Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K5HQFZF5RYVEX4ASD437XP

Run Details

Duration:
40.1s
Cost:
$0.019522
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest bled across the wet pavement on Dean Street and cut through the window in a long, sickly stripe. Inside the bar held its usual dusk. The lamps burned low. Old maps papered the walls and the black-and-white photographs drank what little light remained. Rain hammered the awning outside and hissed against the extractor fan. Rory Carter sat at the far end of the bar with a glass she had not touched. Her straight black hair brushed her shoulders when she tipped her head. Her bright blue eyes tracked the rain on the glass. She turned the pint glass in a slow circle and the small crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light, white against skin. A delivery thermal bag with GOLDEN EMPRESS stamped in red and gold slumped at her feet, empty for once. The dinner rush had thinned. Her shift had ended an hour before. Silas Blackwood worked the other end of the bar. At fifty-eight he moved with a spare economy. His auburn hair showed grey at the temples and his neat beard matched it. His hazel eyes missed little. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked against each glass he set down. He favoured his left leg as he walked the length of the bar, the old knee injury from Prague giving him a short, uneven stride. He polished a glass and watched the door. The door opened. A bell jangled. Cold air cut in with the traffic noise. The woman who stepped inside shook rain from a camel coat that cost more than Rory's rent. She had dark blonde hair pinned back, a sharp cut, lipstick precise. She carried a leather satchel and an umbrella that she closed with a snap. She scanned the bar, eyes jumping from the maps to the photographs to the line of bottles, and then they stopped on Rory. For a second neither moved. "Rory." Rory's hand stilled around the glass. "Eva." Eva Davies stood under the green wash of the neon with rain on her shoulders. The girl Rory remembered had worn men's shirts tied at the waist and had smoked out of the art block window at Cardiff High and had laughed with her whole body. This woman wore a wool coat with a belt knotted clean and a blouse buttoned to the throat. Her face had thinned. Her nails shone with a pale varnish. "You cut your hair." "You kept yours long." Eva stepped closer. She left wet footprints on the old wood. Her umbrella dripped. "I thought you were still on Greyfriars Road." "I left. Three years back." "I know. You told me not to call your mum's house." Rory lifted the glass and drank. The beer was warm now. "You live here? Above a bar?" "Above this one." Silas set a fresh glass down with a soft click of his ring against the bar. He gave Eva a brief nod and left space. "You own the place?" Silas inclined his head. "I run it. You need a drink?" "White wine. Small." He poured and slid it across. Eva took it with both hands. She did not sit. Rory pushed the empty stool out with her foot. The legs screeched. "You sit." Eva perched on the edge. Her coat fell open and showed a navy suit beneath. A lanyard peeked from her satchel, a plastic card with a photo and a corporate logo. She tucked it back in. "You look—" "Different." "Put together." Rory gave a short laugh. "You look like you stepped out of a solicitor's advert." Eva flushed. She sipped the wine. "I am one. Solicitor. Cardiff office opened a London branch last year. Commercial property. I manage the team." Rory's eyebrows rose. "You hated property law. You said it was for soulless—" "People change." "They do." The rain thickened and drummed on the roof. A group of men laughed at a table near the bookshelf that hid the back room. Silas moved past with his limp and refilled a bowl of crisps. His eyes flicked to Rory, then away, and he gave her room. Eva turned the wine glass. Her hand shook a fraction. "You never came to the graduation." "You invited Mum. Not me." "I invited you. You read the card." Rory traced the rim of her glass with a thumb. The crescent scar flexed. "I was busy. You know how it was." "I waited outside the Guildhall for an hour." Rory looked up. The blue of her eyes went hard. "You waited an hour. I waited three years for you to pick up the phone after I left Evan." Eva set the wine down with too much force. White sloshed over the rim. "I called you every week that first year. You changed your number. You moved. You told Silas—" "You told me to come to London. You said you had a flat and we would sort it. Then you went back to Cardiff for the training contract and left me in a room in Acton with a mattress on the floor." "I offered you the room. You said you wanted space." "I wanted you to stay." The bar noise swelled and receded around them. Silas turned a page of the newspaper behind the bar and made a point of not listening. The neon buzzed. Eva pulled at the cuff of her coat. Her varnish caught the light. "You left Cardiff Uni. You left law. You left everyone. Dad asked about you at Christmas. I told him you did deliveries. He did not understand." "Brendan Carter never understood why I did anything." "That is not fair. He paid your first year." "And reminded me each time I saw him." Eva swallowed. She looked at Rory's thermal bag on the floor, the faded gold lettering, the scuffed strap. "You were the clever one. You argued circles around the tutors. You were meant—" "To be you?" "To be more than this." Rory leaned back. The bar stool creaked. Her face held no anger now, just a flat, tired line. "I am more than this. I deliver noodles and I pay rent and I sleep without someone grabbing my wrist. You remember how Evan held me? Here." She turned her left wrist over. The crescent scar shone pale. Eva stared at it and looked away. "I remember." "You told me to leave. I left. So what do you want me to say? Thank you?" Eva's eyes filled. She blinked and the tears sat without falling. She pressed her lips together and the lipstick creased. "I wanted you to say you were happy. When I saw you on Instagram at that restaurant opening, you looked—" "That was Yu-Fei's cousin's place. I was not happy. I was working." "I wanted you to say you forgave me for not staying in London with you." Rory exhaled through her nose. She reached for Eva's wine and pushed it closer to her friend's hand. "Drink." Eva lifted the glass. Her hand steadied. "You were my best friend. You were the only person who made Cardiff bearable. Then you vanished." "I did not vanish. I was here. Above this bar. The one with the green sign you walked past twice before you came in. Silas let me stay when I had no deposit. Yu-Fei gave me shifts when I had no CV. I built something small. It holds." Eva looked at Silas. He stood at the far end polishing the same glass, his ring flashing. His