Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K55GD8D92QRQ7BBPFBPB84

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Duration:
46.5s
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$0.021048
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the Soho pavement and caught the light of the green neon sign above The Raven's Nest. The sign buzzed. It threw a watery glow across the wet street and the mouth of the alley. Inside the bar the air held the smell of old wood and spilt ale and lemon polish. The place had not altered its shape. The maps still covered the walls. The black-and-white photographs still hung in crooked rows above the bar. The light remained low and amber. The bookshelf at the far end still stood where it hid the back room. Silas stood behind the bar. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light. His beard held the same trim, neat and close to the jaw. He wore a dark shirt with sleeves pushed to the elbow and the silver signet ring on his right hand caught the bar light each time he moved. His left leg held his weight at an angle. The old knee injury made him shift his stance between pours. He polished a glass with a white cloth. His hazel eyes lifted when the door opened and the bell rang. Rory stepped in from the rain. She shook water from her jacket. Her black hair hung straight to her shoulders, blunt at the ends where it had not been before. Water darkened the shoulders of her coat. She was 5'6" in trainers and still moved with that quick, economical stride, but something in her frame had hardened. Her face had lost the softness of Cardiff. Her bright blue eyes scanned the room in one sweep and stopped at the bar. Time folded. "Christ." Silas set the glass down. The cloth went still in his hand. "No." Rory pushed the door shut behind her with her hip. Her left wrist caught the light and the small crescent scar there showed pale against the skin. "You still lock that bookshelf with the same trick book?" Silas came round the bar. His limp marked each step. He stopped a foot short of her, as if a line on the floor forbade approach. "That jacket is too thin for this weather." Rory laughed. The sound lacked its old lift. "You sound like my mum. Jennifer would love that. Pre-Law's favourite son-in-law in an apron." Silas looked at her face for a long moment. The bar was empty apart from a couple at a corner table, heads together over a map, oblivious. "You cut your hair." Rory touched the ends of it. "Eva said it suited me. Cheaper to keep. You look grey." A line formed between his brows. He rubbed the back of his neck. "You vanish for three years and that is the opener?" Rory pulled out a stool at the bar and sat. Water dripped from her coat onto the brass foot rail. "I sent postcards. You never answered the last two." Silas returned behind the bar. He poured water into a glass and slid it toward her. His hand lingered on the bar top. The signet ring knocked against the wood. "I answered. You moved. Yu-Fei said you left the flat above the bar without a forwarding address. Then you stopped answering the phone." Rory wrapped both hands around the glass. The scar on her left wrist stretched white when she flexed her fingers. "The flat leaked. The job at Golden Empress paid peanuts and my dad kept ringing about coming back to Cardiff to finish the degree. Brendan Carter, barrister at law, with his speech about wasting potential. I needed air that was not Soho." Silas picked up the cloth and resumed polishing with a tight grip. "You needed air away from me." Rory drank. She set the glass down with care. "I needed air away from Evan. And you told me to run. So I ran." Silas placed the polished glass on the rack with a soft clack. His jaw worked. "I told you to get safe. Not to disappear off the map." Rory spread her hands on the bar. Her nails were short and chipped. "Safe is a postcode? You were MI6. You had a contact for everything. For a while I thought safe meant Prague and knee injuries and hidden rooms behind bookshelves. Then I thought safe meant a kitchen in Birmingham with Eva and a job pulling pints for blokes who called me love." Silas leaned forward on his elbows. The bar creaked. "Eva rang me. She said you worked double shifts and refused help. She said you would not go home." Rory met his stare. Her bright blue eyes held steady. "Home? My flat above your bar? The Raven's Nest with your maps and your ghosts? Or Cardiff with my mother setting a place for the law student I was supposed to be?" Silas reached for a bottle of whiskey and poured two measures without asking. He pushed one toward her. "You were cool-headed. You had that quick mind. You saw angles other people missed. That girl walked into this bar at nineteen with a suitcase and a split lip and told me she wanted work, no questions." Rory picked up the whiskey. She did not drink. "That girl let a man tell her what she was worth. That girl thought Pre-Law was a cage and London was a door. You gave her the key