Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K4PM2QBB0VA2Z2NJ6G7P88

Run Details

Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.018767
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain needled Soho and turned Dean Street to black glass. Detective Harlow Quinn stood in the mouth of an alley opposite The Raven's Nest and let the runoff drum on her shoulders. The green neon above the entrance bled down the wet brick and pooled in the cracks of the pavement. Through the front window she mapped the interior in slices. Low light. A bar top scarred with rings. Walls papered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, their frames crooked with age. A bookshelf along the rear wall with a seam of darkness behind it. Her left wrist bore a worn leather watch. Water darkened the strap. Twenty-three minutes past midnight. The door swung out. Tomás Herrera stepped under the awning with a duffel slung across his chest. Rain beaded on his short curly dark brown hair and cut tracks down his olive skin. His warm brown eyes swept the street. One hand adjusted the strap. The cuff of his sleeve rode up and exposed a pale scar along his left forearm and the glint of a chain at his throat. Quinn pushed off the wall. "Tomás Herrera!" He froze. "Met Police. I need a word." Herrera stared at her sharp jaw and cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her scalp. His grip shifted on the duffel. "You followed me from St Bart's. That was you by the ambulance bay." Quinn closed the gap. Her boots threw up fans of water. Her stride held military precision, shoulders square, chin level. "I want the names of the people you patched up in that back room." "You want a lot of things." "Don't." He ran. Quinn sprinted after him and her breath tore white in the cold. Herrera vaulted a stack of rubbish bags outside a shuttered deli and hit Greek Street at full pelt. A taxi swerved, horn blaring, headlights smearing across his back. Quinn cut behind the bonnet and kept her eyes on the duffel bouncing against his hip. "Stop!" Her voice cracked off the shopfronts. "If you run I add obstruction!" "You add what you like!" Herrera skidded round the corner onto Shaftesbury Avenue. Rain lashed the theatre marquees and turned the posters to pulp. A crowd spilled from a late show under umbrellas. Herrera shouldered through them. A woman yelped. An umbrella inverted. Quinn held her warrant card high as she ploughed the same channel. "Police! Out of the way!" Her lungs burned. Her brown eyes locked on the Saint Christopher medallion flapping loose from his collar as he pumped his arms. He glanced back. Fear widened his face. He dived for the Underground stairs at Tottenham Court Road. Quinn took the steps three at a time. Water cascaded down the tiled walls. The stink of wet wool and brake dust filled the passage. Barriers beeped. Herrera hurdled one. An alarm shrieked. Quinn flashed her card at the attendant and leapt after him, her knee cracking on the steel on landing. The northbound platform sweated heat. A train roared in, brakes screaming, wind hurling litter. Doors sighed open. Herrera threw himself inside. Quinn wedged her shoulder between the closing doors and forced her way into the carriage. Passengers stared. Herrera backed down the aisle, duffel clutched to his ribs. The train lurched. Quinn grabbed a pole and steadied her stance. Dripping rainwater formed a dark halo on the floor around her boots. "You lost your licence for this. NHS struck you off for unauthorised treatment. Who do you treat now?" "You read my file." "I read the gaps in your file." "What gaps?" "Three kids with chemical burns no A and E logged. A man with a wound that cauterised from the inside. Supernatural patients, Tomás. Your words on the dismissal hearing." Herrera shook his head. Drops flew from his curls. "You have no idea what you chase." "I chased a good man into a morgue three years ago. DS Morris. My partner. No report explained the blood loss. No report explained the scorch marks on his coat. You knew him?" The train braked for Camden Town. Herrera lunged for the doors the second they parted. "Hey!" Quinn elbowed through the crush and hit the platform running. Herrera sprinted for the far end, past the exit signs, past the staff-only door with peeling paint. He produced a key and twisted the lock with practised speed. The door swallowed him. Quinn caught the handle before it latched and slipped into a service corridor. Bare bulbs caged in wire. A slope of concrete slick with seep. The roar of the live tunnels faded behind them. Ahead, a grille hung ajar over a disused passage. Cold air breathed out, thick with incense and copper and damp stone. Herrera dropped through the gap and vanished down a flight of stairs no map claimed. Quinn keyed her radio. Static spat. "Quinn to control. Foot pursuit. Camden Town. Suspect entered service tunnels near the old branch line." "Quinn, hold position. Await backup. Repeat, hold position. Those tunnels are condemned." Quinn stared at the square of darkness. Water tapped her collar and ran down her spine. Her watch ticked