Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K5D64JTK2ZVMY8GQH0T95P

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.018812
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn ducked under the tape at the service shaft off Camden High Street and took the iron ladder down into the dark. Cold breathed up from below. It carried wet concrete and copper and burnt sugar. Her torch cut a white cone through the shaft. Brick gave way to tile. The tile gave way to a platform that had not seen a train in forty years. Blue light strobed from a constable's torch near the far wall. Stalls lined the platform edge. Tarpaulin roofs. Wooden crates. Glass jars with labels in chalk. Strings of dead fairy lights hung between pillars. Dust lay thick across everything except where boots had churned it to mud around a single shape on the ground. The shape was a man. Mid-thirties. Shaved head. A leather apron over a thermal shirt. His arms spread wide. His mouth hung open. His eyes stared at the tunnel roof. DC Ellis stood over him with a notebook slack in one hand. "Morning, guv. Got yourself a Camden stabbing. Nasty one." Quinn stepped onto the platform. Her boots rang on concrete. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 04:12. "Who has the log?" Ellis flipped a page. "Transit worker heard shouting around three. Called it in. First response thought drunk. Then they saw the blood. Or the lack of it." Quinn crouched. Her sharp jaw set. Her brown eyes tracked the body from crown to boots. No pool spread under him. A thin black line circled his throat. The skin along the line had parted neat as paper. The concrete beneath showed no more than a few dark flecks. "Knife took the carotid. Should have painted the platform." Ellis tapped his pen against the notebook. "Smack head bled out internal? I saw a puncture once swell a chest like a drum. No mess till the pathologist opened him." Quinn did not look up. "Show me a needle. Show me a bruise." A cough echoed from behind a stall. A young woman sat on an upturned crate with a uniformed constable beside her. Curly red hair escaped from under a wool hat. Round glasses caught the torchlight. A worn leather satchel full of books rested against her ankle. Freckles stood stark against pale skin. She tucked hair behind her left ear with a quick hand. "That is Eva Kowalski. Found him. She works up at the British Museum. Says she knows the victim." Eva stood before Ellis finished. She crossed the churned mud with short steps and stopped at the edge of the torchlight. "You moved the jars on his stall." Ellis frowned. "We secured the scene." "You kicked over salt lines. You scuffed chalk with your big boots." Quinn rose to her full height. Military precision squared her shoulders. "You know this place." Eva pushed the glasses up her nose. "This is the Veil Market. It sells things you will not find on any licence. Enchanted goods. Banned alchemical substances. Information for the right price." Ellis gave a short laugh. "Right. Camden night market for wizards." "It moves every full moon. Abandoned Tube station beneath Camden tonight. Next month a crypt. A car park. It needs a bone token to get in." Quinn held out a gloved palm. "Empty your pockets for me." Eva pulled a flat disc of yellowed bone from her coat. A hole pierced one end. A rune burned into the face. "Every buyer carries one. Every seller checks it at the door." Quinn turned toward the body. "He carries one?" Eva nodded toward the right fist. "He never let go of his." Quinn knelt again and eased the fingers open. A twin disc of bone sat in the palm. Scratches marred the rune. "Ellis. Bag this. Photograph first." Ellis crouched with an evidence bag. "So our victim paid entry to buy fairy dust and someone stuck him for his wallet. Wallet is gone, by the way. No phone. Classic robbery." Quinn scanned the stalls. Jars stood intact. Pouches of dried root. Vials of silver liquid. A tray of teeth. Nothing looked rifled. "Robber leaves product worth thousands and takes a phone with no signal down here?" She stood and walked the perimeter of the disturbed dust. Her torch swept low. Boot prints led from the shaft ladder to the body. Two sets. Heavy. Uniform issue. One smaller set with a broken tread. Trainers. Eva's size. No other prints crossed the thick dust toward the stalls or the tunnel mouths. The dust beyond the circle lay smooth as snow. "Where did the killer walk out?" Ellis scratched his neck. "Back up the shaft before the transit bloke came down. Or along the tunnel. We have men checking the northern bore." Quinn followed the smooth dust with her torch to the tiled wall behind the victim's stall. Green and cream tiles formed a diamond pattern. Soot blackened one diamond at shoulder height. The blackening formed a rough arch no wider than a door. "What scorched that?" Eva stepped closer. Her satchel thumped against her calf. "Rift burn. A doorway wore thin. The Market uses them for stock and for escape when police get close." Ellis snorted. "Burn mark from a dosser fire. Kids climb down here all the time." Quinn ignored him and swept the ground at the base of the wall. A small brass compass lay on its side near a crate