Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K4S4HHY7ZAHDETCCYTEG8R

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.020580
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck. Rory threw her shoulder into the door. The wood swelled with heat from the curry house below. Spice and fried oil seeped through the floorboards. Ptolemy threaded between her ankles and yowled. She yanked the bolt. It gave with a shriek of metal. The door opened onto Lucien Moreau. He filled the narrow landing. Charcoal suit, waistcoat, no crease out of place despite the August fug. His platinum hair gleamed under the bare bulb in the hall. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light. One amber eye and one black eye pinned her in place. Rain spotted his shoulders. He had not bothered with an umbrella. Rory kept her hand on the door edge. Her knuckles blanched. "You lost the address." "I remembered." "You remembered after eight months." His mouth twitched. Not a smile. The line between his brows deepened. "May I come in or do you intend to conduct this in the hall." Ptolemy made the decision for her. The tabby butted his head against Lucien's polished shoe and slipped back into the flat. Rory stepped back. The movement was short, abrupt. Her bare feet caught on the rug. Lucien entered. He tapped his cane once against the threshold, a habit. The flat exhaled around him, small and overstuffed. Eva's research swallowed every surface. Stacks of books leaned against the walls, open scrolls bled over the kitchen counter, Post-its bristled from the fridge like yellow scales. The sofa doubled as a filing system. The air smelled of old paper and cumin. He took in the mess with a slow scan. His gaze snagged on the mug in her hand. Rory followed his look. She had not changed since her shift. Black vest from the Golden Empress, shorts, hair still damp at the nape. The crescent scar on her left wrist showed pale against the chipped mug. "You still work for Yu-Fei." "Three shifts a week. Rent does not pay itself." "And Silas lets you keep the flat above the bar." "Eva lets me crash here when I need quiet. Which was tonight." She set the mug down on a pile of grimoires. It wobbled. Lucien rested his cane against the kitchen table. He shrugged off his jacket and folded it over the back of a chair. The action exposed the line of his shoulders, the crisp white shirt underneath. "You cut your hair." "I did not." "You did. Shorter." Rory pushed the straight black strands behind her ear. They brushed her shoulder. She hated how he noticed. "You came all the way to Brick Lane to critique my hair." "I came because you stopped answering my messages." "I answered the last one." "You sent a full stop." The words landed. Rory felt heat climb her neck. She reached for the mug again, needed something to hold. Her bright blue eyes stayed on his. "You told me to make a choice. I made one." Lucien's jaw tightened. He dragged a hand through his slicked-back hair and left a furrow. "I told you to stay away from the Avaros deal. You walked into the exchange alone." "You told me to stay out of your business. Not the same thing." "It was my business when the debt collectors wanted your name on the ledger." She flinched. That night in the warehouse off the Thames came back whole — the smell of river mud, the sigil burned into the crate, Lucien's hand on her wrist pulling her back, her wrenching free. "You used me as leverage." "I used your name to keep you alive." "And then you vanished." Lucien stepped closer. The floorboard creaked under his weight. He smelled of rain and vetiver and something colder, the faint brimstone that clung to his skin when his other blood rose. "You told me not to come back until I had something worth your time." Rory let out a laugh with no humour in it. "So you found something worth my time. In Eva's flat at ten at night without a call." He reached into the inner pocket of his waistcoat. His fingers were long, precise. He withdrew a folded envelope, creased, sealed with dark wax. No sigil. Plain. He placed it on the table beside her mug. "What is this." "Brendan Carter's caseload. From Dublin. Your father's name came up in a Marseilles file. Someone pulled his records." Her hand stilled over the envelope. The name hit low in her gut. Brendan Carter, barrister, Cardiff, disappointment in a suit. She had not heard from him since she left for London. She had not wanted to. "You went through my father's files." "I intercepted them. A broker in Shadwell tried to sell them to a collector. The collector collects barristers with loose ties to the old courts." Rory stared at the wax seal. Her pulse thumped against her ribs. "Why