to the flat and a job number for Yu-Fei Cheung and never asked why her wrist shook when she carried trays." Silas stared at the scar on her left wrist. The crescent shape caught the amber light. "I asked." Rory gave a short shake of the head. "You asked once. I lied. You let me." Silence settled between them. The couple at the corner table stood and pulled on coats. The door bell rang and cold air cut through the warmth before the door shut again. Rain hit the windows harder. Silas straightened. He rolled his left leg as if to ease the knee. "You changed." Rory let out a breath. It fogged the air for a second. "Everyone says that like it is an accusation." Silas held the bar edge. The tendons in his right hand stood out. "It is an observation. You hold yourself different. You look at doors when you enter a room. You keep your weight on the balls of your feet. Cardiff did that? Or Birmingham?" Rory took a sip of whiskey. She winced, then swallowed. "Life did that. Delivery work does that. You cycle through traffic and men in vans shout and you learn to keep your elbows in. You learn to think out the box or you get knocked off." Silas nodded toward the bookshelf that hid the back room. "You still know how to pick a lock?" Rory raised an eyebrow. "You taught me on that back room door when I was bored on shift. You said a mind that quick should not rot." Silas allowed a thin smile. It did not reach his eyes. "And you used it to leave without a trace." Rory set her glass down harder than she intended. Whiskey sloshed. "I left a note. On your desk. Under the brass compass. You told me if I ever needed to vanish to leave a note and not look back." Silas went still. His hazel eyes searched her face. "I kept that note. It said you needed to be someone other than Rory who needed rescuing. It said sorry." Rory looked down at her hands. The scar showed again, a pale hook. "I was sorry. I am sorry. I thought if I stayed you would keep seeing Laila. Or Aurora the law student. Or Malphora the joke name I used when I was pissed and wanted to sound hard. I wanted to be just Rory and see if that person could stand without a bar to live above and a spymaster to watch the street for her." Silas exhaled through his nose. He poured himself more whiskey and left the bottle on the bar. "You were never a project. You lived above the Nest because the flat was empty and Yu-Fei needed a reliable rider. You stayed because you wanted to." Rory lifted her chin. Her eyes shone. "I stayed because for a year you were the sole person who did not ask me to be smaller. Then you told me I had to go and I thought that meant I was too much trouble." Silas came round the bar again. His limp was more pronounced after standing still. He stopped beside her stool but did not touch her. "I told you to go because Evan knew where you worked. He came by the bar. He asked questions. I did not want you hurt on my watch. Prague taught me what that cost." Rory turned on the stool to face him. Her knees brushed his leg. "He came here?" Silas gave a single nod. His gaze dropped to the floor, then back to her. "He sat where you sit now. He ordered a pint and asked if the girl with the black hair still did deliveries for the Golden Empress. I told him no. I told him you were gone. I watched him leave and I did not tell you because I thought fear would drive you further into a corner." Rory stared at him. The bar light made her eyes brighter. "You let me think you were sick of me. For three years I thought you wrote me off." Silas put his hand on the bar beside hers, not over it. The silver signet ring glinted. "I wrote every week for the first month. Yu-Fei forwarded the letters. They came back unopened." Rory covered her face for a second. Her shoulders rose and held. "I never got them. Eva moved us after two weeks. Landlord raised the rent. I ditched the old SIM because Evan kept ringing. I told myself you had your network and your maps and you did not need a waitress with a scar and a bad ex." Silas reached out then. His hand hovered near her shoulder and landed, light and steady. "You have a scar because you fell on a fence at eight. You told me that story while you mopped the floor on your first shift. You said you liked that it looked like a moon." Rory uncovered her face. Her mouth twisted. "You remember that?" Silas let his hand fall back to his side. "I remember everything you told me when you thought I was not listening." Rory laughed, and this time the sound cracked. She wiped her eyes with the heel of her hand, careful to avoid the scar. "Look at us. Two old friends in a dim bar with maps we never used. You with your bad knee and your ring. Me with my blunt hair and my delivery bag outside." Silas glanced toward the window where a red delivery bag leaned against the glass, soaked and dripping. "You still ride for Yu-Fei?" Rory nodded. Rain ran down the window behind her. "Part-time. Pays the rent. Keeps me moving. I still live above a bar, just not yours. Eva says hi, by the way. She says you owe her a pint for stealing her best friend back." Silas picked up her whiskey glass and refilled it to the line. "Tell Eva she can collect it herself. Tell her the green sign still buzzes and the photos still hang crooked and the back room still smells of dust." Rory picked up the glass. She clinked it against his. "To crooked photos." Silas lifted his glass. His hazel eyes held hers over the rim. "To moon scars." They drank. The whiskey burned and the rain kept up its drum on the windows of The Raven's Nest.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:11:34.702Z" 9/3/2026, 8:11:34 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.557
