Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K4ZHGTDAC6QRWAYDBT9QG1

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2m 16s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain caught. Rory held the door two inches wide and looked out through the gap. Her fingers whitened around the edge of the wood. "You lost my address." He stood too close to the door for comfort. Lucien Moreau filled the hallway with pressed charcoal wool and cold air from the stairwell. His slicked platinum hair caught the hall bulb. One amber eye and one black eye fixed on her. "And you found it regardless." She did not unlatch the chain. Behind her, the flat breathed curry and old paper. Piles of books wobbled on each chair. Scrolls spilled off the kitchen table and onto the lino. Ptolemy, Eva's fat tabby, wound around her ankle and purred against her skin. "What do you want, Luc." "To come in." "No." "You owe me a conversation." "I owe you nothing." His mouth tilted. He lifted his ivory handled cane and tapped the doorframe once, light. "Three deadbolts, Rory. Eva always had a fondness for locks." She stared at the cane. She knew what slept inside the ivory. A thin blade, oiled and patient. He had shown her once in the back room of a club off Soho, with his sleeve rolled and his French accent thickened by drink. Four languages, he claimed, and each one had a different word for please. "You left Marseille in that suit. You will leave Brick Lane in it." "Charming." "Go back to your clients." "My clients sent me here." The tabby pushed his head through the gap and sniffed the hall. Lucien glanced down. Something softened in his face for half a second before the mask slid back. "He likes me." "He likes ham." "Then I shall bring ham next time." "There is no next time." Ptolemy slipped past her foot into the hall. Rory cursed under her breath and crouched. The chain pulled taut. Lucien bent in one smooth motion and scooped the cat up before it reached the stairs. The cat went limp in his arms, purring like an engine. His large hand dwarfed the tabby's ribs. Rory hated how domestic he looked with an animal in his arms. "Give him back." "Open the door." "Put him down and step back." Lucien set Ptolemy on the mat and straightened his cuffs. The cat sat and washed a paw with loud indifference. The old clock on Eva's bookshelf kept a clumsy tick-tock behind her, half buried under manuscripts. Rory slid the chain off. She opened the door fully but blocked the frame with her body. Her straight black hair stuck to her cheek. Her bright blue eyes did not blink. Lucien stepped inside without brushing her. He smelled of bergamot and smoke. He surveyed the cramped flat above the curry house with a slow turn of his head. Books towered on the sofa arms. Research notes plastered the fridge. A chipped mug read WORLD'S OKAYEST WITCH. "Eva collects paper the way other women collect shoes." "Eva collects secrets." "She left you to guard them." "She left me to feed the cat." He placed his cane against the wall by the three deadbolts and locked each one with deliberate clicks. First. Second. Third. The sound landed in her stomach. "Do not lock my friend's door." "I locked out the rest of London." She folded her arms. The small crescent scar on her left wrist flashed pale. "Take off your coat if you plan to stay. You drip on the books and Eva will kill us both." He removed his long charcoal coat and hung it on the single hook by the microwave. Underneath, his suit sat perfect across his shoulders. No crease. No lint. A man who ironed his vices. "You look tired." "Flattery gets you poured down the stairs." "You always had a barrister's tongue. Your father taught you well." "Do not talk about my father." Silence pooled. The curry scent rose stronger through the floorboards, cumin and fried onion and grief. A bus rumbled past on Brick Lane and shook the windowpanes. Horns and chit-chat from the street bled up through the glass. Lucien moved to the table and lifted a scroll with two fingers, as if it might bite. "You read Enochian now." "Eva translates. I file." "You file upside down." She snatched the scroll and righted it. Their fingers brushed. Heat shot up her forearm and lodged behind her teeth. She stepped back too fast and knocked a stack of paperbacks. They slapped to the floor. He did not help her pick them up. He watched her kneel. "You never answered my letter." "I burned it." "Liar." "I burned the envelope." "Progress." She stacked the books with sharp movements. Her hands shook. She hated that he saw it. "You walked out of Silas's bar with a demon's mark on my name and told me it was protection. That was six months ago, Luc." "It was protection." "Avaros hounds tracked me to the Empress. Yu-Fei nearly sacked me. I slept with a chair under my handle for weeks." "I told you to call me if they came close." "I called." His face changed. The amber eye darkened. "When." "The second week. You sent it to voicemail." "I was in Marseille." "You were gone." She rose. The books weighed heavy in her arms. She dumped them on the sofa and faced him. "I needed a fixer and I got a ghost." He crossed the small room in three strides. He stopped a foot away. Close enough that she