"Rory counted it without meaning to — three sharp raps against the door of Eva's flat, too crisp to be Eva, who knocked like she was trying to break the wood, and too late to be anyone with good intentions."
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"Eva's place always felt like a library that had exploded — books double-stacked on the shelves, scrolls unfurled across the kitchen counter and held down with chipped mugs, loose paper covering every surface."
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"She stared at the door — at the three deadbolts Eva insisted on, all locked, just as Eva had left them when she'd gone to stay with her sister for the week — and felt her pulse start to thud too hard against her ribs."
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"He was watching her, and even in the poor light of the stairwell his eyes were startling — one amber, warm and human, the other flat black, demon-dark, both fixed on her face."
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"Rory stared at it, her quick, out-of-the-box brain already sorting possibilities — dumpster behind the curry house, no, the cut was too clean, blade work — while another, more unruly part of her was already stepping back and pulling the door wider."
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"He was taking in the flat with a fixer's inventory glance — the books, the scrolls, the tower of takeaway containers from Golden Empress that she'd meant to return to Yu-Fei — but he stopped when he saw the delivery bag slumped by the couch, the red and gold logo smeared."
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"Rory grabbed the first-aid kit Eva kept wedged between herbal guides — Eva, bless her, prepared for demon scrapes — and a clean tea towel."
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"She remembered the last time they'd been this close — his apartment near Spitalfields, her coat still on because she had intended to leave, his hand hovering at her waist like he wasn't sure he was allowed to touch her."
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"That name — the one he'd called her only once, half-teasing, half-wondering — made her look up."
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"\"— you have to actually stay. No disappearing. No brooding fix-it act where you vanish for my own good.\""
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"Rory counted it without meaning to — three sharp raps against the door of Eva's flat, too crisp to be Eva, who knocked like she was trying to break the wood, an…"
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"Eva's place always felt like a library that had exploded — books double-stacked on the shelves, scrolls unfurled across the kitchen counter and held down with c…"
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"Because it was too soon after Evan, because Lucien was half-demon and knew too many dangerous people, because a girl who'd fled Pre-Law and Cardiff to deliver n…"
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"She shook her head, pressing the towel again, her left wrist turning so the little crescent scar showed white against her skin."
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"The towel was still pressed to his side, her other hand braced on the counter beside his hip, caging him without meaning to."
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"She looked at the blood on the towel, at the ridiculous, expensive suit ruined for her, at the man who had learned to knock in threes because Eva had three dead…"