| 23.53% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" | | 1 | "Eva said quickly [quickly]" | | 2 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.515 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |
| 94.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1785 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1785 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stark" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "grave" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "magnetic" | | 8 | "aligned" | | 9 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1796 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Oxford, Quinn guessed." |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1409 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 21 | | Eva | 9 | | London | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Thames | 1 | | Isle | 1 | | Dogs | 1 | | Victorian | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Victorian" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.755 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 90.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like teeth strung on wire" | | 1 | "not quite reach here; the Victorian tiles sweated condensation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1796 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 41.77 | | std | 33.68 | | cv | 0.806 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 111 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 95 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 107 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 63 | | 23 | 77 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 88 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 66 | | 30 | 75 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 89 | | 36 | 73 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 89 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 79 | | 41 | 72 | | 42 | 19 |
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| 99.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "been lacquered" | | 1 | "was stacked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 237 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 19.53% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "Death she knew — sweet rot, voided bowels, copper." | | 1 | "And under the third trestle, a chalkboard propped on its side read PRICES IN FAVOURS — INFORMATION COSTS EXTRA." | | 2 | "Two sets of footprints in the dust leading up to the ring — the victim's scuffed trainers, and a smaller bare foot, narrow, with too long a second toe." | | 3 | "The work lamps did not quite reach here; the Victorian tiles sweated condensation." | | 4 | "The stalls are left dressed because the traders go first and the goods follow — or because they ran." | | 5 | "For three years she had told herself Morris's death didn't add up because she had missed a human detail — a boat, a rope, a debt." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1401 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.02926481084939329 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007851534618129907 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 12.92 | | std | 9.75 | | cv | 0.755 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 67.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4420289855072464 | | totalSentences | 138 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the stalls standing empty" | | 1 | "Then she turned her attention" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair" | | 1 | "She stood five foot nine" | | 2 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 3 | "She ducked under the tape." | | 4 | "she said aloud" | | 5 | "Her green eyes flicked up" | | 6 | "She tucked a curl behind" | | 7 | "She said it like an" | | 8 | "She counted the stalls: eleven." | | 9 | "She had spent the last" | | 10 | "She saw what the first" | | 11 | "They did not come back" | | 12 | "She crouched again and eased" | | 13 | "She did not yet understand" | | 14 | "Her throat went dry." | | 15 | "She pried the compass free." | | 16 | "It trembled, spun a full" | | 17 | "She had gone very still." | | 18 | "She put her free hand" | | 19 | "She played it back in" |
| | ratio | 0.226 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The air below Camden tasted" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn came down" | | 2 | "The uniform at the hoarding" | | 3 | "Quinn nodded once." | | 4 | "Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair" | | 5 | "She stood five foot nine" | | 6 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 7 | "The full moon would be" | | 8 | "She ducked under the tape." | | 9 | "Death she knew — sweet" | | 10 | "This was ozone and scorched" | | 11 | "The disused platform stretched thirty" | | 12 | "Someone had set up market" | | 13 | "A deep cut opened his" | | 14 | "The tile beneath him should" | | 15 | "A thin dark line clung" | | 16 | "she said aloud" | | 17 | "The voice came from the" | | 18 | "A young woman knelt there" | | 19 | "Her green eyes flicked up" |
| | ratio | 0.708 | |
| 47.17% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the same wrongness lay" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 76.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Another held stoppered vials of liquid that moved when the light hit them, slow and oily." | | 1 | "Three stalls down, a velvet cloth displayed brooches that warmed the air around them, cheap tin made to feel important." | | 2 | "She had spent the last six months building a file on the clique that ran in these circles, pretty London kids with old money and new secrets, and she suspected …" | | 3 | "And there, almost invisible under grime, someone had scratched a matching sigil, hurried and jagged, as if finished in a panic." | | 4 | "She looked down at the compass, its needle shivering but holding east, toward the cold spot, toward nowhere." | | 5 | "Now the same wrongness lay in front of her in an abandoned station that smelled of burnt sugar, and for the first time the wrongness had a shape." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.394 | | leniency | 0.788 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |