Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K5HXVSVXC7F41NFQTCPS7N

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Duration:
1m 46s
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$0.020168
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Meta

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt gave under her thumb. The second stuck. Rory braced a shoulder against the door of the flat on Brick Lane and shoved the third bolt home with the heel of her palm. The curry house below breathed heat and cumin up through the floorboards. It clung to the stacks of books and the loose scrolls and the research notes that buried each surface of Eva's one-bedroom. Ptolemy wound between her ankles. His tail brushed her calf. She pulled the door in. Lucien Moreau filled the landing. Rain beaded on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair lay slicked back from his forehead. Rain darkened the ends. His left hand gripped the ivory handle of his cane. One eye burned amber in the hall light. The other stayed black all the way through. Rory kept her hand on the edge of the door. "You." "You screen visitors through a peephole first." "I know who lives here." His gaze swept past her into the crush of paper and lamplight. Ptolemy pressed his forehead to her shin and stared at the stranger with round green eyes. "Is Eva home?" "No." "Good." He stepped forward. Rory did not move back. The toe of his shoe met the threshold. The cane tapped once against the worn lino. "You came all the way to Brick Lane for small talk." "I came because you stopped answering your phone." "I changed my number." "I know." The hall smelled of fried onions and damp wool. A bus growled past on the street below. Rory tightened her fingers on the door. The crescent scar on her left wrist paled against her skin. "You walked out in Marseille Street. You do not get to knock now." "I waited three hours." "You left after four." His jaw worked. He looked at her mouth, then at the scar, then back to her eyes. Bright blue caught amber and held. "You remember the exact count." "I remember a lot of things." Ptolemy mewed and pushed through the gap. He sniffed Lucien's trouser cuff. Lucien glanced down. He shifted his weight off the cane and nudged the cat aside with polished leather. "Let me in, Rory." "No." "Eva asked me to come." That landed. Rory straightened. Black hair stuck to her cheek where the steam from below had dampened it. She pushed it back with her scarred wrist. "Eva has not called me in two days." "I know where she went." The landing bulb buzzed. Moths knocked against the cage. Rain drummed the window at the turn of the stairs. Rory studied the line of his mouth, the crease between his brows, the rain on his collar. She stepped aside. He entered sideways to keep the cane clear of the doorframe. The flat swallowed him. Books towered on kitchen chairs. Scrolls spilled from the sink. Research notes papered the fridge with magnets shaped like fruit. The air tasted of turmeric and old paper and cat. Lucien took in the mess with a flick of his mismatched eyes. "She added to the collection." "She sleeps under it now." Rory kicked the door shut with her heel and threw the bolts. One. Two. Three. The clicks rang loud in the small room. She turned. He stood too close in the narrow galley between table and wall. The lapel of his suit brushed her sleeve. She moved to the kettle. "You want tea." "I want five minutes." "You never drink tea." "I drink it when you make it." The kettle clicked onto the hob. Rory struck a match. The gas caught with a soft whump. Blue flame licked the blackened base. She folded her arms and leaned back against the counter. The edge dug into her spine. "Talk." Lucien set the cane against the table and shrugged out of his jacket. Water scattered from the shoulders onto the notes. He folded the jacket over a chair already piled with hardbacks. His waistcoat strained at the buttons. His shirt cuffs bore small onyx links. "Eva chased a name I gave her." "What name." "Malphora." Rory went still. Ptolemy jumped onto the table and kneaded a stack of photocopies. His claws pricked through the top sheet. "You told her to stop." "I told her to wait." "You told me the same thing in London last spring and then you vanished." His amber eye narrowed. His black eye seemed to drink the lamplight. "You told me to go." "I told you to pick a side." "I picked yours." The kettle hissed. Steam curled up and fogged the window above the sink. Drops ran down the glass and cut lines through the grime. Rory turned and grabbed two mugs from the drainer. One bore a chip on the rim. The other read CARDIFF UNIVERSITY in faded red letters. She set them down hard. Tea sloshed from the caddy as she spooned leaves. "You picked silence. Three weeks. No calls. No notes at the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei asked where you went. I had no answer." "I kept watch on your flat above Silas." Her hand stopped mid-air. Loose tea dusted her knuckles. "You did what." "I sat in the car across the road." "That is not an answer." "It kept Evan from the door." The name dropped between them and stayed there. The gas flame roared under the kettle. Rory wiped her knuckles on her jeans and left a dark smear. "Evan found me through you." "No." "He followed one of your runners." "He followed your delivery route." "Because you put me on the late run." Lucien picked up his cane again. He rolled the ivory handle between his palms. A thin seam ran round the shaft where the blade hid inside. "I put you on the late run because the day run went past his cousin's shop." Rory stared at him. Her pulse beat high in her throat. She pressed her thumb into the crescent scar until the skin blanched white then flooded pink. "You never told me that." "You never let me finish a sentence." "I let you finish plenty in Marseille Street." Colour rose up his neck and into his cheeks. He took a step closer. Books hemmed him in on both sides. Ptolemy flattened his ears and slipped down behind the toaster. "Do not." "Do not what." "Rewrite that night." The kettle boiled over. Water spat onto the flame. Rory yanked the kettle off and poured with a fast hand. Steam scalded