Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K5RCYCJ0KG2ZB1H0X6MCXR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 41s
Cost:
$0.027602
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon bled through rain on Greek Street and smeared the wet pavement outside the Raven's Nest. Inside, low lamps threw amber pools over old maps and black-and-white photographs. The walls drank the light. A bookshelf stood shut along the back, its spines crooked and dust-thick. The air held beer and lemon oil and damp wool from the evening crowd. Rory wiped a ring from the bar and lined up clean pint glasses. Her straight black hair stuck to her neck where it met her collar. Her blue eyes caught the neon each time the door swung. She rolled her left sleeve to the elbow and the small crescent scar on her wrist showed white against the skin. Silas nursed his knee behind the pumps. His grey-streaked auburn hair curled damp at the temples. His beard matched it, trimmed close to the jaw. His hazel eyes tracked the room the way barmen twice his age never bothered to do. The silver signet on his right hand clicked against glass as he worked. He stood tall over the bar towels, a full head above Rory, and he shifted his weight off his left leg when he moved. "You want the top shelf restocked before close?" Rory glanced up. "I left the crisps in the flat. I can run up after this lot clears." Silas poured a head on a bitter and set it down without spilling a drop. "Leave the crisps. Talk to your punters." The door opened and cold air cut in with traffic noise. The woman on the step shook rain from a dark umbrella and stamped her boots on the mat. Sharp blazer. Sharp trousers. Hair pulled back in a knot the colour of wet bark. No paint under the nails. No safety pins. No laugh halfway down the street before she arrived. Rory stopped with the cloth bunched in her fist. "Eva?" The woman looked up. Her face did a quick,tes open thing. Mouth, then eyes. "Jesus. Rory." Eva crossed the room in four strides and stopped short of the bar, as if the wood changed the rules. "You work here?" Rory tucked the cloth under the counter. Her pulse beat hard in her throat. "I live upstairs. I pull a shift when Silas needs hands. I do drops for the Golden Empress in the day." Eva set the umbrella against a stool and took the seat opposite. She peeled off her gloves finger by finger. "You look the same. Same hair. Same—" Eva nodded at Rory's face. "Cardiff suits London, then." Rory laughed before she meant to. The sound came out thin. "You don't. You look—" She gestured at the blazer, the clean cuffs, the flat shoes with no scuffs. "Last time I saw you, you had half your head shaved and blue hands from the print room." Eva smoothed the lapel flat with her palm. "Last time you saw me, I slept till noon and stole your chips." Silas placed a beer mat in front of Eva without being asked. The signet flashed. "What can I get you?" Eva looked at the pumps, then at the optics. "Tonic water. Ice. No gin." Silas reached for a glass. His left leg dragged half a step as he turned. "Done." Rory leaned her hip on the back counter. Her fingers found the edge of the sink for balance. "Since when do you drink tonic?" Eva unwound the scarf from her neck and folded it over her knee. "Since three years and four months. Since the clinic in Bristol. Since I got the job with the housing charity and they drug-test." Rory stared at the ice in the glass Silas set down. Bubbles rose in a straight line. "I didn't know about Bristol." Eva picked up the tonic and put it down without tasting it. "You were on night buses by then. Or that hostel off Mile End. I rang Yu-Fei's place and some kid told me you were out on the bike." Rory crossed her arms. The scar pulled when she bent the wrist. "I was out on the bike. Rain like this. Pissheads ordering chow mein at midnight." Silas moved down the bar to serve a bloke with a folded newspaper. He kept his distance but kept the sightline clear. "You told me to come down." Rory kept her voice low. "You said, get on the train, doss on my sofa till Evan stops sniffing round. I got to Paddington with a holdall and you never picked up." Eva rubbed her thumb along the condensation on her glass. "I know." The jukebox kicked in. Some old soul record with horns. Two men argued about football near the maps. Rain hammered the window by the door. "You were twenty-two and I was off my face half the week." Eva looked at her own hands. "I thought if you saw the flat, the state of me, you'd get straight back on the train to Cardiff. To him." Rory pulled a stool out with her foot and sat. The height difference vanished. Knee to knee across the bar corner. "I stayed anyway. Without the sofa." Eva met her eyes for the first time since she sat down. "I know. Your mum told me. Jennifer rang me last Christmas. She said you finished the delivery shifts and got the flat and you never went back. She sounded proud and sick about it at the same time." Rory picked at a chip in the varnish. "She still teaches?" Eva nodded. "Year Six. Same classroom. Same poster of Dylan Thomas with the corner curling. Your dad still does the barrister voice when he answers the phone." Rory smiled despite herself. The neon caught the blue of her eyes and turned them green for a second. "He does that to taxi drivers." Eva laughed. The sound cracked in the middle. She reached across the bar before she checked herself and touched the edge of Rory's wrist, just below the scar. "You got that climbing the fence behind the school. You dared me and I cried before you even bled." Rory turned her hand palm-up. The crescent showed clear. "You went home for a plaster and left me hanging upside down." Eva let her fingers rest there half a breath longer than strangers would. "I left you a lot of places after that." Silas returned with a fresh towel over his