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1965
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1965
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"potential"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"scanned"
2"potential"
3"silence"
4"warmth"
5"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences150
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences198
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1965
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions110
wordCount1623
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven3
Nest4
Time1
Silas24
Rory26
Golden2
Empress2
Cardiff3
Carter1
Prague2
Birmingham1
Eva3
Pre-Law2
London1
Yu-Fei4
Cheung1
Silence1
Laila1
Aurora1
Malphora1
Evan1
Rain3
You21
persons
0"Raven"
1"Time"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Empress"
5"Carter"
6"Eva"
7"Pre-Law"
8"Yu-Fei"
9"Cheung"
10"Silence"
11"Laila"
12"Evan"
13"Rain"
14"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"Birmingham"
5"London"
globalScore0.699
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1965
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences198
matches
0"liked that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs103
mean19.08
std16.24
cv0.851
sampleLengths
053
144
293
36
474
52
61
712
81
927
1010
1126
128
138
1415
1527
164
176
1811
1913
2010
2120
229
2330
2423
2520
2642
2712
286
299
3015
3115
3212
3313
3451
359
3619
3710
3832
3918
4037
419
4249
4316
442
458
468
4736
4813
492
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences150
matches
0"was supposed"
1"get knocked"
2"was pissed"
3"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs307
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences198
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1143
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.020122484689413824
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences198
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences198
mean9.92
std7.05
cv0.711
sampleLengths
018
13
215
317
47
56
611
76
814
95
108
1112
1228
139
1411
158
1612
176
186
1918
207
2143
222
231
2412
251
2627
2710
2826
298
308
315
324
336
3427
354
366
375
383
393
4013
4110
4220
433
446
4530
462
472
4813
496
35.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.25757575757575757
totalSentences198
uniqueOpeners51
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences141
matches
0"Then you stopped answering the"
1"Then I thought safe meant"
2"Then you told me I"
ratio0.021
80.99% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences141
matches
0"It threw a watery glow"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"His beard held the same"
3"He wore a dark shirt"
4"His left leg held his"
5"He polished a glass with"
6"His hazel eyes lifted when"
7"She shook water from her"
8"Her black hair hung straight"
9"You never answered the last"
10"I needed air that was"
11"You were MI6."
12"You had a contact for"
13"She said you worked double"
14"She said you would not"
15"My flat above your bar?"
16"You had that quick mind."
17"You saw angles other people"
18"You gave her the key"
19"You hold yourself different."
ratio0.348
27.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences141
matches
0"Rain slicked the Soho pavement"
1"The sign buzzed."
2"It threw a watery glow"
3"The place had not altered"
4"The maps still covered the"
5"The black-and-white photographs still hung"
6"The light remained low and"
7"The bookshelf at the far"
8"Silas stood behind the bar."
9"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
10"His beard held the same"
11"He wore a dark shirt"
12"His left leg held his"
13"The old knee injury made"
14"He polished a glass with"
15"His hazel eyes lifted when"
16"Rory stepped in from the"
17"She shook water from her"
18"Her black hair hung straight"
19"Water darkened the shoulders of"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas came round the bar. His limp marked each step. He stopped a foot short of her, as if a line on the floor forbade approach."
1"Silas straightened. He rolled his left leg as if to ease the knee."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"That girl walked (walk)"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.228
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.025
87.5357%