Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K4SB0BGP82D2AHEAKXSJQF

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Duration:
58.7s
Cost:
$0.023828
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest bled into the wet pavement on Greek Street. Rain hammered the awnings and the bins and the shoulders of anyone daft enough to walk Soho after ten. Rory pushed the door with her shoulder. A bell over the frame jangled. Warm air hit her face. Beer and old wood and lemon cleaner. The room was dim, lit by low bulbs over the bar and the glow from the optics. Old maps and black-and-white photographs covered the walls, their corners curled with age. The bookshelf at the far end stood shut, its spine of false histories hiding the back room. Silas stood behind the bar. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the light. His beard, neat and trimmed to match, shadowed his jaw. His hazel eyes lifted. His right hand, the silver signet ring bright on the finger, paused on a glass he polished with a cloth. He favoured his left leg as he shifted his weight. "You look drowned, Rory." Rory peeled off her damp jacket. Her straight black hair clung to her neck in shoulder-length strands. She hung the jacket on the hook by the door. "Golden Empress had me on the Euston run. Yu-Fei owes me hazard pay for that hill in this piss." Silas set the glass down. A smile cracked his face. "Hot water's on upstairs if you want it. You got back late." "Give us a half first. Then I'll vanish." Rory slid onto a stool. Her left wrist turned as she reached for the glass. The small crescent scar on the skin caught the bar light, pale against the rest. The door bell jangled again. Cold air cut through the warmth. Rory did not look at first. She heard the rattle of an umbrella, the tap of heels on the wood floor. "Christ. Do they leave that neon on all night? I walked past three times before I clocked it was a bar." The voice stopped Rory's hand mid-air. She knew that voice. She had heard it shout across a playground in Cardiff, whisper over cheap cider on a roof, sing off-key on a bus to uni. The accent was softer now, rounded at the edges, but it belonged to no one else. Rory turned. Eva stood in the doorway. Eva from Cardiff. Eva who braided Rory's hair on the steps of the law building. Eva who told Rory to get on the train to London and never look back. Eva had changed. Her hair, once dyed a patchy pink and cut short with kitchen scissors, now fell in a clean chestnut bob. Her coat was wool, camel-coloured, dry despite the rain. Her face held the same bones but sharper, made up with a dark lip and a clean line of eyeliner. She looked like someone who worked in an office with a view. She looked ten years older than the girl Rory remembered, though no more than a few years had passed. Eva stared. Her umbrella dripped onto the mat. "Rory?" Rory's throat closed. She got to her feet. The stool scraped. "No chance." Eva let out a sound between a laugh and a gasp. She crossed the room in four strides and threw her arms round Rory's neck. Her coat smelled of perfume and rain. "Oh my god. Oh my god, it is you. It is you." Rory hugged back. Eva's shoulder blades felt thin under the wool. Rory's own bright blue eyes stung. "What are you doing here? What are you doing in London?" Eva pulled back and held Rory at arm's length. Her hands squeezed Rory's elbows. "I live here now. Six months. I moved for work. I was going to message, I swear, I just — you never answer that bloody group chat." Rory's smile froze. Silas watched from behind the bar. He set another glass down with a soft clink. He gave Rory space, but his gaze stayed on the two women. "You live here? Here in London? For six months?" "I know, I know." Eva's grin faded a fraction. She looked over Rory's shoulder at the bar, at the maps, at Silas with his grey-streaked hair and his limp. She took in Rory's delivery jacket, the trainers worn at the heel, the flat above a bar that hummed with late-night voices. "You look — you look good. You cut your hair." "You look different, Evs." Eva touched her own bob. A self-conscious gesture. "Do I? Yeah. The firm has a dress code. No pink hair when you deal with property law. Remember how we said we'd never do law?" Rory laughed, but the sound cracked. "You did it. You went and did Pre-Law properly." "Somebody had to." Eva's tone sharpened with humour, but it landed wrong. She glanced at the bar stool. "Can I — do you have time? One drink? For old time's sake?" Rory hesitated. Her fingers found the rim of her half-pint. "Yeah. Yeah, sit." Silas already poured a second measure without asking. He slid it across the wood. The signet ring on his right hand flashed. "On the house for a reunion." Eva perched on the stool next to Rory. She smoothed her coat over her knees. Her nails were painted a deep red, short and perfect. "Your dad still at the chambers? Does he still call you his little barrister?" "Brendan still does that, yeah." Rory took a drink. "And your mum? Mrs Ellis? Still terrorises Year Nine with Shakespeare?" "Jennifer still teaches. Same school." Eva nodded. She picked up her glass but did not drink. "I went back last summer. Cardiff. I walked past your old place. The one on Cathedral Road. I saw Evan there." The name dropped between them. Rory's hand tightened round her glass. Her left wrist turned again, the crescent scar white under the light. "Evan was on the pavement?" "He was outside the Spar. He asked after you." Rory stared at the bar. The wood grain swam. "What did you tell him?" "I told him to fuck off." Eva's voice was flat. She finally looked at Rory. "I told him a lot more than that. Then I went home and Mum said you never came back for Christmas. Not once." Rory swallowed. "You know why I left." "I know you left at three in the morning with a rucksack and a text that said 'Cover for me'. I know I lied to your parents for two days. I know I waited for you to call and you didn't for four months." Eva's words came fast, low. The bar noise covered them. Two men at a table near the maps laughed over a game of darts. "I was a mess, Eva. You saw what he did." "I saw. I helped you pack. I gave you the money for the train." Eva leaned forward. Her dark lip trembled. "I thought we were going to London together. That was the plan since we were fifteen. You and me, flat share, Pre-Law was just — we were going to sack it off, remember? Then you went and I stayed and finished the degree and got the job and — you never told me where you lived. I found out from Instagram that you worked for a Chinese restaurant. A delivery job, Rory. You were top of the year." Rory's chest rose. Her eyes burned bright blue in the dim