| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she shouted again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 93.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1594 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 81.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1594 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pumping" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "clandestine" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "fluttered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | | |
| 67.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1596 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1579 | | uniqueNames | 24 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Greek | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 10 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Old | 1 | | Compton | 1 | | Morris | 4 | | Metropolitan | 2 | | Police | 1 | | Charing | 1 | | Cross | 1 | | Road | 2 | | Tottenham | 1 | | Court | 1 | | Tube | 2 | | Camden | 2 | | Veil | 3 | | Market | 3 | | London | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | English | 1 | | Met | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Police" | | 6 | "Tube" | | 7 | "Market" |
| | places | | 0 | "Greek" | | 1 | "Street" | | 2 | "Compton" | | 3 | "Charing" | | 4 | "Cross" | | 5 | "Road" | | 6 | "Tottenham" | | 7 | "Court" | | 8 | "Veil" | | 9 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite English, the smell of incense and fried meat and something metallic and sweet that made her throat close" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.627 | | wordCount | 1596 | | matches | | 0 | "not as he was on the last day but as he was in the photo on her desk, grinning with his arm ar" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 44.33 | | std | 32.48 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 108 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 86 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 119 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 64 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 68 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 101 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 55 | | 28 | 71 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 58 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 111 | | 35 | 30 |
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| 89.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "cornered" | | 1 | "been locked" | | 2 | "been abandoned" | | 3 | "were gone" | | 4 | "been trained" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 266 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't going" | | 1 | "was already moving" |
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| 93.17% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd tailed him from the corner of Old Compton after she'd seen the exchange - a small thing, bone-pale, passing from his palm to another man's for a roll of cash that disappeared too quickly." | | 1 | "Beyond it, sound leaked out - voices, low and overlapping, the clink of glass, a vendor shouting prices in a language that wasn't quite English, the smell of incense and fried meat and something metallic and sweet that made her throat close." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 229 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sickly beautiful green humming" |
| | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.021834061135371178 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008733624454148471 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 13.88 | | std | 11.03 | | cv | 0.795 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 46 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 55.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.40869565217391307 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 96.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Too young, too frantic." | | 1 | "Officially, cardiac event." | | 2 | "Unofficially, the things he'd described" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 85.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "He was fast." | | 1 | "Her voice cut through the" | | 2 | "He didn't stop." | | 3 | "He glanced back once and" | | 4 | "She breathed in a controlled" | | 5 | "Her left wrist felt heavy," | | 6 | "She knew this street." | | 7 | "She'd walked it a dozen" | | 8 | "She suspected they were involved." | | 9 | "She knew it, in the" | | 10 | "She'd tailed him from the" | | 11 | "She had never stopped seeing" | | 12 | "He wasn't going to outrun" | | 13 | "He knew it too." | | 14 | "He went down." | | 15 | "He hit the mouth of" | | 16 | "He'd said the Veil Market" | | 17 | "She could see its pale" | | 18 | "She eased the door open" | | 19 | "Her shoes squeaked on the" |
| | ratio | 0.337 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had turned Greek" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ran through" | | 2 | "He was fast." | | 3 | "Her voice cut through the" | | 4 | "He didn't stop." | | 5 | "He glanced back once and" | | 6 | "She breathed in a controlled" | | 7 | "Her left wrist felt heavy," | | 8 | "She knew this street." | | 9 | "She'd walked it a dozen" | | 10 | "The distinctive green neon sign" | | 11 | "The walls in there were" | | 12 | "She suspected they were involved." | | 13 | "She knew it, in the" | | 14 | "The kid ran past the" | | 15 | "She'd tailed him from the" | | 16 | "A bone token." | | 17 | "Quinn had heard about them" | | 18 | "She had never stopped seeing" | | 19 | "The kid skidded around the" |
| | ratio | 0.692 | |
| 96.15% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from ten feet away" | | 1 | "If he reached it, she'd" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ran through it without breaking stride, her boots striking puddles and throwing up cold spray that soaked the cuffs of her trousers." | | 1 | "She'd tailed him from the corner of Old Compton after she'd seen the exchange - a small thing, bone-pale, passing from his palm to another man's for a roll of c…" | | 2 | "He hit the mouth of Tottenham Court Road station at full speed, shoved through a service door that should have been locked but wasn't, and vanished into the dar…" | | 3 | "He'd said the Veil Market lived down here when the moon was right, an underground market that sold enchanted goods and banned alchemical substances and informat…" | | 4 | "Beyond it, sound leaked out - voices, low and overlapping, the clink of glass, a vendor shouting prices in a language that wasn't quite English, the smell of in…" | | 5 | "Or she could follow him into the market proper, into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory with no token, no warrant, and no idea what the rules were d…" | | 6 | "Behind her the iron gate stood solid again, and somewhere to her left a vendor laughed, a low sound without humor, as the detective who had followed a suspect i…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "she shouted again (shout)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |