Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K56XJ9ACQ8EG4KCKR1EGQF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.020996
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory thumbed the last deadbolt back and hauled the door inward. Heat from the curry house below pushed up the stairwell and wrapped round her ankles. Paper dust and cumin hung in the air of the flat behind her. Lucien Moreau filled the landing. Rain beaded on the shoulders of his charcoal suit and darkened the points of his collar. Water tracked down the ivory head of his cane and slipped between his knuckles. His platinum hair lay slicked back from his forehead, damp at the temples, and his mismatched eyes, one amber and one black, fixed on her face. Rory gripped the edge of the door. Her bare feet curled against the worn boards. "You lost my number?" Lucien tilted his head. A muscle jumped along his jaw. "You left London." Rory leaned her shoulder into the doorframe. Stacks of Eva's books rose behind her to the ceiling, spines cracked and leaning, scrolls unrolled across the worktop and the arm of the sofa and the floor. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, wound between the piles with his tail high. "I left your office." Lucien lifted his cane an inch off the mat and set it down again. The ferrule clicked. "You left both." A draught pulled at the hem of Rory's shirt. She folded her arms to stop the shiver. "What do you want, Luc?" Lucien glanced past her into the flat, then down the stairs toward Brick Lane. Neon from the shopfronts bled through the frosted glass of the street door. A bus rumbled past and shook the banister. "An invitation over the threshold." Rory let out a breath through her nose. "Eva is not here." Lucien arched one pale brow. "I know." Ptolemy butted his head against Rory's calf and purred against bone. Rory nudged him aside with her toe. Her left wrist caught the hallway light and bared the small crescent scar there, white against skin. Lucien tracked the movement. His gaze lingered on the mark before it rose back to her eyes. "You screen your visitors through three deadbolts now." Rory curled her fingers to hide the scar. "Eva screens her visitors." Lucien stepped closer. Rain lifted off his suit in a cool wash, cut with bergamot and smoke and something scorched underneath, brimstone from Avaros his father passed down in blood. "Let me in, Rory." Rory held the door with both hands now. The wood bit into her palms. "Give me one good reason." Lucien turned his profile to the stairwell. Footsteps slapped wet pavement outside, too light and too fast for the hour. He shifted his weight and the thin blade inside his cane sang a fraction from its sheath. "Two men followed me from Whitechapel." Rory peered round him. The street door rattled in its frame. Shadows split on the other side of the glass. "Your line of work, not mine." Lucien met her stare. The amber eye burned. The black eye swallowed light. "They want the ledger Eva pulled from the Golden Empress." Rory's stomach dropped. Behind her, Eva's notes covered every surface, inked margins and pinned photographs and red string between names, Yu-Fei Cheung circled twice. "You told them she has it." Lucien shook his head once. Droplets flew from his hair. "I told no one." Rory laughed, short and raw. "Right. The fixer with four languages and no loyalties." Lucien planted his cane hard against the landing. The crack echoed up to the flat above. "I kept your name out of my ledgers." Rory stepped back. The door swung wide with her. "Get inside." Lucien crossed the threshold in one stride. Rory slammed the door behind him and drove the bolts home, one, two, three, her hands slick on brass. The lock cylinders thumped into place. Lucien stood in the middle of Eva's front room with rain pooling round his shoes. Books hemmed him in on all sides. A scroll brushed his trouser leg. He looked too tall for the low ceiling, too sharp for the clutter, a knife left in a drawer of spoons. Rory bolted past him and killed the main light. The room sank into the orange glow of the streetlamp through the blinds. Stripes fell across his face and cut his heterochromatic gaze into bars. Lucien lowered his voice. "You remember the back exit." Rory crouched by the window and eased one slat apart with a fingernail. Her black shoulder-length hair fell forward and brushed her cheek. Below, Brick Lane shone wet. Two figures in dark jackets paused opposite the curry house, collars up, hands in pockets. "I remember plenty." Lucien moved to the wall beside her. His sleeve brushed her shoulder. Heat bled through wool despite the rain. "You still deliver for Yu-Fei?" Rory kept her eyes on the street. "Part-time. Nights I