would anyone want my dad's paperwork." "Because your mother was Jennifer Ellis before she married. Ellis blood carries a claim. You carry it. The collector knows. I needed to bring this to you in person. Your phone is not secure." She picked up the envelope. The paper was thick, expensive. The wax was still soft at the edge. "And you thought the best way to warn me was to show up like nothing happened." Lucien's amber eye caught the kitchen light. The black eye swallowed it. "I thought you would slam the door." "I considered it." "But you opened the third bolt. That one sticks." She looked up, startled. He remembered the flat's quirks. Three deadbolts, the middle one that caught, the cat that hated strangers but loved him. Ptolemy jumped onto the table and headbutted Lucien's wrist. Lucien scratched behind the cat's ear with an odd gentleness. The contrast jarred — the immaculate fixer, the blade hidden in his cane, the soft touch. Rory set the envelope down without opening it. Her fingers brushed his. The contact was brief, electric. "You could have sent Eva." "Eva would have opened it." "And you did not." "I did not." The flat felt smaller. Rain hammered the windows above the curry house sign. A bus hissed past on Brick Lane. The scrolls rustled when the draught shifted. Rory crossed her arms. The vest rode up, exposed a sliver of skin at her waist. Lucien's gaze dropped, lifted. "You hurt me." "I know." "You left me in that warehouse and you did not call for weeks. You let me think the deal went bad because of me." "It did go bad. You stepped between me and a half-starved Avaros hound to prove a point. You could have died." "So you punished me with silence." "I gave you space. You asked for it." "I asked for you to trust me." The words hung. Rory's voice cracked on the last syllable. She turned away, busied herself with pushing a stack of books straight. Her hands shook. Lucien moved behind her. He did not touch her. He stood close enough that she felt the heat from his shirt, the solid line of him. "I trust you with my life. I do not trust you with yours. There is a difference." "That is the worst line you ever gave me. And you speak four languages." A huff escaped him, near a laugh. "My French is better." "Say it in French then. Make it sound less stupid." Lucien dipped his head. His breath brushed the edge of her hair. "Je n'ai jamais su quoi faire d'un cœur qui ne m'appartient pas." Rory closed her eyes. Her shoulder-length hair curtained her face. "Translation." "I never knew what to do with a heart that was not mine to keep." She turned. They were inches apart. The narrow kitchen left no room for distance. Her bright blue eyes searched his mismatched pair, found no evasion there. "You still have it. If you want it." Lucien's hand hovered near her waist, not landing. He asked permission with the pause. "You still wear the scar on your wrist from when you were nine. You still steal Eva's mugs. You still look at me like I am a problem you want to solve. Nothing about you lets go. So no. I did not want to let go." Rory's palm came to rest on his chest, over the white shirt, over the steady thud underneath. His other blood made his heart beat slower, heavier. "You show up here with my dad's files and a line in French and you think that fixes eight months." "No. I think it starts a conversation." Ptolemy knocked the envelope off the table. It hit the floor with a soft slap. Neither of them picked it up. Rory slid her hand up, fingers grazing his lapel, the faint stubble at his jaw. Lucien's lashes lowered. "You need to stop deciding what I can handle." "You need to stop volunteering for danger to prove you can handle it." "We are terrible at this." "We are excellent at this. We argue and then we—" She cut him off with a tug on his waistcoat. He met her halfway. The kiss was not soft. It was hard, frustrated, eight months of unsaid things pressed into a single point of contact. He tasted of rain. She tasted of tea gone cold. His cane clattered against the table leg when his hip brushed it. Her back hit the fridge, rattled the Post-its. Lucien broke away first, forehead against hers. His breath came rough. "Rory." "What." "Your father—" "Not now." She pulled him back down. Her fingers threaded into his platinum hair and mussed the slicked-back perfection. He made a low sound and caged her with his arms, careful of the cat, careful of the books, careful of her in a way that made her chest ache. When they parted again, her lips were swollen, his shirt untucked at one side. The flat was a wreck around them, more wrecked than before. Lucien rested his thumb against the crescent scar on her wrist, traced the pale curve. "You opened the door." "You knocked." "I thought you would not." Rory glanced at the envelope on the floor, at the rain on the window, at the man in front of her who had never learned how to stay or how to leave clean. "Do you have to go back tonight." "No." "Then pick up the envelope. Make tea. Ptolemy likes you more than me and he will complain if you leave again without feeding him." Lucien bent, retrieved the envelope, set it back on the table beside the chipped mug. His cane stood propped against the chair, forgotten for the moment. He reached for the kettle.