Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K4XX13RC0Y00J34EKW7V38

Run Details

Duration:
43.6s
Cost:
$0.019057
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked Dean Street and threw the green of the neon sign across the wet pavement. The sign buzzed. It sputtered. It held. Inside The Raven's Nest the air stayed low and amber. Old maps papered the walls beside black-and-white photographs of men in coats with collars turned against a wind that no longer blew. The bar itself ran the length of the room, dark wood rubbed to a shine by years of elbows and palms. Behind it Silas Blackwood moved with a drag in his left leg, the knee catching on each step. His auburn hair showed grey at the temples and his beard held the same steel. The silver signet on his right hand caught the light each time he lifted a glass. Rory Carter pushed through the side door from the stairwell that led to her flat. Her delivery bag hung from one shoulder, canvas damp at the seams. She wore her hair straight to the shoulder, black against the collar of her jacket. Her eyes caught the bar light, bright blue, tired. The crescent scar on her left wrist showed pale when she flexed her hand to pull the bag strap free. Silas glanced up. He set a clean tumbler on the rail. "You finished early." "Yu-Fei had no riders. Quiet night." "You call this quiet?" The door opened and brought a gust of night air with it. A woman stepped in and shook rain from a dark wool coat. She paused under the green wash of the doorway and scanned the room. Rory straightened. "Eva?" The woman turned. Recognition broke across her face in a sharp, open grin that faltered before it settled. "Rory? Christ." Eva Davies had cut her hair. It fell blunt to her jaw now, honey blonde where it once hung long and wild down her back. She wore a charcoal suit, trousers pressed to a crease, a silk blouse underneath. A leather satchel replaced the battered rucksack she carried through school. Her Cardiff vowels had thinned, polished at the edges. She crossed the floor in quick strides and threw her arms round Rory. The hug was tight, perfume clean and expensive, nothing of the cheap vanilla they once sprayed on in Eva's bedroom. "You live here? Here?" "Upstairs. Above the bar." "You look—" Eva held Rory at arm's length. Her gaze took in the damp jacket, the trainers with the sole coming loose at the toe. "You look the same. Exactly the same." Rory laughed. The sound was short. "You don't." Eva's smile thinned at the corner. "Yeah. Well." Silas placed two glasses on the bar without asking. He gave Rory a look, one brow raised, and moved to the far end where a regular nursed a pint. Eva slid onto the stool beside Rory. She ordered a white wine. Rory stuck with soda water. "How long has it been? Three years? Four?" "Five." "Five. God." Eva shook her head. Her fingers drummed the stem of the glass when it arrived. "I saw your mum at Tesco last Christmas. She said you were in London doing law." The soda burned Rory's throat. "I left Cardiff Uni. Second year." "I know. You did a runner. You texted me from Paddington." "I texted you." "You texted 'thanks for the cash, thanks for the ticket, I'll call you when I'm sorted'." Eva sipped. Her lipstick left no mark on the glass. "You never called." The maps on the wall stared down, coastlines faded to sepia. A photograph of Soho in 1968 hung crooked above their heads. Rory stared at the man's hat in the picture instead of at Eva. "I was a mess." "You were my best mate." "I know." "I lent you three hundred quid. That was all my savings from the call centre. I lied to Brendan and said you needed it for a deposit. Your dad rang me for weeks." Rory's hand tightened round her glass. The scar on her wrist stretched white. "You told me to go. You booked the train. You told me not to look back." "I told you to ring me when you got to London. I cleared the box room. I waited." Silas wiped down the bar. His hazel eyes stayed on the middle distance. He gave them space. Eva leaned forward. The suit jacket pulled at her shoulders. She looked older this close, fine lines at the eyes that Rory did not remember. "I thought Evan found you. I thought something happened. For months I checked the news. I rang hospitals." "I should have rung." "You think?" The bar door opened again. Two men entered, loud, and chose a table by the bookshelf that hid Silas's back room. Their voices filled the gap. Rory used it to breathe. Eva's voice dropped. "You were the clever one. Pre-Law. Debating finals. You wrote my personal statement. And now you — what? You deliver noodles?" "I deliver for Yu-Fei. Part-time. I pay rent. I manage." "Manage?" Eva's laugh had no humour. "Rory, you were going to be a barrister. Like your dad. You were going to wipe the floor with everyone." "I didn't want that. You know I didn't. My dad wanted that." "And what do you want? This?" Eva waved a hand at the bar, at the maps, at the green light that washed the ceiling. "Flat above a pub in Soho?" Rory pushed the soda away. Her blue eyes flashed. "Flat above a pub where no one hits me for burning toast. Job where no one tells me I'm worthless if I don't fetch his beer. Yeah. I want this." Eva flinched. Her polished veneer cracked. She reached out and her hand hovered over Rory's wrist, over the scar, then pulled back. "I didn't know it was that bad. At the end." "You knew. You saw the bruise on my arm at Jen's birthday." "I thought you fell." "I told you I fell." Silence pooled between them. Silas set a small bowl of peanuts on the bar and retreated, his limp audible in the hush between songs on the old jukebox. Eva picked up a peanut and rolled it between thumb and forefinger. Her nails were neat, nude polish, no chips. "I got engaged." Rory's shoulders lifted. "Congrats." "His name is Mark. He works in finance. We bought a place in Clapham. Two bedrooms. Garden." "You always hated gardens. You said they were for people who gave up." "I like the garden. I grow herbs." Eva's grin returned, brittle this time. "I became the person who grows rosemary and means it. Wild." "You sound happy." "I sound tired. Work is brutal. Mum's not well. Dad retired." She looked at Rory, direct for the first time since the hug. "I missed you at the middle of all that. When I needed someone who knew me before I wore suits and talked about conveyancing." Rory swallowed. Her throat worked. "I missed you too. Every time I cycled past that little park near Golden Empress, I thought of us on the swings at Roath. You dared me to jump off the top bar." "You broke your wrist." "This one." Rory turned her