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Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K5AAB64BQM7Q478WNT1R6J
Run Details
Model:
Muse Spark 1.3 (Reasoning, Medium)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
2m 8s
Cost:
$0.024135
Provider:
Meta
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
94.38%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
38.54%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
51.96%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
91.60%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
85.8828%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The third deadbolt snapped back
under my palm.
Rory opened the door three
inches and stopped breathing. "You cut your hair." Lucien filled the hallway.
His charcoal suit caught the
landing light.
His platinum hair lay slicked
back from his forehead. One amber eye and one black eye fixed on her face.
His right hand rested on
the ivory handle of his cane. "You need to leave." "Good evening to you too." He stepped forward.
The toe of his polished
shoe crossed the threshold.
Rory held the door chain
taut with her left hand.
The small crescent shaped scar
on her wrist showed white against the skin. "Do not do this here." "Eva invited me." "Eva is not here." Ptolemy wound around her ankles.
The tabby cat sniffed the
air and hissed. Below the floorboards, cumin and scorched oil rose from the curry house kitchen.
Voices drifted up from Brick
Lane, chit chat and laughter and clatter from the shutters.
Rory eased the chain off
and pulled the door wide.
Lucien entered without waiting for
more.
He moved past her into
the cramped flat.
His gaze swept the towers
of books and the scrolls unrolled across every chair and the research notes pinned to the walls with red string.
He tapped his cane once
against the floor. "You stayed here after all." "I feed the cat." "You hate cats."
Ptolemy jumped onto a stack
of hardbacks and stared at Lucien. Lucien stared back. Rory shut the door and shot all three bolts home. The sound cracked through the small room. "You vanished for three weeks." "I sent word." "A postcard is not word." Lucien set his cane against the table edge.
He shrugged off his jacket
and folded it over the back of a chair covered in open files.
His white shirt stretched across
his shoulders. A thin silver chain glinted at his throat. "You look tired." "You look practised."
Her black hair hung straight
to her shoulders.
She tucked it behind her
ears. Her bright blue eyes burned. "You kissed me in Silas's cellar and then you sold my name to the highest bidder." "I protected your name." "By giving it to them."
He picked up a page
from the table. Eva's handwriting crawled across it in black ink. A circle enclosed a single word three times. Rory snatched the paper from his fingers. Paper sliced her thumb. Blood welled. Lucien caught her hand before she pulled back.
His thumb pressed below the
cut. Heat spread from his skin. Not human heat. Deeper heat, the kind that lived under Marseille summers and under Avaros gates. "Do not." "Let me look."
She jerked free and sucked
the blood from her thumb. Copper stung her tongue. The taste sat sharp and metallic. Ptolemy mewed. Lucien lowered his voice. French curled the edges of his English.
He always sounded more dangerous
in French. "Tu m'as manqué." "Do not do that." "Do what." "Speak to me like we are lovers." "Were we not." Rory crossed to the kitchenette and grabbed a tea towel.
She wrapped it tight around
her thumb. The kettle rattled on its base.
She flicked it on to
give her hands something to do. "You told me to run from Evan and then you ran first." "Evan is human filth. This is different." "You left me above a bar with demons drinking below me and no explanation." Lucien moved behind her.
She felt his presence before
she heard his shoes. The air shifted.
His scent reached her, bergamot
and smoke and old leather. Her shoulders locked. He stopped a foot away. "I kept your father from finding you." Her spine stiffened. "What." "Brendan Carter called in favours in Cardiff. Pre Law records. Hospital records. He hired a man to follow Yu Fei Cheung's drivers." Rory turned. The tea towel fell from her hand. "You had no right." "I had every right. I bought the man off." "With what." "With a lie." The kettle clicked and hissed steam. Neither of them moved. Ptolemy leapt down and rubbed against Lucien's trousers. Lucien bent and scratched behind the tabby ears with long fingers. The cat purred. "He asked for Laila." Rory froze. "What did you call her." "I called her nothing. The name was in Eva's notes." Lucien straightened and lifted another sheet. This one showed a family tree in red ink. Jennifer Ellis. Brendan Carter. A line drawn down to Aurora Carter. Another line branched off in black. Malphora. "Your friend researches bloodlines when she cannot sleep." "Put that down." "Eva thinks you carry something old." Rory crossed the room in three strides and ripped the sheet from his hand. Their faces stood inches apart. His amber eye caught the lamplight. His black eye swallowed it. "You do not get to walk in after three weeks and read my life off her walls." "I walked in because they will come here first." "Who." "The men your father paid. The things Avaros sent." A knock hit the door. Hard. Twice. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa. Rory stared at Lucien. Lucien stared at the door. Another knock landed, heavier. The middle deadbolt rattled in its frame. "Rory Carter." A man's voice, Cardiff vowels flattened by London years. "Open up." Lucien lifted his cane and twisted the ivory handle. Steel whispered free inside the wood.