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:04:49.339Z" 9/3/2026, 8:04:49 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"electric"
3"silence"
4"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences137
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences207
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1779
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1121
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien18
Moreau1
August1
Post-its2
Golden1
Empress1
Thames1
Carter1
Cardiff1
London1
Brick1
Lane1
Rory15
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Post-its"
3"Carter"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Golden"
1"Thames"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
globalScore0.697
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1779
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences207
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs121
mean14.7
std11.95
cv0.813
sampleLengths
04
132
211
36
448
511
611
74
82
95
1012
1114
1221
1315
1462
1518
1637
175
189
1910
2012
2112
2235
234
243
253
2618
2712
288
295
305
3126
3210
3315
3416
3513
3614
3736
385
398
404
4131
4214
4310
4417
4527
469
473
4818
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs195
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences207
ratio0.01
matches
0"That night in the warehouse off the Thames came back whole — the smell of river mud, the sigil burned into the crate, Lucien's hand on her wrist pulling her back, her wrenching free."
1"The contrast jarred — the immaculate fixer, the blade hidden in his cane, the soft touch."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1124
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.017793594306049824
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences207
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences207
mean8.59
std6.44
cv0.749
sampleLengths
04
17
210
38
47
54
67
76
85
912
1011
119
1211
134
147
158
163
174
182
195
203
213
226
2314
246
2515
263
275
287
292
3010
318
325
3322
347
358
369
379
384
397
4013
4113
425
439
4410
4512
4610
472
488
4914
45.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.20772946859903382
totalSentences207
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences131
matches
0"She yanked the bolt."
1"It gave with a shriek"
2"He filled the narrow landing."
3"His platinum hair gleamed under"
4"He had not bothered with"
5"Her knuckles blanched."
6"His mouth twitched."
7"Her bare feet caught on"
8"He tapped his cane once"
9"He took in the mess"
10"His gaze snagged on the"
11"She had not changed since"
12"She set the mug down"
13"He shrugged off his jacket"
14"They brushed her shoulder."
15"She hated how he noticed."
16"She reached for the mug"
17"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
18"He dragged a hand through"
19"He smelled of rain and"
ratio0.427
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences131
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck."
1"Rory threw her shoulder into"
2"The wood swelled with heat"
3"Ptolemy threaded between her ankles"
4"She yanked the bolt."
5"It gave with a shriek"
6"The door opened onto Lucien"
7"He filled the narrow landing."
8"Charcoal suit, waistcoat, no crease"
9"His platinum hair gleamed under"
10"The ivory handle of his"
11"He had not bothered with"
12"Rory kept her hand on"
13"Her knuckles blanched."
14"His mouth twitched."
15"The line between his brows"
16"Ptolemy made the decision for"
17"The tabby butted his head"
18"Rory stepped back."
19"The movement was short, abrupt."
ratio0.939
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"That night in the warehouse off the Thames came back whole — the smell of river mud, the sigil burned into the crate, Lucien's hand on her wrist pulling her bac…"
1"He smelled of rain and vetiver and something colder, the faint brimstone that clung to his skin when his other blood rose."
2"He made a low sound and caged her with his arms, careful of the cat, careful of the books, careful of her in a way that made her chest ache."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.4896%