"
5"Her eyes still met first,"
6"It was a good chair,"
7"He left one near Eva,"
8"His boot scraped the floor"
9"Her eye caught a red"
10"It had once been a"
11"He did not look at"
12"His signet ring clicked twice"
13"They landed as business, and"
14"Her fingertip left a damp"
15"She looked at the glass,"
16"He poured without asking."
17"She did not drink."
18"His silver ring caught the"
19"He did not listen, and"
ratio0.177
6.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences130
matches
0"The rain had laid the"
1"Aurora Carter came through the"
2"She set it by the"
3"It had not healed into"
4"Her straight black hair lay"
5"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
6"His signet ring flashed silver"
7"Her shoulders still held the"
8"Silas took the satchel, lifted"
9"Someone waited in the last"
10"The booth sat under a"
11"A woman had her back"
12"Aurora stopped with her hand"
13"The woman's hair used to"
14"A charcoal coat lay over"
15"The name came out lower"
16"Eva turned her head."
17"Her eyes still met first,"
18"Aurora pulled off her satchel"
19"Aurora sat across from her."
ratio0.908
38.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"Now it was cut at"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Black-and-white photographs watched the bar: men in caps, women in coats, streets paved with faces that had lost their names."
1"The booth sat under a bookshelf that looked only like a bookshelf until one hand found the hidden iron latch."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.2208%