leg. Verdigris coated the casing. The face bore fine lines that caught the light. Protective sigils etched around the cardinal points. The needle trembled under glass and held firm on the blackened diamond. "Who logged this?" Ellis shrugged. "Trinket from a stall. Junk." Quinn lifted it with two fingers by the edge. The needle did not waver. It pointed at the wall with mechanical intent. "Eva. What does this do?" Eva tucked hair behind her left ear again. Her green eyes fixed on the compass. "A Veil Compass. A Shade artisan crafts them. The needle points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. It finds doors you cannot see." Ellis spread his hands. "Or it points north and the wall happens to sit north. Come on, guv. We have a dead man with his throat cut in a drug den. We need dealers, not dowsing rods." Quinn crossed to the victim and pointed her torch at the black line on his throat. "Look at the edge. No serration. No hesitation. A single pass with something sharper than steel. And look at his left hand." The left hand lay open. White powder clung to the fingertips. A broken circle of the same powder ringed the body. Salt. Ash. Chalk. "He drew a circle. Protective sigils. Same marks as on this compass face. Someone scratched through them." She traced the break in the white ring near the victim's knee. A boot-sized smear cut through it from the inside. The smear pointed toward the blackened tiles. "Eva. If a rift opened in that wall, what comes through?" Eva hugged the satchel strap. "Anything with the token frequency. Anything invited. Anything strong enough to force it." Quinn stood in the centre of the broken circle. Her torch beam travelled from the bone token in the evidence bag to the smooth, printless dust to the needle locked on tile. "No one walked in. No one walked out. The killer never touched the dust." Ellis closed his notebook. "So what? He floated?" Quinn met Eva's gaze over the body. "He stepped through there."
created_at"2026-09-03T08:15:46.337Z" 9/3/2026, 8:15:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1245
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1245
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"churned"
count2
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"mechanical"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"churned"
1"echoed"
2"stark"
3"scanned"
4"etched"
5"trembled"
6"mechanical"
7"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1245
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount780
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Ellis12
Eva9
Quinn15
persons
0"Ellis"
1"Eva"
2"Quinn"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore0.538
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1245
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs80
mean15.56
std13.21
cv0.849
sampleLengths
022
144
254
330
412
59
621
74
84
923
1016
1133
129
137
1423
155
168
1763
1818
1921
207
212
224
2312
2411
254
267
2725
285
296
3026
316
325
3322
3411
355
363
376
386
3921
405
416
4226
4322
4414
4539
4623
476
484
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs121
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences150
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount782
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"stark against pale skin."
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.0038363171355498722
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0012787723785166241
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean8.3
std6.09
cv0.733
sampleLengths
022
15
29
39
45
516
611
75
82
92
106
118
1220
135
141
152
167
174
184
197
2012
219
225
235
2410
251
264
274
2823
292
304
3110
325
337
3410
3511
369
377
3823
395
408
417
4214
439
445
4511
466
4711
4818
495
72.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4697986577181208
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners70
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences95
matches
0"It carried wet concrete and"
1"Her torch cut a white"
2"His arms spread wide."
3"His mouth hung open."
4"His eyes stared at the"
5"Her boots rang on concrete."
6"She checked the worn leather"
7"Her sharp jaw set."
8"Her brown eyes tracked the"
9"She tucked hair behind her"
10"She crossed the churned mud"
11"She stood and walked the"
12"Her torch swept low."
13"Her satchel thumped against her"
14"It pointed at the wall"
15"Her green eyes fixed on"
16"She traced the break in"
17"Her torch beam travelled from"
ratio0.189
17.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences95
matches
0"Quinn ducked under the tape"
1"It carried wet concrete and"
2"Her torch cut a white"
3"Brick gave way to tile."
4"The tile gave way to"
5"Stalls lined the platform edge."
6"Glass jars with labels in"
7"Strings of dead fairy lights"
8"Dust lay thick across everything"
9"The shape was a man."
10"A leather apron over a"
11"His arms spread wide."
12"His mouth hung open."
13"His eyes stared at the"
14"DC Ellis stood over him"
15"Quinn stepped onto the platform."
16"Her boots rang on concrete."
17"She checked the worn leather"
18"Ellis flipped a page."
19"Her sharp jaw set."
ratio0.884
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.7285%