can pick." Lucien rested the head of his cane against his thigh. "Brendan would hate that." Rory snapped the blind shut and rose. Her bright blue eyes caught the dim light. "Do not bring my father into this." Lucien raised both palms. The ivory handle gleamed. "Pardon." Ptolemy leapt onto a stack of case files and sent loose pages sliding to the floor. Rory bent and scooped them up, movements brisk and efficient, old habits from lecture halls in Cardiff and late shifts she never mentioned. Lucien watched her hands, quick and sure, and stooped to retrieve a sheet near his shoe. Their fingers brushed over paper. Rory jerked back as if the page burned. Lucien held the sheet out. Eva's handwriting crawled across it, a list of deliveries from the restaurant with times and plates. "She involved you." Rory snatched the page and shoved it between two hardbacks. "She needed help with Mandarin on a menu." Lucien gave a humourless smile. The scar through his left eyebrow, thin as thread, pulled tight. "Eva needs help with nothing." Rory crossed to the tiny kitchenette and filled the kettle with a violent twist of the tap. Water hammered steel. "You came here for the ledger." Lucien followed her to the edge of the rug and stopped, respectful of the narrow space. His shoes left damp prints on lino already stained with tea rings and ink. "I came here because they tracked me." Rory slammed the kettle onto its base and flicked the switch. The element glowed. "And I should believe you." Lucien set his cane against the counter and shrugged off his jacket. The lining clung to his forearms for a second before it released. He draped the wet wool over the back of a chair already buried under library books. "You believed me in Marseille." Rory stared at the twist of his cufflinks, silver knots she once undid with her teeth in a hotel with shutters closed against noon. "That was before you sold a name to keep a client." Lucien unbuttoned his waistcoat and left it on. His shirt stuck to his shoulders and mapped the lean line of him underneath. "I sold a rumour to bury a name. Yours." The kettle roared and clicked off. Steam fogged the window above the sink. Rory poured water into two mugs with Eva's chipped university crest, hands steady through practice. "You let me walk out thinking the worst." Lucien accepted the mug she thrust at him. Their knuckles knocked. Tea slopped over the rim and scalded his thumb. He never flinched. "You walked out before I finished the sentence." Rory wrapped both hands round her own mug. Warmth crept up her wrists. "You had three months to finish it." A fist pounded the street door below. Both of them froze. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa with a hiss. The pounding came again, rattled the frosted glass, then voices, low and clipped, argued on the pavement. Lucien set his mug down without a sound on a pile of journals and reached for his cane. He twisted the ivory handle. Steel whispered free, a thin ribbon of blade that caught lamplight. Rory put her fingers round his wrist. His pulse hammered against her palm. "Put that away." Lucien held her gaze. The amber iris flared gold in the dark. "They force that door, they come up." Rory released him and crossed to the bookshelf. She pulled a heavy Welsh-English law dictionary from the bottom shelf and wedged its spine under the flat's door handle, then dragged Eva's desk chair across and jammed its back beneath the knob. "They force that door, we go out the back." Lucien slid the blade home with a soft click and leaned his cane against his leg. "The fire escape drops into the yard behind the curry house." Rory drank. Tea burned her tongue. She welcomed the sting. "You remember." Lucien picked up his mug again. Steam curled round his chin and dampened his upper lip. "I remember every turn in this flat." Silence stretched, broken by the extractor fan from the kitchens below and rain against glass. The voices outside faded down the lane. An engine started, then died. Rory sank onto the arm of the sofa. The frame creaked under her weight. Loose notes crackled. "You cannot stay long." Lucien remained standing. Water darkened his socks where it seeped from his shoes onto Eva's rug. "Until they clear the street." Rory gestured with her mug toward the window, the chairs, the cat's tail flicking from beneath the sofa. "This place barely holds one." Lucien sank into the opposite armchair, long legs folded awkwardly among footnotes and atlases. His knee brushed a tower of paperbacks and steadied it with practised ease. "We managed smaller in Marseille." Rory looked away first. Her throat worked. "Do not." Lucien leaned forward. The stripes from the blinds striped his hands where they wrapped his