her wrist above the scar. She did not flinch. She shoved the chipped mug toward him. "Drink." He did not touch it. He watched her hands. Her fingers shook once around the Cardiff mug, then steadied. "You kissed me first." "You stayed." "You left before dawn." "I left to meet the man who sold your address." Rory set her mug down so fast tea crowned over the rim and pooled on the counter. She ignored it. The liquid crept toward the edge and dripped onto her shoe. "Who." "A clerk from the courts. Brendan Carter's old circuit." "My father has nothing to do with this." "Your father has everything to do with why Evan keeps finding lawyers to bury the charges." Lucien reached into his waistcoat pocket. He drew out a folded slip of paper, creased and soft at the edges. He laid it on the table beside the cat hair and the crumbs. Rory did not pick it up. "What is that." "An address in Limehouse. Eva went there last night." "Alone." "She would not wait." "Why call on you at all." "Because the door there opens for my blood." His hand rested on the cane head. His knuckles showed white. The amber eye caught the lamplight and threw it back. The black eye gave nothing. Rory unfolded the paper with her scarred hand. The ink bled at the folds. An address. A time. A name written in Eva's quick slant underneath his neat capitals. She looked up. He stood within reach now. Close enough for the rain on his shirt to darken the cotton at the shoulder. Close enough for the heat off his skin to cut through the curry steam. "You should have told me on the phone." "You would have gone alone." "You do not know me." "I know you work double shifts for Yu-Fei and sleep four hours and feed that cat chicken from your own plate." Ptolemy meowed at the word chicken. Rory glanced at the tabby, then back at Lucien. Her blue eyes searched his face. "You watched that too." "I watch what matters." The paper crinkled in her fist. The kettle ticked as it cooled. Rain hammered the flat roof and ran gurgling down the drainpipe past the window. "Last time I trusted you, I woke up cold." "I left my coat." "I sold it." A muscle jumped in his cheek. He leaned his cane against his leg and freed both hands. He did not touch her. His fingers hovered near her elbow, near the scar, near the damp cuff of her sleeve. "Keep the money." "I spent it on locks." She nodded toward the three deadbolts on the front door. His mouth tilted. Not a smile. Something older tugged at the corners and died there. "Three bolts. Good girl." "Do not." "Do not what." "Talk to me like that." "Like what." "Like you stayed." He dropped his hands. He picked up the chipped mug and drank. His throat moved. He set the mug down empty and wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. A tea leaf clung to his lower lip. Rory reached before thought caught her. She brushed the leaf away with her thumb. Her thumb rested a beat too long against his mouth. His breath hit her skin. The paper in her other hand tore along the fold.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1639
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1639
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences150
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences236
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1639
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1166
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Eva2
Moreau1
Lucien8
Cardiff1
Rory18
Ptolemy6
Rain4
One3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rain"
6"One"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.728
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1639
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences236
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs132
mean12.42
std13.25
cv1.067
sampleLengths
07
13
269
35
45
548
610
71
87
95
1028
113
121
131
1424
1511
168
174
182
1935
2013
214
224
2323
245
256
2630
274
281
295
3026
318
325
3336
343
3545
3612
375
385
3945
405
413
424
434
447
4539
461
4745
487
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs194
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences236
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1168
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.019691780821917807
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences236
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences236
mean6.94
std4.23
cv0.609
sampleLengths
07
13
225
312
422
55
65
75
85
99
109
114
1210
138
148
1510
161
177
185
1912
2016
213
221
231
243
255
268
278
2811
298
304
312
329
338
347
3511
3613
374
384
393
4014
416
425
436
447
455
463
4715
484
491
37.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.2330508474576271
totalSentences236
uniqueOpeners55
23.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences142
matches
0"Bright blue caught amber and"
ratio0.007
67.89% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences142
matches
0"It clung to the stacks"
1"His tail brushed her calf."
2"She pulled the door in."
3"His platinum hair lay slicked"
4"His left hand gripped the"
5"His gaze swept past her"
6"He stepped forward."
7"His jaw worked."
8"He looked at her mouth,"
9"He sniffed Lucien's trouser cuff."
10"He shifted his weight off"
11"She pushed it back with"
12"She stepped aside."
13"He entered sideways to keep"
14"He stood too close in"
15"She moved to the kettle."
16"She folded her arms and"
17"He folded the jacket over"
18"His waistcoat strained at the"
19"His shirt cuffs bore small"
ratio0.38
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences142
matches
0"The first deadbolt gave under"
1"The second stuck."
2"Rory braced a shoulder against"
3"The curry house below breathed"
4"It clung to the stacks"
5"Ptolemy wound between her ankles."
6"His tail brushed her calf."
7"She pulled the door in."
8"Lucien Moreau filled the landing."
9"Rain beaded on the shoulders"
10"His platinum hair lay slicked"
11"Rain darkened the ends."
12"His left hand gripped the"
13"The other stayed black all"
14"Rory kept her hand on"
15"His gaze swept past her"
16"Ptolemy pressed his forehead to"
17"He stepped forward."
18"Rory did not move back."
19"The toe of his shoe"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.4104%