left hand over. The crescent scar caught the amber light. "Same wrist. Different scar underneath now." Eva stared at the mark. Her eyes filled. She blinked hard and the tears stayed put. "I kept your hoodie. The grey one with the paint on the sleeve. You left it at my flat that last night. I still have it." Rory's mouth twitched. "You hated that hoodie. You said it made me look like a boy." "I kept it because it smelled like you." A long line of condensation ran down the outside of Eva's wine glass and pooled on the wood. Rory reached for a beer mat and slid it under the glass. Their fingers brushed. "You changed your number." "I had to. He kept calling." "I rang it ten times and got some man in Swansea who told me to piss off." A short, surprised laugh burst from Rory. It hurt her chest. "Swansea? Sorry." Eva laughed too, wet and abrupt. She wiped the corner of her eye with a knuckle and left the polish intact. "You could have found me. On Instagram. On anything." "I did. You looked—" Rory searched for a word that was not sharp. "You looked finished. Complete. I looked like a before photo. I didn't want you to see me like this." "Like what? Alive? Rent paid? Free?" Eva shook her head. The blunt cut swung. "You idiot. You absolute plank." Silas turned the sign on the door to closed though a few drinkers remained. He stacked chairs with a soft clack. He gave Rory a nod that asked if she needed him. She shook her head a fraction. Eva drained her wine. "Are you happy? Tell me straight." Rory considered the map behind the bar, the Thames drawn thick and blue through a London that no longer existed, the street names in copperplate. "I am awake. That counts. I sleep without keeping my phone on loud." "And law? You ever think about going back? Cardiff would take you. Brendan would make calls." "No. Not law." "What then?" Rory shrugged. Her black hair shifted. "Silas lets me help with the books. I like the puzzle of it. Numbers line up or they don't. No performance." Eva watched her. The shine of the suit, the satchel on the floor, the faint line of a tan from a recent holiday — all of it sat at odds with the girl who once chain-smoked on the school roof and swore she would never leave Wales. "You suit this place. In a weird way." "The maps?" "The shadows. You always liked shadows. You hid there." "I learned to stand in them. Difference." Eva reached out again and this time her hand landed, light, on Rory's forearm, fingers cool against skin. "I have a train at ten. Mark waits. He worries if I get the night bus." "Of course he does." "Stay? Two minutes more." Rory did not move her arm away. The bar hummed with low conversation, the clink of glass, the buzz of the green neon outside throwing colour through the window onto their hands where they touched.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:07:25.481Z" 9/3/2026, 8:07:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.127
leniency0.253
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1711
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1711
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"silk"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences175
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1713
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1006
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.78
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Dean1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas7
Blackwood1
Carter1
Davies1
Cardiff1
Rory28
Eva22
Soho1
Thames1
London1
Wales1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Blackwood"
2"Carter"
3"Davies"
4"Rory"
5"Eva"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Raven"
3"Cardiff"
4"Soho"
5"Thames"
6"London"
7"Wales"
globalScore0.108
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1713
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences175
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs107
mean16.01
std15.81
cv0.988
sampleLengths
023
1102
271
311
43
56
64
737
82
91
1018
112
1259
1333
144
154
1632
176
182
196
202
2129
2217
238
241
2533
265
276
2811
293
3029
3135
324
335
342
3533
3613
3716
3818
3917
4025
4118
424
432
4431
453
4621
4710
4826
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs173
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences175
ratio0.006
matches
0"The shine of the suit, the satchel on the floor, the faint line of a tan from a recent holiday — all of it sat at odds with the girl who once chain-smoked on the school roof and swore she would never leave Wales."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1008
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.016865079365079364
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences175
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences175
mean9.79
std7.44
cv0.761
sampleLengths
016
13
22
32
410
522
621
718
815
916
1015
1112
1215
139
1420
153
168
173
186
194
2012
2112
2213
232
241
253
2615
272
286
2919
3014
3111
329
3313
3420
354
364
378
3817
397
402
414
422
436
442
459
4620
477
485
495
43.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.21714285714285714
totalSentences175
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences98
matches
0"His auburn hair showed grey"
1"Her delivery bag hung from"
2"She wore her hair straight"
3"Her eyes caught the bar"
4"He set a clean tumbler"
5"She paused under the green"
6"It fell blunt to her"
7"She wore a charcoal suit,"
8"Her Cardiff vowels had thinned,"
9"She crossed the floor in"
10"Her gaze took in the"
11"He gave Rory a look,"
12"She ordered a white wine."
13"Her fingers drummed the stem"
14"Her lipstick left no mark"
15"His hazel eyes stayed on"
16"He gave them space."
17"She looked older this close,"
18"Their voices filled the gap."
19"Her blue eyes flashed."
ratio0.347
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences98
matches
0"Rain slicked Dean Street and"
1"The sign buzzed."
2"The bar itself ran the"
3"His auburn hair showed grey"
4"The silver signet on his"
5"Rory Carter pushed through the"
6"Her delivery bag hung from"
7"She wore her hair straight"
8"Her eyes caught the bar"
9"The crescent scar on her"
10"Silas glanced up."
11"He set a clean tumbler"
12"The door opened and brought"
13"A woman stepped in and"
14"She paused under the green"
15"The woman turned."
16"Recognition broke across her face"
17"Eva Davies had cut her"
18"It fell blunt to her"
19"She wore a charcoal suit,"
ratio0.959
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He gave Rory a nod that asked if she needed him."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.8534%