light. She pushed her hair back behind her ears. "You think I wanted this? Living above a bar? Cycling through rain with noodles? I did what I had to do. Yu-Fei gave me work when no one else did. Silas gave me a roof. I didn't have a plan, I had a bruise on my ribs and a phone with no battery." Silas shifted his weight, his left leg stiff. He picked up a cloth and wiped a spot that was already clean. He gave no sign he heard, but his presence anchored the room. Eva stared at her glass. Her reflection warped in the liquid. "I looked for flats for us. I kept a list. I thought — any day now Rory calls and says let's do it." Rory's voice dropped. "You changed your number." "I changed my hair, I changed my job, I changed my whole life because I thought you wanted me to be like you. Cool-headed Rory. Quick with an answer. You always knew what to do." "I never knew what to do. I just left." The silence that followed was not empty. It filled with all the nights Rory had not called, all the birthdays Eva had spent with her parents asking where Aurora had gone. Eva laughed without humour. She tapped her red nail against the glass. "Look at us. You deliver takeaway and I push paper for landlords. What happened to running away to Berlin? What happened to not becoming our parents?" Rory looked at Eva's coat, at the expensive bob, at the woman who had become someone Rory did not recognise. Then she looked at Eva's eyes, which were the same. Uncertain and fierce. "You look good in that coat, Evs." Eva's face crumpled. She pressed her palms to her eyes for a second. "You vanished, Rory. You vanished and I had to grieve you while you were still alive." Rory reached out. Her hand hovered over Eva's arm, then landed. The scar on her wrist brushed Eva's sleeve. "I'm here now." Eva lowered her hands. Her eyeliner had smudged at the corner. "Are you? You live five minutes from my office and I found you by accident because it pissed down and I needed a drink." Rory opened her mouth. The words tangled. "I didn't think you'd want — after how I left — I thought you hated me." Eva shook her head. Her voice was raw. "I never hated you. I waited." Silas set a bowl of crisps between them. A quiet offering. His hazel eyes met Rory's for a moment, then dropped. Eva picked up a crisp and broke it between her fingers. Crumbs fell on her coat. "Do you still want that flat share?" Rory stared at her. The green neon flickered against the window, steady and buzzing. "What?" "The flat share. I have a one-bed in Clapham. The lease is up next month. We said we'd get a place with a balcony and a stupid welcome mat." Eva tried to smile. It broke halfway. "I know it's mad. It's just — I saw you and I thought —" Rory's fingers dug into the edge of the bar. Her bright blue eyes widened. "Eva — I —" The door bell jangled again. A gust of rain and a group of lads pushed in, loud with drink.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:04:55.953Z" 9/3/2026, 8:04:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1783
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1783
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"warmth"
2"whisper"
3"perfect"
4"trembled"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences131
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences183
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1793
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions82
wordCount1057
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Greek1
Street1
Soho1
Rory37
Cardiff2
London1
Silas7
Eva29
Aurora1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like someone who worked in an offi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1793
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences183
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs108
mean16.6
std14.96
cv0.901
sampleLengths
034
113
259
356
44
527
619
710
812
98
1030
1111
1221
1321
146
1544
162
175
1830
193
2080
218
221
2311
242
2532
2612
2717
2811
2914
3027
313
3227
339
344
3547
3610
374
388
3926
406
419
423
4315
4413
4510
463
4722
486
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences131
matches
0"were painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences183
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1056
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.017045454545454544
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000946969696969697
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences183
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences183
mean9.8
std9.08
cv0.926
sampleLengths
015
119
27
36
45
57
617
713
817
95
107
1110
124
1320
1410
154
166
1711
1810
1919
205
215
2212
238
245
2510
2615
275
286
296
3015
3121
326
334
3424
3516
362
375
383
3912
4015
413
4220
439
4420
4512
4619
472
486
491
39.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2185792349726776
totalSentences183
uniqueOpeners40
26.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"Then she looked at Eva's"
ratio0.008
67.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences126
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
1"His beard, neat and trimmed"
2"His hazel eyes lifted."
3"His right hand, the silver"
4"He favoured his left leg"
5"Her straight black hair clung"
6"She hung the jacket on"
7"Her left wrist turned as"
8"She heard the rattle of"
9"She knew that voice."
10"She had heard it shout"
11"Her hair, once dyed a"
12"Her coat was wool, camel-coloured,"
13"Her face held the same"
14"She looked like someone who"
15"She looked ten years older"
16"Her umbrella dripped onto the"
17"She got to her feet."
18"She crossed the room in"
19"Her coat smelled of perfume"
ratio0.381
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences126
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Rory pushed the door with"
2"A bell over the frame"
3"Beer and old wood and"
4"The room was dim, lit"
5"The bookshelf at the far"
6"Silas stood behind the bar."
7"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
8"His beard, neat and trimmed"
9"His hazel eyes lifted."
10"His right hand, the silver"
11"He favoured his left leg"
12"Rory peeled off her damp"
13"Her straight black hair clung"
14"She hung the jacket on"
15"Silas set the glass down."
16"A smile cracked his face."
17"Rory slid onto a stool."
18"Her left wrist turned as"
19"The small crescent scar on"
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Eva who braided Rory's hair on the steps of the law building."
1"She took in Rory's delivery jacket, the trainers worn at the heel, the flat above a bar that hummed with late-night voices."
2"Then she looked at Eva's eyes, which were the same."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.3514%