Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K4PM2MC2N9K8T724G5B54Q

Run Details

Duration:
32.9s
Cost:
$0.015261
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park after midnight held no colour. The gate stood locked. Rory vaulted it. She landed on damp earth and the jolt ran up through her trainers. Cold bit at her ankles. Her breath made thin clouds that vanished fast. She had not wanted to come. The text from Eva still lit her phone screen when she checked it at 23:47. No words, just a dropped pin in the middle of the green smear that was the park and a photo of the oak standing stones. Eva never sent photos. Eva never went near the Grove if she could help it. "Eva?" Her voice hit the trees and fell flat. No echo. The park swallowed sound. Rory pulled the collar of her jacket up around her neck. Her straight black hair caught on the zip. She pushed it back behind her ear. Under the sodium spill from the road behind her, the path ahead looked black. She walked. The path gave way to grass. Her phone torch threw a white cone over tussocks and wet leaves. Richmond Park sprawled around her, vast and empty, but the dark between the oaks felt narrower than it should. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her sternum beneath her t-shirt. The silver chain stuck to her skin with sweat despite the cold. The stone itself, thumbnail-sized and deep crimson, held a faint inner glow that bled through the fabric. It pulsed. Warm, then cool, then warm again. It had not pulsed since the summer. The standing stones rose ahead. Ancient oak, not rock - great black trunks that twisted up into a canopy she could not see. They formed a rough circle and inside the circle the grass changed. Wildflowers broke through the November rot. White and yellow heads, open to the moon, though no moon showed through the cloud. Their scent hit her, sweet and cloying, out of season, out of place. Rory stopped at the boundary. Her left wrist throbbed. She scratched at the small crescent scar there without thought, a pale hook left from a fall on a Cardiff kerb when she was nine. The skin prickled. "Okay. Funny joke. You here?" No answer. Wind moved through the outer oaks but not through the grove. Inside the circle the air hung still. The wildflowers did not sway. She stepped over the line. The temperature changed. The cold dropped from her shoulders. The air inside the grove held a damp warmth, like breath. Her torch dimmed. The beam narrowed to a coin of light on the grass. She slapped the side of the phone. The light stuttered and held. The pendant flared. Heat bloomed against her chest, sharp enough that she sucked air through her teeth. She pulled the chain out. The Heartstone burned crimson, light Crawling inside it like embers stirred. It beat in time with something that was not her heart. A second pulse, a fraction out of sync. She took a step back. The boundary was right behind her. Or it had been. The standing oaks now looked spaced wider apart. The gap she had entered through had closed or shifted. The park beyond showed as a smear of dark, further away than three steps should allow. "Not funny, Eva." Her throat dried. She coughed. The sound was too loud inside the still. She turned in a slow circle. The grove was no larger than a flat above a bar, no larger than Silas's back room, but the dark under the oaks stretched. The wildflowers gave off their own light. She saw her own shadow throw in three directions though she held a single source. A rustle came from the treeline. Leaves brushed leaves with no wind to move them. Rory snapped the torch toward the sound. Nothing. Black bark, black space between trunks. Her hand shook and light skittered over roots that knotted like knuckles. "Eva, if you brought me out here to scare me, you managed it." Her laugh cracked. She pressed her back to one of the oak stones. Bark bit through her jacket. She needed the solid at her spine. Another rustle. Opposite side. Closer. Something brushed the wildflowers and the heads bobbed though the air stayed dead. Rory held her breath. She listened. The city had gone. No distant traffic from Roehampton, no plane hum, no siren. The grove cut all that out. What remained was too crisp. Her own swallow sounded like a stone dropped in water. Under that, another sound. A soft inhale. Not hers. It came from the space between two oaks at ground level, low, as if something with a broad chest lay on its belly in the leaf litter and breathed. The pendant scalded. She cupped it in her palm without thinking and hiss widened her eyes. The crimson deepened until it threw red across her chin and hands. She dropped it. The chain caught. The stone swung and thumped against her ribs. Movement tugged at the corner of her eye. She whipped her head round. A pale length uncurled between roots and vanished. Too fast for vine, too jointed for branch. "Who's there?" Silence answered, then a branch snapped. The crack echoed wrong, as if the wood broke a second after the sound reached her. Footsteps started. Not steps on leaves. Steps in the leaves, but light, spaced wide, circling. She tracked them with the torch. The beam found only flowers, only moss, only the dark mouths between oaks. The steps continued. They did not match any shape she could see. The wildflowers to her left flattened. One after another, heads pressed down as if a weight passed over them. No weight showed. Rory pushed off the oak stone. Her legs went soft. She stumbled toward the place she thought the gap had been and thrust