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"2026-09-03T08:14:12.334Z"
9/3/2026, 8:14:12 AM
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native_tokens_reasoning
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
890
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
94.38%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
890
totalAiIsms
1
found
0
word
"flicked"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicked"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
90
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
90
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
136
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
25
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
890
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
6
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
38.54%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
42
wordCount
628
uniqueNames
14
maxNameDensity
2.23
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick
1
Lane
1
Lucien
14
Marseille
1
Avaros
1
English
1
French
2
Ellis
1
Carter
2
Aurora
1
Cardiff
1
London
1
Rory
10
Ptolemy
5
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Ellis"
2
"Carter"
3
"Aurora"
4
"Rory"
5
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"Marseille"
3
"Cardiff"
4
"London"
globalScore
0.385
windowScore
0.5
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
57
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
890
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
136
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
73
mean
12.19
std
12.39
cv
1.016
sampleLengths
0
8
1
9
2
4
3
42
4
4
5
5
6
35
7
5
8
3
9
4
10
41
11
49
12
8
13
5
14
4
15
3
16
31
17
5
18
3
19
5
20
41
21
3
22
3
23
19
24
16
25
4
26
5
27
37
28
35
29
2
30
3
31
22
32
18
33
3
34
4
35
2
36
7
37
3
38
34
39
12
40
7
41
14
42
29
43
5
44
7
45
3
46
1
47
22
48
9
49
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
90
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
107
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
136
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
628
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
12
adverbRatio
0.01910828025477707
lyAdverbCount
1
lyAdverbRatio
0.0015923566878980893
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
136
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
136
mean
6.54
std
4.08
cv
0.623
sampleLengths
0
8
1
9
2
4
3
4
4
7
5
9
6
11
7
11
8
4
9
5
10
3
11
9
12
10
13
13
14
5
15
3
16
4
17
5
18
8
19
13
20
15
21
10
22
6
23
8
24
25
25
8
26
5
27
4
28
3
29
11
30
3
31
10
32
7
33
5
34
3
35
5
36
8
37
18
38
7
39
8
40
3
41
3
42
8
43
6
44
5
45
16
46
4
47
5
48
8
49
8
51.96%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.3382352941176471
totalSentences
136
uniqueOpeners
46
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
81
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
91.60%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
26
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"His charcoal suit caught the"
1
"His platinum hair lay slicked"
2
"His right hand rested on"
3
"He stepped forward."
4
"He moved past her into"
5
"His gaze swept the towers"
6
"He tapped his cane once"
7
"He shrugged off his jacket"
8
"His white shirt stretched across"
9
"Her black hair hung straight"
10
"She tucked it behind her"
11
"Her bright blue eyes burned."
12
"He picked up a page"
13
"His thumb pressed below the"
14
"She jerked free and sucked"
15
"He always sounded more dangerous"
16
"She wrapped it tight around"
17
"She flicked it on to"
18
"She felt his presence before"
19
"His scent reached her, bergamot"
ratio
0.321
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
77
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"The third deadbolt snapped back"
1
"Rory opened the door three"
2
"Lucien filled the hallway."
3
"His charcoal suit caught the"
4
"His platinum hair lay slicked"
5
"His right hand rested on"
6
"He stepped forward."
7
"The toe of his polished"
8
"Rory held the door chain"
9
"The small crescent shaped scar"
10
"Ptolemy wound around her ankles."
11
"The tabby cat sniffed the"
12
"Voices drifted up from Brick"
13
"Rory eased the chain off"
14
"Lucien entered without waiting for"
15
"He moved past her into"
16
"His gaze swept the towers"
17
"He tapped his cane once"
18
"Ptolemy jumped onto a stack"
19
"Lucien stared back."
ratio
0.951
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
81
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
18
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"Deeper heat, the kind that lived under Marseille summers and under Avaros gates."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
85.8828%