mug. "Eva trusts you with the ledger." Rory shook her head. Her hair swung and stuck to her damp neck. "Eva trusts me with the cat." Lucien smiled, real this time, crooked at the corner, and the years fell off him, thirty-two gone to twenty-something in a Marseille bar with salt on the table and her laugh too loud. "Ptolemy hates everyone." Rory glanced at the tabby. Ptolemy crept out and rubbed his cheek along Lucien's wet shoe, then flopped over and exposed his belly. "Traitor." Lucien toed the cat gently and earned a loud purr. "He knows a fellow stray." Another bang echoed from below, nearer this time, the back yard gate. Rory shot upright. Tea sloshed onto her wrist and over the crescent scar. Lucien rose in the same breath and caught her elbow to steady the mug. Rory met his eyes over the rim. Her breath hitched. His thumb pressed into the soft inside of her arm, just below the old mark, and stayed there.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:12:20.944Z" 9/3/2026, 8:12:20 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"efficient"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"weight"
2"stomach"
3"echoed"
4"efficient"
5"eyebrow"
6"flicked"
7"warmth"
8"pounding"
9"pulse"
10"silence"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"stomach dropped"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences153
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences208
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1788
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
29.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions101
wordCount1493
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva8
Rory36
Brick2
Lane2
Avaros1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Cardiff1
Welsh-English1
Marseille1
Lucien35
Water3
Ptolemy5
Tea3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Lucien"
6"Water"
7"Ptolemy"
8"Tea"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Avaros"
3"Cardiff"
4"Marseille"
globalScore0.294
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1788
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences208
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs124
mean14.42
std12.44
cv0.863
sampleLengths
011
133
256
315
44
510
63
746
84
917
103
1117
125
1335
145
158
164
175
182
1935
2017
218
228
234
2430
254
2614
275
2837
296
3020
316
3213
3310
3424
356
3610
374
385
399
4016
418
429
432
4432
4549
4634
474
485
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs240
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences208
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1498
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.022696929238985315
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0020026702269692926
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences208
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences208
mean8.6
std5.69
cv0.662
sampleLengths
011
115
213
35
416
514
626
77
88
94
104
116
123
137
1428
1511
164
1714
183
193
209
218
225
2314
2413
258
265
278
284
295
302
3111
327
3317
344
3513
368
378
384
393
4027
414
428
436
445
457
4613
4717
486
494
49.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.25961538461538464
totalSentences208
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences152
matches
0"His platinum hair lay slicked"
1"Her bare feet curled against"
2"She folded her arms to"
3"Her left wrist caught the"
4"His gaze lingered on the"
5"He shifted his weight and"
6"He looked too tall for"
7"Her black shoulder-length hair fell"
8"His sleeve brushed her shoulder."
9"Her bright blue eyes caught"
10"Their fingers brushed over paper."
11"His shoes left damp prints"
12"He draped the wet wool"
13"His shirt stuck to his"
14"Their knuckles knocked."
15"He never flinched."
16"He twisted the ivory handle."
17"His pulse hammered against her"
18"She pulled a heavy Welsh-English"
19"She welcomed the sting."
ratio0.164
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount147
totalSentences152
matches
0"Rory thumbed the last deadbolt"
1"Paper dust and cumin hung"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the landing."
3"Rain beaded on the shoulders"
4"Water tracked down the ivory"
5"His platinum hair lay slicked"
6"Rory gripped the edge of"
7"Her bare feet curled against"
8"Lucien tilted his head."
9"A muscle jumped along his"
10"Rory leaned her shoulder into"
11"Stacks of Eva's books rose"
12"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, wound between"
13"Lucien lifted his cane an"
14"The ferrule clicked."
15"A draught pulled at the"
16"She folded her arms to"
17"Lucien glanced past her into"
18"Neon from the shopfronts bled"
19"A bus rumbled past and"
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.4380%