her hand out. Bark met her palm. Solid. Not a gap. An oak trunk where open air had stood. She flattened both palms against it. The bark was warm. "Let me out." The whisper left her before she knew she made it. Behind her the breathing came again. Closer. She spun. Torch light juttered across the grove. For an instant the space between two stones rippled. Air over hot tarmac. Through the ripple she saw not parkland but a flat expanse of black stone under a sky with no stars. The Heartstone beat hard enough to vibrate her teeth. The ripple snapped shut. The footsteps stopped directly behind her. She did not turn. Her neck locked. Cold sweat ran down her back. The pendant swung forward on its chain as if tugged by an unseen hand. It pulled taut toward the centre of the grove, toward the thickest dark under the largest oak. A faint line of mist rose from the wildflowers there, coiling up, taking a shape that was almost shoulders, almost a head, before it thinned. A hand brushed her hair. Fingertips, dry as bark, slid across the ends of her black bob and lifted. Rory jerked forward and slammed her shoulder into the oak stone. She swung the phone torch up. Light caught nothing but swirling mist and flowers and bark. The touch lingered on her scalp. From the dark at the centre of the grove a voice hummed. Low, tune without words. The hum matched the pulse of the Heartstone. It vibrated through the soles of her trainers. The mist thickened. It pooled around her ankles though no cold came with it. Wildflower heads turned. Every bloom in the circle angled toward her, white faces up, open. Something exhaled against the nape of her neck.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:03:27.037Z" 9/3/2026, 8:03:27 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"pulsed"
2"throbbed"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"echoed"
7"footsteps"
8"weight"
9"whisper"
10"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences157
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1266
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1239
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Park2
Eva3
Grove1
Heartstone4
Pendant1
November1
Cardiff1
Crawling1
Silas1
Roehampton1
Rory7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Grove"
2"Cardiff"
3"Roehampton"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a stone dropped in water"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.79
wordCount1266
matches
0"not parkland but a flat expanse of black stone under a sky with no stars"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean28.13
std22.02
cv0.783
sampleLengths
014
126
261
31
414
540
62
784
87
969
1037
115
1225
135
1446
1552
1649
173
1813
1952
2015
2126
2213
2325
2418
2579
2628
2714
2829
292
3022
3146
3222
3342
3410
353
3610
3761
386
3969
4019
4133
4232
4329
448
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs209
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences163
ratio0.006
matches
0"Ancient oak, not rock - great black trunks that twisted up into a canopy she could not see."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1239
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.024213075060532687
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004035512510088781
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean7.77
std5.3
cv0.683
sampleLengths
07
14
23
313
45
58
66
715
825
94
1011
111
128
132
144
1511
168
177
1814
192
206
2112
2219
2310
2412
2517
262
276
287
295
3018
3112
326
3315
3413
355
364
3725
383
395
402
4111
427
435
445
453
466
4711
483
4911
44.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.32515337423312884
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners53
23.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences142
matches
0"Too fast for vine, too"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences142
matches
0"She landed on damp earth"
1"Her breath made thin clouds"
2"She had not wanted to"
3"Her voice hit the trees"
4"Her straight black hair caught"
5"She pushed it back behind"
6"Her phone torch threw a"
7"It had not pulsed since"
8"They formed a rough circle"
9"Their scent hit her, sweet"
10"Her left wrist throbbed."
11"She scratched at the small"
12"She stepped over the line."
13"Her torch dimmed."
14"She slapped the side of"
15"She pulled the chain out."
16"It beat in time with"
17"She took a step back."
18"Her throat dried."
19"She turned in a slow"
ratio0.289
48.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences142
matches
0"Richmond Park after midnight held"
1"The gate stood locked."
2"Rory vaulted it."
3"She landed on damp earth"
4"Her breath made thin clouds"
5"She had not wanted to"
6"The text from Eva still"
7"Eva never sent photos."
8"Eva never went near the"
9"Her voice hit the trees"
10"The park swallowed sound."
11"Rory pulled the collar of"
12"Her straight black hair caught"
13"She pushed it back behind"
14"The path gave way to"
15"Her phone torch threw a"
16"Richmond Park sprawled around her,"
17"The Heartstone Pendant rested against"
18"The silver chain stuck to"
19"The stone itself, thumbnail-sized and"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The stone itself, thumbnail-sized and deep crimson, held a faint inner glow that bled through the fabric."
1"It beat in time with something that was not her heart."
2"A faint line of mist rose from the wildflowers there, coiling up, taking a shape that was almost shoulders, almost a head, before it thinned."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.5443%