hazel eyes met hers for a brief second and dropped. "He looks after you." "He lets me look after myself." Eva nodded. She took a longer drink. Colour came back into her cheeks. "You still think fast. You always did. Remember the moot? You made up that whole precedent on the spot and the lecturer believed you for ten minutes." "You grassed me up after." "You would have failed otherwise." They both laughed. The sound surprised them. It cracked the tight air between them. For a moment they were seventeen again, in uniform skirts too short, sharing chips behind the school. Eva set her glass down and wiped a spot of wine from the bar with her thumb. "I have a flat in Clerkenwell now. Proper one. Spare room. You could—" "No." "It was not a pity—" "I know." Rory reached across and closed her hand over Eva's. Eva's nails were cold from the rain. Rory's palm was warm from the glass. "You have a team. A suit. A lanyard. You have what you wanted." Eva turned her hand over and gripped back. "I have a mortgage and a boss who calls me at nine pm." "And lipstick that stays on when you drink." Eva laughed and showed teeth. "It costs twenty quid. It better." Silas limped over with a clean ashtray even though no one smoked inside any more. He set it down between them, an excuse to pass. "You ladies need anything else?" "We are fine." Eva fished in her satchel and pulled out a business card. Thick paper. Embossed letters. She slid it across the bar to Rory. "In case you ever—" Rory picked it up. She read the name, the title, the phone number. She slipped it into the pocket of her jacket. "You still hate olives?" "More than ever." "Eva." The door opened again. Two more customers shook off rain and stamped their feet. The bar filled with cold air and chatter. Eva shifted on the stool and checked the time on her phone. The screen lit her face blue. "I have a client dinner in twenty minutes." "You will be late. Traffic on High Holborn crawls at this hour." "You still know the bus routes." "I deliver on them." Eva stood. She smoothed her coat and picked up her umbrella. She hesitated. Her eyes went to the bookshelf at the back, the one Silas kept locked, the one that swung inward to the hidden room where quiet meetings happened. "This place suits you." "It does not suit me. I suit it." Eva nodded. She leaned in and brushed Rory's cheek with a quick, awkward kiss that smelled of rain and perfume. "Same number. On the card." "Same brain. Different haircut." Eva smiled. The smile did not reach her eyes the way it once did. She turned for the door. The bell jangled. Rain blew in. Rory watched her go. She left the card in her pocket and pulled the thermal bag up onto her lap. The green neon flickered. Silas came back and collected Eva's glass. His signet ring chimed against it. "Old friend?" "Old life." "You want another?" Rory shook her head. She stared at the door where the footprints had already dried. "You ever think you ruin something by leaving it too long?" Silas set the glass in the sink. His limp showed as he shifted his weight. "I think you learn what time does to things when you leave them alone." Rain hit the window in a fresh gust.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:18:15.173Z" 9/3/2026, 8:18:15 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1844
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1844
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"flicked"
2"traced"
3"flickered"
4"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences137
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences216
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1844
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1168
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.31
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Dean1
Street1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Prague1
Rory22
Davies1
Cardiff1
High1
Eva27
Silas10
Rain3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Rory"
5"Davies"
6"Eva"
7"Silas"
8"Rain"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.344
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1844
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences216
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs129
mean14.29
std16.04
cv1.122
sampleLengths
061
194
284
314
466
55
61
76
81
975
104
114
1214
138
145
1511
1611
176
183
1925
204
214
227
233
2416
2512
262
2736
282
291
302
315
3210
336
3418
353
3610
372
382
3948
4010
416
425
437
4414
458
468
4710
4819
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs205
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences216
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1171
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02049530315969257
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008539709649871904
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences216
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences216
mean8.54
std6.87
cv0.805
sampleLengths
025
17
24
314
411
517
612
710
824
919
105
117
129
138
1414
155
1615
1725
188
193
203
218
2217
2312
2414
2523
265
271
286
291
3015
3131
3218
334
347
354
364
373
388
393
408
415
4211
436
445
456
463
4716
489
494
38.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.18055555555555555
totalSentences216
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
ratio0
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences128
matches
0"Her straight black hair brushed"
1"Her bright blue eyes tracked"
2"She turned the pint glass"
3"Her shift had ended an"
4"His auburn hair showed grey"
5"His hazel eyes missed little."
6"He favoured his left leg"
7"He polished a glass and"
8"She had dark blonde hair"
9"She carried a leather satchel"
10"She scanned the bar, eyes"
11"Her face had thinned."
12"Her nails shone with a"
13"She left wet footprints on"
14"Her umbrella dripped."
15"He gave Eva a brief"
16"He poured and slid it"
17"She did not sit."
18"Her coat fell open and"
19"She tucked it back in."
ratio0.375
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences128
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"The lamps burned low."
2"Rory Carter sat at the"
3"Her straight black hair brushed"
4"Her bright blue eyes tracked"
5"She turned the pint glass"
6"A delivery thermal bag with"
7"The dinner rush had thinned."
8"Her shift had ended an"
9"Silas Blackwood worked the other"
10"His auburn hair showed grey"
11"His hazel eyes missed little."
12"The silver signet ring on"
13"He favoured his left leg"
14"He polished a glass and"
15"The door opened."
16"A bell jangled."
17"The woman who stepped inside"
18"She had dark blonde hair"
19"She carried a leather satchel"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He stood at the far end polishing the same glass, his ring flashing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.1777%