felt the warmth off his shirt. Close enough that she saw the pulse in his throat. "I buried my mother that week, Rory." The words landed flat. No decoration. No accent play. She opened her mouth. Nothing came. "You could have told me." "I tell no one my weaknesses." "I am not no one." "No." His voice dropped. "You never were." The air thinned. Ptolemy jumped onto the table and sat on the Enochian scroll, tail flicking. Neither of them looked at the cat. Lucien reached out. He did not touch her face. His fingers hovered a breath from her jaw, then fell to his side. Restraint made his shoulders rigid. "You still sleep with the light on." "You still notice too much." "You still bite your lip when you want to hit someone." She bit her lip, then forced her teeth apart. "Why are you here." "Because Eva sold the translation." The kitchen tap dripped. Rory heard each drop hit steel. "What translation." "The one on her table. The one your cat now owns." He nodded toward Ptolemy. "The Malphora rite. Someone paid in old coin. Old blood." "She would not sell that." "She already did." "To whom." Lucien picked up his cane. He twisted the ivory handle a quarter turn. Steel whispered out, a thin silver tongue. "To the man who owned your ex before Evan ever touched you." Her blood turned cold. The scar on her wrist throbbed, though no nail had grazed it in years. "Say that plainly." "Evan was a leash. Someone held the other end." "Who." The front door shuddered in its frame. Three hard knocks shook the deadbolts. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa. The clock stopped ticking. Lucien slammed the blade home into the cane with a click and shoved her behind him toward the kitchen. "Do not answer it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"perfect"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
5"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences173
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1222
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.22% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Four languages, he claimed, and each one had a different word for please."
94.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount813
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
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Eva2
Soho1
French1
Ptolemy6
Brick1
Lane1
Enochian1
Lucien9
Rory5
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.946
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1222
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences173
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean11.98
std12.27
cv1.024
sampleLengths
03
122
24
342
45
545
65
73
81
95
104
1115
1210
1356
1413
151
165
175
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203
217
225
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253
263
276
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3046
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323
336
347
3527
366
377
3814
3920
4034
413
427
4311
446
4538
4617
474
484
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences173
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount815
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.022085889570552148
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001226993865030675
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences173
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences173
mean7.06
std4.64
cv0.657
sampleLengths
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34
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85
96
109
117
1210
1313
145
153
161
175
184
193
2012
2110
225
237
246
2525
2613
2713
281
295
305
3112
323
3314
343
353
367
375
388
397
404
4116
4211
437
4412
453
463
476
4810
4910
47.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3468208092485549
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences96
matches
0"Her fingers whitened around the"
1"He stood too close to"
2"His slicked platinum hair caught"
3"She did not unlatch the"
4"His mouth tilted."
5"He lifted his ivory handled"
6"She stared at the cane."
7"She knew what slept inside"
8"He had shown her once"
9"His large hand dwarfed the"
10"She opened the door fully"
11"Her straight black hair stuck"
12"Her bright blue eyes did"
13"He smelled of bergamot and"
14"He surveyed the cramped flat"
15"He placed his cane against"
16"She folded her arms."
17"He removed his long charcoal"
18"She snatched the scroll and"
19"Their fingers brushed."
ratio0.406
6.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences96
matches
0"The chain caught."
1"Rory held the door two"
2"Her fingers whitened around the"
3"He stood too close to"
4"Lucien Moreau filled the hallway"
5"His slicked platinum hair caught"
6"She did not unlatch the"
7"Piles of books wobbled on"
8"Scrolls spilled off the kitchen"
9"Ptolemy, Eva's fat tabby, wound"
10"His mouth tilted."
11"He lifted his ivory handled"
12"She stared at the cane."
13"She knew what slept inside"
14"A thin blade, oiled and"
15"He had shown her once"
16"The tabby pushed his head"
17"Lucien glanced down."
18"Something softened in his face"
19"Ptolemy slipped past her foot"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9699%