against her pulse. "Control, say again last sighting of DS Morris?" "Quinn—" "Three years ago. Camden. Same sector. You logged his radio as garbled. I heard it." Herrera's footsteps echoed below, then stopped. A low murmur rose, voices layered, a market hum under stone. A tang of burnt sugar and iron drifted up. Quinn eased to the grille and peered down. Stone steps descended to a landing choked with cables. Herrera stood before a figure draped in a high-vis jacket turned inside out. The figure extended a palm. Herrera fished in his pocket and produced a small carved bone token and laid it across the offered hand. The figure bit it, nodded, and stepped aside. Beyond them glowed a vaulted space strung with lanterns. Stalls crowded an abandoned platform. Vials smoked. Caged things fluttered. Awnings flapped over crates stencilled with symbols Quinn failed to read. The crowd parted around Herrera as he merged into the light with his duffel. "One bone token. No token, no passage." The gatekeeper's eyes found Quinn in the dark above. "You carry death on you, officer. Same as the last one." Quinn's throat tightened. Rainwater dripped from her hairline into her eyes. Her hand hovered over empty air where backup should have been. Her fingers brushed the worn leather of her watch. "You let Morris through?" "I let lots of people through." "And how many came back?" The gatekeeper smiled with teeth filed to points. "Pay or force. Choose." Quinn drew her baton. The steel telescoped with a snap that rang down the stairwell. Heads turned in the vault below. Herrera looked back and saw her silhouette framed in the grille. Alarm stripped his face bare. "Harlow, don't! You don't know the rules down here!" "You run again and I swear I pull you out in cuffs through that crowd!" Quinn set her boot on the first step.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1166
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1166
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"lurched"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"lurched"
2"down her spine"
3"pulse"
4"footsteps"
5"echoed"
6"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1166
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
38.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount893
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity2.24
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Dean1
Street2
Harlow1
Quinn20
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera17
Greek1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Saint1
Christopher1
Underground1
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Camden1
Town1
Rain3
Water3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Rain"
7"Water"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dean"
2"Street"
3"Greek"
4"Shaftesbury"
5"Avenue"
6"Tottenham"
7"Court"
8"Road"
9"Camden"
10"Town"
globalScore0.38
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1166
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean18.81
std20.88
cv1.11
sampleLengths
010
185
216
34
466
55
62
72
86
920
1013
1120
1214
136
141
152
1656
171
186
196
205
2150
225
2329
2462
2536
2635
2718
284
297
302
3129
329
337
3433
3515
361
3742
3855
3915
406
4116
4212
4322
448
451
4615
4734
4898
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences137
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount900
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.0077777777777777776
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0022222222222222222
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean8.51
std5.58
cv0.656
sampleLengths
010
122
219
310
42
56
613
713
88
94
104
114
1213
1316
147
155
1625
175
182
192
206
2114
226
2313
244
257
269
2714
286
291
302
3112
3218
3310
3416
351
366
376
385
398
4011
419
424
433
443
4512
465
473
4819
493
55.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36496350364963503
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences99
matches
0"Her left wrist bore a"
1"His warm brown eyes swept"
2"His grip shifted on the"
3"Her boots threw up fans"
4"Her stride held military precision,"
5"Her voice cracked off the"
6"Her lungs burned."
7"Her brown eyes locked on"
8"He glanced back."
9"He dived for the Underground"
10"He produced a key and"
11"Her watch ticked against her"
12"Her hand hovered over empty"
13"Her fingers brushed the worn"
ratio0.141
10.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences99
matches
0"Rain needled Soho and turned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood in"
2"The green neon above the"
3"A bar top scarred with"
4"Walls papered with old maps"
5"A bookshelf along the rear"
6"Her left wrist bore a"
7"Water darkened the strap."
8"The door swung out."
9"Tomás Herrera stepped under the"
10"Rain beaded on his short"
11"His warm brown eyes swept"
12"The cuff of his sleeve"
13"Quinn pushed off the wall."
14"Herrera stared at her sharp"
15"His grip shifted on the"
16"Quinn closed the gap."
17"Her boots threw up fans"
18"Her stride held military precision,"
19"Quinn sprinted after him and"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.8075%