shoulder. He stopped a pace off, quiet authority in the set of his shoulders. "Another tonic?" Eva slid the full glass forward. "I'm fine. I talk too much when my hands have something to hold." Rory stood and took the glass to rinse it, to give her hands a job. Water ran hot over her knuckles. "You look well. That's not a line. You look like you sleep." Eva watched the back of her head in the mirror behind the optics. "I do now. I run. I do the accounts. I have a key to an office. I tell nineteen-year-olds not to go back to blokes who break their phones. I sound like a leaflet." Rory shut the tap off with her elbow and dried the glass. "You always sounded like you meant it." Eva twisted the scarf on her lap into a rope. "I meant it about Evan. I meant it when I told you to leave Cardiff. I didn't mean to disappear." The bloke with the newspaper called for another bitter. Silas answered with a lift of his chin and drew it, the limp clear when he stepped to the till. The signet rang against coins. Rory set the dry glass down in line with the others. "I needed you to pick up the phone." Eva pressed her lips together. Colour rose up her neck into her cheeks. "I know. I re-play that autumn every time I pass Paddington. I see you with the holdall. I hear the voicemail. I—" She broke off and drank the tonic after all. Ice clinked against her teeth. "I got clean and I told myself you'd be better off without another apology from me." Rory leaned both elbows on the bar. The wood bit into her forearms. "That's a neat trick. Deciding for me." Eva pushed the empty glass an inch toward Silas, then pulled it back. "I have a spare room now. Proper spare room. In Peckham. No mould. The bus stops outside. It's yours if—" Rory shook her head once. Hair swung and settled. "I have the flat. Above here. Silas lets me paint. I can see the sign from my window. Green all night." Eva looked up at the ceiling, as if she could see through plaster to the room. "Green suits you." Silas set a bowl of peanuts between them. He wiped a spill no one else had noticed and moved his bad leg out of the foot traffic. "Kitchen closes at ten. Nest stays open." Rory cracked a peanut and left the shell on the bar. "You still draw?" Eva flexed her right hand. A faint tremor ran through the fingers. "Not like before. I do diagrams for work. Fire exits. Rotas. I miss getting ink under my skin." Rory reached under the counter and pulled out a biro. She drew a quick crooked house on a beer mat and slid it over. The roof sagged. The door hung off. "Art class. Miss Parry gave you an A and me a detention for talking." Eva stared at the mat. Her shoulders shook once. "She fancied your dad. Everyone knew." The rain eased off the windows. Tyres hissed outside. Someone laughed on the pavement and the sound carried in when the door opened for a new couple shaking out coats. Eva folded the beer mat in half and put it in her blazer pocket. "Can I—" She fished out her phone and held it on her palm between them.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:21:53.747Z" 9/3/2026, 8:21:53 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1649
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1649
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences113
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1649
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1036
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Greek1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Rory23
Eva23
Silas10
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Raven"
globalScore0.39
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1649
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs108
mean15.27
std12.12
cv0.794
sampleLengths
018
143
258
378
48
53
615
715
87
911
1050
119
121
1314
142
1520
163
1714
1821
1920
207
215
224
2311
244
2514
2618
278
2813
2915
305
319
325
3315
341
3518
366
3713
3823
3917
405
4112
4228
4312
4415
4522
4638
4710
482
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1041
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.009606147934678195
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean10.12
std6.59
cv0.651
sampleLengths
018
112
25
312
414
513
613
711
821
97
109
119
1216
1313
1424
158
163
1715
1815
197
2011
2118
222
232
2411
255
263
279
289
291
304
317
323
332
3420
353
367
377
3821
3912
408
417
425
434
446
455
464
4714
4818
498
44.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.25766871165644173
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences109
matches
0"Her straight black hair stuck"
1"Her blue eyes caught the"
2"She rolled her left sleeve"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair curled"
4"His beard matched it, trimmed"
5"His hazel eyes tracked the"
6"He stood tall over the"
7"Her face did a quick,tes"
8"Her pulse beat hard in"
9"She peeled off her gloves"
10"She gestured at the blazer,"
11"His left leg dragged half"
12"Her fingers found the edge"
13"He kept his distance but"
14"She reached across the bar"
15"He stopped a pace off,"
16"She broke off and drank"
17"He wiped a spill no"
18"She drew a quick crooked"
19"Her shoulders shook once."
ratio0.193
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences109
matches
0"The green neon bled through"
1"The walls drank the light."
2"A bookshelf stood shut along"
3"The air held beer and"
4"Rory wiped a ring from"
5"Her straight black hair stuck"
6"Her blue eyes caught the"
7"She rolled her left sleeve"
8"Silas nursed his knee behind"
9"His grey-streaked auburn hair curled"
10"His beard matched it, trimmed"
11"His hazel eyes tracked the"
12"The silver signet on his"
13"He stood tall over the"
14"Rory glanced up."
15"Silas poured a head on"
16"The door opened and cold"
17"The woman on the step"
18"Hair pulled back in a"
19"Rory stopped with the cloth"
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.7249%